Chapter 1, Freezing Slumber
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This is an AU fiction story branching from the Star Wars: The Clone Wars episode S3: E18 The Citadel. If you haven’t watched it yet, or not recently, I highly recommend rewatching it for context in Chapter 1. This story will be told from the third-person point of view.
Chapter 1, Freezing Slumber
20 BBY
Jedi Temple, Coruscant
When his eyes landed upon the giant carbon-freezing machine, Kenobi let out a quiet sigh. He should’ve been more aware of what padawan meant by, “I’ve got a thought about that.” The reprogrammed battle-droids should’ve set off a mental alarm, or two. Yet, he never sees his padawan's plans coming. Every time they get assigned to a mission, Kenobi silently hopes that his padawan has finally matured to the point of picking a simple straightforward plan. Yet, he is always proven wrong. Kenobi briefly considered applauding his padawan for thinking outside the box, only for his train of thought to be interrupted.
“Master?”
He turned his head to look at the man standing next to him, his padawan Anakin Skywalker.
“Nothing,” he replied as he turned his gaze back towards the machine, and began approaching with Anakin next to him. As they got closer, clone troopers Rex, Cody, Fives, and Echo joined them as they walked up a small ramp, taking them right underneath the machine. On the floor of the raised platform were seven large circles, each separated from one another by a foot.
“This is your idea?” Kenobi asked as he looked at Anakin. “Carbon-freezing?”
Anakin briefly chuckled before looking at his master with a smirk on his face. They both stopped within a circle, and faced forward.
“Hey, you wanted to shield us from the life-form scanners,” He replied with a raised brow.
Kenobi only smirked as he turned forward again, mental admitting to the claim. Maybe he should heed Master Windu’s words about giving Anakin ideas.
“Uh, are we sure this thing is safe?” Fives asked carefully as he examined the giant freezer. “I don’t want to end up as a wall decoration.”
“Try to relax”, Kenobi replied as he turned back to look at the clone. “We’ll be unfrozen as soon as we arrive."
As he turned back forward, the word soon lingered in his mind. At that moment, a Ugnaught operating the machine inputted a code, springing it to life. The two Jedi briefly looked at each other before the platform began dropping. Their visions went white, as clouds of gas shot out from the various noozles.
“Soon….”
*****
Master Plo Kloon watched as the frozen carbonite block of Obi-Wan Kenobi was moved past him, and into the separatist shuttle. He remained silent as the large hangar bay opened, and the platform the shuttle was on extended to the outside world. The craft levitated up as its leg-like landing retracted. The craft tilted nose up, and blasted off from the pad. Watching as the craft left the atmosphere, he gave his goodbye. “May the force be with you.”
*****
R2-D2 sat in front of the navigation console, with his computer interface arm connecting him to it. If his calculations were right, which they always were, arrival at Lola Sayu would occur within the next five hours. He beeped happily to himself, yet another achievement for his brilliance. After retracting the arm, he returned to the center of the cockpit, monitoring the battle-droids. A feeling of boredom overcame him, as he turned to look out the window. The passing lights of hyperspace are always enjoyable, for the first few times. Once you get used to it though, it becomes dull. R2 let out a sad beep at the fact that his master was now a living ice cube. The astromech would kill for a maintenance check. He even began to wish he had someone to mess with, preferably Threepio. Heck, he would’ve begun teasing the clankers if they weren’t required for the mission. Disappointed, he let out a small chirp. His mopping was quickly interrupted by a red flashing light. The two droids piloting the ship looked down at the button, and then turned towards the astromech.
“General?” they replied in unison as the blue lights of warp speed turned crimson red.
Letting out a screech, he inserted his interface arm into the nav console. The ship violently shook as it left warp. The shuttle began to tumble, causing one of the battle droids to fly into one of the cockipts walls. R2 sat in silence as the craft faced a giant wormhole, which was quickly consuming the shuttle. With his robotic arm moving swiftly, he tried to redirect all power to the thrusters. Just as he inputted the command, the craft shook again as electric sparks began shooting out of the various command panels. As the same droid that was tossed around the cockpit regained his footing, he noticed that his hand was on one of the button panels. “Oh no,” was his final words as a violet shock sent him to the floor, rendering the droid completely motionless.
The computer was no longer responding to commands as the craft began to tumble again. Desperation overtook R2 as he tried inputting a command in a different console, no luck. The only thing he could do was watch as darkness consumed the ship.
*****
It seemed like time had frozen still, but his inbuilt clock indicated only five minutes had passed. The darkness vanished as stars returned to view. Though the tumble was continuing, R2 was confident that the wormhole had released them, but where? His built in star chart was one of the finest, but a precise location from the ship's nav computer would have helped. A close star came to view, as the two remaining B1 units covered their eye sensors. The next thing that came to view was both reassuring, and troubling. A giant planet loomed into view, as the shuttle steadily got closer. Its surface was made up of several large continents, and vast oceans. The most noticeable point was the white cap that was located at its most northern pole, and just so happened to be getting bigger. The stricken craft began to shutter as R2 detected a spike in temperature. Knowing what was next, the droid prepared itself. Letting out a series of beeps, the two pilots looked back at the astromech.
“You want us to do what?” one of the droids asked.
R2 repeated his message, this time with more vigor. The two pilots looked at each other before returning their gaze to R2.
“Whatever you say, General,” A droid replied as he grabbed the ship's yoke. Meanwhile, R2 turned and approached the large door of the cockpit. Then, he placed his arm within the nearby connector. Aware of its lack of power, R2 felt his power reserve drop as the door slowly opened. Letting out a tired chirp, he entered the storage compartment. Examining the carbonite bricks, he was relieved that they were intact, and still had power. As the door to the cockpit closed, R2 approached a nearby console and connected into it.
The shuttle continued its descent into the atmosphere. Flames covered the craft as it streaked through the sky, steadily warping the exterior panels. The flames subsided after a few minutes, revealing the ever growing pole. Letting out a robotic sigh, R2 shuttered as the shuttle systems roared to life. Pulling on the yoke, the shuttle began leveling off into a glide. With his power draining, the lights on R2 began to flicker.
“This gonna hurt,” one of the droids replied as he braced. The other followed suit as various warnings began blaring within the cockpit.
R2 turned his head towards the frozen people behind him. He briefly reflected on the memory of his first encounter with Anakin, and then his duel with R3-S6. He let out a beep, a pained yet joyful one, as he felt himself collide with the wall. As sparks flew, his vision went black.
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That's Chapter 1 out of the way, I'm planning on getting Chapter 2 done within a few days. If you have any pointers on ways I can improve, please let me know.
Chapter 1, Freezing Slumber
20 BBY
Jedi Temple, Coruscant
When his eyes landed upon the giant carbon-freezing machine, Kenobi let out a quiet sigh. He should’ve been more aware of what padawan meant by, “I’ve got a thought about that.” The reprogrammed battle-droids should’ve set off a mental alarm, or two. Yet, he never sees his padawan's plans coming. Every time they get assigned to a mission, Kenobi silently hopes that his padawan has finally matured to the point of picking a simple straightforward plan. Yet, he is always proven wrong. Kenobi briefly considered applauding his padawan for thinking outside the box, only for his train of thought to be interrupted.
“Master?”
He turned his head to look at the man standing next to him, his padawan Anakin Skywalker.
“Nothing,” he replied as he turned his gaze back towards the machine, and began approaching with Anakin next to him. As they got closer, clone troopers Rex, Cody, Fives, and Echo joined them as they walked up a small ramp, taking them right underneath the machine. On the floor of the raised platform were seven large circles, each separated from one another by a foot.
“This is your idea?” Kenobi asked as he looked at Anakin. “Carbon-freezing?”
Anakin briefly chuckled before looking at his master with a smirk on his face. They both stopped within a circle, and faced forward.
“Hey, you wanted to shield us from the life-form scanners,” He replied with a raised brow.
Kenobi only smirked as he turned forward again, mental admitting to the claim. Maybe he should heed Master Windu’s words about giving Anakin ideas.
“Uh, are we sure this thing is safe?” Fives asked carefully as he examined the giant freezer. “I don’t want to end up as a wall decoration.”
“Try to relax”, Kenobi replied as he turned back to look at the clone. “We’ll be unfrozen as soon as we arrive."
As he turned back forward, the word soon lingered in his mind. At that moment, a Ugnaught operating the machine inputted a code, springing it to life. The two Jedi briefly looked at each other before the platform began dropping. Their visions went white, as clouds of gas shot out from the various noozles.
“Soon….”
*****
Master Plo Kloon watched as the frozen carbonite block of Obi-Wan Kenobi was moved past him, and into the separatist shuttle. He remained silent as the large hangar bay opened, and the platform the shuttle was on extended to the outside world. The craft levitated up as its leg-like landing retracted. The craft tilted nose up, and blasted off from the pad. Watching as the craft left the atmosphere, he gave his goodbye. “May the force be with you.”
*****
R2-D2 sat in front of the navigation console, with his computer interface arm connecting him to it. If his calculations were right, which they always were, arrival at Lola Sayu would occur within the next five hours. He beeped happily to himself, yet another achievement for his brilliance. After retracting the arm, he returned to the center of the cockpit, monitoring the battle-droids. A feeling of boredom overcame him, as he turned to look out the window. The passing lights of hyperspace are always enjoyable, for the first few times. Once you get used to it though, it becomes dull. R2 let out a sad beep at the fact that his master was now a living ice cube. The astromech would kill for a maintenance check. He even began to wish he had someone to mess with, preferably Threepio. Heck, he would’ve begun teasing the clankers if they weren’t required for the mission. Disappointed, he let out a small chirp. His mopping was quickly interrupted by a red flashing light. The two droids piloting the ship looked down at the button, and then turned towards the astromech.
“General?” they replied in unison as the blue lights of warp speed turned crimson red.
Letting out a screech, he inserted his interface arm into the nav console. The ship violently shook as it left warp. The shuttle began to tumble, causing one of the battle droids to fly into one of the cockipts walls. R2 sat in silence as the craft faced a giant wormhole, which was quickly consuming the shuttle. With his robotic arm moving swiftly, he tried to redirect all power to the thrusters. Just as he inputted the command, the craft shook again as electric sparks began shooting out of the various command panels. As the same droid that was tossed around the cockpit regained his footing, he noticed that his hand was on one of the button panels. “Oh no,” was his final words as a violet shock sent him to the floor, rendering the droid completely motionless.
The computer was no longer responding to commands as the craft began to tumble again. Desperation overtook R2 as he tried inputting a command in a different console, no luck. The only thing he could do was watch as darkness consumed the ship.
*****
It seemed like time had frozen still, but his inbuilt clock indicated only five minutes had passed. The darkness vanished as stars returned to view. Though the tumble was continuing, R2 was confident that the wormhole had released them, but where? His built in star chart was one of the finest, but a precise location from the ship's nav computer would have helped. A close star came to view, as the two remaining B1 units covered their eye sensors. The next thing that came to view was both reassuring, and troubling. A giant planet loomed into view, as the shuttle steadily got closer. Its surface was made up of several large continents, and vast oceans. The most noticeable point was the white cap that was located at its most northern pole, and just so happened to be getting bigger. The stricken craft began to shutter as R2 detected a spike in temperature. Knowing what was next, the droid prepared itself. Letting out a series of beeps, the two pilots looked back at the astromech.
“You want us to do what?” one of the droids asked.
R2 repeated his message, this time with more vigor. The two pilots looked at each other before returning their gaze to R2.
“Whatever you say, General,” A droid replied as he grabbed the ship's yoke. Meanwhile, R2 turned and approached the large door of the cockpit. Then, he placed his arm within the nearby connector. Aware of its lack of power, R2 felt his power reserve drop as the door slowly opened. Letting out a tired chirp, he entered the storage compartment. Examining the carbonite bricks, he was relieved that they were intact, and still had power. As the door to the cockpit closed, R2 approached a nearby console and connected into it.
The shuttle continued its descent into the atmosphere. Flames covered the craft as it streaked through the sky, steadily warping the exterior panels. The flames subsided after a few minutes, revealing the ever growing pole. Letting out a robotic sigh, R2 shuttered as the shuttle systems roared to life. Pulling on the yoke, the shuttle began leveling off into a glide. With his power draining, the lights on R2 began to flicker.
“This gonna hurt,” one of the droids replied as he braced. The other followed suit as various warnings began blaring within the cockpit.
R2 turned his head towards the frozen people behind him. He briefly reflected on the memory of his first encounter with Anakin, and then his duel with R3-S6. He let out a beep, a pained yet joyful one, as he felt himself collide with the wall. As sparks flew, his vision went black.
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That's Chapter 1 out of the way, I'm planning on getting Chapter 2 done within a few days. If you have any pointers on ways I can improve, please let me know.
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