Quest Dymphna Dell, a Webcomic Quest. (Original Sci-fi/Fantasy.)

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I'm calling the voting, and sending a preliminary script to the artist.

You might start seeing some posts for character and setting info as supplementary content, but no promises on that.
 
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    Vote for who is telling a story around the campfire tonight:
    [] Jim talks about why he works for RemCo. (Red armor dude with beard.)
    [] Jerry talks about his last military deployment (Green armor dude.)
    [] Jill talks about why she flies a shuttle instead of a fighter (Turqoise armor woman.)
    [] Alexandra and Cromwell talk about how they met (Couple in Blue armor.)

    ((()))

    So, that vote certainly sped things along.
     
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    • Jim has the best character design.

    [] Jerry talks about his last military deployment (Green armor dude.)

    Gives us the most information about the setting. It might give us some context about what state the protagonists are a part of, and what the other implied state is (or rebellion? or insurgency?), and might also give us some insight into the issues of this world. Are people fighting over resources? Or is this an idealogical war? Etc.

    That said, this is a comic. Comics are a visual medium. An exposition dump is best done in text. Doing huge text boxes in a comic is a waste, IMO. I guess we might get some flashbacks to go along with this, perhaps. But apparently we might get some additional info later.


    [X] Alexandra and Cromwell talk about how they met (Couple in Blue armor.)

    Is interesting simply because of how rare it is to find married couples in modern fiction.
     
    [X] Jim talks about why he works for RemCo. (Red armor dude with beard.)

    Jerry probably tells us more about the setting in general, but Jim tells us about the part we're primarily involved in. Should help us figure out what we're doing.
     
    [X] Jim talks about why he works for RemCo. (Red armor dude with beard.)

    Let's talk to the redshirt, who knows how much longer he will be around for.
     
    [x] Jill talks about why she flies a shuttle instead of a fighter (Turqoise armor woman.)
     
    [X] Alexandra and Cromwell talk about how they met (Couple in Blue armor.)

    Character development, two at once.
     
    [x] Jill talks about why she flies a shuttle instead of a fighter (Turqoise armor woman.)
     
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