The Unicorn
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Very nice chapter, and interesting take on what to focus on in the reprimand. That's certainly a valid issue but not what I would have focused on if I was the Lt.
Everyone screws up on occasion no matter how careful you are and while he certainly should have been more careful I would have addressed his reaction to the screw-up as a bigger issue. Although screwing up diplomatic relations (which is one possible result of a mechwarrior responding to his own screwup by yelling at the people they were supposed to work with) doesn't provide as obvious imagry as what the Lt. chose to focus on, but the damage can be even greater.
Everyone screws up on occasion no matter how careful you are and while he certainly should have been more careful I would have addressed his reaction to the screw-up as a bigger issue. Although screwing up diplomatic relations (which is one possible result of a mechwarrior responding to his own screwup by yelling at the people they were supposed to work with) doesn't provide as obvious imagry as what the Lt. chose to focus on, but the damage can be even greater.