Battletech [Battletech/Planetary Annihilation SI] Iron Blooded Commander

Seras

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The numbers are about right actually. I had about 100-120 people join for the initial run to Zaniah on the Leopard. which is why it was so cramped which is mentioned a few times.

Then about 200ish people join on Zaniah. It doesn't seem like a lot, but that's a lot of people really. And more are coming, You have to remember, they are only hiring orphans, from ages 14+ and so you have a little wiggle room in there. Over 18 and a lot of them will already have jobs, probably in the military which means they can't just leave.
 

Knowledgeispower

Ah I love the smell of missile spam in the morning
Speaking of the Leopard. Fun fact by dropship design rules in theory you can shove over more than entire infantry Regiment in one if you don't care about supplies or vehicles
 

Evilutionary

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*She probably has some of these offscreen but at the least, she seems to be handling her own legal and finding her own missions, and has no apparent secretary or assistant besides Benny who's doubling as a MechWarrior.

She desperately needs a lawyer to do her contracts and likely an accountant as well to handle payroll and other payables/expenses;-)
 

xachariahxx

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When I was reading, 350 sounded too big actually. If they're doubling the initial starting numbers without any kind of recruitment control, that should easily cause the spirit of the corps to change and create clashes. Half your people being from a different culture and planet (even if all Lyrian) could cause all sorts of friction. I'm surprised nothing like that has shown up yet.

Modern militaries are good at hammering all recruits into the same culture, but the IBO are just going by the seat of their pants.

That poor accountant....
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"What?!"

It could also be the opposite and be the easiest job in the company. 99% of expenses are put down into the 'magic' pile, including mechs. They just have to handle payroll. No worrying about receipts or business expenses when you can magic up office supplies and SLDF clothes for everyone.
 

The Whispering Monk

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Osaul
Modern militaries are good at hammering all recruits into the same culture, but the IBO are just going by the seat of their pants.
The IBO are making the mold as they go. The culture is developing as they grow, and it'll cause them some interesting quirks.

Downside: They're likely going to re-invent the wheel more than a few times.
Upside: Likely come up with some answers most would assume won't work b/c they 'know better.'
 

xachariahxx

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To be sure it'll cause problems and make them reinvent the wheel.

Sadly, they might still end up with a better military system in the long run than regular LCAF, CCAF, or DCMS. Anything is better than bushido charges or being worried you'll be executed for taking initiative.
 

Evilutionary

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That poor accountant....

"Wait! Where's the invoice for the LRM ammunition we're getting to replace the expended rounds?"

Vicki, "Oh, you won't need one."

"What?!"

Well some consumables will no doubt be itemized as 'fell off the back of a truck';-).

But others like fresh food (local produce) to toilet paper (and a host of other things like entertainment beyond 'game room' equipment) are probably not something Vicky is fabricating.

The main reason she'd want an accountant is to prevent embezzlement. I would suspect a lot of IS militaries just distribute payroll to units and one of them serves as a 'payroll officer' to distribute to the troops (still done today with some RL militaries and I think the US did it up 'til the Korean War/theater at least). It's a huge opportunity for graft, and once you have a certain size as an organization, no matter how 'pure', funds will be diverted (maybe not pocketing pay outright which was standard practice for Soviet officers when it came to paying out conscripts, but certainly abusing the company Credit Card for personal items/services to kickbacks).

That's without even getting into the taxes and other fees (that no bureaucracy in history ever missed an opportunity to collect) that are handwaved in the BTech universe. I mean the MRB should be collecting some sort of fee or percentage but I don't think that is mentioned anywhere in canon that I recall. Granted I may be a bit....jaded... because in my longest running BTech campaign (ran over a decade with usually a weekly 6 hr session) one of my long term players was a financial advisor (MBA) wanted to invest company funds rather than store them under the mattress like other good mercs I suppose (have a lot of skill sets in that group too but the lawyer made contracts *fun* too). I made sure to apply as much realism as they wanted just to keep it challenging.

But anyway, considering this story has a lot of 'slice of life' elements it seems to be missing the logistics of paying the troops (which all things considered is a thing even with the paperwork for a normal mercenary campaign).
 
Chapter 8.1

Seras

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Chapter 8.1 Yo Ho Yo Ho A pirate's life.

3021

Gniezno System

Jump Point


The shudder back into realspace sent a shiver down my spine. That had been unpleasant, fighting off the taste of purple on my tongue. I continued my preparations. This was a rush job. It really was. I knew that, and I realized it might be stupid to jump into this, but sometimes a job fell into your lap that was too good to be true.


Like a pirate base on a previously assumed deserted world. A pirate base that had its own dropships. And maybe a jumpship as well somewhere. That would be trickier to get though, if it was even possible. But if we could capture everything here on the planet, well I would have all the excuses I would ever need as to why I suddenly had equipment.


So I had accepted the deal, readied my Lance of mechs and other units, and started prepping. Before we left Vindemiatrix I had filled a few trucks with equipment that I felt we might need. Most of it was just an excuse to be able to create anything I needed during this fight.


And it was likely going to be a nasty one.


“Commander Eisen-Blume. We have confirmation of heat signatures on Gniezno II that’s our pirates.” Captain Michaels of the Faint Gray, the Union Dropship we were taking to this abandoned world let me know. Unlike myself, he seemed completely unbothered by the recent jump.


Not really a surprise. “Good. I wasn’t that worried the intel was wrong, but it’s always good for confirmation. How long until we land?”


“Should take around ten days to reach the planet.” The captain replied.


“Okay. Any enemy contacts in system, they do apparently have a Jumpship.”


“None so far, but we won’t know if they even noticed our appearance for another few days.”


“Thank you Captain.” I turned from the bridge where I had been invited to stay in during the jump before heading down the curving halls of the Union.


“Commander?” Benny asked, sticking his head out of the room we had been using as I passed by.


“Confirmation that something is here, no jumpship so far. Let everyone recover, unlikely we will run into any trouble out here… And if we did we would be relying on the ASF and defenses of the union anyways, not like we can mobilize in space.”


“Understood. I’ll go make sure everyone is okay after the jump, you okay?”


“Just an odd taste in my mouth this time, I’ll be fine… Until we hit atmo. Then I’ll be puking my guts.” I grumbled as I passed him by, ignoring his teasing smirk as I continued down into the Union.


I paused at the infirmary. “He gonna live?”


The medic in charge of our health during this operation turned away from where he was checking some charts. “Oh the Colonel will be right as rain in a few days. He was unconscious for the jump to limit any trouble.”


“Good to hear. When he wakes up, tell him we have confirmation on activity on the planet.”


“Will do Commander.”


I continued my rounds down into the belly, our mech bay was active as usual. Lenden and Erica were both a bit tense with the battle ahead, although unless you knew him you couldn’t tell with Lendens actions.


“Alright keep it up, let’s do this!” He growled, knife in hand as he stared into the eyes of a older man, the grunt facing across from him also had a knife in hand. Both started slowly stabbing the knife into the table between their fingers. Playing an age old game of chicken. The crowd around them shouting encouragement.


“If you cut your fingers off you won’t be able to pilot.” I interrupted before the speed could really pick up causing an abrupt stop as the boy leapt to his feet, while the man simply stopped stabbing.


“Commander!” Lenden saluted something he had gotten into the habit of doing before his posture loosened. “So are they here, Vicky?”


“That’s Commander to an idiot who is trying to injure himself days before an important op.” I say as I reach over and grab the knife from his palm examining the damage from being stabbed into a metal table over and over again. Not much, since it was a copy of a SLDF Vibroblade, thankfully he hadn’t turned it on while playing his game. “I don’t remember issuing these as a toy.” I tell him and receiving a scowl in return.


“C’mon Vicky, no need to act like that I was just hanging out. It’s good practice!”


“Good at teaching you how to lose a finger, sure.” I poke him in the chest. “You need to be fighting fit in a few days, our operation relies on my Mechwarriors being ready. Why even take the risk when it gains you nothing, and can only cost all of us if you fail?”


He winced at that, I could tell if nothing else, pointing out that he had a responsibility to not injure himself had struck home. Through gritted teeth I finally got a response, “Sorry Commander. Won’t happen again.” I nod, handing the blade back, but we both stilled when the older grunt was snickering.


“You finding something funny?” Lenden asked, and I could tell I was about to break up a fight.


“Nah kid nothing, nothing at all.” He offered although the smile on his face meant he was lying through his teeth.


“Good then private in that case, get out of my mechbay.” I ordered, trying to head off the problem.


“Yeah sure ‘Commander’ let’s go boys, ain’t nothing interesting here.” The older man huffed as he stood and his little coterie sauntered out.


“Vicky, I. Sorry.” He muttered softly.


I just shook my head and nudged his shoulder “I need you in one piece. Can’t kill pirates without my heavy hitter.”


“Roger that Commander. I won’t let you down again.”


“I keep getting told that, but I haven’t been let down in the first place. C’mon we got confirmation that something is on this rock, and since it’s supposed to be a dead world it looks like we are on time.”


“Good! I need to prove to Hanna I’m just as good as her at killing pirates!”


“Well, if anything about this mission is right, you will get your chance. They are going to have the numbers advantage for sure.”


“Hah. We will win. We barely even got touched last time!”


“You did, and that was against an enemy that didn’t even know we were there until they were already beaten. These pirates have home field advantage this time. So let’s take this fight as seriously as it deserves. Life and death.”


“Tch, Fine, whatever you say Commander.”


I moved on, leaving Lenden to do as he liked as long as he wasn’t about to lose a finger to find Hanna. She was as always in the exercise room onboard.


The girl was completely unwilling to allow herself to not be perfect. Hanna was obsessed with making herself a mechwarrior whose name wasn’t just known but was feared.


I joined her for a time, running along the treadmill beside her until she hit the stop. “Any news Commander?” She asked as she wiped sweat from her forehead, even as she kept moving heading to the next piece of equipment on her mental list.


“Yeah, we have confirmation of heat signatures on the planet. So we have activity. Looks like they probably haven’t left yet.”


“That’s good. And bad… Are you sure we're ready for this Vicky?”


“Honestly? No. But we have good advantages. I know we will win in the end. We just have to do our best not to get injured doing it.”


“Ah that’s right, Vicky Combat doctrine order number 1. Don’t die.” Hanna jested as she started pulling up a weight.


“That’s right. Every battle we walk away from is a battle we have learned something from. We get better after. We just need to survive long enough that we get so good no one wants to mess with us.”


Hanna laughed, slowing her curls. “I don’t think that’s how that works Vicky, but hell, you're the Commander.”


“That’s right! I am, so the order is to stay alive. It’s just gonna be tougher this time. It’s not like we can surrender against pirates.”


“No. That won’t happen. I won’t let it.” Hanna grunted as she continued her exercises.


“I won’t let it happen either.” I told her. As I turn out of the workout room. With that most of my preparations are done. We just have to wait to get closer.


—-


“What’s going on?” I demanded as I entered the meeting room. I had been downstairs helping my people get their equipment in order for a potentially hot drop, as we were only house away from hitting atmo.


“Enemy ASF were launched, looks like they noticed us entering the system.” Colonel Maruska offered as he was staring into nothing waiting for answers, his brush with TDS still leaving him pale. Obviously the two of us weren’t allowed on the bridge while this was going on. The Captain needed his focus and didn’t want a couple of idiots getting involved.


“I see.” I felt a shiver of terror up my spine as I settled in beside him settling in to wait. While we had ASF and they were the best pilots Vindemiatrix had, that didn’t mean we were safe.


If our dropship was taken out, it wasn’t like we would survive. That would be it. Game over.


Thankfully about ten minutes before we would hit the atmosphere, a message rang out over the intercom. “Enemy ASF are knocked out, Retrieval of our ASF is under way. Landing procedure is beginning.”


“Well I guess that’s that then.” I mutter exhaling in relief. I watched the Colonel do something similar, the strong white grip he had on a coffee cup relaxing showing he was just as relieved as I was.


“Are you men prepared?” He finally asked me as we started feeling the turbulence of the planet's atmosphere.


“If they aren’t we are able to run to our deaths. So I suppose they are.” I told him which didn’t earn me anything but a slight deepening of the scowl on his forehead. Just because we were working together for this mission didn’t mean we liked each other.


He was still pretty butthurt that his dad had made him apologize.


The rumbling of the dropship hitting the planet already started the loops in my stomach.


An hour later I was in the driver seat of a Norman. I had basically filled the back of the truck with the Radio system I had made, giving us a pretty powerful jamming tool, and hopefully strong enough security the pirates wouldn’t be able to listen in. I passed by Carl as he took the second truck, Delta Ops already had their orders, as they drove off.


The planet was weird. It had once been a living world. With farms and cities.


Then it died. Apparently from what records the Governor had managed to pull, it had been a plague.


Thankfully it hadn’t been a human plague. Something had killed every plant on the entire world. Dead trees still covered the planet. They were gray husks that still stood, everything was gray. Thankfully there was nothing wrong with the air, or anything although there had been considerations about how long that would last. Without anything to refresh the air it would eventually turn toxic. But for now, it was still safe enough.


Not that I didn’t have everyone wearing their full sealed armor and Coolsuits anyways. I wasn’t taking any chances.


When it was my turn I pulled off the ramp, the Vedette tanks we had brought with us, having gotten off first in order to start securing the Union. Everyone was terrified of a sudden attack.


Lucky for them that wasn’t looking likely. I checked the sensor again and noticed the pirates were gathering but not to attack, they were in their little city. We had time. I pulled up the radio as I drove out to meet our Lance. “Alright Green Lance, we are on scout duty. Let’s go see what we can find.”


“Commander Eisen-Blume. I still feel having everyone stay at the base camp until we determine enemy movement to be the correct choice here.” Colonel Maruska interrupted, and not for the first time.


Seriously for a Colonel the guy was kinda terrified of being attacked.


“Negative Colonel, we have our own way of doing things. Don’t worry, we are going to make sure anyone who tries an attack on us doesn’t get anywhere with it. Commander Eisen-blume out.” I ended the communication firmly.


Seriously, the guy was terrified of these pirates.


Didn’t he know? Terrifying enemies was my job.


My Lance and I started heading into the dead forest. We had landed well within a hundred miles of the pirate ‘city’ so I had a solid image of their numbers and positions. As well as their traps.


The old city was still there, and they had taken it over. Using the Starport to house their dropships and unload loot. None of us knew who these pirates were selling their gear too, but it didn’t matter really. Whatever they had stolen that was still here, was about to be taken back.


The starport they were using had been moderately fortified, but it was obvious the pirates had planned on eventually being attacked. Most of the roads leading to the starport were blocked by falling buildings, or mines.


A few turrets were even set up around the port to give some extra punch.


But if you can see exactly where every mine is, they weren’t a threat.


Our dropship had landed about twenty miles from the western side of the city limits. This path would unfortunately be one of the tougher angles. It looks like the same thing that brought us to use this location as a landing had been noticed by the pirates as well.


Luckily the northern section of the city had less active defenses than the others.


It just had more mine fields.


I smirked watching the dust cloud that was the Delta Ops drive north. Their Norman didn’t just have the NightHawk suits resting in the back, it also had enough explosives to give these pirates a bloody nose. While they were doing that. Green Lance was meant to keep their attention. While the Colonels Guard Lance protected the dropship, and moved with us when we needed more punch.


I had fought for command of the tactics of the raid, it had been one of the sticking points I had been firm on. Governor Maruska could either leave me in command, or he could find another group of mercs.


Here we were.


“Sending first checkpoint to Green 3, Green 3, I want those spotting systems knocked out.”


“Understood Command. Green Lance, is on it!” Erica chirped out as she started guiding the Lance towards a group of infantry hiding in a building acting as spotters, I assumed. Considering they had radio equipment and were hidden in one of the few multi-story buildings in the area.


While my mechs ran off to start plucking eyes, I continued forward, driving basically into the city and finding a place to settle in.


I didn’t want the Colonel to know what was really going on, so as far as he was aware I was out scouting and jamming enemy communications. Sure I could have switched out and took over the Locust for a while but… There wasn’t a metal node in the area. Zero, Zilch, Nada. I was stuck with just what I brought with me, or whatever I could extract, so for now, I figured it was better to let Erica get some more experience. It was why I had brought her with after all. Over the next few hours I watched my kids work.


Green lance using large lasers to remove the scouts from existence without them being able to even realize they were in danger was step one for them.


Delta Ops, slowly working their way through the northern section of the city, dodging automated defenses, and mines, all the while getting closer and closer to their objective.


The Union defenses were getting better too. We had brought along some barriers in storage that they were putting up in case we were attacked. If they got those secured they might set up some turrets and the like.


About eight hours after we landed the Pirates finally did something.


“Green Lance, I am seeing enemy activity. Rendezvous at waypoint.” I called out as I ordered them back from their assault on any enemy daring to scout out the area.


“Roger that Command, Green Lance returning!” Benny responded back and I saw his Lance turn and start coming back, although they did come in at an angle to attack another group of pirate scouts.


“Guard Command this is Command come in.”


“Guard Command here, what is it?”


“Pirates are moving, we got two lances of fast movers coming to take a look. I’m gonna need my artillery unit for a bit.”


“... Fine. I’ll send them out. Should Alpha Lance join you?”


“Negative, in case any of them slip past us, I want to keep your mechs at the dropship.”


“Understood then Command, Guard Command out.”


What a prickly guy.


I watched as the two lances of mixed lights started moving west. The fact they were pirates was evident. The slower lights were getting left behind slightly, as their formation of two lances broke up.


“Command this is Artillery unit, in position.”


“Good to have you, Green Lance will set up here.” I pinged a new waypoint for their system. “Once they are in position I want them to bring the lights into firing range. We are looking for absolute battle value here, I want to remove from combat as many of these mechs as we can. Understood?”


“Yes Command! I know exactly what to do.” Elias offered and I could hear the fierce grin he must be having as the connection ended.


—-


A different perspective

Lenden ‘Motherfucking’ Scorch

Gniezno city ruins


Lenden was ready for this. His body was practically bouncing in his seat. Finally! Finally a chance to prove that he deserved to be here. That he was meant to pilot this mech.


And it was against pirates. Oh this was perfect for Lenden. He hated them, his parents had died in a pirate raid after all, this was just icing on the cake.


After a moment a voice came over the radio, the crackling that was on the line whenever Vicky was jamming, hardly dimming Bennys voice. “Alright, Green Lance, are in position. Remember we are hitting them aiming for maximum removal, we want to reduce the pirates combat effectiveness. But don’t take risks. If any of us take too much damage it’s a failure.”


“We’ll be fine Benny, these Pirates are gonna be in for a real shock.”


“Let’s take this seriously Lenden. This isn’t the time for fuckups.”


“Yeah yeah. I know. I’m focused!” Lenden agreed, although despite that he could still tell Benny was annoyed with him. Why? He agreed with him! Fucker, Lenden didn’t get why Benny was always on his ass. Well. At least he knew Benny was also willing to back him up.


Even if he was still a motherfucker.


“I’ve been waiting weeks for this.” Hanna hissed into her mic, and despite her not saying something, Benny didn’t say anything to ‘her’ why was it always him that made everyone try to convince him to be serious. He was serious!


“They are here.” Erica’s voice echoed out and all words stopped as we watched the road they were coming down.


The first mech to meet up with them was a Commando. It was also the first to get a surprise double Large laser shot to it’s face. It had turned a corner and Hanna and Benny had been ready. As agreed they took the first shot. Bastards.


The Commando didn’t appreciate the shots, and it took the hit hard, the SRM launcher on it’s arm split nearly in half as it raised the arm to try and protect itself. It was pure luck it didn’t explode and the Commando quickly spun back around behind cover.


I waited. Whatever happened I would be there, although really only Erica would know in advance.


“Jumpers are coming up on our right, two Javelins. The rest are preparing a push.”


“Alright, Lenden, go show those jumpers what they are dealing with, Erica, keep us up to date. Artillery Unit, once they push, blunt them.” Benny ordered out and that was all they had time for. The Javelins jumped on to the buildings on our right, just as the mechs started pushing.


Hanna and Benny let loose, firing a barrage of weapons. Large and Medium lasers slashing out along with the plumes of their LRMs firing.


I turned up, nearly bending over in order to get the shot I needed. While the Javelins fired their SRMs, I fired back.


Their SRMs smashed into me, but it wasn’t enough to stop the scorch. The green light ripping into one of the Javelins, and it went down, enough of the lasers had hit something that it crumpled onto the roof.


Which is about when the rain fell.


The light mechs push faltered immediately as incredibly accurate LRM fire came down, LRM after LRM shattering into the mechs causing many to stumble backwards to try and find cover. There wasn’t any. We had picked this road, because the buildings around it were pretty solid, no alleyways or overhangs to hide under. Hanna and Benny acted like a bulwark, as the lights faltered and started moving backwards but they had already pushed too hard. Even Erica’s dinky SRMs were fired into the fray although I could see if any of them did any damage.


Sure the light mechs retaliated, but it was carving lines into our armor even as we took limbs. I turned to the second Javelin, even as my cockpit dumped heat onto me. My armor kept me just on the side of sweating but not too bad, even as I lined up the shot.


That was enough for the Javelin. It ditched back over the side of the building it had come from, realizing it was in trouble. I cursed realizing I didn’t have a shot.


“Fucker!” I roared as I turned and instead aimed into the fleeing light mechs.


Green light flew, and scorched into the back of a few of them as they tried to run.


Between everything only four managed to get away. None of them untouched.


We quickly took care of the remaining pirates, going around and making sure their cockpits were clear.


No mercy was given.


—-


An hour later we were loading up the damaged light mechs onto cargo trucks and hauling them back to the union.


The Colonel joined the group in his Shadow Hawk, and despite himself I could tell he was impressed. Not that he would ever say it. As I was standing by sitting on the hood of my Norman watching the rapid pace of the men grabbing the light mechs off the street he had walked up to me, but hadn’t said anything yet.


“This was their mistake, but we let too many of them escape, they will be more ready next time. They will probably send their heavier tonnage.”


“I know. We will be ready when that happens… I’m impressed. Commander. Your men took on double their size, if not weight, and came out with barely a scratch. You did the same on Vindemiatrix, that’s not something just anyone can pull off.”


I turned to look at the older man, who looked like he was fighting with himself. But eventually he took a deep breath and exhaled.


“I apologized before, but you probably think it was fake. It wasn’t. During the Vultures raid I lost my fiance. She was in my Lance, we had been together for a long time… I was tricked. They completely ran circles around my lance, by the time I realized… The Firestarter overheated me, with my mech locked up. They took out the rest of the Lance… I ended up having to eject as they were aiming for my cockpit. I watched them take out the rest of the Lance.”


“I’m sorry.”


“No, don't be. You killed some of the monsters that killed them. Now you killed some more. Thank you.” He sighed once again then straightened, and the man that had looked so defeated a moment before was gone. Hidden away. “They might run. Now that they know we can fight. They might think this planet isn’t worth it and get in their dropships. We won’t be able to stop them with just our two ASF.”


“Oh, yeah I already considered that. Don’t worry. They aren’t going anywhere.”


“What? What do you mean?”


“Kinda hard to lift off when one of the hangar bays on your dropship won’t close because a bomb went off.”


He blinked looking at me in confusion, not quite putting two and two together. “The bombs should go off in… About ten minutes.”


“Bombs. How did you plant bombs on their dropships? That doesn’t make-”


“Colonel.” He stopped talking as I interrupted. “Don’t ask questions we don’t want to answer. Just know that it’s taken care of. Now we start harassing the pirates. Right now they don’t know what we are doing because we plucked their eyes. So we move. We attack from an angle they won’t ever expect.”


He was silent for a time. “How can you be sure that you didn’t miss a scout, or a sensor?”


“We didn’t.” Was all I offered to him. Instead returning my focus back on the inside of my Norman, and the radio system inside. I hadn’t quite managed to figure out how to listen in on the pirates radio… Yet.


—-


A different perspective

Gauge Blake

Zaniah III

RedBase


“Say that again?”


“There are four huge containers being delivered. The trucks are already being moved through security. Thought you should know?


“Huh. Alright fine. I’ll go take a look Mary. Thanks.”


“Sure thing!”


Gauge stood up stretching out. Being in charge of the entirety of RedBase was not fun. Especially since he was trying to dedicate all his time to setting up classes and school for the advanced knowledge from the Core.


Already the Repair unit was advancing their knowledge. Sure, Experience might mean a Mechtech on Solaris would easily show them a thing or two, but the days of them not even knowing where to start were disappearing. Especially with all the mech repair classes.


Gauge had happily sat through those himself.


Still as he stepped out of his office and into the busy hallways of the base he couldn’t help but smile. Everything was so busy, and everyone was learning! He truly felt like he was making a difference. Even if he really wanted to grab the Memory Core and hand it to everyone who he could just to spread it without limit.


But even he hated the idea of it falling into the hands of the Kuritans.


He pulled his hood over his head as he stepped out into the Zaniah heat. It didn’t help much, but it kept him from burning up whenever he forgot to put on the sun screen.


Outside a truck was already waiting for him. Marcus waved him over as he slid in. “Marcus, what are you doing here?”


“Oh nothing. I was just around, you are going to check the deliveries right?”


“Yessss. What do you know and why do I suddenly have a bad feeling?”


“Nonsense! I am always here to protect my family! The containers are legit, and safe. Vicky warned me about them before she left.”


“Oh Great. Now I really feel bad. If this is another Vicky plan…”


“Yeah it’s great!” The other boy offered with a grin as they drove down the smooth path, towards a delivery drop off point. When they first got here, the road would have been dirt and dust, now it was well maintained Ferrocrete. The four large trucks carrying four large containers were obvious enough to Gauge's eye.

“What’s in them?”


“What? And ruin the surprise?”


“I am the Commanding Officer. I could order you to tell.” Gauge grumbled, but that just earned a laugh.


“Yeah you could, but you are too serious to abuse your authority like that. HomeGuard have already checked the containers. It’s safe.”


“Great.” Gauge stepped out watching as the four trucks were already unloading the containers in the marked location. It didn't take more than a few minutes for the Trucks to have dropped off the large metal containers before they rumbled back out of the base.


“Well you gonna open them?” Marcus teased as Gauge sighed, moving up he pulled the latch. The crowd of kids around him was making his bad feeling grow stronger.


“What sort of bullshit did you drop in my lap Vicky?” He wondered as he turned on a light and what was in the container was visible enough.


“Oh you bitch.”


“OH MY GOD! NEW MECHS!”


“OH I WANT TO PILOT IT!”


“NO ME ME! I’VE GOT BETTER SCORES THAN YOU!”


“Marcus. I am going to get you for this.”


“Nah. You are going to get Vicky for this.”


“That too.”


Each container carried a slightly beat up, but still serviceable STG-3G A Stinger. It was a perfect light mech for jump jet training. Although a Chameleon would of course be better. Gauge could understand Vicky's thoughts on it. A Chameleon if you could get one were almost five million C-bills if not a lot more due to their scarcity. These Stingers? 1.6 mil and probably cheaper because of their rough condition.


So Vicky had bought four training mechs for the price of one. Smart.


If not for the fact she hadn’t told him, so now the entire base would know about the four new mechs.


“Why am I in charge!? I just want to study!” He cried out as all of the supposed soldiers around him kept tugging on his arms to get his attention.
 
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Doomsought

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Well if you are going for cost effective mechs, there is always the urbanmech. Swapping out the AC/10 for an LRM-20 and two extra tons of ammo would along with her senors would be quite the nasty surprise, though it might be better to go with an LRM-15 and several medium and small lasers.
 

Bear Ribs

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Hmm, Stingers have a notoriously cramped cockpit but perhaps it'll be just right for kids.

Poor Lenden didn't get to keep "White Devil" as his monicker.

This chapter felt, I dunno, kind of blah to me compared to the previous ones. That's not to say it's bad, but it didn't really give me the emotional connections I had before. I think it would have been better served with a pirate's perspective rather than the one with Gauge and the Stingers arriving, which felt more like filler and didn't add as much. It felt very much like some sort of sneak attack or sabotage attempt with all the secrecy about what was in the containers, and then there was no payoff.

I continued my rounds down into the belly, our mech bay was active as usual. Lenden and Erica were both a bit tense with the battle ahead, although unless you knew him you couldn’t tell with Lendens actions.
Lenden's

“Alright keep it up, let’s do this!” He growled, knife in hand as he stared into the eyes of a older man, the grunt facing across from him also had a knife in hand. Both started slowly stabbing the knife into the table between their fingers. Playing an age old game of chicken. The crowd around them shouting encouragement.
The first is a sentence fragment, the second should be "shouted" to make tenses agree.

“I don’t remember issuing these as a toy.” I tell him and receiving a scowl in return.
Sudden change to present tense for just one sentence, they should be "told" and "received" instead.

While the Colonels Guard Lance protected the dropship, and moved with us when we needed more punch.
Colonel's

I didn’t want the Colonel to know what was really going on, so as far as he was aware I was out scouting and jamming enemy communications. Sure I could have switched out and took over the Locust for a while but…
2qNVIUU.jpeg


“Alright, Green Lance, are in position. Remember we are hitting them aiming for maximum removal, we want to reduce the pirates combat effectiveness.
pirate's

“I’ve been waiting weeks for this.” Hanna hissed into her mic, and despite her not saying something, Benny didn’t say anything to ‘her’ why was it always him that made everyone try to convince him to be serious. He was serious!


“They are here.” Erica’s voice echoed out and all words stopped as we watched the road they were coming down.
At this point the interlude suddenly changes from third-person to first-person. It's jarring and all those instances of "I" and "Me" need to turn into "Him" and "He."

It was also the first to get a surprise double Large laser shot to it’s face.
its,

The Javelins jumped on to the buildings on our right, just as the mechs started pushing.
onto, it's a compound word and shouldn't be spaced.

The green light ripping into one of the Javelins, and it went down, enough of the lasers had hit something that it crumpled onto the roof.
ripped, ripping is present tense.

I hadn’t quite managed to figure out how to listen in on the pirates radio… Yet.
pirate's

A Chameleon if you could get one were almost five million C-bills if not a lot more due to their scarcity.
was

The story is still having a lot of trouble with possessive, and keeping its tenses straight.
 

Seras

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Hmm, Stingers have a notoriously cramped cockpit but perhaps it'll be just right for kids.

Poor Lenden didn't get to keep "White Devil" as his monicker.

This chapter felt, I dunno, kind of blah to me compared to the previous ones. That's not to say it's bad, but it didn't really give me the emotional connections I had before. I think it would have been better served with a pirate's perspective rather than the one with Gauge and the Stingers arriving, which felt more like filler and didn't add as much. It felt very much like some sort of sneak attack or sabotage attempt with all the secrecy about what was in the containers, and then there was no payoff.

Lenden's

The first is a sentence fragment, the second should be "shouted" to make tenses agree.

Sudden change to present tense for just one sentence, they should be "told" and "received" instead.

Colonel's


2qNVIUU.jpeg


pirate's

At this point the interlude suddenly changes from third-person to first-person. It's jarring and all those instances of "I" and "Me" need to turn into "Him" and "He."

its,

onto, it's a compound word and shouldn't be spaced.

ripped, ripping is present tense.

pirate's

was

The story is still having a lot of trouble with possessive, and keeping its tenses straight.
That's fair. I just posted on SB this is not exactly my favorite chapter. I left out a few scenes I intended on adding in, and never got around to. There was originally going to be a Pirate perspective in this half of the chapter, but it was too long to really fit well. So I actually pushed it into the second half, and created the Gauge interlude instead.

But yeah I am not super pleased with this chapter. but I got basically no writing done this week. Ever since new years I've been struggling life stuff is going crazy.
 

Blasterbot

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That's fair. I just posted on SB this is not exactly my favorite chapter. I left out a few scenes I intended on adding in, and never got around to. There was originally going to be a Pirate perspective in this half of the chapter, but it was too long to really fit well. So I actually pushed it into the second half, and created the Gauge interlude instead.

But yeah I am not super pleased with this chapter. but I got basically no writing done this week. Ever since new years I've been struggling life stuff is going crazy.
life happens. the Gauge POV is a bit of a non sequitor but is fine as long as the reader can handle the jump. a pirat POV would have likely been just as jarring and I have been wondering about the home base. it works rather well even if it might have been better as a more fleshed out interlude. still good though.
 

mrttao

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I wonder if her tech can fix the plant issue and revitalize the pirate world. That would effectively leave her as governess of a new world. Start doing mass recruitment of orphans on other worlds and send them over. She can really start growing fast that way since there is nobody to spy on her in an abandoned world.
 
Chapter 8.2

Seras

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Chapter 8.2 Yo Ho Yo Ho A pirate's life.

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A different perspective

Red McHannon The Red Vulture

Gniezno City Pirate Enclave


Red had been a pirate all his life. His mother had been a pirate, his father a pirate. His grandfather had been a pirate. It ran in his blood.


Like any pirate that had done it long enough and wasn’t living in Tortuga, there was an understanding. Sometimes you were in the good times. Sometimes in the bad times.


The fact he was running around in a Battlemaster now instead of his old Shadow Hawk? Well. These weren’t entirely the good times. He had a few setbacks. Minor things, losing more than he was gaining despite winning every raid. Then this recent Vindemiatrix raid was the tipping point, while he won he took a lot of damage. And then a chunk of the raided goods were lost.


An idiot had his dropship shot out from under him, losing a third or more of all the loot, mechs, equipment that was going to be used to repair the salvaged mechs. He had lost a good chunk of their supplies, and now? They were being attacked by mercs.


“Fucking idiot. I hope that moron Darrien got tortured before they hung him.” He grumbled out to Analise.


“Too late now to care one way or another. You know what this means. Once they find our home it’s only a matter of time before someone comes. We ain't big enough to send off a real fight.” She tells him as she slugs back her drink. “They got our scent, they aint ever gonna stop hunting us here.”


“I know! I know, woman. I was hoping those idiots had all died before they could blab. But I started making preparations anyway, didn't I? Ain’t I a fucking pirate king? Ready for when shit goes bad?” He was always prepared. Plus even if he had to ditch this group, as long as he walked away with enough equipment, he could always reach out to his old supplier. He had done good work for over a decade. They would probably outfit him again.


“You did Red, you did.” She agrees and like always with that woman Red can never tell if she was agreeing or fucking with him. Didn’t matter. He was in charge. And well… she was his girl. If she wanted to fuck with him, he would allow it. As long as she didn’t do it in front of the men. Couldn’t afford that.


“Alright. Let’s set the fucking bombs, and get out of here. Hope they enjoy sucking fumes. Hehahahahaha!”


“It will still be a bit before everything is on board the dropships Red. We might want to keep the bombs under wraps for now, until we are ready to take off anyways. Don’t want any of the men to get ideas.”


“Yeah you may be right there my girl. Alright, well let’s go bust some balls. I want our shit packed to go before these asswipe mercs get it into their head to go on the attack.”


“Unlikely. Romero only saw four mechs, and what he thought were probably LRM carriers. If they have more mechs, they can only bring so many. That is a Union they came in on after all.”


“Yeah yeah. I know they have limited carry! But Mercs are crazy. Never doubt they will do something stupid.”


“Yes Red. I’ll keep that in mind.” Again he wasn’t sure if she was actually agreeing or not.


“Doesn’t matter, we can hold them off easy enough. We got enou-”


The explosions rattled the windows from his bedroom, and he was on his feet before he realized what had happened. He rushed out the door Analise was on his six, the woman keeping up with him like always, he made it to the window that looked in on the starport and saw fire dead bodies…


“Tell me that didn’t just fuckin happen.”


“Sorry Red. Looks like they got us. They hit our dropships somehow. Those hangar bays… That’s a week's work. For each ship.”


“Can we rush it?”


“If we did, we wouldn’t be able to use the hangar at all. Anything inside would be scrap by the time we left atmosphere.”


“Fuck That’s two hangars down… They would riot if we tried to leave that many mechs behind.”


“Red?”


“Ain’t no way an enemy got in.” The woman blinked for a moment before her eyes narrowed, for once agreeing with him. “Keep an eye out, I want to know who the traitor is. Gonna need to take them out before we lift off regardless now. Someone from Loki or some such working against us means nowhere is safe as long as they are alive.”


“A witch hunt after this, might cause some issues Red.”


“Yeah Morale’s gonna take a dive, unless we set it up another way. Get everyone ready, we can’t wait anymore, we prep an attack. If we wipe out the mercs, then we have all the time we need to finish fixing our ships. And kill the traitor.”


“You want to attack the mercs? Is that wise? Losses would be… High.”


“I’m sure. Maybe our enemies will kill our traitor, solve the problem for us. Regardless, keep an eye out. You got good eyes for this sort of thing.”


“You got it Red. I’ll go prep everyone.”


“Yeah go do that. I’ve got some fires to put out.” Red cursed whoever had done this had really fucked him raw.


—-


We had been preparing a position to start causing some trouble for the pirates when before we were ready, they moved out on their own. I wasn’t even the one who noticed it first. “Commander! Enemy movement. Looks like they are sending trouble towards the dropship.”


“Good catch!” I radioed out as I switched my view to the starport. Mechs were readying and moving out. And this time it wasn’t all lights.


Although they were there too.


“Alright. I am gonna rush this. Erica, get ready to swap with me.” I called out from the cockpit of the Locust. I had been spending the last hour or so preparing a nice little killing field for the enemy


I did my best to continue finishing my current project even as I started sending out more radio messages. “Green Lance, poke them.”


“Roger that Commander!”


“Artillery Unit, get ready, I want them to think you aren’t here until they move too close to escape.”


“Understood!”


“Command to Guard Command, come in.”

“I am here Command.”


“Colonel, we have enemy movement. It appears they didn’t much care for our dropship surprise. Get your mech Lance moving. Sending you waypoints. I want to draw them in to Green Lance and have Alpha Lance come in behind them.”


“That we can do Commander. We will begin moving.”

“Good hunting.”


As the line went dead, I finished the last of the trap. “Alright Erica, move your ass. I want to be out of the way before this kicks off.”


“Understood Commander!”


We switched as fast as we could, I nearly slid down the rope ladder to get to the ground as I rushed to my Norman. Jumping in I turned the truck around and headed out of the way. No way was I sticking around without a few tons of Battlemech armor between me and them.


“Erica. You got the trigger?”


“Yes Commander!”


“Good save it for the right time.”


“I will Commander! I promise.”


—-


A different perspective

Jason Daniels

Gniezno city ruins


Jason stomped behind the array of mechs he was following. His Rifleman was the heaviest mech here. The only heavy sent out to take care of this. But then again. A lance of lights, a lance of mediums, and a heavy for support usually ‘solved’ most problems. At least in his experience.


But Jason wasn't in charge despite having the heaviest mech which was odd for pirates. No he let the others take that job. He just wanted to survive another battle.


He hadn’t wanted this life. But sometimes bad decisions followed by more bad decisions lead to you being labeled a pirate and forced out of polite civilized society, but Jason didn’t plan to spend his life like this, he was saving up his ‘pay’ from the raids, a few more, and he would be able to get out of this life, start a farm somewhere on a periphery planet. Old Vanessa his Rifleman would suit that sort of life. Just living and when some asshole pirate comes by, He’ll take his Rifleman and clear em out.


At least that is what he told himself.


Yet here he was. Following a group of men that only sometimes didn’t scare the piss out of him. But he also knew what would happen if he was captured.


Very rarely was there a punishment other than a short death awaiting them. So he moved with his group, his intentions clear.


They of course weren't expecting to be hit from the side. The LRMs dropped out of nowhere, and Dans Comando smashed to the ground. He didn’t get back up.


“Fuck! Check for spotters! Follow me!” Kurin called out the Japanese man ordered over the line as he turned his Cicada towards where the LRMs were coming down. His Lance followed, and where the mediums went, so did the lights. Jason followed from behind, slowly lagging behind the fight.


It started in front of him, through scattered callouts over comms the lances had run into a Lance of mostly mediuns holding a street. Their LRMs were accurate though. Damage was accumulating up before the battle had even started.


“We are pushing through. Mediums, catch their attention so we can get them!” Kurin called out, a common tactic, grab the enemies attention with the big mechs, while the lights pushed past, surrounded. It had worked perfectly well on the last planet they had been on. What was it? Vindi-whatever.


It didn’t matter. Everything was going well, a moment after the call it would start happening. Jason could picture it in his head, it’s why a moment later that one thing happened he wasn’t expecting. An explosion.


A big one.


“Hey what happened! Report!” He called out even as he kept old Vanessa moving at full speed, hoping that something bad hadn’t just happened.


When he turned the corner he couldn’t believe it at first. The street was trashed covered in dust, and smoke, fires breaking out everywhere, but worse were the mechs. Smashed and scattered. And the four enemy mechs that all turned and focused on his mech.

“Fuck.” He managed to say before the alert on his dash started up.


‘Warning Missile Incoming’ was lit up red and blinking.


“Fuck.”


—-


“Well what have we learned?” I asked as I finished tying the bandage around Erica’s shoulder.


“Don’t get shot in a Locust? Ow!”


“Not really what I was going for, but yeah, I learned that lesson too. Don’t worry you’ll be fine, and get a nice bitching scar out of it when you are all healed up.”


“I don’t feel fine.” She whined. The Locust had taken a nasty barrage of fire during the enemy's attack. It’s right side had a few shots go internal, and some shrapnel had kicked up.


The armor she was wearing had likely saved her life. “C’mon let’s get you to a real medic on the dropship, they can take care of the rest.”


“W-what, but Command-OW!” She whined when I tightened the bandage for a moment.


“You are in no condition to fight Mechwarrior. You did your job. I do believe you took about ten times your weight in metal with that scheme? Good job.”


“W-what It wasn’t me! I just suggested it! You were the one that could do it!” She whined but I smiled down at her proudly.


“Yeah but I hadn’t thought of setting up explosives under the road like that, none of the enemy mech's sensors could read it but sending a signal through was easy. Just a little antenna through the ferrocrete? Brilliant. Congratulations Lieutenant. I do believe that deserves a commendation!” That slipped out of my mouth and it took me a moment to realize what I had just said. “Fuck that means I have to come up with medals and awards now huh?”


Erica broke into a stifled giggle that ended when she clutched her shoulder “Don’t make me laugh Vicky, it hurts.”


“Yeah yeah c’mon let’s get you out of here. The Alpha guys should be here soon, when they do, I’ll have them drive you to the Dropship. I’ll take the Locust for now. Don’t worry I won’t let her take any more damage. She’s your ride now, not mine.”


“C-Commander!”


I chuckled at her protest but I had other things on my mind now. Because our allies just arrived. Watching them take stock of the devastation around us was quite the treat. The mechs slowed to a stop and it was only a minute later that trucks and infantry showed up. The looks of awe at the amount of mechs laying around the room filled me with a certain pleasure.


We would be getting a reputation on Vindemiatrix at this rate.


Although unfortunately we hadn’t done this unscathed. Besides the Locust, Bennys Centurion was beat to hell. It had been a large focus of the enemy mechs. Lenden lost an arm, but his Scorch was still fighting fit, just.. A little light on armor.


Hanna had taken some nasty hits, but her training had shown results. Other than losing her shield arm, her mech was still ready to go. Light damage otherwise.


And before the bombs went off, her mech had probably done the most damage too. She was getting nasty with that large laser. Her accuracy was scary.


“Commander.”


“Colonel.” I called out to the man, after he dismounted his Shadow Hawk.


“Why would you do this? No better yet, how did you even do this?” He broke out immediately. The man was wearing his mech clothes, so little but a pair of shorts and a pistol but nonetheless I kept my face serious.


Even if it was funny.


“Bombs.”


“Bombs… The pirates walked into an area that you had bombs?” He asked exasperated.


“Well obviously.”


“Commander. Please don’t play games with me, this is ridiculous! How did you place enough bombs to do this without them noticing! And in only… what twenty minutes?”


“Colonel Maruska.” I stated firmly breaking him from his demanding ramble. “I have my ways. The same way I was able to damage the enemy dropships. Drop it. Be thankful that we are on your side.”


He visibly bit his tongue to keep from asking questions. “Fine. Keep your secrets. Good job Commander. You defeated the pirates, and turned all of the salvage, that we need into scraps! I’ll have my retrieval team get on this.” He was mad, and I could kind of understand why.


I looked over the devastation. The remains of the enemy mechs, and they were remains. Those caught in the explosions had been wrecked as if hit by artillery. Because that was about how much boom I had created. Some of the light mechs weren’t even salvage at this point, you might as well just call them scrap. But what did I care? We defeated a vastly overtonned enemy, more mechs, more tonnage, and we did it with minimal damage, although I was still mad about Erica’s injury.


Because the mechs weren’t my objective. I turned slightly to look down the street towards the Starport. I had another object in mind.


“Alright. We are going to head back to the dropship to re-arm. We are low on everything, and my Pilot needs medical.” I point out Erica who was already being fussed over.


“Absolutely. Let us take care of this. I doubt the pirates have much left to fight back with.” He offered, still sounding exasperated but at least happy that the enemy weren’t much of a threat anymore.


“A Battlemaster, and a Thunderbolt.” I tell him idly, the last two mechs definitely had me concerned.


“W-what?” Before I could respond my shoulder was grabbed. “Did you say a Battlemaster?”


“Yeah, I got confirmation from my scouts. Their last mechs are a Battlemaster and a Thunderbolt.”


“That’s my Battlemaster.”


I blinked at that before wincing internally. This just got complicated didn’t it?


“You know… When your father asked for a clause that said your personal mech wouldn’t be counted as salvage if we recovered it, I really should have asked what it was first huh?”


He snorted letting me go although I could see his hand still shaking. “Yeah. Well I want it back. So…”


“Focus on the here and now Colonel. Get this metal secured, get it back to the ship, they aren’t going anywhere. We’ll get them. Green Lance just needs to re-arm, and we are good to go.”


“Not this time. I’ll be leading with Alpha this time, your Green Lance has done enough.”


“Don’t be stupid. My mechs will support yours then. We are low on armor anyways. But don’t think we aren’t coming. These are pirates. You never know what kind of nasty tricks they are gonna use.”


He burst into laughter so loud it shocked me and I looked at him like he was crazy. He took a moment to look around the devastation around them. “Yeah Commander, I'm not that worried about nasty tricks right now. I have a master of them on my side.”


I actually flushed a little at that. That was a surprisingly nice compliment from the prickly Colonel.


—-


We went back to base, Erica went straight to the medical bay, while I walked around in the Locust. It was too damaged to do much at this point, I was going to have to be very careful about my right side…


“No charging the Battlemaster.” I whispered to myself as everyone was re-armed. The LRM carriers and the Artillery group were still out with the Alpha Lance, they were covering the recovery of the downed mechs.


All the while I kept an eye on the sensor watching the enemies two remaining mechs. Wondering what they were going to try. Both were a serious threat. Even with us out numbering and out toning them.


Then they did something I didn’t expect.


They started preparing to lift off.


“Fuck. Command to Alpha Lance come in!”


“Alpha here.”


“Enemy are making a break for it, looks like the damage to the hangar wasn’t enough to completely stop a liftoff.”


“Fuck! I’m on my way.”


“No Colonel! They still have enough defenses that you won’t make it in time. Send your ASF. We can remind them they aren’t getting away with a fly over.”


“Fine..” The line went dead after a moment as he reached out to his command channels to ready the ASF.


“Command to Delta, come in Delta.”


“I’m here Commander.”


“You seeing this?”


“Sure am Commander. But it’s crazier than you think. The whole place is going crazy. I think they are killing each other right now, instead of worrying about you.”


“What? They are attacking each other?” I mean, I know they are pirates, but surely being attacked and having an obvious threat is something they put more concern into.


“Oh yeah, gunfire and everything. The whole place is going up.” Carl sighed over the line. “Want us to set off the bombs Commander?”


“No not yet… Wait until we move to engage. That will be the best time to do it, maximum shock.”


“That I can do Commander!”


“What the hell is going on over there?”


—-


A different perspective

Red McHannon The Red Vulture

Gniezno Pirate City


Red was getting really tired of this. “TRAITORS ALL OF YOU!” He screamed as he blasted another one of the damned traitors in the head. He had been attacked! Him! Some of his men actually thought they could kill him and take over. Now of all times? No this was the act of a traitor. He just needed to know who it was. Who was plotting against him? Setting him up like this?


“Analise! Is the dropship ready for liftoff?”


“Yes Red! The captain emptied the damaged hangar, they managed to weld the door mostly shut, it will hold breaking orbit. Or at least that’s what he said.” She offered standing tall beside the group of kneeling men he had captured trying to betray him. Him! He had given them everything! Just because times were going bad, doesn’t mean you stab your king in the back!


“Good. Stuff these assholes in that hangar. I don’t want to waste any more ammo on them.” Their terrified bleating was something that easily washed over him. Wouldn’t be the last time he heard people begging him for Mercy after all.


“Understood Red. I’ll tell the-” They both heard it.


ASF engines roaring overhead. They both ducked down, hoping that any bombs that might be dropped would be survived. But nothing happened, and Red realized something worse.


“They are circling. They know we are trying to take off.” He felt his stomach drop. If the dropship's fusion drive was going before the ASF even lifted off, they would get away without a problem. But if those birds were in the air? “They trapped us.”


“It seems so Red.”


“How… how did they know? I only told…” He looked to his girl who met his eyes without concern. “I want off this rock too. Makes no sense for me to do it. Doesn’t make sense for the captain either. He will lose his dropship if we get taken out.”


“Right… You're right. Just the paranoia.” He muttered although he couldn’t help but keep an eye on her out of the corner of his eye. Paranoia wasn’t always right, but it was always better to trust your instincts.


“What do we do Red, we can’t take off with those birds in the air… And we lost our Rifleman.”


“I know! Fuck. They just had to get wiped! I wish I knew what happened, those fucks. They didn’t even tell us what these fucking mercs were up to. I feel like we have been fighting blind the whole damn battle!”


“We have. They killed all of our scouts… Again something pointing to a traitor. But even I don’t know where all the scouts were stationed.”


“No one does! I fucking don’t even know!” He stops not because of a thought, but because of the gun pressed against the back of his head. He opens his mouth to talk to argue, but the bullet silences that entirely.


—-

The Killers Perspective.

Analise?

Gniezno city ruins


“What a waste.” She sighs, two years of work gone. All because this idiot got his base found out, and managed to get outwitted by a merc company. Well at least there is one benefit to the entire situation she considers. “At least I got to be the one to kill him.”


Two years of dealing with this scum. Two years of trying to aim him at an enemy of the Commonwealth. And finally when he started considering it?


Mercs. It’s always mercs. Analise thought as she turned and headed to the communication room. A few rounds through the scum causing trouble and she was free to make a call without interruption. The pirates were too busy fighting or trying to get on the Dropship. Without realizing that dropship wasn’t going anywhere now.


Flipping through a few switches she sat down. “This is an emergency request looking for the Commanding officer of the mercenary forces. Please come in.”


It was silent for a while as she waited. She knew they had received her message.


“This is Commander Eisen-Blume. I have command here. Who are you?”


The voice surprised Analise, it sounded young. Very young. But it looks like Analise was in luck. She spoke with a Lyran twang. Solaris accent? Something close to it. Interesting. “Apologies Commander, I can’t say we have ever been acquainted, May I ask for confirmation on who’s contract you are currently working under?”


The voice was silent for a time. “I am currently under contract with the Governor of Vindemiatrix. It’s an interesting question. What’s your angle here?”


How cute. “I am simply confirming your allegiance before I say anything further. Commander I am requesting assistance, a face to face meeting. We have a lot to discuss.”


“I don’t usually make time for pirates. My go to is a bullet. I am going to need an explanation here.”


“There are more interests present than you understand, but nothing I will say over an unsecured radio. A meeting face to face. If it helps your movement. There are only two mechs still active. My Thunderbolt which I will be heading for soon, and a Battlemaster whose pilot just had an unfortunate accident.”


It took a while for the response to come but when it did Analise smiled internally. “If you step out with your Thunderbolt and shut down, we will have our face to face.”


“Excellent.”


—-


The operation to clear out the starport went very fast after that. The enemy didn't have any mechs left. We moved in, stomping what resistance there was, flat, not that there was much. Once we had the port secured the Dropships surrendered ‘thanking’ us for saving them and their crew from the vile pirates. And of course in exchange for not nuking their own ships they would be treated as pirate captives instead of pirates themselves.


But we all knew what was truly going on. The crew of the dropships would be carried back to a Lyran planet and released, but none of them expected to be treated super well. At least they would survive.


What was more interesting was the Thunderbolt waiting outside the port, right where they said they would be. Shutdown, and as my Lance came up hatch opening. Out stepped a woman, early twenties, wearing the most risque outfit I had ever seen.


And that came with Mechwarriors wearing almost nothing when in the cockpit. I slipped out of my own cockpit, still wearing my armor in case of any tricks, as I walked out to figure out what the hell was going on.


Colonel Maruska joined me, his Shadow Hawk still his main ride for now, despite us retrieving his Battlemaster. Apparently they had already changed the security system, so it would have to be fixed before he could pilot it again.


As I approached the woman, she was paying ample attention to the Colonel for a moment, seeming pleased before turning her attention to me. I could see her interest in my armor, as her eyes roved over it, but I was used to that. And it was expected.


“Commander Eisen-Blume, and unless my guess is wrong, Colonel, Maruska, of the Vindemiatrix guard.” She offered, her voice almost unconsciously sultry.


I could see his fist clench as he was forced to speak to a pirate, one that had raided his home, causing such stress, but he bore with it staying firm.


I interrupted before anything else could be said. “You requested a meeting. As I said I don’t usually meet with pirates, make it quick.”


“I’m not a pirate, I’m a member of LIC, Lohengrin division.” She states plainly with a gentle smile waiting, as I took this in.


The Colonel didn’t hold back unlike me, he denied it instantly. “Bullshit! I recognize that Thunderbolt, you think I wouldn’t recognize it? You were one of the raiders that attacked my world!”


“Yes I was. An unfortunate requirement for my job of infiltrating the Red Vultures.” She offered before turning to me. “I don’t have any credentials to prove my status of course, but if you take me back to civilized space, a stop at an HPG terminal will provide proof of what I say.”


“That doesn’t make sense. Lohengrin works to protect Lyran citizens from terrorists, the Red Vultures don’t really fit.”


“That is because you aren’t aware that the Vultures had backers. I never got confirmation on who unfortunately. Although the fact I was in the midst of convincing Red to switch from raids on Lyran worlds to League worlds? Probably Fedsuns, or Capellans. Not that it really changes anything here and now.”


“Fuck!” Colonel Maruska cursed his fist clenched and although he moved he didn't swing his fist at her, as much as everyone could tell he wanted to. “You attacked a Lyran world to figure out who was backing pirates! You killed your own people for what?” He demanded and I was tempted to step in. The Colonel was pissed.


“Because this isn’t the first group of pirates funded like this, and until we can find out who is backing them it won’t be the last.” She looked a little remorseful, but it was distant. Like someone bumping into a situation that doesn’t concern them. “I had a job to do for the Commonwealth Colonel.”


He took a deep breath and hissed through his teeth. “Commander. You.. You take care of this, I am not going to be any help here.” He growled and walked back to his mech, I watched him for a while, as he climbed up the ladder and then turned and stomped off in his mech.


“Commander Eisen-Blume, will you transport me to a Commonwealth world?”


“Well I can’t say I like this entire situation Miss Analise, but I will. You won’t be getting back in that Thunderbolt until we have it all verified though.”


“An understandable precaution, thank you.” She offered with a gentle smile. This woman gave me chills. Something was just off about her.


“I do have a question for you though.” I ask, suddenly remembering something important.


“Yes Commander Eisen-Blume?”


“Where the hell is the Jumpship the Pirates had.”


“Oh well that’s easy. I can tell you exactly where it is.” She offers, and I feel like she just handed me a treasure map.


Because she sorta did.


“Though Commander Eisen-Blume, I have a question for you as well.”


“What?”


“How exactly did you infiltrate the starport and plant explosives on the dropships? I set up many of the defenses against just that act myself. I convinced Red it was just a traitor in our midst, that planted those bombs, but I know that isn’t accurate.”


I blinked. Was that frustration in her voice? How fun. She had been so monotone the whole time, like she was discussing the weather instead of trying to convince a group of mercs not to kill her. Instead of answering I hit my radio. Keep my eyes locked on her own, “Delta Ops, we aren’t killing her today, she is coming with us, so go ahead and pack up, go hunt down any stragglers trying to run off.”


“Understood Commander! Delta Ops out.”


“Nothing specific.” I told her which answered everything and nothing.


The look of irritation on her face was worth it.


—-


After supervising the transfer of the Thunderbolt back to our dropship, and the prisoner put into a guarded room. I had only good news coming out of the Starport. Apparently, the last of the pirates had been put down. I was quite pleased to know that things were looking good. We had finished our objective. And once more my people had made it out mostly unharmed.


Erica was being treated and the doctors had laughed at my concerned call over the radio. Telling me to stop freaking out over a ‘scrape’ as they put it.


Delta Ops spent the next couple hours hunting down the remaining pirates that were hiding out, while the rest of us started taking everything we needed. Sure we could leave the stragglers be. Without a dropship, and without a food supply. They aren’t going anywhere.


But well… Neither Carl nor I were willing to let it go that way. The few times I spoke with Delta ops while they were running around, it seemed they were turning it into a game, of who could catch more pirates before they were done.


I took Benny on foot to go claim the most important loot of course. Not that I told him that.


He just thought we were missing out.


“C’mon Vicky, what are we doing out here, I wanted to loot the hangars, now I’m missing out on Pirate loot!”


“Swag. If it’s loot from a pirate it’s called swag.” I inform him as I turn another corner in the dilapidated building I had led Benny out to.


Looking nonplussed I kept walking even as I could feel the rolling eyes.


Teenagers.


“Swag then. You are sorta ruining a moment for me Vicky.”


“No I’m not. I’m just not letting you waste time.” I informed him, putting a certain twang in my voice so I sounded like some snooty noble.


“What? It’s not wasting time when it’s looting Vicky.” He tells me and although I wasn’t looking at him, I could tell he was rolling his eyes.


Teenagers.


“No but wasting time gathering garbage that the crappy pirates collected is. Don’t you want the ‘real’ stuff?” I flashed him a grin when I came to the door I had been heading towards. The door was locked, and trapped. But well.


I had a sensor.


So I went through the wall. I whipped out my Vibroblade, and started slicing through whatever the interior wall was made out of. Benny looked at me in utter confusion as if I was some sort of madwoman.


Which was fair.


When I finished cutting I kicked in the wall, feeling like a badass and revealing the room inside.


And the mountains of money and swag stacked in the room. “Even Pirates collect money, but it’s a little difficult to keep it all electronic, you know? You never know if your account will disappear if you piss someone off enough, so some Pirates store money the old fashioned way. Welcome to Red McHannons secret money stash. Hidden in an old apartment in the city.”


“Vicky. I take back everything I ever said, you are my favorite.” He whispers to me in awe as he walks past, grabbing a literal golden crown and looking it over.


“Of course! Wait. When did you say I wasn’t your favorite! Benny! Benny! Answer me! When did you say I’m not your favorite!?”


—-


Within a day of taking out the pirates, our Union lifted off without a majority of the men. It and it’s ASF wings were going to claim the Jump Ship that was currently idling in an asteroid field that Analise the LIC agent was kind enough to inform us about. While that was happening we were doing as much repairs on the Dropships as we could to get them mobile.


“Well Captain, how does it look?” I asked, striding onto the bridge of the Pirates Union. The dropship had seen better days, and the faded scrubbed off or defaced images of a Lyran fist told the tale of where it had come from.


The Captain, a younger man who used to be just a Lieutenant aboard the Union we flew in on. Was doing well despite his lack of experience in command. The amount of trustworthy crew was growing sparse with three dropships to man. He looked up from a monitor of some sort. “Commander. We are making good headway, your people do good work. I still don’t know how you found another Hangar bay motor on this dustball.”


“Pure luck, it was in the storage of spare parts, that’s all.” I informed him with a smile knowing that wasn’t exactly the truth. “How long before we can lift off ourselves? I don’t exactly want to miss the date for our Jumpship leaving.”


“We should be able to make it without issue Commander. Thanks to your find, the Unions’ Hangar should be good to go, we are just removing the last of the spot welds now. The Mule will take longer, but that’s because we have to finish welding the hangar shut. I don't like it’s chances of leaving orbit with those welds. Likely the entire hatch would have reopened mid orbit… On a mule well.”


“Aren’t Mules the dropships that tear themselves apart if the hangars aren’t closed when they launch?”


“Just so.” The young man replied with a shrug.


I shivered “I don’t like pirates but still. Hell of a way to go.”


“Agreed Commander, agreed.” He offers with a smile. Before turning back to bark some orders at the bridge crew. Apparently the pirate crew hadn’t been taking great care of the dropship, although thankfully it wasn’t dangerous to fly, it was just not nearly where it should be for a dropship in use.


Well it didn’t matter to me. I stared out of the windscreen watching everyone running around both dropships to get everything running and ready. So much work was ahead of me. So much left to do. But this was a big first step. My people had learned a lot and with the contract completion? Well my Company was going to be rolling in cash for a while.


I smiled, everything was going well!


—-
 

xachariahxx

Well-known member
One of the primary obstacles to disseminating the Helm Core was having a secure line to leadership. Contact with Analise solves that problem eventually once she's verified. If you can't trust LIC and Lohengrin specifically, then even handing the core to Katrina Steiner directly would end up leaking.

I also like the little touch with the SLDF suits saving Erica's life. The Iron Blooded Orphans aren't better than their opponents, but they're alive to learn because they've got better stuff.
 
Chapter 9.1

Seras

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Chapter 9.1 Politics and Paperwork

3021

Vindemiatrix System

Brattleson’s Depot


I felt horrible. The pirate's dropship that I had taken back was not as stable as the well maintained one that had taken us out. The damn thing was hell on my stomach. I paid for my arrogance!


“C’mon Commander, no time for this. You have a meeting with the Governor, remember?” Benny prodded as I groaned as a sack of terrible discomfort.


“I hate you all!”


“Yeah yeah I know, c’mon you’ll feel better once you are off the dropship.”


Unfortunately Benny was right. He dragged me off the ship, and once my feet were on stable non shaky ground I was already starting to feel more normal. The Governor this time wasn’t waiting for us at his mansion, no the man had actually gone out to greet his son.


The fact his son was returning at all must have been a relief but when the Colonel stepped out of the dropship not in the Shadow Hawk he had left in, but his own Battlemaster? Once more returned to him. I could tell the old man was feeling something.


The Colonel clambered down the ladder from the Battlemaster and stood before his father, tall and proud. The old man pulled him into a hug, and despite the flush of red going up his neck I could see the Colonel returning the hug. Their whispered conversation stayed between the two of them as I stayed away, mostly because I was still regaining my color.


“Ah and there she is. Commander Eisen-Blume.” The old man called out, despite his obvious frailty, he seemed more energetic than before.


I guess getting your family Battlemech back will do that. “Governor. I hope you are pleased with the Iron Blooded Orphans' work?” I couldn’t help but ask as I approached. The old man offers a deep rumble of a laugh before nodding.


“Yes Commander, you are worth every Kroner. Or will be rather once I actually pay you.” He said turning entirely from his son to step towards me. “You have done my planet a service no amount of Kroner can ever repay.” His heavy words echoed around and everyone took notice of his words.


“I was simply doing my duty. Pirates are the enemy of all civilization.” I offered, not sure what else to say. The whole situation was awkward. But it seemed to be enough because he patted my shoulder and headed back to his car.


“Well then let’s get somewhere more comfortable for our discussion, I am sure it will be an interesting one.” He chuckled as he led me into his very fancy hover car.


It had cooling seats! I wanted one.


—-


I appreciated the food. The wining and dining the Governor was doing for me. I liked the praise him and his men were giving me. Hell I liked the medal he had told me I would receive in an official meeting the next day. The Star of Vindemiatrix was a hell of a medal apparently. The highest award the Governor offered outside of LCAF military medals.


But I was starting to get annoyed at his dawdling. As Virgil Carolus, the Governors aide, once more went over our contracts reimbursement for ammunition. “Due to excessive although effective use of LRMs during the engagement we will accept the repayment request 95% of cost of all LRMs will be return-”


“Enough about the ammo. Or the hazard pay, or all the other little bits and pieces. You have been avoiding the meat of this deal all day. And Governor I’m fifteen. I don’t really care for the purposeful avoidance of the issue at hand.”


The room went silent. The large meeting room with a massive wooden table is where I was sitting around with The Governor, the Colonel, the aide, then around the table stood, nobles, and generals, and all sorts of important people that lived here on Vindemiatrix. All of them of course aiming for a piece of the pie.


But I wanted my piece first.


The room was silent. No one, not even the Colonel willing to intrude on this argument. “Very well.” The rumbling bass of the Governor speaks, the first time in quite a while, and I note his voice is not just deep, it’s tired.


We had been at this all day after all.


“Virgil. Skip to the important part.”


“Y-yes, Governor Maruska. The Invader Jumpship Clementine. The Union Dropship… undesignated. And the Mule Dropship Undesignated. Have all been accepted as salvage under the Contract the Governor made with Commander Eisen-Blume.” Virgil admitted, and the gasps around the room were thunderous.


It wasn’t just odd to hear that, but almost unheard of, but it had been part of our deal. I would move out with my current forces, join his assault of the pirate base attacking his world. But in exchange. Anything taken from the pirates could end up on the salvage table. No exceptions like in a normal contract.


It was a definite contract of desperation. And I knew exactly why the gasps of denial were so loud. A jumpship. A single jumpship could do wonders for a planet's economy, and Virgil just admitted that if I pushed for it, I could potentially take it right out from under them. If it had been any other situation the demand would have been refused immediately.


But this had been the old man's one chance to have it all. Take out the pirates. Get his family Battlemech back, earn enough wealth from the pirates' haven to revitalize his economy for decades to come.


And I had given it to him at a steal.


But now I wanted what was mine.


The Governor raised his hand and the table went silent. “As per our contract the Iron Blooded Orphans earned their pay. All of it. No matter what circumstances we end up with. I won’t hear any denials on this. Commander Eisen-Blume. Per our agreement, you have first choice of any one piece of salvage. Regardless of what it is.”


I swear one of the nobles made a sound like he was going to have a heart attack when that was admitted to the table. It had been one of my demands when making this deal. There were always minutiae or exceptions for normal clauses in salvage. ‘Company earns percentage salvage shares but can’t spend them on X’ sort of stuff. It was normal. Common. I had demanded an exception to that because of the danger. And it had been dangerous even if we had done exceptionally well.


It only took one mistake to end in death.


“I am sure most of you believe you already know my choice. It should be obvious plainly to even a fool. But I am also not fool enough to take it outright. I am a mercenary. I will always need jumpships. But not always use them. So how about a more equitable arrangement? If I don’t choose the Jumpship today, instead I want an offer of premium status. If I ever need a jumpship for an emergency mission, or need to go somewhere in a hurry this Invader will assist me. If you can agree to that concession, which I will of course pay the crew for every use of. I will remove the Jumpship from the salvage offer.”


My offer rattled around the room for a minute. The noble who looked like he was dying before regained his color and turned to the Governor. Because really there were only two voices that mattered in this room. His and mine.


“I believe a contract will need to be written up to suit both our interests, but I see no reason why we would not support our friends the Iron Blooded Orphans in any endeavors they might have in the future.”


I smiled like a shark. “Then my first pick is of course the Union dropship.” My statement still sent the room in a tizzy, there had been more than a few nobles in this room planning on the new dropships and jumpships to restart trade here on Vindemiatrix, but frankly? Not my problem.


No, I was going to have a dropship. And a good one too. The Mule was something I would let them keep. Those things were dangerous to be in during any sort of combat. So I happily traded any claim on it for more shares of everything else. Of course the Union was exactly what I really needed.


Well it would be once I brought in all the ‘spare parts’ it would need to fix it.


Considering the Jumpship, and Dropship were all I really cared about, I accepted without complaint the mechs and other salvage that was partitioned to me. Most of it was junk from when we blew up the street, mechs in ten pieces don’t usually do well. But it was fine. I was already planning on scanning it all down and just creating some new mechs.


The next few hours were mostly determining the Jumpship contract. Which was very nice. In the end, I became a co-owner of the jumpship. Which hadn’t been what I expected, but it seems to be the first thought they all had at my offer. Which was fine. The Clementine was a fine ship. Or it would be eventually. Unfortunately it was a lot harder to get scans of the damn thing, so for now I was relying on just giving them money to ensure everything was fixed up.


Although I didn’t tell them, if it ever got really bad I would just go out and copy the thing whole. But that was years in the future, If ever.


It wasn’t like I was going to be able to hide a brand new Jumpship. That was one secret that once it got out, there was no putting back.


—-


The rest of the meeting went well, and it was only as it was ending and I was leaving the Governors manor that I ran into someone else I had been wondering about.


“I suppose since you aren’t in handcuffs and are walking around freely someone proved your credentials?”


“Correct Commander Eisen-Blume.” Analise told me. The woman was wearing more normal clothes now, a pretty standard Lyran LCAF uniform, although pointedly without any rank, or other markings. “Once we got in contact with LIC, they assured the governor's office that I was on assignment. Of course I now have a new one.”


“Well good luck with that. I guess.” I mutter before heading off. She still creeped me out a bit. Unfortunately it was only a few moments later that I realized she was following me. I slowed, a creeping feeling up my back, “I’m not going to like the answer when I ask you why you are following me, am I?”


Despite her blank look I could tell she was amused. “Not at all Commander Eisen-Blume. Not at all.”


“Alright. Why are you following me, Analise?” I said after a few moments realizing she was waiting for me to play along.


“Why because I have orders to be your new Liason with LIC command of course! Someone was very impressed with your work and figured that you should have a more direct line Commander Eisen-Blume.”


“I am fairly sure everything you just said was a lie.” I tell her, turning around and looking the woman in the eye. “I think if that was true they would have offered me a fairly normal liaison not a member of Lohengrin.”


“I think the Governess of Zaniah III’s comments on you are quite accurate Commander Eisen-Blume, you are very perceptive!” She offers with a fake looking smile. Which only made me shudder in my armor.


“I don’t suppose I can refuse can I?”


“It would look rather suspicious, besides. Didn’t you yourself say you accept any orphan that wishes to join? I’m an orphan Commander Eisen-Blume.”


I blinked at that. Hell that’s right. I remember that vaguely some of the LIC agents were orphans trained to be incredibly patriotic. Damn that’s fucked up. I stepped closer and did what just came naturally to me. Despite the woman being a little taller than me, it wasn’t too much of a height difference, my armored boots helped as well, so when I leaned up and patted her on the head it wasn’t too difficult. “True. Welcome to the Iron Blooded Orphans, we will have to get you some armor… You’ll be an odd fit, but whatever.” I tell her, before walking away. “Well don’t fall behind, we have work to do!”


“W-what… Yes Commander Eisen-Blume.”


—-


Well alongside our surprise recruit, that wasn’t the only ones who wished to join. Part of the agreement with the Governor was that the Iron Blooded Orphans could go around to the orphanages and recruit.


Yeah, he had looked a little uncomfortable about it, but I did explain this wasn’t some weird meat grinder thing. I simply have the resources to provide food, housing, and training for a lot more people on Zaniah, and if he wanted to lighten the resource drain on his planet, I would take all of them.


I ended up with a lot of new recruits.


“How many joined?!”


“About four hundred.” Benny offered, handing me the clipboard containing the list. “I know the population here is a little higher than Zaniah, but this is still a lot of people.”


“Yeah it is! That’s twice as many joined us on Zaniah, and we cleared out most of the orphanages there! Where did they all come from!?” I was utterly shocked at the numbers, but really as I looked into it, I discovered the simple truth.


There were fewer orphans on Zaniah, because more of them died. Raids after all didn’t just affect adults. Kids got caught in the crossfire. Plus we were on the news everywhere here on Vindemiatrix.


“Okay so that’s too many to take with us on the Union. We are going to need to charter a civilian transport ship for that many.” I offered, already pulling up the listings for civilian dropships. We just need to find a personnel transport. That would handle that many kids without too much issue.


“Yeah, but there is another problem Commander, that is more than double our current population. Do we have the resources and manpower to handle that sort of increase?”


“We probably don’t but to be honest we need to do this anyway. We will need to get used to getting surges in population. We aren’t always going to be just a small merc band after all.” I offered mentioning my future plans even as Benny waffled.


“Alright. I guess we should probably send a message to Zaniah then, let them know about the incoming. So they can prepare.”


“Good idea Benny, while you're there, go ahead and try to reach out to these ship captains. I doubt most will be too pleased about transporting so many children, so you might have to offer a bonus for doing the job.”


“Can do.. Vicky. About the LIC agent. Analise. What do we do?” Bennys hesitation was obvious, Analise wasn’t what I would call a trustworthy member of the IBO. And once she made it to Zaniah it would be pretty obvious that something is up.


“Nothing. Yeah she is a spy, obviously, but she is an orphan just like us, even if she is older. She wants to join? We bring her in. Is she spying on us? Definitely, but that’s just how it’s going to go. We can spend all our lives trying to hide from every prying eye, or just do our best to keep improving ourselves. I would rather keep recruiting anyone who wants to join, than worry about the couple spies that will inevitably get in.”


“Vicky… Don’t you think that’s a little short sighted? We need to be careful about traitors, what if they set off a bomb, or reveal all of our secrets!”


“I know it’s naive Benny. I know! But we can’t change the world by falling into the same mistakes that everyone else has already made. We need to look at the world how we want it to be. So yeah. It’s a risk. And if it fails, it will be my fault. I take that responsibility. But if our trust is paid back in turn, even just once? I think that’s worth it.”


Benny grimaced and then dropped his head into his hands and moaned loudly for a few moments before righting himself. “Understood Commander. Just, don’t expect me not to keep an eye on her.”


“Do as you like, as long as you are making her feel like she is one of us.”


“That, Ugh I’ll try Commander.”


—-


Two months. Our Union, and I did love saying that. Left Vindemiatrix before we did. It’s crew were men and women hired on the planet, from the starports, and the captain was the same former Lieutenant that had flown her here, he worked for me now. The crew weren’t permanent and knew that, but I was paying them very well for now to crew the ship and when they landed on Zaniah to start training some of my kids as dropship personnel.


It was the safest way. I wasn’t about to put a couple kids who have barely even been on a dropship in command. That is how explosions happen.


Everyone else basically went with me on the Stardust. A horribly cliche name for a travel liner. We had basically commissioned the whole ship for this run, and I was paying out the nose to make sure it happened. While we were on board, on a long and boring trip my orphans trained the new kids. Basically a mini bootcamp, as we started putting everyone through their paces and explained the ins and outs of what it meant to be Iron Blooded Orphans.


It was a long arduous trip, and I never want to be stuck on a ship full of teenagers again.


Unfortunately I’m a moron and that is basically half my current profession.


Also I did my best to keep an eye on Analise. The woman… still creeped me out, even if I did feel bad for her. ‘Taken in’ by the LIC as a young orphan and basically taught nothing else but how great the Commonwealth was.


Yeah it explained the weirdness. The two month long flight was long and boring, and it gave me plenty of time to have conversations with her. Even if I did have to force myself to do it. Regardless of her true intentions she agreed to be an Iron Blooded, so she was one of us, at least until she did betray us.


I wasn’t holding my breath, but I wasn’t going to limit every choice in the world for fear of being betrayed. So we talked. Not that she actually ever said much. It was always redirected questions and side answers. But that’s fine.


As we finally hit the atmosphere of Zaniah I couldn’t help but feel glad it was almost over, even as my stomach rebelled.


—-


“Vicky. Welcome home.” Gauge told me as he pulled me into a hug which I returned even as the hundreds of new orphans looked around their future home for the first time.


Unlike when the IBO had originally gotten eyes on the base, it looked like an actual military base now. Gleaming white concrete walls surrounded the interior, turrets lining the walls giving it a strong feeling of safety.


The roads weren’t dirt anymore. They must have hired a ferrocrete layer while I was gone, which was fine. It was always nice to put some money into the local economy. So now strong roads crossed the base. The prefab buildings I had purchased so long ago were here now. Each of them would need some ‘upgrades’ but that was for later. For now they were all cooled, and usable as offices, or extra barracks, or just hang out rooms for different units.


Whatever we needed.


Thankfully Gauge had gotten my HPG message, and I could see the trucks and construction men working outside the walls on the north side.


Creating our Dropship pad.


I would go over it myself after to make sure it was good to go, and then we would set up additional walls and defenses. It was the first ‘extension’ we had put on our base on the surface. A good sign.


“Glad to be home. We brought new kids.”


“I see that… Maybe too many this time? Where are we going to put them all?” Gauge whispered as he looked over the horde that was being met by already trained members of IBO. The armor that they all wore grew stares and envy, as did their easy confidence, and shiny equipment.


The new kids would get all of it, but only after they integrated.


“It’s fine. We are going to need to get used to integrating large groups. This won’t be the last time we hit a planet and recruit a batch of orphans.”


“That’s… Fair. Oh Benny, Hanna, Welcome back! Benny, you have so much work on your desk!”

“Hey Gauge tha- What do you mean I have work on my desk! You were supposed to take care of it!”


“Oh I did my best but some things I didn’t know. So it’s all yours. Welcome home!” Gauge offered patting Bennys shoulder and getting a slug back in return, although with their armor Gauge only laughed instead of wheezed in pain. By the Narrowing eyes, I figured Gauge would be under a nasty prank for a few days until Benny forgave him.


“Oh Yeah Gauge, how's the repair of the mechs going? I know our new dropship got here first.” I reminded him, knowing the reaction I would get.


The squawk of horror he gave when I said that was worth it. “What did you idiots do to the mechs! Hanna! Don’t think I’m not talking to you too! Your damage wasn’t as bad but really you lost the arm again! And Benny! What, did you decide to use your mech as target practice!? You are supposed to DODGE! And don’t get me started on all the scrap you brought back!”


I smiled as Benny and Hanna enjoyed showering Gauge with all of the stories of how their mechs were damaged, enjoying the irritation the boy showed.


“And don’t think I am done with you Vicky! Next time you order a ‘surprise’ like that, warn me first! They delivered the crates here and we opened them up without knowing what was inside. Do you have any idea what I have been dealing with for the last two months? Thousands of requests to be the new mechs pilots. Thousands!”


“Well did you tell them it wasn’t going to work like that, the four Stingers are training mechs.”


“Of course I did!” He hissed.


All I did was smirk in return and by his narrowed eyes I got the feeling I would be suffering some pranks in the future as well.


All was good.


—--


I was busy through the next few days. Unlike last time I didn’t have the luxury of resting for a while. As soon as we landed I was back in charge. Balancing four hundred new men. Two more barracks ‘appeared’ downstairs. And frankly I knew it was suspicious which is why I reminded as many of the old guard as possible to just pretend it was always there.


Enough of them got the message that I didn’t hear any comments from the new kids.


No idea how much Analise figured out of course.


But with the quarter's situation completed, I was able to move on to other issues. We needed a second and probably a third cafeteria, and more cooks. We couldn’t cook enough food for seven hundred people like we had before.


So it was time to expand in another way.


“Lieutenant Kurtz. It’s time to expand our staff. We need more cooks. More workers. Laundry probably needs an upgrade as well.” I told the older man as I walked into his office the next day.


“Commander… We can do that. It won’t be hard to hire some part time, or even full time cooks… Are you sure that’s a good idea? We have… well you know.”


“It’s fine. We already have a LIC agent among our most recent recruits.”


“What!? Who? Why?!”


I snort as I settle into the chair. “Not by choice, Analise, and she was ordered to keep an eye on us, so if she is going to spy on us regardless, might as well recruit her and put her to work as well.”


“Is that… wise?”


“You mean, am I being a stupid kid? Probably. But I am hoping that being open enough to just recruit her despite knowing what she is, will help keep anyone in the LIC from growing concerned about what my intentions are.”


“I don’t know if that will really work out how you think it will Commander.”


“I am aware it’s naive, Alfred. But I refuse to play the secrecy game for the rest of my life. Why do you think I told you the truth about everything?” I asked him after a time, he paused before closing the packet of papers he had been working on before.


“I haven’t been sure. Not even now. If you were anyone else in the Inner Sphere, I would probably have taken a bullet, and that would be the end of it. I had noticed things you were obviously hiding.”


I couldn’t help but smile. “That is exactly why I decided to tell you. Lay everything on the table. We, I mean humans, didn’t used to be like this. I mean, sure, as a whole we always have had problems, but there were times in the past we were better. I want to return to those times. I want to remind humanity we don’t have to live like we have been. That war is not our natural state.”


“I, I don’t know. Commander I don’t think I understand, but if there is one thing I have learned after working with you for so long, it’s that you do things differently than anyone else. Maybe we need that.” The older man looked a little embarrassed as I gave him a full smile.


“I trust you Alfred. You may not be an orphan, but you are an Iron Blooded, and in the end me trusting you, hiring you at all, was a net positive for everyone. I want to keep doing that. I would rather trust people, and watch things improve, then suspect every person I meet, and never get anywhere.”


“Understood Commander. How... How should I interact with her? Will we be running her through our boot camp?”


“Of course! How else is she supposed to make connections? Treat her like any other. If she wants to spy on us, by joining, then she does all the same work the rest do.”


“Hah, when she is done, she is probably going to be cursing your name Commander.”


“Bah, if she is a spook, she must have gone through a bootcamp before. Let her sweat for a bit. It’s a good way to get her used to Zaniah anyways.”


—-


While settling the new recruits was a major workload over the coming weeks, I made sure to focus on probably the most important job.


“Eighty of you volunteered for a very important job. You will be joining the crew of the Union Dropship Isaribi. You will train every day continuously under the crew we have hired. There is no task on board that ship that you won’t know back and forward. I need you all to be capable, on your own, of handling a ship during the routine or the emergency, because eventually we will get more dropships. And when we do, you will be the core of the crew, the captains and leaders to ensure our people get to where they need to be safely.”


I had gathered all eighty of the potential crew at the Starport where the newly christened Isaribi was landed. Captain Dallas. Was standing beside me as he looked over his trainee crewmembers. I could tell he was hesitant about this idea. They were all young, nothing but kids in his eyes. Without any of the schooling that he expected they would need. It didn’t help that he was young too.


I told him plainly he would do this. Training his replacements of sorts was a requirement of his job. Eventually he agreed.


But not without a lot of persuasion and a hefty raise. Damn Lyrans.


So as I watched the Captain took control of the crowd. All eighty of the kids were divided up, 2 to 1 for a member of the ship's crew to learn from.


Over the next few weeks the Isaribi would be going up every day before coming back in. Over and over. It was going to cost a small fortune in fuel, and the captain had been worried about repairs. But I had waved him off.


Gauge had already gone through the ship with his repair group ‘searching’ for damaged parts or traps the pirates might have left. Of course there were issues, and Sensors were applied to all of them, not all the ship was scanned, but enough was that we had discovered a few systems that had required immediate repairs. And I had already ‘found’ the spare parts. Most of the repairs were completed at this point, meaning that the Union was already in better shape than most Dropships of this age.


Pleased with the meeting I left the kids to get settled into the dropship. As I was heading back to the base a few AFS flew overhead in formation and I smiled knowing that at least a few of them were my kids.


Things were looking up. Training was still our main focus, but when money flowed, and resources weren’t a problem, you could teach someone a lot in a pretty short amount of time. I pulled up to the security checkpoint and was waved through a moment later. Every checkpoint had a scanner set up, so it’s not like anyone coming through wasn’t already checked for weapons or bombs long before getting close. I drove down the road, slowing a few times to allow the groups of new recruits wearing their cooling suits run around the base. Our training group had increased massively, as many of the original Iron Blooded had been tasked to help out running the bootcamp.


I pulled in and parked my truck. Leaving the key in the ignition, if someone needed a truck they would just walk up and take it. There were plenty of them now. We had a huge fleet of trucks, after all. As I hopped out, one of the kids walked out “Afternoon Commander!” He called as he started refueling the truck. The fuel cache I had created before I had even left for Helm had only needed a top up when I came back from the Vindemiatrix job. It carried a startlingly large amount of fuel, and I had buried it underground to ensure it wouldn’t be a target during an attack.


I had also created a ‘fake’ surface fuel storage that was actually filled with water.


You know in case anyone was stupid enough to try and blow it up, it would make it harder to light anything on fire instead.


I headed inside. The original Hangar was still our main building, but our prefab buildings now connected to it, creating a large compound on each side of the hangar. The biggest benefit for them was just to have more places to cool off after being outside. I passed a few of the rooms being used, mostly by older Iron Blooded as a place to get some privacy as they did their work. Most of them, being taken over as offices. The logistics department was always getting bigger.


Despite being able to create anything we needed it was still important to know when we needed something after all.


I got plenty of greetings as I walked past, everyone was wearing our new uniform, the armor. I hadn’t quite made it mandatory to wear the armor over the cooling suit, but with the new recruits and the culture growing it had slowly become a sign of ‘graduating’ basic training. Basically if you wore the armor, you were more than just a recruit, you were an Iron Blooded Officially.


I groaned as I remembered I would have to remind Benny about the medals thing. I still owed Erica a medal for doing so well on Gniezno.


I walked through the buildings into one of the many staircases that now led down. Instead of being forced to use the hangar I had made more entrances. The stair cases were quite wide enough for five to move up and down at the same time, as I stepped down a few passed me, some of them recruits wearing just their cool suits. “Commander!”


While it wasn’t an official requirement, Benny always liked his military cosplay and had taken to teaching a standard Lyran salute to the recruits. Of course the older kids had picked up on it, and started doing it too.


Mostly just to annoy me. Since it felt wrong not to salute them back I ended up having to do it rather constantly. My hand raised up to my forehead in return as I sent them off.


As I walked downstairs we got to the important stuff. I walked past the school rooms. Gauge had taken little time in claiming a few rooms and turning them into a school. Every Iron Blooded was not so much required, but ‘suggested’ to sit in on them whenever possible. The fact the classes were covering topics that were literally in some cases unknown to the Inner Sphere outside made me laugh.


Alfred was usually sitting in on them when he wasn’t busy. The man was fascinated with the science we had lost.


Of course just down the hall were the games rooms. I couldn’t let a bunch of kids do nothing but train after all. Holo, and TriVid Projectors, that were top of the line had constant viewings of Immortal warrior and other vids. Solaris matches were still very popular. Freddy made sure that he always picked up the most recent matches whenever a HPG message was delivered with them.


I walked past Sasha in the medical bay. The girl was, whenever not helping someone injured, learning in Gauges classes. Her focus, unlike Gauge, was medical science. Although we had hired a group of doctors at exorbitant rates to cover our medical needs. A lot of their job was teaching.


I was still curious if Sasha learned more from the Classes, or the doctors.


I was actually really thankful a lot of the Helm Core was filled with old SLDF ‘classes’ on subjects, for soldiers away from a school, sort of like correspondence courses. Of course I also knew it was getting closer to the time for me to act on that.


Passing through the cafeteria I grabbed a snack that was always freely available. Freddy had outdone himself. When word had gotten around that with the new recruits it was stressing our cooks. Which was more of a routine job than anything permanent even now. He had seen an opportunity.


It was very Lyran. Instead of hiring permanent staff and having them on base, instead we had hired a bunch of people off base to cook food. Basically many of the people in the nearby town that were out of work, would be supplied food. They would cook it, and it would be collected at a central location and then brought back into RedBase.


Normally this would never work. A chance for someone to poison my kids was an instant no, but the sensors once more solved a convoluted problem. When they were brought in, the food was checked. And that was that.


Snacking as I walked I passed the Rough Squads chosen room. The door was as usual open, and I slowed as I passed. I could instantly tell Lenden and the squad were plotting. Lenden noticed me at the door and smiled while I gestured ‘I have my eyes on you.’ while he gave me a shrug and innocent smile.


I wasn’t convinced at all. Satisfied he got the point I continued on. Heading to my objective.


The training room was a massive hall filled with Sim pods. Each of them were currently full, and I walked up to the command center Hanna had taken to running these. She would create the objectives for each Lance, sometimes making them work in large companies, sometimes alone, she would pit groups against each other, with objectives and everything else.


She got a real kick out of it.


“How’s everyone doing?”


“Good. Better now. We learned a lot from our last jobs. Erica has been teaching the scouts how to think in a different way since we have the sensors. Benny has been guiding everyone on morale. I focus mostly on accuracy and making it so we are actually effective…”


“And Lenden is Lenden.”


“Right. Rough squad? Well. I don’t really want to fight them in an actual battle. They are going to be a menace.”


“Yeah but they are our Menace. How is the integration going for combined arms? I know the Stingers I picked up have basically never stopped running.”


“Well we run them through maintenance of course. Repair group is starting to riot half the time when we bring in damaged ones, but yeah. We can thank the Governess for that. Gauge traded her for a few of the Scorpions while we were gone, in exchange for something or another, but it allows us to train combined arm groups. Although first they have to prove they have what it takes on the sims before we put them in the Stinger.”


“Good. So we have Scorpions now? I didn’t know that. Jeez, Gauge needs to actually finish his reports. Who took over the tanks?”


“Well you know not everyone can be a Mechwarrior…”


“Yeah. So it’s that group?”


“Yep. They were feeling useless. Sure they help out around base doing other things, but not all of them want to be non-combat. So we got them some tanks.”


“I’ll have to get some bigger vehicles than a couple Scorpions for them then. Scorpions are good for militia, or for training, but I would never let any of us drive one into battle.”


“Sounds good Vicky. I’m sure the Tankers will be happy.”


“Tankers?”


“Gauge isn’t good at naming things. Almost as bad as you.”

“Hey!”


“Just being honest with you Commander.” Hanna offered snickering at my huff.


“Whatever. Fine. Anything else interesting happened while we were gone that Gauge forgot to mention?”


“No idea. I’ve been busy with this.”


“Yeah fair enough.” I sighed patting her on the shoulder as I walked out of the Sim room. Seems I had other things to check on.


“Commander! Radio for you!” Elias called out as he jogged to catch up to me. “It’s Arthur.”


“Weird. What does he want?” I muttered, taking the radio from his hand and pushing down the receiver. “This is Commander Eisen-Blume.”


“Vicky, I am glad to hear from you, I find myself with some time tonight. I was wondering if you would be interested in joining me?”


“Huh? Oh sure, we can do with a bit of night Training. I’ll get everyone prepped. Glad to hear from you too Arthur. I’ll see you then. Commander Eisen-Blume out.” I toss the radio back to Elias who is looking at me weirdly. “Can you let everyone know we are having some night training?” I told him. And he nods slowly as I walk off.


I still don't know why he started laughing so hard.


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Hmm, I'm surprised she'd go for Scorpions. Those things are deathtraps with their tinfoil armor, and put several crewmembers at risk. Though, they are the cheapest way to get a halfway decent gun on the field. Perhaps she's going to use them for training like the Stingers and not risk her irreplaceable people getting shot up, and look to get a bigger tougher tank for actual fighting.

As Virgil Carolus, the Governors aide, once more went over our contracts reimbursement for ammunition. “Due to excessive although effective use of LRMs during the engagement we will accept the repayment request 95% of cost of all LRMs will be return-”
Governor's

The rest of the meeting went well, and it was only as it was ending and I was leaving the Governors manor that I ran into someone else I had been wondering about.
Governor's, this and the preceding are both possessives.

We just need to find a personnel transport. That would handle that many kids without too much issue.
This should be a single sentence, there's no reason at all for the period, and it makes the second half a sentence fragment instead of a full sentence.
It’s crew were men and women hired on the planet, from the starports, and the captain was the same former Lieutenant that had flown her here, he worked for me now.
Its

Even if I did have to force myself to do it.
double space

For now they were all cooled, and usable as offices, or extra barracks, or just hang out rooms for different units.
While this can vary by style sheet, typically when writing a list you want a conjunctive only before the last option, not in between each option.

“I see that… Maybe too many this time? Where are we going to put them all?” Gauge whispered as he looked over the horde that was being met by already trained members of IBO. The armor that they all wore grew stares and envy, as did their easy confidence, and shiny equipment.
This isn't specifically a grammar issue but it's a weird way to phrase it and would make much more sense if it "drew stares and envy" instead of "grew."

We, I mean humans, didn’t used to be like this.
use

Over the next few weeks the Isaribi would be going up every day before coming back in.
Isaribi. Ship names are italicized. This happens a couple other times in the story but I don't want to harp on it over and over.

Of course just down the hall were the games rooms.
Either games room or game rooms, depending on wether or not she has multiples of them.

Freddy made sure that he always picked up the most recent matches whenever a HPG message was delivered with them.
an HPG

It was very Lyran. Instead of hiring permanent staff and having them on base, instead we had hired a bunch of people off base to cook food.
The double "instead" makes this sentence very awkward, one or the other can be removed and make it flow better.

Snacking as I walked I passed the Rough Squads chosen room.
Squad's

The training room was a massive hall filled with Sim pods. Each of them were currently full, and I walked up to the command center Hanna had taken to running these.
was
 

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