So, as I (think) I have said before, this story is quite enjoyable and I like where this has gone and is going -well, not the environmental disaster on Earth & Luna but, to continue the totalitarian state metaphor, the Federation’s “safety culture” is basically that of the Soviet Union…it’d be nice if they had one. But I have some observations (NOT criticisms, observations).
I find it incredibly facepalm-worthy that, when faced with mutinous crews, “How dare executions be threatened, it’s barbaric!” is the response in light of the vaguely relevant fact that the Federation is in a war for its very survival. Clearly whatever oath Starfleet personnel take to the Federation and the ideas it ostensibly stands for only apply in times of ease and comfort. But, again, not really surprised.
Nechayev…eh. I’m not going to make any sarcastic comments about Russians in this thread but hoo boy. The only thing that’s disappointing is ISB didn’t get a crack at her. And maybe the full extent of the signing ceremony was a bit of gilding the lily, so to speak…yeah, much as I have issues with the canon Federation as well as here…the Empire did launch an aggressive war of conquest because they’re greedy and because Palpatine is an evil sorcerer and piece of shit the universe is better off without masquerading as a human being. Which makes me wonder if Q might remove him as a way to introduce even more chaos…but who knows.
The Empire, much as I basically despise their leadership and pretty much everything about their politics* (and the Republic before it and the Rebel Alliance for that matter) at least understand basic discipline. My beefs with them are mainly (in no particular order) a bunch of megalomaniacs with zero conscience at the helm**, an oligarchy that really does more or less play Game of Thrones IN SPACE***, and a military sense that, when it comes down to it, really isn’t that good compared to, say, NATO militaries in real life****.
Now, hilariously, a few of these comments do apply to my preferred fandoms (full disclosure, they’re Babylon 5’s Earth Alliance and BattleTech’s Federated Suns), but when this hits, it’s the exception rather than the rule. Whereas with both the Federation and the Empire/Republic/Alliance, it’s the rule.
But.
What really attracted me to this story is that this isn’t going to be a “‘Perfect’ Communist Utopia” or “Empire Uber Alles”.
Because that’s not the tasking Q gave Jaenera. He gave her a tasking to seize this opportunity to turn both universes upside down and build something…new. Something completely unpredictable. A real new order, not Sheev Palpatine’s latest space-magic-inspired megalomania.
And I’m genuinely looking forward to seeing where this goes.
*-Mainly the misogyny and human supremacy, plus the whole “freely commit mass murder on the of a few psychopaths who enjoy doing this stuff on a whim.” Like, yeah, the Federation has its problems but on the other hand, saying “Fuck this, I’m out” and just moving on generally results in the Federation going “Bye Felicia.” It’s only if you start actually trying to dig into the truth of what the Federation really is when Section 31 comes knocking. The Empire, however…Palpatihe and his Merry Men will hunt your ass down and make an example of you for daring to insult the Greatest Man In All of History and the Force.
**-Palpatine, Tarkin, Vader, Motti, Isard (Ysanne at least, don’t know much about her old man other than she engineered his downfall), etc. The rank and file…yeah they serve a cause but that’s kind of being products of their environment. Namely the crap that went on with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, the Clone Wars, etc, but…the former are all embodiments of evil and either man-children given absolute power (Palpatine to a larger degree, Vader very much), people who were horribly abused and turned into abusers themselves (Tarkin and I suspect Isard, but not sure), or just the insane admiral types trying to get above themselves (Motti). Not that the Rebel Alliance was much better: there was a slice that were outright terrorists, and the Republic was basically the Roman Republic IN SPACE with the level of backstabbing, oligarchs, and greed (with the occasional idealist in the mix). Exactly how the more idealistic members planned to avoid that part was clearly never thought out based on the sequel trilogy…and the crap that really set in after the original generation moved on in Legends canon. Or the different but equal crap in the sequel trilogy…
***-I suppose this rolls into the above point, but pretty much everyone falls into this, even, say, Leia Organa, who (much like dear old dad) doesn’t really consider the consequences of her actions and the impacts felt by, well, any poor schmuck caught under the wreck of a cruiser crashing down through atmosphere. Luke, on the other hand, having thought he was one of those poor schmucks until fate/the Force intervened, seems to have at least considered that much.
****-There was some commentary about this, basically how, especially with the assault on Hoth,the tactics used by both sides pretty much made no sense…basically self-propelled artillery and light infantry plus giant ass walkers that turned out to have a glaring weakness in their…well, giant legs…plus only using seven warships to “blockade” an entire planet.
Fortunately or unfortunately, our protagonist is not only quite competent but has picked several equally competent personnel to at least clear the rot.