Battletech [Battletech/Planetary Annihilation SI] Iron Blooded Commander

Chapter 6.1

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Chapter 6.1 Rise Ye Children of the Lost World.

3021

Zaniah III

Red Base


A different perspective.

Benjamin Rommel

Zaniah III

Outskirts


“It’s not really a surprise you understand.” Colonel Enders offered kindly as his men wiped up the last of the resistance. It wasn’t. This wasn’t the first time the Colonel had been kind enough to wargame with the Iron Blooded Orphans. It had actually started cautiously, the first time had been just a few weeks after Vicky had left. But now every weekend the Rangers and Orphans gather together, out in the desert to hold some competitions.


The Orphans had lost each time.


In the end, even as their mechs slowly started to make a comeback, the Orphans never earned a grand win.


“I know. But we are learning.”


“Oh yes, drastic improvement. Your Hunchback Pilot is getting dangerous.”


“Lenden has only had his mech for a few months, but he is dedicated. Whenever he isn’t working his Rough Squad, he is in the Sims, or taking his mech out to train.”


“Good work ethic matters a lot in my experience. A good teacher tends to make up the rest.” Once more Colonel Enders brought up the Iron Blooded Orphans' biggest issue.


“I know. Finding a Mech Warrior that can teach us, sounds easier than it is. We don’t have a free mech so dispossessed warriors aren’t interested. We aren’t really famous anywhere other than Zaniah, so we don’t have a reputation to go off. And even with our MRB Rating increased thanks to our battle we are still listed as too green for most to be willing to bother.”


“Sounds difficult.”


“Oh that’s not even all of it. The few that get through all of those issues? I tell them about Zaniah, and they hang up. No one wants to come here.”


Colonel Enders chuckled lightly, as he leaned back lightly in his chair The two of them were sitting in a command truck the 10th had brought with them to keep an eye on the fight. Benny thought it was nice but he secretly preferred the Sensor system Vicky had given him.


“You may have to up the incentives. If you increase the pay heavily, or maybe offer them a non-combat contract you will catch some interest.”


“I’ve done something like that… The offers I received weren’t comforting.” Thinking of the very obvious scum and pirates that had been willing to ‘accept’ his offer. Well Benny refused to even consider them.


He would never put his family at risk like that.


“Well keep trying. You have made vast improvements, but there is a lot more for you to learn.”


“I’ll keep that in mind.” Benny sighed as he watched the last squad get hit by the target guns of the enemy, signaling they were ‘dead’ “Well it was a good try.”


“It was. You took out more of my men than I expected… Your infantry are still a little too daring around mechs though. You really should get them out of the habit of believing they can take a mech on foot.”


“It’s hard. Unfortunately, with Rough Squads action during the raid, they inspired everyone. I’ll keep working on it.”


“Well Sub-Commander Rommel, until next week?”


“Until next week Colonel.”


Gathering everyone together back into the trucks or armored vehicles they brought out for these little wargames Benny was relieved that no one seemed disheartened after their continued loss. As he climbed into the cab of one of the Normans plenty of hoots and hollers surrounded him, teasing towards those who did badly, or who lost explosively. It was all in good fun.


“Well Benny, we heard back from the planetary defense office, they decided that our scouting is already plenty good enough, we don’t have any required patrols like they were hinting at. I guess they finally got the word from the Governess to leave us alone.” Hanna, who had swiftly become his second in Command now that Vicky and Gauge were playing Lostech Hunters, told him as they pulled out along the old worn roads.


“Good. Patrols wouldn’t have been anything but a waste of time. You did send out the locations of the scrap we found back to them right?”


“Of course… Are you sure we should tell them about it? I mean you said there were old mechs in some of that junk, shouldn’t we take it for ourselves?”


“I asked Vicky, the same thing before she left, apparently there isn’t enough of the wrecks to be worth trying to get them running again, but if we send it up to the Governess, maybe they appreciate the heads up, and maybe just maybe, they can spend a lot of time getting the wrecks fixed up so that we will have more backup on the next raid.”


“I guess… We still have a lot of repairs we are working on anyways. How is your Centurion doing?”


Benny sighed, “It’s got everything we need, but replacing the broken Fusion Engine is… taking some time. If Gauge was here, we might already have it up and running, but without him, the repair unit is having to figure things out a bit at a time.”


“We should hire an actual Mech Tech.”


“I don’t know. If we do that… Well, a lot of our secrets are given out to someone just here for a job. Our Centurions are too new on the insides to be anything but factory bought.”


“I guess Benny. Anyway, did you hear about what Trouble Squad got into yesterday?”


“Hear about it? I had to clean up their mess. Seriously, who gave those kids permission to paint the interior of the base? I know I didn’t!”


“I think it was more of a case of them hoping their initiative would get them rewarded.” Hanna offered with a laugh as she drove.


“Yeah well I could do with a little less of Trouble Squads ‘initiative’ honestly.”


“For every time they screw up, they do something good as well, you know it’s good for morale.”


“Good for morale maybe, terrible for my sleep.”


“You're just mad still about the karaoke competition. What was it, ninth place?”


“The judges were bribed!”


Hanna’s laugh made his own break out. Things had been… Going well. He had some issues pop up, but Vicky had been right, he could handle this. Even if everyone including him would breathe a sigh of relief when she finally got back.


The crackle of the radio cut in before they could say anything more.

“Benny! You need to get back to base! Commander and the Delta Ops just rolled up!”


Benny blinked for a second before gasping. “I’m on my way!”


Hanna didn’t need any prompting, she hit the gas.


—-


I am so tired. The trip back from Helm had been long, doubly so thanks to Zaniah’s jump point being so far out. We hadn’t sent any alerts, or heads up to let the Company know. I was more interested in stealth than anything else, so we did our best to head home without letting anyone know we were here.


But seriously, I was really starting to hate dropship travel. It kept making me sick!


Of course now that we were on base it was spreading quickly, but I was so done with today. I still felt queasy from the dropship landing, so I headed straight for my room, to fall into my bed. I groaned a little, the dropship had been going at a bit more than 1G to get to Zaniah a little faster. I was tired and sore.


This sucked.


I don’t know how long I managed to rest in my bed before my peace and quiet was interrupted. “Vicky!” Benny called out as he entered my room, which I simply groaned back at him, as I turned my face out of my pillow enough to see him approach


“Goway.” I grunt, wanting to turn over but Benny gently pulled me into a sitting position.

“Never.” He informed me cheerily before lifting me bodily out of my bed despite my protests and hauled me out of the room.


“Put me down Benny! I’m tired!”


“Nope. We need a report, even if I have to kidnap you.”


“Traitor! This is illegal!”


“I don’t remember seeing any such law on the books Commander.”


“I’ll write a new one! Traitor! Oh hey Hanna. How are you?” I ask as I am pulled into the room to see the rest of the Command Staff sitting around a table, Gauge and Carl included, both of whom still looked a little shell shocked from our find.


“Commander! You can’t just come back and keep us in the dark! Gauge and Carl refuse to tell us what happened!” Hanna hissed, poking me once Benny plopped me into a chair beside her.


“You are all traitors, and my wrath will be terrible, but since I’m not allowed to take a nap after my long, arduous trip into the wilds of the Free World League. Fine.” I pulled my noteputer out of my pocket. I hadn’t bothered to put it away when I got back. The thing could withstand being hit by a bomb though. Me sleeping with it in my pocket wouldn’t even bend it’s case.


“Here.” I pushed it into the middle of the desk watching as everyone looked around before leaning in.


“What is it?” Sergeant Kurtz asked as he looked over the list that was displayed on my Noteputer.


“The full list of everything we got from the Star League Castle Brian, Field Library Helm.”


Silence swept the room. Jittery hands reached out to the noteputer as they started scrolling. ID and ID of mechs, page after page of infantry equipment, things that the Inner Sphere didn’t even have anymore, or even knew had existed were slowly scrolled through.


“W-what do we do with all this?” Hanna finally broke the silence, or voice so soft to be almost unhearable.


“That stuff? Not much yet. The real prize is this.” I swept a few peoples hands away and scrolled all the way to the bottom

[Helm Memory Core.]


“That is the single most valuable item on the list if you can believe it. With it, we have the science available to restart… Everything.”


“My God.” Alfred Kurtz looked like he was going to have an aneurysm “Is this real? Can it be real?”


I bit my tongue, I was about to say something as a joke, but frankly, this was a serious moment for the older man. “Sergeant, I would not lie about something like this.” I gave him a soft smile and the man looked like he was gonna start crying.


Benny was chalk white as well, a hand over his mouth as the momentousness of what he just saw hit him.


The rest? Well everyone was shocked, or surprised. Although Gauge looked smug. He had been studying from the Memory core since we first discovered Helm after all. That was a long couple months.


“So, I was planning on taking a nap so I was more put together for this, but since this meeting is happening.” I grumble to the group as I rub my eyes lightly fighting back a yawn. I was still a little queasy but this was important enough I put that all to the side.


“Sorry Commander.” Benny whispered, although his face was still ashen as the realization of what we had found continued to make its way through his head.


I waved him off “We need to decide what we are going to do with this. I have some ideas, but I am also open to suggestions. This is big. Bigger than anything any of us have ever done. Or maybe will ever do again. So we need to take care with how this goes. But a warning first, for everyone. This doesn’t leave this room. If anyone finds out about this before we figure out what to do, before we spread this knowledge to the Inner Sphere, you can guarantee they will attack us to try and claim the knowledge for themselves. So please. Say nothing.”


“Y-yes. Of course Commander. I won’t. I wouldn’t… This is too important. Commander just for finding this… Let’s do this right, we may only have one chance otherwise this explodes in our faces.” Alfred offered the man rubbing his face for a moment as if waking from a dream.

“Okay. So Commander, what’s your plan?” Hanna asked, prompting me to continue.


“Good question. I’ve… been fighting with myself on what to do with it for a long time. It’s not an easy decision to make you know. Deciding the course of the entire Inner Sphere.”


That alone made everyone realize that indeed we were in a meeting doing just that.


“I think… Trust. I’m not going to let the fear of what happened in the past stop us from making a difference. I’m going to send a complete copy of the Memory Core to the Archon, and ones only carrying medical or terraforming information to the rest of the Inner Sphere eventually.”


“Wait, we can’t give that to the Snakes! Or the League! They will use it against us!” Benny denied instantly, even as some of the others around the table nodded.


“If it’s medical tech they probably can’t use it to harm us Benny, but…” Hanna slowed. “I don’t like it either Commander. We shouldn’t be helping them! They’re snakes, they will stab us in the back as soon as they can!”


There were nods around the room. Some of us in this room had lost parents to League raids, or even Draconis aggression. But I couldn’t let that stop us from doing what was right. That was the greatest problem of the InnerSphere, everyone wanted to win, they all ended up losing. Now how to convince a group of kids not to torch the Inner Sphere?


“On Stewart, Gauge and I ran across something pretty interesting.” I said slowly at first as I figured out how this should be said. “We were out shopping when we walked past an orphanage.”


I let that echo around the room for a minute. “I stopped and talked to them, you know. As soon as they heard my accent, they viewed me as an enemy, but we still talked. I gave them a few stories of what it was like being in a merc company. And they told me what it was like to be an orphan in the Free World League. You know what I learned?”


I stood up, just to give myself some room to pace. This had been rolling in my mind ever since that moment. “I learned that we aren’t any different. Not really. Us orphans, doesn’t matter where we are from, we all have the same wants and needs. If I was born in the League and I offered this same option to them they would say the same thing. Don’t give it to the Lyrans. They are the enemy. Don’t give it to the Capellans, they are the enemy.”


I stop. Looking around the room meeting the eyes of my friends, my allies. “I’m kinda sick of making enemies. I think it’s time we instead started making some friends. More than that though. I think it’s time that the Inner Sphere remembers what it means to be human. That sometimes we war with each other but sometimes? Sometimes we unite when it’s important enough we put aside all the old wounds.”


“What does that mean Vicky? What are you thinking?” Gauge asked quietly, everyone was quiet, as my voice had been rising as I spoke, as I grew more heated at how annoyed I felt at the stupidity of the Inner Sphere.


“I think that the Inner Sphere doesn’t need a StarLeague or some asshole ruling from Terra. What it needs… What the Inner Sphere really needs is a force made up of people from every corner of the Inner Sphere and beyond. People that said enough is enough. I think… I think I want to make a new SLDF.”


My words stirred plenty of reactions from across the table, but I was fully in a rant now. Not willing to stop.


“But this time, not controlled by assholes who want power, but instead an SLDF that is a sword pointed at the throats of anyone looking to send us back to the stone age. The Inner Sphere Defense Force… That’s what I am thinking. I think we get the Archon, and Prince Davion on board with the idea, the cost of giving them the Memory Core, and then… Then we grow. We keep growing. Taking in anyone that wants to be more than stuck in a rut…. No matter where they are from.”


I was pacing as the idea rolled off my tongue. “We can recruit orphans from every corner of the sphere, kids that were directly harmed by the constant wars. And instead of teaching them that the League are the enemies, or the Combine. We make them into a shield for all the people. We can take them in, supply them, train them, and send them out to put an end to the petty wars. We spread knowledge and civilization wherever we go, we can drop copies of the Memory Core on every planet we visit. That way no one can ever wipe out our knowledge again. There will always be another Memory Core ready to restart civilization… And we guard against anyone that tries to stomp it out! We can end the Succession wars, just with our decisions here. We can look into the face of the five great houses and say… No more.”


“Holy fuck Vicky… You're insane.” Hanna muttered out in shock. “You actually want to do that, to just… go to the great houses and say no more? Succession war over? You think that’ll work?”


“Not the endorsement I was looking for there Hanna.” I grumble, but she shakes her head before anyone else could interrupt.


“I’m not… No you don’t get it Vicky. I don’t mean I’m against it. Just… Fuck. Who the hell thinks, ‘let’s just change the Inner Sphere’? No one. It’s insane. You have to be insane to look at how the world really is and just… Just say it can be better. I don’t think anyone thinks they can do that anymore… It just doesn't work that way.”


“Totally batshit.” Carl agreed, looking at me like he had never seen me before.


I started pouting as Alfred Kurtz interrupted. “You are probably the most insane person I have ever met. And I once knew a General that wanted to fight a MechLance with infantry and bayonets.”


“Wow. Okay gang up on Vicky day huh?” I muttered darkly, before Benny rose up catching everyone's eyes.


“You are insane. But maybe we need that sort of crazy. We need someone insane enough to say no more… I’m with you. Let’s do it. Win or lose, we can all be written down in the history books as the absolute crazies that decide they were going to change the Inner Sphere. For the better.”


It was quiet in the room for a bit. As the idea percolated around.


“Well if Benny is in, I guess I’m with you, I can’t let your craziness rub off on him too much.” Hanna added.


“I like Crazy. Besides, I haven’t gotten my stealth suit yet, Commander.” Carl said with a grin.


“You still owe me a Castle Brian. So you can’t get rid of me.” Gauge offered with a casual smile. He probably more than any of the others was with me.


I turned to Alfred Kurtz who just looked around unable to comprehend what was happening, or being said. “I’m just a soldier… I don’t usually get involved in this sort of… Craziness. And it is crazy. I don’t think you kids realize just what it is you are saying you are wanting to do… But Commander, I’m a Lyran soldier, I fought and bled for my Archon. If you are willing to help the Commonwealth, I’m with you.”


I smiled at him, “Thank you Sergeant. I'm Lyran too. I don’t have any plans on doing anything that would damage the Commonwealth. If there is peace, we are the best traders. I could see us coming out on top regardless.”


“So… How do we start? You got a little off topic there Commander.” Hanna prodded.


“Right. Right. Actual steps. First step. We keep training. We will need military might to do anything. So before any other steps, before we reveal the Memory Core or start spreading it around. We build up first. Because once we move on the Memory Core, things will pick up fast.”


“Vicky! You can’t just… Not hand the Memory Core out! At least give it to ComStar!” Gauge urged but I shook my head.


“ComStar is still a multinational organization Gauge. It only takes one traitor inside to find out and spread the knowledge to get us all in trouble. So we go slow, but just for a year or two. We build up, train up.”


“I don’t… Vicky, if we give it to ComStar some of the Great houses find out, but ComStar can start spreading it, getting everything ready!”


“Or someone could steal it from them before they get a chance, and then maybe the Coordinator ends up with a copy before anyone else, before anyone can build up enough to stop him.” I shook my head. “It’s too big. Too important. Has to be us. Someone else might get it wrong.”


The quiet of the room stood out to me for a moment. Damn I was tired. “Gauge? You with me?”


Conflicted. I could understand why. He respected what ComStar purported to be. What they said they were.


“You need to be better Vicky. Better than everyone else. Better than ComStar. If you want to be the one that fixes the Inner Sphere… You have to be more.”


Sure just drop the future of trillions of people on my shoulders. “Gauge.” Our eyes met and I nodded. “Even if it kills me. I’ve already started down this path. To utopia or bust.”


He snorted a little at my joke which meant I won. That was how the game was played. “How long before you start passing the Memory Core around. Really?”


“A year? Maybe two. Definitely before 3025. We need time to ensure that we can defend the cores we put down, and I want to give it to the Archon first. So the Commonwealth has an advantage. But every planet. No matter who they are with.”


He nodded. “I’ll have a lot of studying to do then.”


“Good. Teach everyone as much as you can. It will help us out. Until then. I will be upgrading our holdings so that in case of emergency well… Let’s just say I copied all the defenses from the Castle Brian on Helm. Anyone that tries to poke us in the future is going to be in for a surprise.”


“Wait…Commander, are you saying you are going to build a Castle Brian… Here?!” Sergeant Kurtz asked, his mustache twitching in shock as I nodded. The quiet of Gauge and I’s conversation ending as everyone started talking.


“That’s right. Under our feet, our underground will connect right to it. I’ll start working on it soon, shouldn’t take more than a couple of months to finish up considering my build speed. While I’m doing that. We need to increase our training speed. How have our kids been doing in the Sims Benny?”


“Good. Really good, we have actually been having wargames with the 10th almost every weekend too. They have been a huge help. Colonel Enders had some of his veterans walk us through a bunch of different skills that anyone in the LCAF would know.”


“Good! I’ll work on getting us some actual training mechs for outside of the sims too. They didn’t exactly keep Chameleons in stock at Helm. But I can work around that the Lyran way, with Money.”


“Right. Damn Vicky. It’s good to have you back. You and your craziness.” Benny added as the room slipped into more casual conversations, sharing the stories of the adventures we had while apart.


—-


The next few days were… Tense. To say the least. The regular troops weren’t of course, I received a lot of happy welcome backs from my kids. But the Command Staff? They were freaking out, and I was trying to keep them calm. I rested for the first few days. Truthfully I was exhausted from the trip. So I slowly caught up on what I had missed. Learned about Bennys work on getting training from the 10th.


Although he hadn’t exactly been the most cordial to the Governess. I could understand why, but I needed her to at least be neutral about us. So that was on my list of things I would need to deal with.


But my first concern was setting up defenses. Taking the Centurion I had built before I left, I created a single new mech. One that I was planning on using as my new secret constructor bot for a good long while into the future.


Mostly because the Spector, the SPR-4F specifically mounted an ECM, Chameleon Light Polarization shield, and a Null Signature System. Which meant that the damn thing could turn invisible, was impossible to catch on radar, and gave off no heat signatures or anything a ‘modern’ battlemech would be able to catch. It was also nearly as fast as my Locust.


Then I upgraded it to a Spector-NFX. Replacing it’s Large Laser with the Medium Nanoforge. The Double heat sinks that kept it sinfully cool in the Zaniah heat were just the cherry on top.


A few nights after I arrived I took off into the desert in it, planning on building up more Metal Extractors. Because for what was going to come? I would need all the production I could get. The Spector was a whole new beast compared to any of the mechs I had piloted before. For one it had jump jets. Which I had no experience with, so I didn’t touch them. For another it ran an XL engine, so it was nearly as fast as my Locust while being a lot bigger.


I raced deep into the desert. Using the sensor to search out locations to put metal extractors. Soon enough. Over the next few weeks. More and more popped up into the desert. Coated in rock to appear just like the terrain around them.


—-


I still had other issues I had to concern myself with, Which is why I was currently sitting once more across from Governess Alessa, although this time I was cordial enough to sip the tea. Despite my hidden grimace at the taste.


“I am pleased you accepted my request for lunch Commander Eisen-Blume. Your Sub-Commander, Rommel, refused my requests while you were gone.”


“Sub-Commander Rommel isn’t much for politics Lady Alessa. Believe me it was best for everyone that he refused your requests. I apologize if he came off as rude at any point. I would prefer my company, and your government to keep a more cordial relationship.”


“Yes of course. I think nothing of it then. Was your trip successful? You were off planet for some time.”


“No. Unfortunately it wasn’t. I was attempting to pick up some more mechs and a few other things for my company, but unfortunately, the League was less than hospitable.”


“Hmm. To slip into Marik space instead of purchasing here in the Commonwealth, it’s an interesting choice.”


“Well buying new supplies wasn’t my only purpose, but it was only chasing rumors, Lady Alessa. Unfortunately nothing came of it.”


“A shame then I’m sure. Do you expect to go chase after rumors again, or will you be staying to defend your landhold now?”


I ignored the potential pointed comment. “No more rumor chasing for a while at least. Unless I hear about a dropship for sale somewhere, I’ll be staying on planet for the foreseeable future.”


“Hmm. Good. I can’t help you with that problem, but you could always reach out to the good General, he may know where one can purchase a used dropship.”


“Oh. That would be helpful. Thank you. I’ll have to do that.”


“Yes, but I am reaching out for another reason. Thankfully, my son's mechs are repaired. They need training of course. While Arthur has received training at Sanglamore, he unfortunately became dispossessed during his tenure in the armed forces. Vincent recieved a fine education but without a personal mech of his own, his own skills are lacking.”


“I don’t see how that involves me, Lady Alessa. You already know my company's biggest weakness is our own lack of experience and training.”


“Yes. But Vincent is going to be receiving a remedial education of sorts from Arthur. While doing so, having a Lance to practice with and against, will assist him greatly as you can’t truly be a Mechwarrior on your own.”


“Ah… I think I see.” It was… an interesting offer. I couldn’t deny that. But the real question was could I trust it?


“I can see your hesitation, I do understand it Commander, but I am going to insist. My son's future is paramount to me. After Arthur lost our family ShadowHawk, both of my sons only completed rear line duties. While Arthur did serve, his career was nothing impressive especially after becoming dispossessed, he will be the future governor of Zaniah, and with his record as it is, he will run into difficulties with my people. He needs to prove he has the martial aptitude to protect them.” She sipped her tea.


“You want him to be connected to our reputation. We already fended off the raid, and if the people hear that he is training us, it makes him seem more skilled. More capable.”


“Perceptive as always. Yes. Preferably during the next raid both of my sons will take part and once more send away any League aggression, it would go far in shoring up their shortcomings in the eyes of my people.”


I slowly nodded. That made plenty of sense. Which is why on the inside I didn’t trust it. But I also couldn’t just refuse out of hand.


It would help to have an actual mechwarrior who went through real training, especially at a school like Sanglamore, which is basically the number two mechwarrior academy in the Commonwealth. To have that person willing to offer us some training? “Alright. We will assist in your son's training, and in payment receive the same training from your eldest. If you want them to assist during a raid I of course wouldn’t refuse, but I will retain operational Command of my people. I do hope you understand that.”


“Of course. You are the Mercenary Commander after all.”


With that our lunch turned to more calm topics. I learned more about the nobility of Zaniah than I ever had any interest in, and in exchange, I offered a few anecdotes of what it was like commanding a mercenary company.


Never once did either of us relax. Always were we watching the other for the knife.


—-


With the less pleasant tasks of work and meeting important people done with, I could focus more on the base, and my kids.


“So you fixed her huh?”


“Y-yes Commander! It took a lot of work, but I managed to figure out what was wrong with the Fusion engine connectors and I got it to start up. Since I was the one who did it they… Everyone said it was mine?” Erica said, her questioning tone made me laugh.


“She is yours. Mechwarrior.” I told her, and like always seeing that bloom of pride in their chest made me happy.


I was going to give them all that damn look if it was the last thing I did. “T-thank you Commander! I won’t let you down, I’ll prove I’m worthy to pilot your Locust!”


“Well before you do any of that. What’s your name Mechwarrior?” I ask, just as I had all of the kids.


Her smile in return was blinding. “I’m going to be Erica Tesla! From this day until my last!”


I blinked a little. Hadn’t I heard something like that before? Then I remembered. Benny had said something similar… Were the kids starting a tradition? I ignored that, remembering vaguely what I had responded to then. “A name with a lot of history. Are you able to bear it?”


“I am!”


“Then Lieutenant Tesla. That’s not your name until you die. It’s yours until history forgets you!” I tell her poking her in the chest lightly.


I watched out of the corner of my eye, plenty of kids were watching in, all of them looking proud, like they were taking part in something. Erica looked like her birthday and Christmas had come at the same time.


“Thank you Commander.”


“Good. How is your training coming then?”


“T-training?”


I blinked at her question. “You're a mechwarrior. How much stick time have you gotten?”


“O-oh. Lot’s of Sim time!”


“Good. You will need more, so I’m giving you access to the Warrior pods. Just make sure you are ready for combat when it comes. We will need our scout after all.”


“C-Combat… wait.” She looked at me in horror as she realized what becoming a Mechwarrior actually meant. “B-but I don’t know how to fight!”


I put a hand on my shoulder giving her a gentle smile.


“Better figure it out.”


From the look of horror on her face I don’t think that answer helped.


—-


There was one more thing that I felt like it was finally time to get taken care of. I had finished enough of the Castle Brian that I felt secure enough to do this. Deep underground, in a room well inside the interior of the Castle, hidden behind the same secure door that I had found the Nighthawks in.


Was a massive private room. It did have a mech entrance as well simply for expedience. But that too was a security door. If someone didn’t know it was there. They wouldn’t be finding it.


Inside my Spector inside my secret room, I finally selected an option on my Noteputer I had purposefully ignored until now. And in a burst of green light a Factory. The first I had created slowly formed. This one was thankfully small.


After all, I was setting it up to produce SLDF Cooling suits. Of course I could have gone crazy and done double heatsinks, or Gauss Rifles, or any of the other amazing Lostech I now had.


But this was something that every mech warrior needed one of, was small, easy to transport and was incredibly expensive in price. No one else had access to them after all. So I built a factory and in it’s completion I watched as it activated for the first time. A metal shipping crate of Cooling suits. Each one perfectly formed slid off the factory's nanoforge in just a few seconds. The shipped container carrying something like twenty thousand of the suits folded and pressed.


Yeah that was fucking cool. I went on to construct a few other factories just to have them ready in case of emergency but they all stayed quiet. It wasn’t time yet for the full production of a Commander to hit the Inner Sphere.


But soon.



—--


A different Perspective

Baron Vincent Alessa,

Zaniah III

Outskirts


Vincent was getting tired of dealing with these children. “Just do as I say! If you follow my orders we can win!” He screamed into the radio as his Rifleman shifted, large lasers ready.


He would beat his older brother this time, and then he wouldn’t have to deal with these orphans ever again.


Then he turned a corner. The blue of PPC fire splashed across his vision.


*Mech Disabled*


“FUCK!” He screamed, the VR mode he was in, meant his mech turned off although kept upright to keep from any injury from happening.


“Sorry old timer. Looks like you lost again.” The voice buzzed into his line as a Centurion came out from behind him. The large laser shot out was simulated, but it still burned across Arthurs Awesome according to the computer, weakening the armor enough that the second and then Third Centurion coming up behind him pierced through, the computer identified the Awesome’s torso giving way from the damage, disabling two of his weapons.


“Alright I surrender. Another good fight!” Arthur commed to the group, before switching to a private channel, “Vincent, you charge in too fast, make sure you check your corners, if only one of my PPC hit instead of all three, you could have finished me off.”


“Fuck off! You aimed right for me. Shoot at one of the fucking brats once in a while!”


“I didn’t gun for you Vince, you keep charging in. Watch what they do next time. They aren’t veterans, but they have more battles under their belt than you do.”


“They are children! They never had a day of real training in their mechs in their lives. They should hand them over to real soldiers!”


“Don’t think they care about your opinion little brother. And keep that to yourself, Mother is doing her best to keep the peace. ComStar wasn’t happy.”


“Fuck ComStar too! They can focus on the HPG’s like they are meant to and stay out of our affairs!”


He hissed as his mech unlocked giving him full control again as the VR system reset.


“I should be in the Awesome, not you.” He hissed only after making sure his radio was not set to transmit. His elder brother was a fool. Completely incapable. He lost the family battlemech, nearly destroying any hope of Vincent earning the respect he deserved.


“Baron, we are resetting, let’s go.” That voice echoed over his coms and he scowled. Benjamin Rommel was on Vincent's last nerve. At least it was just him, and not their beloved ‘commander’ The girl was even younger. Barely a teenager, and she was incredibly bossy. If he had to hear her ‘advice’ one more time he was going to turn off VR mode and show her his Large laser.


“Don’t order me around Red 2. And Pick a damn callsign, you make me sound like a fool when I call out to you!”


“Red 2 IS my callsign. Over.”


“Brats!” He hissed, before taking a deep breath. He was in control now. Not his brother, not his mother, Him!


“Okay new pathway, Red 2 do as I say this time! I won’t have you mess up my plan again. Red 3 Same goes for you! I don’t care if Arthur tries his stupid ‘passive’ sensor mode again. We aren’t letting him sneak up on us this time!” He grumbled as they took their spots before the VR system confirmed that Arthur was ready.


Vincent would let Arthur ‘teach’ him for now, until it was obvious to anyone who the better mechwarrior is, then. Then he would claim the Awesome for himself, and the title of Governor. Arthur was too weak to be the Governor of Zaniah. Not with how he failed to ever fight back against the raids before now.


Of course neither had Vincent, but that's besides the point.
 

cawest

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have you looked at what the Dragoon's satiation repair bays can do? i would come up with something like that, but DNA locked. it could be locked because she "found" it first. you put a wreck in one end, close it up, and it makes sounds and vibrates and like new tank, mech ect comes out the other end. you would just have to make it look "impressive" and on one can see inside while the work is being done. But you need techs for field work. just have it make parts and let your techs get trained but when you need to trade something out walks a tank or mech.... its Star League magic.
 

Bear Ribs

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“It was. You took out more of my men than I expected… Your infantry are still a little too daring around mechs though. You really should get them out of the habit of believing they can take a mech on foot.”
Out of curiosity, what kind of kit does her infantry have? I don't recall her forging anything, though that might have happened offscreen.
 

Seras

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Out of curiosity, what kind of kit does her infantry have? I don't recall her forging anything, though that might have happened offscreen.
Very early on in the story still on Solaris it goes over it. Basically it's second hand LCAF infantry gear. Although the armor they have is high end stuff.

Although all of that changes here. I don't really mention it directly much but there is a big change in their equipment after Helm and next chapter goes into it a little bit.
 

Tel Janin Aman

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Comrade
I imagine one of the factories built while start pumping out Nighthawks soon. Though it might be a little bit before they're fielded, are any of the kids even big enough to use them?
 

mrttao

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So, some things I am curious to know if the helm cache had anything of the following:
1. better Neurohelm for their mechs?
2. Medical tech?
3. life extension?
4. cybernetics?
5. Gene mods?
6. AI?

AI in particular would be huge. As per commander.
 

Bear Ribs

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So, some things I am curious to know if the helm cache had anything of the following:
1. better Neurohelm for their mechs?
2. Medical tech?
3. life extension?
4. cybernetics?
5. Gene mods?
6. AI?

AI in particular would be huge. As per commander.
Pretty sure Seras is going to avoid adding AI like the plague, as basically the second Vicky gets AI the story's effectively over, insufficient people is literally her only bottleneck to taking over the entire Inner Sphere in a few months/years. She could always go after The Broken once the Capellans build it but then you've got to deal with a Zombie Apocalypse too and that's probably not ideal.
 
Chapter 6.2

Seras

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quick aside, this chapter has answers to a fan challenge I posted on SB. Basically a "Create a new mission" sort of thing. I responded to most of them in the original thread with a small blurb, but that was changed in the story here to fit better and with the reveal of Helm. You can find the initial challenge on SB Here.

Chapter 6.2 Rise Ye Children of the Lost World.

3021

Zaniah III

Red Base.




—-


Time passes pretty quickly when you are busy.


“Okay people. It’s been a while. I figured we should have a full meeting to go over everything that has been happening and if there are any issues we can work on.” I offer my gathered Command Staff, it had been three months since I returned to Zaniah, and so much had changed.


“Guard, and Repair Unit, aren’t happy about the work they have been doing setting up the new turrets. I understand you want to limit the amount of people working on them at first so they have a solid understanding for installing them, but why not just put them in yourself. You could do it nearly instantly?” Benny asked to get the meeting started, the fact he had a stack of papers in front of him that I recognized as our ‘complaint’ forms told me about how frustrated he was.


“Because in the future if we are out on campaign, and I’m not around, I still want our bases to be defended. I want them to learn how to get them up and running without me, so I can send a few turrets in pieces along with any dropships we send out.”


Benny nodded along slowly. “Alright, makes sense Commander, but Morale is still low.”


“Let’s give them a party or something when they are done. Once the base units get the know-how, we will have everyone help out on the next ones.”


“Speaking of, what about the dropship issue? Any bites?” Hanna asked.


“No. I spoke with General Faulkner, but nothing in a price range we can actually afford yet. I’ve increased our amount of salvage going out, to try and increase our capital, but it’s slow going since I don’t want to send out so much that someone notices.”


“We do need a dropship at some point, Commander. Especially since you want to train our own crew for them. That’s… Gonna take some time.” Sergeant Kurtz offered, although he was now Lieutenant Kurtz. Alfred had proven himself, over the last year, and when his contract ran out, And he decided to stick around anyways? Well. He proved he was as Iron Blooded as the rest.


“I know. I have some ideas, but unfortunately, it is slow going. I’ll double my focus on it.”


“Well we have made some huge improvements, Commander. The AC/2 Turrets you insisted on, should remove any real threat from ASF’s. Especially with the Sensor system and Flak ammo. Are you sure we don’t want heftier turrets as well to supplement them?”


“I know AC/2’s aren’t the scariest weapon out there Benny, but with our advantages it gives us the most protection. We can start shootin at enemies way outside any sort of return fire range, plus there is the Home Guard. Giving them time to get to their Carriers is a secondary benefit.”


A few months back the Defense Unit had chosen their new name. Of course now I had Home Guard, and Guard Unit. So those two had better figure out who gets what name cause it was confusing sometimes.


“Plus quad AC/2 is still pretty scary when they start hitting before the enemy can even get in range. I would prefer any enemy that attacks our base never gets close enough to do any damage.” I added.


“Understood Commander.”


“The second, and third Mech Sim lines are all working fine.” Gauge spoke up then. “It’s just enough to get everyone training time now I think, we probably won’t need a forth… But it’s causing some questions to pop up. They may be kids but they aren’t stupid. We all know that this many high quality, brand new sims is way outside the norm. I’ve been getting some pointed questions recently.”


“Tell anyone who asks, that any secrets they believe they figured out, or may have picked up about our company should be locked away in their brain and never spoken of. We have a lot of secrets that could cause a lot of trouble for the company. Remind them of what happens whenever a merc company finds something special. They inevitably get raided to hell and back because everyone wants a piece. That goes for all of you, let’s do a reminder to anyone asking, about secrecy and how quickly a company can be ripped apart by loose lips.”


“Will do Vicky.”


“Carl, how goes the training? I haven’t heard anything from Delta Ops in a while.”


“We are doing well, Commander the NightHawk aren’t an easy thing to get used to. We have all been going over the manuals we found, but even so it’s a lot of training to get used to specific movements. We haven’t had any serious injuries thankfully, but we have had some sprains and bruises. We are taking it slow. Making sure we know what we are doing with them… Don’t worry though. Delta Ops will be ready for any new missions you need us to do.”


“How is our AFS training with the 10th going?” I asked, and Benny pipped in.


“Slow. We only had a few interested, and the 10th basically told us that any AFS training takes years. Flying is dangerous after all.”


“How slow? Have they gotten any stick time or anything?”


“From what Gabe told me, they mainly have them going up in civilian aircraft, giving him some experience flying. None of us have any AFS sims after all. So we are stuck with actual experience for them.”


“Well better than nothing. Considering what I gave the 10th in exchange for that, it better be useful. Any other news?”


“Well, Commander… We do have more and more potential Mechwarriors, and still only a few mechs. Do we want to expand?” Hanna asked, and the entire room seemed to lean in as they too were curious.


I hesitated. Not because I didn’t have an answer, but because the answer I was going to offer was going to cause some issues.


“I do have an idea for what to do, but you aren’t going to like it.” I offered and there was a bit of tensing around the table. “Up until now, everyone's mechs were considered their own and no one else's… That may have to change until we get further set up.”


“Wait, you want to let someone else pilot my Mech!?” Hanna called out outraged, but Benny put a hand on her shoulder. Calming her for a moment.


“Well You’re right, my initial reaction is the same as Hanna’s, but we aren’t like house militaries, or nobles. The mechs are tools for our company, and yes they are ours, Vicky, told us that when this first started, but I think we should hear her out.” Benny offered as he calmed the room.


“Thanks Benny we aren’t going to be keeping the mechs we started with forever. Eventually the plan is for our experienced warriors to get better rides. Royal rides.”


That caused a stir in the room even, Hanna settled down quickly at that potential future.


“Think of the mechs you have used so far as training mechs. We will still use them in combat if we have to, but we also have the ability to get much more powerful mechs for all of us. We should distance ourselves from seeing the mechs we had so far as our babies, and think of them more as stepping stones.”


“I… I still don’t like it. But I can… I can see where you are coming from. Lenden won’t go for it though.” Hanna added.


“I know. I have no intention of even asking Lenden, Although maybe he will do something similar with Rough Squad just to give them the experience. But Lenden’s mech… Well we all know his connection to it, so I won’t be touching that.”


“Okay, so we open our mechs as training mechs… Oh. Shit. That’s gonna be so much more work Vicky!” Gauge whined as he realized that as the head of the Repair Unit he was gonna be in charge of fixing all the damage the new mechwarriors caused.


“Yes, and it’ll be great practice for the Repair Unit to have constant damage coming in.” I offered to Gauge as his face fell. “Now, how has everyone’s new equipment been working, any issues with the SLDF NeuroHelm? The Cooling suits?”


Of course even the basic equipment that the SLDF used was far superior to the drek we had before. I had passed out advanced SLDF Neurohelms to each of the mechwarriors not long after getting back with firm orders to not ever let anyone else use your helm. Yet while I had used my own as well when I was out at night working on improving the base, I still wanted to know if there were any issues.


“No problems Commander. The Neurohelm is insanely sensitive, I’ve had my mech switch radio connections without actually touching the buttons before. It’s excellent. The Cooling suits… Well.” Benny muttered looking down. Like Hanna, and even myself, we had taken to wearing the things around the base. Mostly because they were sinfully comfortable, and kept cool even when not attached to a mech, meaning they were like walking around with an air conditioner attached to you.


“Yeah I like mine too. No problems with the fit or anything? Don’t forget to let me know if they start getting too small.”


“We won’t Commander. Although I could use a few extras… Just cause I don’t want to wear the same one everyday?” Hanna asked, and I smiled, my own closet now had a few suits, one for every day of the week.


“Done. Remind me after and we will get that done. Any issues with the new infantry gear. Lieutenant Kurtz?”


“Nein. The SLDF equipment is superior to what we had in a major way. Even the basic parts have better fits. Although we aren’t using the rifle for obvious reasons.” The SLDF Mauser 960 was a great rifle, as long as you considered a 10 kilo rifle to be ‘acceptable’ most people didn’t. The fact our current rifle the TK Assault, which was a standard Lyran design only weighed five and a half kilos should tell you plenty about how crazy that Mauser was. “There is one thing I wanted to bring up with that though Commander… The Cooling suits.”


I blinked as he brought the topic back to them. “What about them?”


“We should issue them as standard to all of our troops. Not just our mechwarriors.”


“That’s… A good idea.” Benny offered as the room went quiet thinking it over. “One of the biggest medical issues we still have is heat stroke. If we pass them out? Well, even not connected to a mech, they are still better than normal clothes, and we could connect them to power outlets to turn on the coolant system before we head outside. Probably give our people a good bit more time outdoors before the heat hits them.


I considered it. This would be a big step. Coolant suits were Lostech after all. Even just seeing one would be a considerable shock to any outsiders. I knew Lieutenant Kurtz knew that. But if he was suggesting it anyways then he must have his reasons.


Plus… Before this point, our ‘uniform’ if you could call it that, was just the original BDU I had purchased, it was an old Lyran design, and frankly was ugly, heavy, and terrible for the weather here on planet.


And I had just collected the greatest collection of StarLeague fabric, and designs in the Inner Sphere. “You are both right.” I stop the discussion with that. As my mind raced. “I’ve been preoccupied with everything else, but it’s time we start firming up our culture. I want everyone that sees an Iron Blooded Orphan whether they are aMechwarrior, or brand new in boot camp to know who we are.”


There were a few nods around the room, although Hanna looked quite enthused at the idea.

“Okay. I’ll work on it tonight, I want to set up a uniform for us, a real solid uniform. I’ll set up a stockroom with enough for us in every size we need. I’ll include the cooling suit as a base. It’s too useful not to. The fact it can become airtight as well with a SLDF helmet is something I can’t deny has a serious value. Lieutenant, I'll trust you to handle handing them out, and ensuring discretion about the Lostech components of everyone's new uniform?”


“You can count on me Commander! I won’t let this cause any trouble.”


“Benny, I’ll need your advice on rank markings, and setup, and Yes Hanna I could use your help with the designs, you are probably better with clothing than I am.”


“Good we can finally get everyone out of those ugly BDUs!”


I nodded, “Anything else anyone needs to bring up?” The silence confirmed there was not. To be fair most things were taken care of instantly, if an issue popped up, I would usually get a radio message a few moments later.


“Okay last thing then. Our Training with the young barons… Thoughts?”


The looks of irritation that spread across the groups told me what their thoughts were there.


Hanna as usual charged in first. “If I could punch that little shit Vincent in his face, and get away with it I would.”

“Hear hear.” Gauge muttered quietly.


“Arthur is obviously more focused on his brother's development, but we have learned a lot. Just some of the basics in Lance formations and combat doctrine has helped us all. I still want to punch Vincent though.” Benny added with a joke.


“I think we all do Benny, but let’s keep our goal in mind. The more we learn, the better we become, and the more we can teach our next group of Mechwarriors. Even if it makes us want to punch Vincent in the face.” I watched the group all nod along at that before turning to someone who had been very quiet.


“Any updates from the Artillery Unit? How are you liking your new toys?”


“We are in full training mode Commander. We won’t let you down again. Next time someone tries to raid Zaniah, they are going to have a big surprise on their way!” Elias stated firmly, the Artillery Unit was growing consistently. Elias was a firm believer in recruiting everyone he could get his hands on to join his unit. He probably grew the most outside of the future Mechwarriors group.


That and I had made sure he got the best toys. Between him and the Home Guard, they had received so far the most amount of equipment. Of course I had created a functional Mobile Long Tom out in the desert far from any spotters that could see it, giving the crew a place to train which they did religiously. Of course that wasn’t all I had created for them. Though the mobile Long Tom was perfect for them to train on. RedBase, which was growing into a Castle Brian below the surface, had found itself with a little more than just that.


“Good. How is our surface construction going?”


“Oh I can answer this one Commander. Lieutenant Kurtz said. “The surface buildings are torn down, getting a mech to do so made it easy enough. We have finished clearing up the remains as you know and are currently waiting for the delivery of the prefab units you ordered, other than that. I spoke with an architect here on Zaniah, and we got a deal from him to design the base layout. I think it will work very well.”


“Glad to hear it. Anything else we need to cover?”


““No Commander!””


“Alright dismissed!”


—-


“How about this?”


“What? Commander that is way too much. Light Light! You need to wear it in an overheating Battlemech!” Hanna argued pointing to the image. Which I rolled my eyes at her response.


“Fool! This isn’t your Great house, ‘I forget more about science than I remember Uniform!’ This is the best bits of all the best StarLeague equipment with an actual functional armor protection for Mechwarriors, because I still have bruises from the last battle! Padding, armor, a suit that can seal up air tight. The Best NeuroHelm, or normal Helmet, for our infantry that the SLDF had. All equipped into a uniform that doesn’t look like someone without functioning eyes put together. Did you see what the League raiders were wearing? I think their uniforms did more damage than their weapons.”


“Haha Vicky. Now shut up. Cooling Suit or not, this is a lot, and I still say no cape.”


“GASP How can you say that about my shoulder cape! It’s incredibly magnificent!”


“Fuck, Did you just say GASP at me? Also only if you live on Canopus.”


“Bitch! I’ll show you Canopus!” I screamed as I jumped on her to try and pin her down.


Of course Hanna outmassed and out strengthed me, so a few minutes later we were back in our seats after I had offered a ceasefire.


“Fine no cape. But I insist on the Battleskirt. It’s what pulls the uniform together.”


“Oh I wasn't going to argue there. It looks great.” Hanna agrees before she slows into a frown. “It’s gonna be pretty noticeable Vicky. People don’t wear stuff like this.”


“People don’t. We do. It’s a statement Hanna. As long as they don’t realize they are cooling suits until later, they will think we are just being weird. But then, some time years from now when they see our uniforms, they won’t think oh that’s weird. They will either think ‘oh god oh god it’s them.’ Or they will say ‘Thank god it’s them.’ we need to make our mark on the world.”


“And a uniform is what you think will matter?”


“It will be when our base uniform is more advanced than the most advanced uniforms of the Great houses.”


“Okay you got me there.”


“Glad you see it my way, now help me with this bit. This damn thing isn’t laying the armor over the cooling suit right.”


“Yeah yeah, there, is your problem-”


—--


Although recruitment slowed to a trickle as the months passed, our actual training teams exploded. With the Centurions and Locust fully repaired and switched into the training Lances when we weren’t training with Barons Alessa, they were used in training for all the future mechwarriors in the company. Giving all of them actual stick time.


This did eventually lead to a problem all military groups had when all they did was train.


“So we are seeing a pretty hefty plateau for improvement Commander. Frankly... Blue and Green training Lance are as good as we can get them considering they have had a more systemic training, and of course the tips and tricks we learned from Arthur, and the 10th. But we don’t have the experience to teach them any further.”


“I know what you're saying Benny, but I’m not sure that’s a good idea.”


“We are a Mercenary Company Vicky. We can’t just, not fight.” He argued, and damn him for having a point.


“You’re saying you want to take another job off Zaniah, one that would split our forces when we still only have one Lance of official mechs.”


“Sure, but we can bring the Artillery Unit with us… and we always have the Home Guard here. You know this is a good idea. We need the experience. Only way to get it… Is to go get it.”


I sighed, rubbing my forehead. “I know you're right, but my heart doesn’t want to accept it.”


“I know. You have a kind soul Vicky, but in this case, you aren’t doing us any favors trying to protect us from everything. We can’t protect our own people if we don’t know how to fight.”


“Okay. Benny, Just… Okay. Once we figure out what we are doing, I’ll go check in with the Governess to let her know we are probably going to be doing a new contract. She isn’t going to be happy that our forces are leaving.”


“We aren’t locked into the same contract anymore Vicky, you know as well as I do, the Governess doesn’t dictate where we go.”


“Alright. I’ll go talk to ComStar then. I am sure we can find an MRB contract to dip our toes in the water.”


“No way. I am definitely coming with you. Last time you got us stuck with the Governess, this time I get to look over the Contract first.” He teased, but he meant it all the same.


“The Zaniah contract was an emergency! It all worked out in the end!”


“Sure Commander. Whatever you say.”


—-


“So many of these contracts are garbage!” Benny groaned as we were sitting in my office, we had gathered a stack of potential contracts from the MRB and were going through them.


“Seriously, look at this one. They want an entire mech company, to guard their corporate headquarters. Pay is garbage salvage is 100% they offer no ammunition expenditure. So basically they just want to try and show off a bunch of mechs but not pay the mercs.”


“Yeah, anyone who takes the contract deserves that trouble. Although I bet anyone who does won’t accept the contractors lack of payment for long. I wonder if we will see a new contract later ‘Hunt for Mercs who killed our former boss and destroyed our corporate HQ. Pay low. Salvage 100%.’” Benny joked.


“Pfff. That would be funny.” I chuckle as we continue searching.


“Oh how about this one Commander? Shiloh. They want a lance and a company of infantry to garrison the capital, keep some civilians from rioting.”


“Garrison contract? No way. Plus think about it Benny, We would be defending against a bunch of civilians, what does that mean if something goes wrong, and we are stuck trying to defend ourselves?”


“Warcrimes?”


“Warcrimes. I don’t want to deal with riot suppression, that gets bloody, especially with a bunch of people dealing with their home.”


We continued our search. “Oh, how about this one Benny, Phecda is close just one jump away. Apparently someone is really mad at one of the corporations based there. Wants a company of mechs to go bust up their workers. Pay is good, low salvage, which isn’t terrible since a bunch of factory workers aren’t going to have battlemechs… Oh. No wait, the corporation makes water refineries… Isn’t Phecda dealing with that big water refinery project that keeps getting smashed by the League?”

“Last I heard, yeah, there was a raid on it like a year ago right? Oh look. Anonymous contractor. Yeah that smells like a League raid playing pretend there.”


“Definitely a Leaguer… Toss it. They are trying to make water refineries. Considering we just spent the last year on Zaniah. That is a little annoying.”

“Yeah definitely!”


“Too bad. Phecda… Well I have a few reasons to head there.”


“Oh. Second Phecda contract.”


“Wait seriously!? Gimme Benny Gimme!” I snatch it out of his hand and read it over. “Ah it’s the other side of the coin.”


“It looks good though, check out the issuer. The LCAF! Oh and it has some requirements, Arctic gear will receive preference. Do we have Arctic gear?”


“Yeah There was some in Helm… Damnit Phecda… Now that I got that name in my head it’s so hard to just say no. I’m too greedy, Benny.”


“What? What’s so important about Phecda?”


“Let’s just say I know of a potential Lostech cache there too.”


“What? Even after Helm? Is there even anything there of value that you don’t already have? I’ve seen that list of equipment on your Noteputer.”


“A Colossus Dropship crashed landed there. But it may be intact enough to ‘copy’ that good enough for you?”


“Are you serious!? A Colossus… No no don’t get distracted, Forget that for a second. Vicky… How many other caches do you know about? We need to talk about all the stuff your mother knew about and didn’t go after because even one of these is enough to do… Anything.”


“She didn’t have any backup, and then she died. That’s why I need you Benny. Can’t go grab all the shiny treasures without enough metal backing me up.”


He snorted at my line. “Yeah well. We all owe you Commander, you aren’t getting rid of us. So contract?”


“Let’s say yes for now, but I want to keep looking… While I want that dropship it may be too much too soon. There is no easy way to get that thing moving without causing a huge uproar.”


“Understood Commander.” He saluted which I lazily returned as he turned back into the pile of contracts. It was so weird that it was all printed out. ComStar was so 80’s sometimes. Not that I could ever tell that joke to anyone.


“Oh three Contracts here that might work. A defense, and two raids.” I pointed out.


“Let’s see Algorab? That’s pretty close too isn’t it, I don’t think I know anything about the planet though.”


“Yeah it’s just Anti-Spinward of Zaniah. It’s an anti raid action… Looks like a League raid based on LIC intel? Nice. But, I don’t know.. We might not even make it in time. Look, they are saying the next two months.” I offered with a sigh, realizing we couldn’t take this one.


“Oh. Yeah that’s basically all travel time for us, we won’t be much help if we show up a week too late.” Benny matched my sigh. It kinda irritated us both that we couldn’t get there to help. “What about the other two? Oh both of these are on Vinde-Vindemitry ugh Vin-dem-i-atrix. That name is so annoying!” Benny scowled as he had to sound the name out to get it right.


“Pff go take some more of Gauges classes! Hmm That one. No absolutely not, I refuse to take a contract that targets a Civillian Library. We already have enough issues with loss of knowledge.”


“Yeah… It doesn’t sound right either honestly. Oh this one is against Pirates! Apparently they tried to raid… the planet.”


“Vindemiatrix.”


“Yeah that. But got left behind for some reason.”


“Something to ask the Contractor I suppose. Pirates… Hmm that could be a tough one. We would have to check before we fire any artillery, I would hate to hit captives.” But pirates usually had mechs in poor condition, we might be able to get more salvage than normal out of it.


“Ooh. Yeah that could be an issue, well taking them out would feel good, it might also be a little rough for us if they are taking captives.” Benny offered. “I don’t know if everyone is ready to see something like that.. You know?”


“Yeah. I would… Well I wouldn’t let our infantry move on something like that for sure. The other hand? Salvage isn’t bad, we might be able to claim a mech or two.” I comment. “That could really help.”


“I wouldn’t mind killing some pirates Commander, and I know the rest of us wouldn’t either.”


“Put it on the maybe list, I haven’t decided yet, but it’s a contender.


I went through a few more tossing more than a few into the trash, before coming up on one that I didn’t even mean to read, but a few words caught my eye and when I was done I was tugging on Benny to get his attention.


“Benny! The Animals Benny! We need to save them!”


“What, Vicky, get off, what has got you so worked up?” He snatched the contract from my hands reading through it, the offer to go hunt endangered animal poachers on New Kyoto, the planet was well known for its massive reserves meant to protect species. “Well. I mean it sounds nice but there isn’t exactly going to be a lot of mech combat is there? Maybe a light mech at most? Poachers aren’t going to wander around in a heavy mech or something.”


“But Benny! Look! All the cute animals need our help. We can’t just let them get killed!”


He sighed, rolling his eyes, taking the piece of paper and to my hopeful eyes placing it on the maybe pile. “There, can we move on now?”


“Yes!”


“Okay Let’s finish up this pile. It’s getting late.” Benny ordered plopping the rest of the contracts down, we both dug in, more than a few ending up in the rapidly filling trash can.


“Heh, Look Vicky, your specialty, Lostech hunting.”


“Wait what? Really? Ugh. My head is so full of Phecda already, okay let me see. Hmm. Oh. Pfft. Did you do this on purpose!” I yelled at Benny seeing his smile and I rolled my eyes at him. “Jerk.”


“Well I couldn’t resist. So is that a no?”


“Definitely no. For one, we already have the Von Luckner design from the one on Helm. For two, I don’t really like dead worlds Benny. They creep me out.”


“What really? You afraid of ghosts or something Vicky?”


“No. Afraid of what caused that planets population to die out and get the planet pulled from the maps. They don’t always write down the reasons, but sometimes… Sometimes it’s because they want to protect anyone from going there.”


“Creepy. Yeah that one goes in the no pile then.” He offered, quickly pushing it into the trash.


“Shiloh again here.” I mention pushing the contract over.


Benny reads through it for a while “Hmm. Doesn’t seem so bad. There will definitely be a fight if we do this one... Probably I mean escorting some people around a hostile planet is bound to attract some attention, but I don’t get why they want to send civilians over. And apparently all they want to do is some studies on the amount of money they can make from the planet's resources? I mean Shiloh is still a League planet. Guaranteed if we stick around too long we will get more than just the local militia to contend with.”


“Put it on the maybe pile. It sounds like someone is expecting a cakewalk, and I don’t trust people that think their enemy doesn’t get a choice.”


“Yeah that’s true Commander. Shiloh has those crystals though right? The really expensive ones?”


“Yeah Shukam if I remember right, they are worth a ton, I wonder if I could produce them.”


“Probably your lostech is crazy like that, but you wouldn’t be able to make too many of them right? Someone would notice crystals flooding the market that are only supposed to have a source on one planet.”


“It would have been cool though.”


“Definitely cool.”


The next contract had me groaning into my palms as I resisted the allure.


“What?”


“Must resist helping cute endangered animals!”


“Wha- Another one? How many poachers does this planet have!”


“Not poachers this time. Apparently there is an invasive species killing everything.”


“Oh.. I mean. We could do a pretty good job with that but again, not a combat mission Vicky.”


“I know. I know. But the poor babies.”


“Moving on Commander.”


The next few minutes passed in silence before I snorted while reading a contract. “Really? Who would be stupid enough to try this again!”


“What?” I threw the contract at him and let him read for a few moments before his face broke into a look of horror. “Didn’t the League try this already?”


“Yeah just a few years ago, and they paid for it. No one just steals or attacks Cranston Snords museum. Apparently he is a bit finicky about it. If you do he follows you back to your home and robs everything back while crushing your mech force. Or at least that is what happened last time.” I joked the Contract to raid Snords museum was obviously issued by someone high up in house Marik, maybe even the Captain General himself.


“Probably. Toss it?”


“Hell no, Burn that thing I don’t want anyone thinking we even considered it! It’s a fucking museum! We don’t attack museums! What the hell is wrong with these assholes! They are lucky they didn’t list the exact contractor, I’m tempted to find them and introduce them to my Mech sized boot.”


“Hell yeah.”


“Last few.”


“Finally. Okay we got… Trash. Trash… What? Is that even a thin-Oh. Canpopus. Of course, trashing that one. Oh here.”


“Hmm? What did you find Vicky?”


“Ever heard of the “Brotherhood of Cincinnatus?” I asked, the name meant nothing to me.


“Never. What’s it say?”


“They are looking for someone to add more tonnage for a raid looks like.”


“Oh. That could work pretty well Vicky. We could get some experience working with an allied command.”


“Yeah but we would also have to work with an allied command structure. What if something screws up and they decide the mercs are less important than their units?”


“I think that’s something we will always worry about Vicky.”


“No. Benny put it on the no pile. I don’t know who these guys are, and I don’t like the idea of not being in command. We had some other great offers after all.”


“Alright, that’s it then.” He says as he tosses the last of the Contracts into the trash. “We got these ones on the maybe pile. So Commander?”


“Nope. We are going to throw a meeting together, let everyone decide this time.”


“Huh well if you want Vicky. C’mon it’s way past chow time.”


“Yeah sounds good, I bet we can find something interesting in the cafeteria.”


“Oh yeah, Himmel isn’t on chef duty tonight.” Benny mentioned as he stood up stretching out.


“Oh thank God. Let’s go!”


—-


“So, here are the contracts we are considering, each of them brings something to the table, some more than others, some more risk than others. Browse through them, I want everyone to read each one, get an idea of what each offers and asks.” I tell the room, the full Command staff gathered once more as we looked over the pile of papers Benny and I had passed out.


I gave the group a few minutes to parse through the contracts offered. Hanna was the first to speak up. “Okay Vicky, which one do you think is the best? I know you, you wouldn’t offer a list like this without having your own opinion.”


“Nope! I do have a few preferences, but this isn’t just about me. I want an outside perspective. So you tell me your thoughts, without me influencing you.”


“Ugh, whatever. I like the Pirate assault. It’ll be a while before we can get there, so the pirates will definitely have done repairs, but beating up pirates is always a good thing. We should do that one. It’s a fast job. We can basically be in and out, especially since they can’t hide from us.”


“Hmm. I agree with Hanna. Pirates deserve to be taken out, plus we will have surprise on our side with that. They won’t know where we are, but we will know where they are. Sounds like an easy mission.” Gauge offered.


“While I do agree the pirate mission sounds good. It’s not a mission that has any real importance behind it. The Pirates are trapped, they aren’t going anywhere for now, but this.. This is big. The Phecda contract gives us another connection to the LCAF, and while it is another garrison mission, well, we are good at that. There will definitely be a fight, the League have been attacking constantly to try and stop them from putting up that refinery factory.” Lieutenant Kurtz offered nodding firmly. “It’s the most important job here.”


“Not the Pirate raid?” I ask noting that both missions were similar in some ways.


“No. Vindemiatrix already has a solid militia. They can hold off the pirates if not take them out, but Phecda has been an ongoing problem.”


“That’s exactly why Phecda can wait!” Elias argued. “We should do the Pirate job. It’s the most time sensitive. And if we show up we guarantee we can stomp them flat. This time. They won’t get a chance to even fire their weapons. Let the Artillery Unit come along Commander. We will knock their base into kindling.”


“Whoa. Easy! We don’t know how many hostages they might have or civilians forced to work for them at gun point. We can’t just flatten the entire place.”


“Bu-Yeah… Yeah I know. Sorry.” Elias offered looking quite conflicted.


“Don’t worry Elias, we know what you meant. We trust you.”


“Thanks Commander. I won’t let you down again.”


“You never did.”


“Alright my turn then.” Benny continued. “Considering everything, we should take the pirate job. It’s a fast job. Guarantees us combat, we know basically what the enemy has, and their advantage of being in a military base doesn't matter so much for us. They can’t sneak out, and we can take out any static defenses without too much of an issue.”


“Oh phooey! Where is your sense of duty Benny!” Hanna jostled him slightly. “What if we don’t want a safe job!”


“No job is ever safe. Don’t forget that.” I interrupt their joking. “If those pirates are veterans, it doesn’t matter our advantages, they have their own.”


Flushing a little, Hanna nodded. She constantly spoke about the Wolverine during the raid, the one that took on our group three on one, and just wouldn’t be put down. Hanna had taken it personally, training harder than anyone else. It helped that she had the least amount of actual duties, but her cooling suit and new Neurohelm had been stress tested the most out of our group.


“There is another option.” Gauge offered slowly. “We could do multiple missions. Splitting up our forces.”


“No.”


“Not a chance!” Benny and I both spoke at once and I waved him forward letting him speak. “We don’t have the experience to even hope for that, or the numbers. Maybe if we had two complete Lances, but we don’t not yet. After this job, if we can claim some of the pirate mechs, we might be able to afford something like that, but even then I would feel more comfortable taking two lances, rather than splitting them.”


“Benny has it right. Gauge. We have some advantages, advantages that no one knows about or expects, but just because it’s an advantage doesn't mean we win. We need to get even more advantages to make a real difference. Teamwork. Experience. Training. Equipment. Support. These are advantages that others already cultivate. We are behind the game, so we need to play catch up.”


“Understood Commander.” Gauge offered a little petulant, but I nodded and moved on. I would chat with him later. “Okay so the current Red lance will go, but I won’t take part in the battle, I’ll be going purely as the command element. Benny I want you with us this time, you need the experience as well.”


“Are you sure Commander?”


“I am. We aren’t going with everyone. Gauge. You’ve been really involved in your classes. Do you want to stay or go?”


“Oh… I want to stay. I’m still digging into the Memory Core. There is so much to learn!”


“Okay you are in charge while we are gone, so don’t get lost completely in your head.”


“I won’t Vicky!”


“With that, we will take a mix of Red and Green Lance as our force this time. Benny will lead, Hanna, and Lenden will support, and Erica will be your scout. I want her to get practice using the sensor system.”


“Sounds good to me Commander. We won’t have any issues this time.”


“Oh I know. That’s why we are bringing along the Artillery Unit, and Delta Ops.”


“Oh, You want Delta to come too?” Carl asked, perking up into a smile.


“Yes. We may be able to always know where they are, but stealth may be important for this. If they have any captives… Delta will be needed to make sure that when we move, they don’t get killed.”


“Can do Commander! Leave it to Delta Ops. Don’t be surprised about the fires though!”


“NO WAR CRIMES CARL!”


—-


That afternoon I walked into the Starboro HPG terminal to send a message to Governor Maruska, the issuer of the Vindemiatrix contract. It wasn’t difficult, confirming contract offers were pretty standard ComStar MRB business. I did have some slight changes to the contract, which wasn’t abnormal.


Honestly I just asked for complete medcare in case of any injuries on the job. Had to make sure my kids would be alright if they got hurt. With that I moved on to the next difficult part of the job.


My meeting request with Governess Alessa was accepted, and I found myself in the same waiting room that I had met with her last time.


She entered a half hour later, as confident as any noblewoman can be. “You requested a meeting, Commander Eisen-Blume?”


“I did Lady Alessa. The Iron Blooded have taken a short contract off world. I wanted to inform you that our mech Lance will be unavailable for a few months while that contract is active.”


I could see the disquiet on her face at that answer. “I thought you said that you would be staying on Zaniah for some time last we spoke Commander.”


“That was the plan, but our training is going well, and I need to get my people more experience. I have too many green troops, and not enough battles to blood them with. You don’t have to be too concerned Lady Alessa, I am not taking my entire force. You will still have our assistance if another raid comes through. I am not leaving my kids here without a few big surprises for anyone seeking trouble.”


“But not your mechs.”


“But not all my mechs, my mechwarriors need experience. So we go to get some. And hopefully come back with some more mechs. But I am only taking a Lance, the rest will stay to defend the planet.”


“I see. I can’t say it isn’t disappointing, But you will do as you like. How long do you expect your Lance to be gone?”


“Well travel time notwithstanding, the mission itself should be rather quick, unless something goes wrong. I expect the fight itself should only take a week or so. Shouldn’t be long before we are back.”


“That is reassuring, as much as I have confidence in my sons talents, I will be more comfortable to know there is another Lance of mechs supporting them.”


“Well you will still have our scouts, and other support while we are gone if something does come up.”


“Hmm. I suppose I should simply be grateful for that. I will hold your men to that. Well Commander Eisen-Blume. I wish you luck then.”


“Governess Alessa. As always a pleasure.” I offer back, although I said it neutrally I really did mean it sarcastically. The woman was a pain in my ass.


I left in a hurry after that. We had a lot of preparation to complete before we got our confirmation on travel plans back from the Contractor. While I was out, I stopped over at the Planetary Guard office to put in one more request. A little bit of a surprise, and something I probably should have done months ago, but things had gotten away with me. At least we should hear something back maybe by the time I get back from this job.


Hopefully.


—-


That night. As everyone else slept I entered into my secret room. Thanks to a little combination between the sensors and a factory it was pretty easy to make equipment fitted specifically for every person. Before I left every single one of my kids found a present outside their room in a box with their name on it. It was the first step to a huge change to the Inner Sphere. Although that as always takes time.


—--


A different perspective

Frank Tillian

Zaniah III

Old apartment buildings, Condemned.


Frank groaned as he shut the door behind him. The wooden door, which wasn’t actually wood since there was almost no trees on this planet, creaked and groaned as it settled.


“You get the food?”


“Of course. The old man was glaring at me the whole time, but he did sell me the food. Unlike Toni.”


“It’s not my fault! I was chatting with one of the kids, not my fault I gave them some candy so they would talk.. The old man thought I was a molester!”


“And that is why Toni isn’t allowed near the damn shop anymore, and I have to do every food run, so fuck you Toni.”


“Yeah yeah whatever Frank. So that’s the food, everyone gather up let’s see what we learned.” Toni called them all together as they sat around the damaged old furniture, there was five of them in total working together in a cell trying to gather information on these Iron Blooded Orphans. Unfortunately, it wasn’t going well.


“We can’t blend in with the locals. They all know each other on sight, and they have become protective of the kids.” Toni started. “The kids' base is also surprisingly secure. I tried sneaking in through the desert. They picked me up in one of those trucks, gave me water and told me the desert was dangerous. Fucking brats.”


“Better than them shooting you. Any idea how they knew you were coming?”


“None I checked for trip lines and things, and none of my scanners read any sort of laser detection. They just… Drove up to me in the middle of the desert and told me to go away.”


“They’re guards are good. Tried coming up to the wall to sneak over? Guards were waiting on the other side. One of the brats tased me.”


“You are lucky they didn’t shoot you Pete.”


“Yeah, I didn't feel lucky. Those tasers they had were nasty.”


“Yeah? That’s cause you guys are idiots, I got one of them talking, and they eventually cracked.” Frank informed the group shoveling a helping of noodles into his mouth.


“Yeah? What did they say?”


“They said our attempts to break into the base were funny, and they were under orders to treat us with kid gloves. Apparently they know we are LIC and don’t want to cause any trouble.” Frank admitted continuing to eat as all the agents, spys one and all, skilled and trained realized they were being toyed with by a bunch of orphan teenagers.


“What the fuck is wrong with this planet?”


“It must be something in the air. I never dealt with a stupider situation in my life until I came here.”


“Frank you are just fuckig with us right? No way one of the orphans said that.”


“She did. It gets worse too.”


“Fuck me. What? Did she say your real name or something?”


“No thank God. No, she said that every time one of their guards catches us before we can sneak in, or one of the kids lays us false information. They get a reward back at base.”


“God damnit. I could be on Solaris right now.”


“Yeah but no we had to get pulled into this shit show because the kids embarrassed the local Governess.”


“Not surprised. Considering they have been leading us around the damn nose.”


“I’m taking tomorrow off. Gonna go find a bar in the city.”


“Yeah, sounds good. Are you coming, Frank?”


“Might as well. We aren’t gathering anything here.”


“Command’s not gonna be happy.”


“Eh fuck em. Tell them the kids have too much security, if they want any info on the inside send a fucking Lohengrin orphan.”
 

Bear Ribs

Well-known member
I find it mildly amusing how much they bitch about low pay for some of the jobs they're examining, considering they have basically unlimited funds, and pay should be somewhere around twelve priorities lower for them than "Does the employer have cool hair?"

Granted that doesn't mean they don't want to maintain the facade of being in it for the money but it's still funny considering they're discussing it privately among themselves and are still bitching about low pay.

I quit doing this as grammar was significantly improved, to the point I only had one or two things per chapter, but now it's backslid quite a bit, and grammar's getting worse again.

“We are doing well, Commander the NightHawk aren’t an easy thing to get used to.
This can go one of two ways, NightHawks aren't or NightHawk isn't, but the plurality should agree with whichever you choose.

I want everyone that sees an Iron Blooded Orphan whether they are aMechwarrior, or brand new in boot camp to know who we are.”
a Mechwarrior

The fact it can become airtight as well with a SLDF helmet is something I can’t deny has a serious value.
an SLDF


Padding, armor, a suit that can seal up air tight.
airtight, it's a compound word.

“It will be when our base uniform is more advanced than the most advanced uniforms of the Great houses.”
Great Houses, capitalization has to agree.

Giving all of them actual stick time.
This is a sentence fragment

Frankly... Blue and Green training Lance are as good as we can get them considering they have had a more systemic training, and of course the tips and tricks we learned from Arthur, and the 10th.
Lances

Although I bet anyone who does won’t accept the contractors lack of payment for long.
contractor's

“Yeah it’s just Anti-Spinward of Zaniah. It’s an anti raid action… Looks like a League raid based on LIC intel? Nice. But, I don’t know..
An ellipsis is three periods.

No absolutely not, I refuse to take a contract that targets a Civillian Library. We already have enough issues with loss of knowledge.”
civilian

“I don’t know if everyone is ready to see something like that.. You know?”
An ellipsis is three periods

“No. Afraid of what caused that planets population to die out and get the planet pulled from the maps.
planet's

“What?” I threw the contract at him and let him read for a few moments before his face broke into a look of horror.
There should only be one space between "let" and "him."

“Yeah just a few years ago, and they paid for it. No one just steals or attacks Cranston Snords museum. Apparently he is a bit finicky about it. If you do he follows you back to your home and robs everything back while crushing your mech force. Or at least that is what happened last time.” I joked the Contract to raid Snords museum was obviously issued by someone high up in house Marik, maybe even the Captain General himself.
Snord's, twice

“While I do agree the pirate mission sounds good. It’s not a mission that has any real importance behind it. The Pirates are trapped, they aren’t going anywhere for now, but this..
An ellipsis has three periods.

There will definitely be a fight, the League have been attacking constantly to try and stop them from putting up that refinery factory.”
has. This one's slightly tricky in English because "League" is collective, but it's not actually plural, there's only one League so its attack also has to be in the singular form.

“That is reassuring, as much as I have confidence in my sons talents, I will be more comfortable to know there is another Lance of mechs supporting them.”
I'm not sure if she's referring to both of her sons or not, but it's grammatically wrong either way. If it's just the one son, it should be son's. If it's both sons, it should be sons'.

Frank groaned as he shut the door behind him. The wooden door, which wasn’t actually wood since there was almost no trees on this planet, creaked and groaned as it settled.
were, tenses have to agree and was is present tense while the rest of the document is past tense.

“It’s not my fault! I was chatting with one of the kids, not my fault I gave them some candy so they would talk..
An ellipsis is three periods.

Frank admitted continuing to eat as all the agents, spys one and all, skilled and trained realized they were being toyed with by a bunch of orphan teenagers.
spies

“Frank you are just fuckig with us right? No way one of the orphans said that.”
fucking

“God damnit. I could be on Solaris right now.”
This can either be dammit or damn it. Damnit is grammatically incorrect. Yes, this is a particularly weird bit of English.
 

mrttao

Well-known member
I find it mildly amusing how much they bitch about low pay for some of the jobs they're examining, considering they have basically unlimited funds, and pay should be somewhere around twelve priorities lower for them than "Does the employer have cool hair?"
1. Low pay means the employer is an asshole trying to screw you.
2. They have unlimited goods. Converting said goods into funds is hard and limited in their scope. And they do not have enough money to buy things like a dropship
3. They need some excuses to get more shit, like extra mechs
 
Chapter 7.1

Seras

Well-known member
Chapter 7.1 It’s a Horror movie trope, not to see the monster until the end.

3021

Vindemiatrix

Treshira Starport


The landing in Treshira was rough. Mostly because the Leopard hired to carry us wasn’t doing very well. Carl gently unwound my locked up fingers from his arm as the Leopard finally slowed to a stop on the runway.


“Well we made it.”


“BARELY.” I hissed as I rose on shaky legs. Never again. Getting a Dropship just became Priority number one. Pirates? Piss on them, they can wait, Dropship. That’s important.


“Calm down Vicky. It’s okay. We landed just fine.” Carl offered, sounding only half apologetic. The rest was amusement.


“BARELY!”


“Oh, is the Commander still out of it? That’s fine, I’ll start getting everyone ready for the unload, Carl you keep an eye on her?” Benny asked as he walked past the two of us as he sauntered out into the Leopards hangar to ready the army of uniform clad orphans out of the ship.


Yeah our uniforms were done. It had taken me a lot longer than I expected to modify everything. First we had to take the base pieces and physically modify them, then copy that, then modify it again, and again, and again.


But after at least forty iterations, everything fit comfortably, and more importantly offered benefits no one would be aware of right away.


The fact I made them look similar to what I remembered from the Battletech PC Games outfits was a complete coincidence, and not at all a declaration that I was so done looking like a reject from the space 80’s.


Now I looked like space warrior modern edition. Source.

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And so did all my kids.

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Of course I kept our concrete styled white, and red color scheme. It was a theme at this point. So as I walked out of the Leopard, my kids running around wearing their full armor, as I had ordered whenever we were on campaign, I had recovered enough that I sauntered over to the group that had stepped out of some fancy hover cars and were waiting for us. I could tell the look of surprise wash over their face as I waltzed up in a very expensive, and well armored uniform.


“Commander Eisen-Blume. I was told my contact would be a ‘Virgil Carolus?’” I offered and I could see the man that reminded me a lot of Arthur step forward.


“Commander a pleasure to meet you, I am Virgil, Governor Maruska’s aide, and since he couldn’t find time to make his all the way to Treshira I will be acting as your contractor for the duration of this mission.”


“Good. My men will be unloaded soon, and we can start our preparations.”


“Ah. That’s rather quick Commander, are you sure you don’t wish to gather more intelligence. The Pirates have been stable. They don’t seem to have any interest in leaving the base.”


“A guide to the general area, and anything you might think is important is all we will need Mr. Carolus. The Iron Blooded Orphans are ready. We just need some time to stretch our legs, and we will be good to go.”


“Ah. Very good then Commander this is…”


“Colonel Mark Maruska Planetary Defense force.” A second man stepped forward and hesitated for a moment. He looked like he was trying to decide if this was a trick or not, but eventually it looks like his manners won out. I could smell alcohol on his breath despite the fact he was in uniform. He offered his hand which I shook firmly, being careful not to squeeze too hard. The gloves on my uniform were armored after all.


“A pleasure to meet you. Anything you can tell me about these pirates that might be important during my assault would be appreciated.”


The strange look on his face seemed to finally take over, and it was obvious he couldn’t hold it in, “I can’t, this has got to be a joke. Where is your actual Commander kid, I can’t deal with a little girl playing dress up right now.” The Colonel questioned laughing the whole while. I could instantly tell this was going to be an annoying meeting.


“The Iron Blooded Orphans, combat uniform does it’s job. Keeps our insides on the inside.”


“Pfft, your fucking with me.” He turned towards Mr. Carolus. “Virgil, what is this? Father really paid money for a bunch of kids. Look!” He pointed to the crew unloading our gear. “I don’t think a single of them is old enough to be out of school, much less take out the rest of the Red Vultures!”


“Colonel. We hired these Mercenaries through the MRB, they are certified. I apologize, Commander. You must-”


I waved him off. “Apologize after we clean up your pirates, or don’t it doesn’t matter to me, or my men. I just need to know what I need to watch out for, Number of mechs, any hostages, defenses?” I asked, although honestly?


I didn’t need to know any of that.


“We don’t know for sure how many mechs they still have active, but I have all the data right here.” He offers handing me a packet of paper as the Colonel continues to scoff at the thought of us fighting.


Whatever. Not my problem.


“Good. I would like to move out tomorrow then if you can base us somewhere for the night. I don’t want any travel lag to interfere.”


“Of course, we already prepared for that Commander, we opened one of our bases to you for your stay.” Mr. Carolus offered as he pointed out on the front of the packet. The first page was a map showing us the path to a military base.


“Perfect. I’ll get my men settled for the night, go over the plan, and move in the morning.”


“Now I know you’re joking. This kid is going to rush in and get killed, probably give those pirates more mechs to play with, Virgil! I’m calling my father about this nonsense, ComStar have obviously lost their minds!”


The Young colonel, and he was young, I wouldn’t put him past early thirties. Stomped off, back towards the most expensive car in the convoy.


“I-”


I waved him off again. “Apologize later. Work now.”


“Agreed. Here is the route to tak-”


—-


“So what do they know?” I ask the group. My combat group were standing around a table that had the papers splayed across them.


“They know the pirates had a Lance of Battlemechs. A Shadow Hawk, SHD-2K. A Vulcan, VL-5T. A Panther PNT-9R. And a Firestarter, FS9-H. What they don’t know is the current status of most of those. They know at least the Panther is still active. Apparently they get random PPC fire every once in a while.” Benny offers pointing to a paper.


“But that’s not all they have.” Lenden offers pushing another paper closer. “Apparently, when they took the base they claimed the unknown number of vehicles that were stored there.”


“Somehow the Planetary defense doesn’t know how many tanks they took?” I ask.


“Nope. The base was used as a training base. A lot of the vehicles there were wrecks. They don’t know how many of them are usable.”


“Do the pirates even have enough people to drive the tanks and the mechs?” Hanna asked, noticing the issue.


“Apparently, the Dropship that was disabled, it was taking off at the time. So the damage wasn’t catastrophic when it crashed. The survivors gathered together and drove off in land vehicles they had with them, or stole.”


“So these pirates have been fucking around for over two months now and the government doesn’t have any idea how much force they can actually bring to bear?” Lenden asked, sounding thoroughly amused.


“Commander, I thought Benny was supposed to keep you from picking out any more potato level jobs?”


“Fuck you Lenden. The job is solid, the intel is just spotty, and that isn’t a problem anyways.” I reminded him with a jab with my elbow. His armor stopped it from doing more than jostling the older boy.


“Yeah and the planetary guard think we are in pre-school, refuse to talk to us, and their Colonel laughs every time he sees one of us, or gets mad. You now, like a normal Vicky mission.” Lenden points out.


“Yeah this is definitely a Vicky Mission.” Hanna adds, her smirk stretching her lips.


“Vicky mission.” Benny offers patting Lendens shoulder like he was consoling him.


“So it’s treason then.” I hissed, dammit I didn’t have a lightsaber.


Note to self, Lightsabers.


“Now that, ‘let’s fuck around with our Commanding officer is OVER.’”


“Well I still-”

“Carl, I swear to god. I will make you regret ever being born. So help me.”


Instead of saying anything the boy wisely raised his hands in surrender.


“Okay so back to work. We generally know where they are. We confirmed at least that they don’t have any hostages, well that we know of. The training base was alerted and they pulled everyone out before the pirates claimed it.”


“Yeah nice of them to not even try to use the defenses or at least sabotage them.” Lenden added snidely, the boy was already growing bored as he formed one of the papers into a paper airplane.


“It’s fine, they only have a few turrets, mostly for anti-air. The base is in the middle of a deep forest. So we have lots of cover.”


“So do they.”


“Yeah but Lenden, Cover works both ways. And we have better eyes than they do.”


He nodded at that. “That’s true, what about our Carriers? Up in the mountains in a forest isn’t going to let them do much.”


“Hey! The Artillery Unit can handle any terrain!” Elias spoke up, affronted.


“We are going to go slow and steady, they can’t ambush us, and they can’t use traps against us. So we surprise them. They will think they have every advantage. We will whittle those advantages down.” I offer my smile turning sharp.


“First. Once we get up there, we find a location.” I motion towards the map we had been given of the area. “We build some defenses for the Carriers.”


“Oh You mean capital B build huh? Sure that’s safe?”


“It will be, I’ll check to make sure we don’t have any spies, but the plan is to get them to leave the base, the base is only a minor objective, but I bet we can get a bonus if we return the base still intact.”


“Wait, you want to fight them in the forest?”


“No Lenden. I want to kill them in the forest. A fight means they stand a chance.”


It took a moment for that to pass through his head, before his grin turned sinister “Oh Commander. I sometimes forget how much of a troublemaker you were before all this. I’m in.”


That night I took off in the Locust. For once thankful that we weren’t fully professional, as the Locust never did get the Nanoforge refitted to a Medium laser. And in a bright green flash far from civilization. A Metal Extractor came into being.

—-


We moved out the next morning. Our little convoy of four mechs, two carriers, and two trucks, one for me and the Delta Ops, and another with some of the loaders from the Artillery Unit.


I wasn’t taking part in this fight from the cockpit. Shocking, I know.


But Erica needed some experience in a fight and she had earned my Locust. I wouldn’t take it from her. She was still terrified of combat, so she would have to get over that soon if she wanted to be a Mechwarrior.


As we rumbled along I kept my eyes on my Sensor, although instead of calling out anything interesting, I was constantly radioing in to Erica to ask for updates.


She was a scout after all, even if she didn’t have to actually leave the group to do the scouting, she would need to be in the habit of transmitting information.


“A-ah, I see the base on the sensors now. It looks like we had some i-intel issues. There are six mechs on base.”


“Fuck. Alright Green 3. Give me a sitrep.” Benny ordered out, taking over as planned.


“O-oh, Umm confirmation on the four reported mechs, although it looks like the Vulcan is damaged… The two new mechs are a Javelin, JVN-10N, and a Locust, LVT-1V.”


“Hmm Where did the extra mechs come from?” Benny wondered aloud.


“Raiding during the last few months maybe?” Lenden offered with an audible shrug his armor shifting coming over the comms. “Who cares? They need to be taken out, so we take them out, more salvage for us.”


“Lenden, no Rough Squad antics this time.” I ordered out.


“Aww C’mon Commander! You are taking away all the fun.”


“We aren’t here for fun, we are here to prove we know what we are doing and for the reputation involved.”


“Roger that Commander. Lenden, you’ll have plenty of fun, but let’s focus up. Green 3, vehicles?”


“Oh yes! Vedette Medium tanks are active. I see four of them looking functional, but it looks like they are trying to repair two more.” Erica replied, her voice calmer now.


“Okay, good job Green 3.” Benny offered, “Alright listen up. Once we set up our FOB our goal is to complete this mission without a scratch on our armor. That means we work together, keep focused, and don’t let up! First targets are going to be the light mechs, we want to remove any ability to escape. Remember our job isn’t to retake the base, that’s just a bonus, our job is to remove the pirates completely.”


““Yes! Green 1!””


I smiled. Benny was in his element. We traveled up the mountain passes, and it wasn’t long before we came up to our first issue.


“Commander, there is a man up ahead in what looks like some sort of hut. He does have a radio on him, I think he is a scout for the pirates.”


“Good catch Green 3, I agree. Well Delta Ops. This time you're up.”


—-


A different perspective.

Anthoni Elric.

Treshira mountains.


Toni, was getting truly sick of being the ‘spotter’ while the rest of the gang were back at base, sleeping comfy in the military barracks, he was out here in a roughly put together hut they had made, watching the damn road. Sure they were up in the mountains, but this planet with it’s fucked up sun was still hotter than he really wanted to deal with.


“Bet they’re all eating the good food, probably all cooked and hot, instead of this.” he grunted, shoveling another spoonful of lukewarm mash into his face. The food that his gang had left him with was stuff that could be stored without a fridge. Not exactly what you want to eat for weeks on end though.


Weeks had gone by since he had even seen a single military scout. At first they had sent them up all the time, trying to figure out what the gang was up to.


Toni had spotted every one of them. The road was the only way up this side of the mountain, unless you had jump jets on a mech, but those things were loud. So he wasn’t worried besides, his little hut was well hidden, nearly invisible from the road, and even harder to spot from any other direction. He spotted the fools that drove up in jeeps, and informed Martin. Martin loved shooting light vehicles with his PPC.


Toni was so sure of his safety, so sure that no one could get past him. He never heard the birdsong die down, as he chewed on his meal. Never heard the knife slip out from a sheath.


He certainly never heard anything ever again.


—-


A different perspective

Carl

Delta Ops

Treshira Mountains


“Commander. Enemy down, we have the radio, and are heading to the road for pickup.” Carl said before turning to his squad. He was surprisingly okay with what just happened. He always expected his first kill to be more of an explosion of regret, or conscience. Instead his hands felt steady and he was feeling good.


Ready to continue with their mission.


“You okay Carl?” Samantha asked aloud, forgoing the radio for the moment.


“I’m okay Sam, not about to let killing a pirate mess with my calm. We got work to do.”


She nodded once firmly, and the squad filed out of the small hut, leaving the corpse where it lay. It wasn’t their concern. They had a job to do, and the entire Delta Ops would be damned before they messed this up.


The Delta Ops had a bit of a chip on their shoulder. Despite helping with Helm, despite doing something so amazing, few of the other Iron Blooded knew about it. To most of the Company, they were just the weird Delta guys.


Carl wanted to make a statement, so as much as Green Lances newbies wanted to show off, Delta Ops wanted it even more.


The power on their NightHawks still near fully charged the small group left, rushing through the forest, using their jump jets from time to time to move over obstacles, until they were overlooking the road. The mechs already started to tromp past them as they waited, Lenden giving wave as he stormed past.


Once the mechs were clear, the Norman truck they were using as a command vehicle, and a storage for the NightHawks slowed to a stop below them.


They jumped from the cliff, months of training let them activate their jump jets, slowing them to a more comfortable landing beside the truck, as they all clambered into the back of the truck.


“Good job out there!” Vicky yelled out from the back window of the truck, Carl handed the radio to her getting a thumbs up before settling in, turning his NightHawk to low power mode until they would be needed again.


—-


With the spotter dead, and their radio in our hands we now had a path straight to the base. Other than the land mines that they had placed further up the road, but landmines are only a threat if you don’t know they are there.


They didn’t have any other spotters. Pirates' discipline wasn’t their best trait after all. Not that it would have mattered if they did.


“Okay Green 3, did you find a good place for our FOB?”


“I did Commander! Sending coordinates now!”


I looked over the space Erica picked out. It was just a bit north of the base, and was actually at a higher elevation, giving a good overlook of the base. If we positioned ourselves correctly, we could probably attack without them being able to see us. “Good spot. Let’s move out!”


Eventually we had to move off road which did present some issues we hadn’t considered. “Okay smash that tree out of the way, try to keep it quiet!” I called out to Benny who was using a small laser and his gripping arm to cut a tree out of the way of our Carriers.


It worked, and after a few minutes of stomping on the fires we cleared the path and the Carriers made another few meters before we found another stoppage.


“Okay! That’s enough Green 3. I’m swapping with you for a bit.” I growl. I was not happy sitting around while daylight was burning.


When Erica swapped seats with me I could tell she was unhappy, but I clapped her armored shoulder as we passed. “Just until we get to the FOB. The Battle, and the Mech is still yours.” Once I was in the Locust. The bright light of the Nanoforge quickly cleared our path, best thing? It was quiet, and I could construct a dirt road without much issue. We started making incredible time while driving literally through the middle of a forest.


The location of our FOB was reached within just an hour at that rate, and after first clearing the area, I started building. First strong walls, made up of the same material as a Castle Brian. In other words nothing the pirates had would do much against these without a real concerted effort.


Then I built up a few Turrets at each of the four corners. These were actually AC/20 Turrets. Anything looking to attack our little fort would swiftly wish it wasn’t surrounded by trees, because to get close enough to attack would mean you are close enough for the turrets to return fire.


Housing came next, A secondary building in the middle, for us to use to bunker down in case we are attacked.


Then I just made a junction for our Carriers, and enough LRM ammo to refuel a few hundred times if necessary. I did have to slow what I created, in order to let the metal extractor catch up on the metal production, but as night fell we were done.


After switching out of the Locust, giving it back to Erica. I settled into the small Command office I had created. A powerful radio system would keep us in contact even if the pirates had some more powerful ECM, or jamming equipment. And since it was SLDF equipment, it should be impossible for some Pirates to listen in.


“Alright. Operation Midnight visitors is a go!”


“Commander. Please pick a better operation name, or let Benny choose.” Lenden complained.


“Commander prerogative to pick the operation names! Now move your ass Green 4!”


“Yeah yeah. Fuckin ey Benny how do we put up with this shit.”


“You are still broadcasting to me as well, Lenden!” I snark at him which causes his broadcast to suddenly end.


Moron.


From there. Benny took Command. “This is Green 1. Green 3, provide coordinates for bombardment to our Lance. Command will determine Carrier group targets. Let’s move Mechwarriors.”


But none of us expected the radio to crackle to life and for me to listen in on an interesting response. “Hold on a moment Benny. They might just make this even easier for us.”


—-


A different perspective

Damien Cross

Treshira Mountain Military Base.


Darrien Cross wasn’t used to dealing with this level of trouble. He had been a pirate for years, had been on more than a few raids, but he had never had a drop ship drop out from under him, or at least never had one dropped out, while the pirates were leaving the planet.


He had known just as they did, they weren’t going to turn around to pick him up. The Red Vultures had a code. There was no way they would turn around to try and save his scrawny ass, not even for his mechs. The Dropship crash had been an accident. One of the damn engines gave out mid thrust.


A complete one in a million.


Of course no one knew that at the time. All the other pirates saw was their dropship suddenly fall out of the air. Of course they didn’t turn around. No way would they risk their metal.


But Darrien had sprung into action. Readying those that survived, arming them all and making a breakout into the forest. They had been chased but mechs were far superior to vehicles in the forests. Especially Pots in his Firestarter. A few forest fires, a few hijackings to get more vehicles, eventually sneaking onto a military training base and taking over.


It had been going better than he expected. They had managed to take on enough metal that no one on the Planetary Guard was willing to make a move. Not with the mountains and forests between them. Sure they would have been in trouble from AFS bombing runs, but that was what the AA turrets on the base were for.


So he settled in, planned. Killed a few of his men that came up with stupid ideas like trying to blend into the population, or escape.


He couldn’t have any of them wander off while he still needed them. Plus he was the boss, and so he was already trying to get them all off planet. There were plenty of dropships willing to make a nice stack of C-bills for just picking up a group and taking them somewhere.


No one had bit yet. The Planetary Governor was doing a good job of keeping the sky above the base clear.


Still they had time. They had pushed back the first push of tanks and air support that tried to push them out. The AA turrets and mechs took out that attack. Since then, small scouting attacks have come through, but nothing they weren’t ready for. Scouts on each of the roads on the way up, and a watchful eye for any tricks kept their base secure.


That and the mines on the roads.


The passing months had given him enough time to get some of the vehicles running, he had even managed to put the two light mechs back together. They had been stolen during the raids, but too damaged to do more than haul away. Not that they would help much, but gifting the mechs to some of his dispossessed warriors had kept morale up. No Mechwarrior wanted to lose their ride once they got one. So they stayed instead of trying to run into the forest to escape.


It had been working well. Food wasn’t too hard to come by. There was a sort of deer that tasted pretty good, in the forest. Apparently it was endangered? Not his concern. The rest of the supplies? Well they were starting to run low, but not to the point where they needed to think about raiding.


“Yo Darrien. Toni ain't responding to his radio.” Mal called out as Darrien was doing his rounds, if he didn’t he would find his crew slacking around, only when he was around cracking the whip did shit get done.


“What? Fucker, Mal It’s Captain! You shit. And give me that fucking radio,” he snatched it from Mals hand and flipped the button. “Toni, you fat fuck this is Darrien, if you don’t respond to me in ten seconds, I’m sending a fucking kill squad out to remove your bottomless hole!”


Not a sound came through. “Toni?” he repeated but nothing but static.


Darrien had known the man for years now, there was a reason he had put him on scout duty, he was good at it, and although sometimes he wouldn’t respond to the radio right away, the man was also a coward. Threaten him, and getting to that radio would be his first and only job.


But nothing came through.


“I don’t like this.” He muttered to himself. “Mal, go wake everyone up, tell them to get mounted up. Something fucky is going on.”


“C’mon Darr-Captain, it’s just Toni fallin asleep or some shit, everyone is partying right now, if I go tell them to mount up I’ll be dealing with whining all week.”


“If you don't do as I say, you won’t be having any problems next week.”


“Alright alright! I’m on it Captain.” Mal huffed as he wandered off.


Darrien was getting that feeling down his spine when shit was about to hit the fan. So instead of wandering around he made his way over to his ShadowHawk. The startup was fast enough, the damn thing just needed a few kicks to get all the displays to turn on.


It was all quiet according to his sensors. Nothing on thermal or vibration. “Am I just overreacting?”


His heart was starting to slow down, as the sense of fear disappeared. He waited for the rest of his Lance to mount up.


“Fuck Darrien, I was just about to get some, you pulled me away cause Toni fell asleep jackin off again?”


“Like fuck you were Pots, I wouldn’t touch your shit even if your Firestarter was on the table.” Milly in her Vulcan hissed out over comms.


“Hah! Like hell I’d ever wager my girl. She’s got me through all sorts of scrapes.”


“Enough! Toni isn’t responding still. So that means something happened to him, chance it’s nothing, but chance is it’s a Planetary Guard column moving up to fuck us in the ass. So we are moving out, going to go check the road, and check on the fucker to see if we need to kill him for fucking around. Let’s move.”


His order was listened to if not without plenty of grumbling as the four mechs of his Lance moved out, The secondary Lance, moved with them. They were supposed to screen the advance, but the light mech pilots often stuck too close to do that. Unfortunately they had only been mechwarriors for a short time, and they often came too close. Feeling safer in a group.


“Mitchell, get the tanks prepped too. I don’t want any surprises while we are gone.” He radioed out, that tingling down his back was still just as strong.


“Yeah yeah ‘captain’ Let me handle the ground pounders. You lead your mechs around.” The tank commander responded as Darrien grit his teeth. If these men would just follow his orders he could have already left this miserable backwater. But no, every order had to be cajoled, or bribed. It was miserable. He didn’t know how Red had done it.


The Lance headed out of the base, into the forest, stepping carefully in their lackluster formation.


The forest was quiet, and there wasn’t even a moon to guide them, as they traveled. First Darrien wanted eyes on the road, he wasn’t about to let this whole night be ruined just because Toni fell asleep or fell off a cliff or something.


The glow of his faulty nightvision lit up the forest in a green haze. Thermal barely worked on his mech, never had really, but it had only gotten worse over the years. So he was stuck with this vision if he wanted to see anything at night. The small lights on the front of his mech barely illuminated anything, and one of them was still broken. Even replacing the light didn’t fix that problem so it was some internal wiring not connected.


As they traveled in the dark something kept tingling up his spine. Something was wrong, but he couldn’t figure it out. Like an itch under his skin.


Fortunately, it wasn’t him that finally figured it out.


Pots in his Firestarter noticed it first. He heard a soft *Thunk* echo through his mech and slowed for a moment “Hey, guys I think there is something on my mech?” He called out swiveling lightly to try and see, but his Firestarters Night vision and thermal were the worst out of the whole group. Being a Firestarter it had to deal with some sudden changes.


“Probably a tree branch Pots, keep your focus.”


“No guys really that sounded metallic on my hull! It sounded weird!”


“Pots! Chill your shit get back in formation! We need to keep moving, I don’t want to be out here all night!” Darrien roared back. “I don’t see shit on your mech, That goes for the rest of you too. Keep your bellyaching to yourself, now move!”


The nervous energy from Pots was spreading though. Everyone was looking around constantly like something was in the darkness with them.


They traveled for quite a while in the dark, their radios quiet. The forest tripping them up, and keeping them moving slow. They didn’t dare take the roads, not after they had mined them so thoroughly.


They finally made it to Toni’s hut and it was a bit of an argument but Darrien was firm. “Fucking asshole, I gave you an order since Toni isn’t responding yet, Get your ass down there and see if he is inside!” Darrien yelled at Scott, the red haired man was usually rather difficult to work with, but he was also the most expendable, not like his Locust was going to do much in a scrap.


Watching the red headed man pop the hatch on his mech and slowly crawl down the ladder thankfully he didn’t fall in the dark. He hit the dirt and pulled his pistol before sneaking into the hut.


A moment later. The hut went up in a fireball. And Darrien knew that bad feeling he had wasn’t about to go away. “Every back to base! We need to make ready to be attacked!” The Lance started moving in a hurry through the dark forest. Leaving the Locust to stand watch over the flames disappearing behind them as they hurried.


Running through a dark forest, with the fear that the attack was finally coming that the fucking Planetary Guard were finally hitting them? Darrien wasn’t at his best, but what was worse? Nothing should have slipped this far through. They had traps, spotters, sensors, hell the military base had a surface to air radar!


This attack should not be possible without something letting the Red Vultures it was on. The fact they had already lost a mech pilot to a fucking trap? That was when Darrien knew something really fucky was going on. “Hey, is anyone seeing anything? Martin, you have the best sensor system, catching anything? I got a bad feeling.”


“Nothing that I can see, boss. It’s all quiet out there.”


“Fuck that, something is definitely up, everyone check in!” Darrien demanded something was twigging at the back of his head when he turned around for a moment to see, something had been off.


“H-hey… Where is Brent?” Pots called out as he was spinning around. Darrien felt ice down his back turning around to check on his crew when he noticed the missing mech. The Javelin wasn’t with the Lance.


“W-when did that happen? Who saw him last! Speak up now!” Darrien demanded.


“He was behind me when we started running! I was sure he was gonna follow!” Milly responded from her Vulcan. The entire forest seemed oddly quiet as each of the mechs around them started spinning in place trying to find whatever it was in the forest that was hunting them.


“Alright don’t lose your shit, stick close, I want everyone on my six, and whoever is in the back gets checked on every minute. This isn’t some horror Holovid bullshit. Clear comms, and keep your head on a swivel let’s get back to base.” Darrien took command, it was all he really could do.


Their pace through the forest was much slower this time, all of them knew something was in the forest with them, but they couldn’t tell what. Their jittery nerves eventually came to a head when Milly lost it and started shooting her flamethrower and mediums into the dark, screaming that something had been on her mech.


The freakout only made discipline worse. Pots suddenly rushed ahead, his Firestarter disappearing into the forest.


“DAMNIT POTS GET YOUR ASS BACK HERE!” Darrien screamed into the radio as he kept his weapons angled out in the dark ready to defend if any attack came.


None did. Except a few moments later an explosion echoed out from ahead of them, and the entire Lance moved as one for probably the first time. They rushed to catch up to Pots. “Pots! Pots respond damnit was that you! Are you under attack!? POOOOOOTS!”


They learned soon enough he had. They came across the smoke from his Firestarter laying face down in the dark. Smoke drifted out from his busted cockpit.


“What the fuck. Something head shot him!?”


“Can it! We are dealing with something out here, together this time! If you rush off on your own you are dead!” The Lance of mechs stormed through the forest, it was no longer quiet, as they smashed trees to make their way.


He hadn’t heard any fire. Just one explosion. What the hell could have blown up Pots cockpit without any noise? The unease was only building, when as they stomped through the woods Darrien noticed it first.


Smoke burning into the sky, creating a slight heat haze on the dark sky on his thermals.


“Fuck, the base!” He growled as he kicked up the speed daring for a moment to activate his jets just to get high enough to maybe see what was going on. The fact he could see smoke pluming up from the base only made his fear increase. “Base is full of smoke, we are under attack for sure. We are going to go reinforce, don’t fall behind. Don’t leave anyone behind!” He knew the information wouldn’t do much for Lance's confidence. Three mechs down already.


What a clusterfuck.


He rushed. Which he realized was a mistake right when his LRM alarm went off.


Darrien had enough time to look up, seeing the hundreds of flares of missiles coming down on his position. He dove to the side, hoping the tree cover was enough to save his life as they crashed down on his Lance.


The trees splintering and cracking was just barely audible over the explosions of the missiles as if the forest around them was coming alive in response to the attack. Fires started everywhere, and Darrien realized in horror that even as one barrage of Missiles ended, he could already see the faint fires of more plumes shooting into the sky.


“R-run to the base! Everyone!”


He pushed his ShadowHawk forward trying to escape the fire before it became too much, out of the corner of his eye he noticed Martin take to the air on jump jets, trying to escape the fire.


Two burning blue lights lit up the forest shooting from the same angle as the base. The large lasers burned chunks of Martin's armor down, Something went internal on his mech and his leg went flying in another direction. His mech tipped sideways.


Darrien watched as the Panther fell sideways into the forest below.


Darrien didn’t have time to worry about that, because he just realized that the enemy was between him and the base.


“Fuck! Why hasn’t the base alerted us to an attack!” He screamed into his radio, but what was even more terrifying is that he hadn’t heard his Lance since the missile assault. He hunkered down for a moment switching radio frequencies on the knob trying to reach anyone but only a faint hiss reached his ears.


They were jamming him too?


“Who are these fuckers?” He couldn’t help but ask aloud. The planets militia didn’t have this sort of equipment! They would have known! The fucks would have used it during the initial raid! This couldn’t be LOKI right? He hadn’t done enough to piss off the Lyrans that bad surely!


No one was answering his comms, and now he was trapped with an unknown number of enemies in the forest. What fucking hell had caused this! How had they slipped past him completely!? They hadn’t noticed any spotters, or spys, there would have been something! Even a radio transmission would have been at least picked up alerting them, but nothing!


Nothing until Toni missed his clock in.


It ran through his head then. The last time Toni had contacted them was that morning, to let them know he hadn’t seen anything.


“They had hours to slip past us.” He dreaded that realization, but it was too late now. He decided that the base was done. So was his Lance, they would mill about and be an appetizing target for a while. He was getting the hell out of here. He turned off every scanner he had, going passive, hopefully it would keep him hidden long enough to get away.


Behind him as he ran he heard the sounds of combat continue, until it went silent not long after. He rushed away, using his jump jets sparingly to hop down the mountain. He of course had set up a small getaway during the months of idleness. Heading out on ‘scouting’ missions to stretch his legs he really had been transporting enough supplies to last him a while to hide out in the mountains.


As a Pirate Darrien knew that sometimes especially when things got bad, you had to plan to just disappear for a time. He ran for a good hour or two staying very low to stay out of any chance to be noticed, thankfully he was mostly going down hill. Then in a valley that had an ancient mountain run off stream, there was a truly ancient old cabin along a river a good few miles from the base. He had scoped it out, and had taken it over months ago.


When he arrived, the first thing he did was slip his ShadowHawk into the rapids. The freezing cold mountain water which was the coldest thing around would keep any overhead thermal from reading it after just a few minutes, he settled in, letting the water flow over his mech partially submerging his cockpit. His hatch ending up just under a small fall in the rapids, putting it above the water, but still hidden from view from any angle. He quickly grabbed anything he needed, opening the hatch for as short a time as possible to keep as much water out as he could before closing and sealing it.


He started a fire in the old cabin's fireplace to warm up. Switching into some more normal clothes and even planning on hiding his looks. Give it a year or two, and a new man would wander out of the mountains, a bald man, instead of his full head of hair, with a full beard instead of his clean shaven face. He would get a ride out of here, find some way to transport the ShadowHawk, maybe a flatbed or something, and he would be safe from whatever the fuck was happening on this planet.


Darrien Cross was done with whatever had happened back there. He was completely ready to start a new life, as a new man. Idly he started considering what his new name should be. “Terry maybe? I always liked Terry.”


“Good name.” The voice spoke from behind his ear.


The knife cut off his shocked response.


As he gurgled out from the knife sticking through the back of his neck he could just see the shape of the form that had killed him. The final thoughts of the man Darrien Cross was full of horror at the sight, he had never seen anything like it. And even in his last moments, until the monster spoke, he never heard him.

{So did a bit of an experiment on this one. Having all of the fighting be done from the enemies perspective. I hope I hit the sense of terror I was aiming for? Fighting a group that always knows where you are, and they are basically impossible to find without direct eyesight is probably pretty horrifying.}
 

Bear Ribs

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I thought the alternate perspective worked really well for this chapter.

I'm amused that Vicky's made her uniforms look cool by modern standards, and doesn't understand why everybody else is laughing at them. When 80s hair is in, 90s hair looks like you're lazy as heck, nobody in the 80s thought their hair looked stupid.

Vicky needs to build a few extra 'mechs and tanks to scrap in the fight, it sounds from the previous chapter like she's getting a percentage of salvage, not spelled out how much, so the more the pirates have, the more she can take home. If "they actually had two Panthers, they just never deployed both at once" that's an extra Panther / half a Panther Vicky gets to salvage. And since they have no idea how many tanks were actually there (and there were legit more 'mechs than expected), Vicky can build significantly more tonnage to "salvage" since there's nobody to even try to dispute the numbers. The bigger question will be how much DropShip lift she can get, a Leopard does not come with sufficient cargo to haul a dozen scrapped 'mechs and broken chassis around no matter what HareBrained Schemes wrote.

Also, now the hard part begins, dealing with the asshat who not only won't want to apologize but will now be looking for any excuse to save face, possibly including trumping up claims that Vicky was secretly in the league with the Pirates and that's why she won so easily.

“The Iron Blooded Orphans, combat uniform does it’s job. Keeps our insides on the inside.”
its
Its is one of the few irregular possessive forms that has no apostrophe, remember.

“Agreed. Here is the route to tak-”
This one is more of a style sheet question than something that can be said to be absolutely wrong, but typically if you're trailing off and fading to black, you use a (...) ellipsis, when you end in a (-) hyphen it's used to indicate the person was interrupted and couldn't speak.

“So what do they know?” I ask the group. My combat group were standing around a table that had the papers splayed across them.


“They know the pirates had a Lance of Battlemechs. A Shadow Hawk, SHD-2K. A Vulcan, VL-5T. A Panther PNT-9R. And a Firestarter, FS9-H. What they don’t know is the current status of most of those. They know at least the Panther is still active. Apparently they get random PPC fire every once in a while.” Benny offers pointing to a paper.


“But that’s not all they have.” Lenden offers pushing another paper closer. “Apparently, when they took the base they claimed the unknown number of vehicles that were stored there.”


“Somehow the Planetary defense doesn’t know how many tanks they took?” I ask.


“Nope. The base was used as a training base. A lot of the vehicles there were wrecks. They don’t know how many of them are usable.”


“Do the pirates even have enough people to drive the tanks and the mechs?” Hanna asked, noticing the issue.
You've got tense errors throughout this set of paragraphs, swapping between present and past tense repeatedly. The present should probably be changed to past tense to fit the rest of the story.

Sure they were up in the mountains, but this planet with it’s fucked up sun was still hotter than he really wanted to deal with.
its

Weeks had gone by since he had even seen a single military scout. At first they had sent them up all the time, trying to figure out what the gang was up to.
Too many spaces between "gang" and "was."

Carl wanted to make a statement, so as much as Green Lances newbies wanted to show off, Delta Ops wanted it even more.
Lance's, this one is a possessive form with an apostrophe.

The mechs already started to tromp past them as they waited, Lenden giving wave as he stormed past.
Too many spaces between "giving" and "wave," I'm guessing you planned to put an "a" in between the two which would make more sense.

“What? Fucker, Mal It’s Captain! You shit. And give me that fucking radio,” he snatched it from Mals hand and flipped the button.
Mal's

They hadn’t noticed any spotters, or spys, there would have been something! Even a radio transmission would have been at least picked up alerting them, but nothing!
spies

Having all of the fighting be done from the enemies perspective.
enemy's, also this is a sentence fragment
 
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Doomsought

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And this is why Nighthawks were the terror of the great houses during the tail end of the Star League. Far more hardened targets have fallen to them. Whenever the great houses decided to try and make their own powered armor, the Star League would send in a platoon of Nighthawks to shut down the project.
 

Tel Janin Aman

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Comrade
So how many basically pristine(as much as pirate gear can be considered such) mechs did Vicky nab here? The locust, shadow hawk, and any others? The Firestarter has a busted canopy right?
 

xachariahxx

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{So did a bit of an experiment on this one. Having all of the fighting be done from the enemies perspective. I hope I hit the sense of terror I was aiming for? Fighting a group that always knows where you are, and they are basically impossible to find without direct eyesight is probably pretty horrifying.}

IMO it did well portraying an alternate PoV. I appreciate that the story had solid framing around it with the setup with Delta earlier in the chapter, so the readers knew what was going on.

Lots of times authors will try to portray something confusing by writing things confusingly. It means that for most of the chapter, the reader doesn't get to enjoy the story because they're busy trying to figure out what and why things are going on with what is ultimately a disposable viewpoint. In serial web fiction also, this IMO leads to a higher likelyhood of readers bouncing off a story at that point.

This was well done. The horror aspect could have had a little time to marinate, but was still a good read. Thank you for the chapter.
 

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