Giving Up (Avatar: The Last Airbender)

The Waterbending Scroll

Fulcon

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“Fire Nation, Earth Nation, Water Nation!” A caller was shouting, standing outside a boat. “So long as bargains are your inclination, you’re welcome here! Don’t be shy, come on by!”

Zuko looked at the ship. In truth, he had recognized it immediately as a pirate ship when he had first set up a base in the merchants pier. It became even more obvious when he had met the Captain and spoke with him for a minute. But if anyone would have Water Bending resources, it would be them and now that they’ve returned from their...high risk trading trip, he was hoping they’d have something he was actually looking for.

So, the Prince stepped up ramp and entered the shop.

At that second, Zuko froze and so did the other three occupants of the store.

There, standing right in front of him, was the Avatar. A young boy whose bald head and blue arrow tattoos made him stand out like a sore thumb. Also in the store were two water tribals, a boy and a girl of similar age.

The Avatar and his traveling companions.

They were similarly staring at him, in his red, Fire Nation armor and topknot. The tribal boy was reaching for a weapon, the girl for a water skin at her belt. The monk was also slowly backing away into a defensive stance, his staff pointed forward.

Zuko immediately brought his hands up in a peaceful gesture. “Wait, wait, wait, whoa. Hold on a second.”

This stopped the Avatar from causing a windstorm in the shop and thankfully, the other two from drawing their weapons, whatever they’d be.

“You didn’t see me, I didn’t see you,” Zuko said, pointing two fingers at his eyes and then at them. “Deal?”

The three of them looked at each other and then back at him. The Avatar nodded. “Deal.”

Zuko let out a tense breath and made took one look at the right wall, it having been lined with scrolls. He could feel the Water Girl slowly and carefully circle out of his way as he did and they started whispering...but Zuko could hear them quite well.

“Aang, are you sure about this?” The girl asked in desperation. “He’s Fire Nation!”

“Let’s just slowly back out of here and leave before anyone else sees us,” The Avatar replied, their whispers.

Zuko honestly felt relieved. The sooner they left town, the more likely it was they could get out without his men seeing them and he could go back to pretending like they didn’t exist. So he began to peacefully peruse the large collection of scrolls and immediately one caught his eye, the symbol of the water tribe scratched into the end. He grabbed it and opened it.

His eyes went wide and he immediately turned to the Captain who was manning the counter. “How much for the Waterbending Scroll?”

Zuko noted with an uneasy feeling that the group of three had stopped moving just before they had exited the ship.

“We have a buyer in the Earth Kingdom already lined up,” The Captain responded. “But if you can cough up fifty gold pieces?”

“I’ll give you thirty,” Zuko immediately said, walking up to the counter and pulling a string-full of coins out of his wallet and laying them on the counter.

“I’m afraid I’m not haggling on this one.” The Captain’s mouth pressed into a fine line. “It’s fifty gold pieces or nothing.”

“Oh, you’re being serious.” Zuko blinked and pulled out another string full...then another. “Here’s fifty and an extra five if you don’t tell anyone who bought it from you.”

“A pleasure doing business with you, your highness,” The captain said, taking the coins. “Your gold is always welcome here.”

Zuko gave a small bow and tucked the scroll into his armor, walking right past the frozen Avatar and water tribals that were just standing in the door.

---

“You’re crazy,” Sokka told them. “No, no, you’re insane.”

“Sokka, that was a water bending scroll!” Katara pointed out with a harsh glare. “Like it or not, Aang needs to learn Waterbending and he needs to do it as fast as possible.”

“Yeah, and he can do that at the North Pole,” Sokka argued back. “You just want this scroll so you can learn Waterbending as fast as possible!”

“She does have to learn it too,” Aang reminded him from his lotus position on top of a rock.

“Well yeah, but she can do that at the North Pole too,” Sokka rebuffed dismissively. “We already restocked on all our supplies and we know the Fire Nation is all over that town. So we should do the smart thing and run. Besides, we couldn’t afford that scroll anyway!”

“We could’ve stolen it,” Katara grumbled, folding her arms and looking down the river they had set up camp besides.

“And have that entire ship of pirates come after us?” Sokka asked, exasperated. “Then the Fire Nation would be guaranteed to find us and we’d have Zhao on our tail again!”

Aang took a deep breath, and let it out. “Sokka, we need to grab that scroll.”

“Why?” Sokka asked.

“Because,” Aang began. “I have airbending. You have your weapons. Katara has nothing and that puts her at risk.”

“Well, Katara’s not supposed to be fighting anyway,” Sokka argued with a glare. “She’s a girl.”

“Oh, so that means that I can’t-” Katara began.

“Katara, please,” Aang cut in sharply with a pleading expression. “Let me finish.”

Katara just folded her arms and glared at her brother.

Aang took another meditative breath. “Sokka, it doesn’t matter if she’s a girl. She’s out here. With us. And because she’s out here with us, she is going to be fighting and if she doesn’t know enough to defend herself, she’s a target. I know you don’t want that.”

Sokka fell quiet for a moment. “Can’t we just, I don’t know, leave her back at camp?”

“They can just attack the camp,” Aang replied with a decidedly unimpressed frown. “Then they’ve got Katara as a hostage.”

Sokka let out a loud, irritated groan. “Fine. We’ll get you both the scroll.”

“Thank you Sokka!” Katara beamed, rushing forward to give Sokka a hug.

After an awkward moment, Sokka returned it. “You’re welcome.”

After they embraced and let go, Sokka turned to the both of them. “Now, did either of you see where that Fire Nation guy went after he bought the scroll?”

Both Aang and Katara shook their heads.

“No, he kind of just disappeared after he left the ship,” Katara responded.

“The pirate captain called him ‘your highness’,” Aang pointed out. “Maybe he can help us find him?”

“That’s a good place to start,” Sokka replied. “But we’ll have to be really sneaky now that we know that town is full of fire nation. The best time would be to head over there tomorrow before they get busy.”

---

“Uncle, you’ll never guess what I found,” Zuko said with a grin as he stepped into the office. He took the scroll out from his armor and unfurled it before his Uncle.

“Ah, excellent!” Iroh beamed. “You’ll be able to start the next part of your education, then.”

“Words cannot describe how excited I am,” Zuko replied, turning the scroll around and beaming. Sure, it was just a scroll of forms with none of the water bending philosophy that really interested Zuko, but the forms could be enough as a starter. He didn’t really start to understand and apply the philosophy of the Air Nomads until he had started actually practicing their forms, so the Prince was hoping the Water would be the same way. “You said you learned how to redirect lightning from watching water benders, right?”

“That’s right,” Iroh slowly nodded, his hands tucked away in their sleeves. “But what else did you find over there?”

“Why do you ask?” Zuko asked, his smile turning into a frown.

“You look troubled,” Iroh answered.

Zuko might’ve gotten better at disguising his tells. He might’ve started to care a little less about being honest. But for him, there was no lying to Uncle Iroh. They simply knew each other too well. He looked back towards the office door, then locked it. With a breath, he spoke the truth. “Uncle, I met the Avatar.”

“You what?” Iroh looked stunned.

He recounted the brief meeting in the store, where a quick call for a truce had prevented the place from erupting into violence.

“And then I left with the scroll,” Zuko finished.

“Prince Zuko,” Iroh began, adopting his most serious expression. “This is a once in a lifetime opportunity.”

“Don’t say it, Uncle,” Zuko shook his head. “Please do not say what I know you’re about to say.”

“This is your chance for a new life,” Iroh continued.

Zuko closed his eyes, then opened them again.

“I am being serious, Nephew,” Iroh said. “You could join him. He needs a firebending instructor and you need a new life, a life away from the Fire Nation.”

“Right but I also don’t need to have the entire Fire Nation wanting to immolate me for treason,” Zuko pointed out. “The whole point of getting a new life is to slip out quietly and disappear. Not put myself out, publicly for all to see, that I am a rebellious prince with no loyalty toward his nation anymore.”

“Zuko, you need a purpose in life,” Iroh rebutted. “As much as you might think differently, looking for a purpose is not a purpose! A firebender needs a strong root, in bending and in life and you’re floating on your back in the middle of the ocean.”

“It’s been nice,” Zuko replied, nodding with a smug grin.

“Your Mother is worried,” Iroh stated with a concerned frown. “She’s worried that you’ve stopped caring about your nation, your people, even your own men.”

“I mean, she’s right,” Zuko replied sheepishly. “The only thing left to do is join the white lotus and head off to Ba Sing Se.”

“You have the opportunity to help repair the damage done by Firelord Sozin, remove your father from power and restore peace to the world,” Iroh stated with all the power and authority that he had as Prince of the Fire Nation. “And your only thought is of how you can most efficiently disappear.”

“I mean, you have that power too,” Zuko pointed out. “Since you think this is such a good idea and Father already thinks you’re a traitor in the making, why don’t you join the Avatar? He needs a Firebending instructor and you’re the greatest master I know.”

“That is not my destiny,” Iroh replied.

“Well, it certainly isn’t mine,” Zuko replied with a shrug. “And if it is, I’ll trade you.”

---

The trip back into town was really, really, tense. For one, the trio were now seeing Fire Nation soldiers everywhere. Or at least it felt like everywhere. They weren’t wearing armor, they were in disguise, but Fire Nation royalty was apparently present which meant that the pier would be swarming with soldiers.

As Sokka had pointed out, the pirate had known the prince that had shown up, which meant that he was living here and that the Merchant’s Pier was always filled with Fire Nation soldiers. They hadn’t seen a Fire Nation ship in port, but it was probably hidden somewhere. The thought that they had Fire Nation eyes on them the entire time made the hairs on the back of their neck stand up as they walked through the street a second time.

Sure, Aang was now wearing a cloak to hide his airbending tattoos, but that wouldn’t do much if the Fire Nation already knew they were here.

The ship, thankfully, was exactly where they had left it, with the crier in front telling everyone what great bargains they’d get if they shopped there. They walked in and, watching their backs, were relieved when no one followed them inside.

“Ahoy, Captain!” Aang said with a pirate accent. “Glad to see you’re still ashore!”

The captain chuckled. “Well, I’m glad to see my three favorite customers come back! I was a little worried you were spooked forever.”

“We wanted to ask about the Fire Nation guy that came through here,” Sokka said, directly to the point as usual. “You called him ‘your highness’?”

“Oh, yes, the man who left me five gold pieces for no reason at all,” The Captain replied, stroking his chin thoughtfully. “I’m afraid my memory has completely failed me but maybe you could jog it.”

“Hows about a copper piece?” Aang asked.

The Captain laughed, long and hard. “No.”

“Hows about two copper pieces?” Aang pressed, his grin getting strained.

“It’s not as funny the second time,” The Captain’s mirth disappeared, replaced by cold steel.

“There’s got to be something!” Aang said with a pout.

The Captain glared. “If you’re not gonna by something, shove off! You’re crowding the boutique.”

With a groan of defeat, they left the shop.

---

“They’re coming for the scroll, aren’t they?” Zuko asked, frowning in annoyance at the scroll of forms.

“I would imagine so,” Iroh said.

“Well, I’m not ready to part ways with it yet,” Zuko replied with a glare. “Uncle, if you wouldn’t mind telling Lieutenant Jee that I want patrols sweeping the town? Get the men in armor. Have them make a sweep then report back with what they’ve found, even if it’s nothing. Get them in armor.”

“You’re trying to capture him, now?” Iroh asked, an eyebrow raising in curiosity.

“No,” Zuko shook his head. “There is no way any of my men can catch the Avatar.”

“Then what are you planning?” Iroh asked, stroking his beard.

“Just something to get the Avatar out of my hair.”

---

The three dove into an alleyway when they saw them.

Two fire nation soldiers, marching down the street at a brisk pace. They were hefting spears and scanning the roads in front of them.

Sokka turned to Aang and Katara and whispered. “Follow them.”

They started to trail the pair as inconspicuously as they could, checking stands, joining conversations for a few brief moments, anything to stay out of the pairs direct sight.

The trio’s patience was rewarded when the pair arrived at a warehouse after a half an hour of trailing them, passing a second patrol that was coming out. They hid in an alleyway, crouched in the shadows behind a barrel that had been sealed with ropes.

“The Fire Nation has a base inside the warehouse,” Sokka said. “I’ll bet you anything that’s where they’re keeping your scroll.”

“Yeah, but how are we going to get in?” Aang asked, briefly peering over the barrel. “That place is crawling with them.”

“We can’t just walk in the front door,” Katara pointed out. “Hey, there he is!”

Sokka and Aang looked over the barrel where Katara was pointed and saw, walking toward the warehouse on the far side of the block, was the Fire Bender they had met earlier. His full hair and topknot was disguised by the cloak and hood he wore, but there was no disguising that old scar. He walked behind the warehouse and disappeared.

“Where’d he go?” Aang asked, jumping on the barrel and taking off to the town rooftops.

“Aang, wait!” Sokka tried to call, quietly, but the monk was gone.

With a groan, Sokka and Katara both ran across the street into the alleyway and took a hard left. When they saw no guards watching the back alleyway, the two ran across the street and found Aang, standing behind the warehouse, scratching his head.

“Aang, what are you doing?” Katara asked. “Those guys could’ve seen you and then we’d have been in a load of trouble!”

“Sorry Katara,” Aang replied sheepishly, rubbing the back of his head. “But look! The scar guy disappeared over here somehow.”

“He disappeared, huh?” Sokka asked, stroking his chin. He walked forward, examining the back of the warehouse they had found, carefully looking over every inch of the back. “Huh. I think there’s a secret entrance here.”

“A secret entrance?” Aang asked, raising his eyebrow.

“How do you know?” Katara asked.

“Look,” Sokka said, pointing to the wall. “The boards are mismatched here; they cut a hole in the wall.”

Aang and Katara leaned in and got a closer look.

“Hey, I see it!” Katara said in surprise.

“Oh, really?” Aang asked with a frown. “I mean, yup! I see it too!”

“Now we just need to figure out how to open it,” Sokka said. He looked up and around and saw a nail sticking up out of the board. He reached up and gave it a light tap, feeling it wiggle. “Aha! They disguised the switch as this nail sticking out.”

“Okay, so we go in through the secret entrance, sneak around the base, look for the scroll, and get out,” Aang said with a nod. “I think we should come back later tonight when they’re asleep and that scar guy’s not right there.”

“Good idea.”

---

Night came. Under the guidance of starlight, the three of them returned to the warehouse, carefully sneaking through the alleyways to avoid alerting any guards, armored or otherwise. Sokka found the nail once again and pressed it in with his thumb, causing the hidden door to slide up into the wall.

The three waited tensely for it to finish opening and when it was done, a small crawlspace was revealed. With a nod exchanged between the three of them, they crawled inside, entering the base.

Sokka had brought a lantern and once they were all inside, Sokka lit it with a pair of spark rocks.

They had arrived in some sort of war room. In the center was a massive table with a map of the world drawn on it. On the walls were scrolls upon scrolls of information, troop movements and communication. Each of them were drawn directly to a trio of drawings of their faces pinned up on the wall.

“Okay, so this guy is hunting for us,” Aang said with a gulp. “I wonder why he didn’t try to fight us in the store?”

“Probably didn’t want to fight three on one,” Sokka replied quietly. “Let’s focus on finding the scroll and get out of here. I feel like we’re being watched.”

---

Zuko had hidden in the shadows of a cabinet the second he heard his secret entrance opening. The crew had been ordered to never use the secret entrance and they were all accounted for. So he felt more than a little annoyed when the Avatar and his friends crawled through his secret entrance.

Of course, that meant that they had seen him use said entrance earlier. Sloppy, sloppy.

But he watched them. The water tribe boy was immediately taken in by the map in the center. Given it had fort locations, the layout of the blockade, the location of the Gates of Azulon and a ton of other markings for the Fire Nation’s internal defenses, it only made sense. Zuko stifled a chuckle as the boy’s eyes widened and he started sputtering as he realized what he had and immediately started making a copy with charcoal and a piece of parchment.

The girl and the Avatar started searching his office.

Zuko knew what they were looking for, but they wouldn’t find it; the scroll was clutched in Zuko’s hand.

“Where is it?” Katara growled quietly, looking through cabinet and drawer alike.

“This seems like a war room,” Sokka said quietly, still marking his parchment up with rapid, nervous energy. “They might not keep the scroll here.”

“Then where would they keep it?” Aang asked.

“We’d have to look at the rest of the base to find it,” Sokka said. “Just give me a minute.”

If they went into the base, it was likely that the rest of the men would find them and then they’d have an actual fight and Zuko would actually have to start chasing them and, from how obviously the two tribals were untrained, it would be pathetically easy for his men to capture them and from there, the Avatar would either run, which Zuko doubted, or would stick and get captured himself and then...Zuko would be on his way back to the Fire Nation.

The thought made Zuko’s stomach churn.

So, deliberately stepping so his steel boots clanged against the warehouse floor, he walked into the light. Each of the three froze in their place and slowly turned to look where Zuko was standing.

“Looking for this?” Zuko asked, hefting the scroll up in his fingers. “I made a copy already, so you can have it.”

That shook them out of their funk.

“Wait, seriously?” The girl asked with a confused, nonplussed expression. “You’re just giving it to us?”

“Yup.”

“Just like that?”

“Uh huh.”

“Wait, why?” The boy asked, his eyes narrowing in suspicion.

“Because I want the three of you out of the pier and out of my hair,” Zuko replied with a frown. “Right now.”

“Why?” Aang asked with a frown, something telling him that he needed to stay in this exact spot right now or things will go bad. “Who are you, really?”

Zuko blinked. “I am Prince Zuko. I’m an exile, tasked with capturing you so that you don’t cause the Fire Nation to lose the war. You?”

“I’m Aang,” The Avatar introduced himself. “And this is Sokka and Katara.”

“Nice to meet you,” Zuko said. “Now if you could go? Now? Please?”

“Wait, if you’re supposed to be hunting us down,” Sokka started, putting the pieces together. “Why do you want us to leave?”

“Do you want me to capture you?” Zuko asked with a frown.

“No, no, no,” Aang said, shaking his head. “We’ll just take a scroll and leave.”

“Thank you,” Zuko replied, tossing the scroll to Katara. “Catch.”

She caught it and opened it, her face splitting into a massive smile as she looked at the forms written thereon.

“Now if you could all go back the way you came from, that’d be great,” Zuko said with a point toward the secret entrance. “Before the rest of the base wakes up and sees me chatting with you.”

“Wait a second,” Aang said. “You said you were exiled?”

Zuko groaned and barked out his response. “Yes! And you’re threatening to put an end to it just by breathing! Go! Away!”

“Why don’t you want to go home?” Aang asked.

“Because home is a den of jackal-vipers and being separated from them was the best thing that ever happened to me,” Zuko replied flatly.

“And you don’t want to help the Fire Nation win the war?” Aang asked.

“No.”

Sokka’s head turned in place. “Why not?”

“They made their bed with dragons,” Zuko sniffed. “Not my fault if they get eaten.”

The three looked directly at each other with varying degrees of surprise.

“Look, I know you want us to go,” Aang began. “But I can’t help but feel there’s a really good reason we’ve met, and I can’t leave until I figure out why.”

“Sure you can,” Zuko pointed out. “Just move your legs, crawl through the exit and you’re home free.”

“He’s got a point,” Sokka replied.

“No,” Aang shook his head. “Look, you don’t want to go back home. But if you’re not trying to go back home, then what are you doing?”

“Seeing the world,” Zuko answered. “Trying to learn a bit more about bending arts outside of Firebending, you know.”

“Really?” Aang asked. “Neat!”

“So that’s why you needed the Waterbending scroll,” Katara said, enlightenment painting itself across her face. “You actually wanted to learn about Waterbending!”

“Yup, and I’ve got a copy so you can just take that and go,” Zuko said, gesturing for them to be gone with a wave.

“Well, we’re going to the North Pole,” Aang began.

“No.”

“And you said you wanted to see the world...”

“No.”

He had a point.

“And you don’t want to help the Fire Nation,” Aang pressed on in spite of the Prince’s flat refusals. “So...why don’t you come with us?”

“Aang have you lost your mind?” Sokka hollered in alarm.



Everyone, including Zuko, shushed him. Sure, the office was supposedly soundproof, but it was the dead of night and there were quite a few sailors sleeping here.

“I’m serious!” Sokka said, appropriately quiet.

“And I agree with him,” Zuko nodded. “We don’t really know each other. For all you know, I’m laying a trap for you right now. Or I could lose my nerve after a few days and turn you all in. Or...”

“But you won’t,” Aang replied.

“Sure I will,” Zuko nodded. “Guarantee it.”

“You don’t want to go home, remember?” Aang pointed out with a raised eyebrow. “I know the feeling. You want to learn about the other bending styles. I’m the...the Last Airbender.”

“I already know about Airbending,” Zuko cut in flatly.

“How?” Aang asked with a deep frown.

“We found this scroll in the Southern Air Temple,” Zuko replied. “It was big and had everything on it.”

“You found the big one?” Aang asked, looking shocked.

“We had to take a pickax to the little compartment it was stuck in, but yeah,” Zuko said with a wistful smile. “Greatest treasure I ever found.”

“Another monk and I hid that scroll away as a prank,” Aang said, his mouth agape. “It survived Sozin’s Comet?”

Zuko’s smile turned to a frown and he looked at the floor. “Yeah. It did. Sorry.”

“Sorry for what?” Aang asked, then his eyes lit up in realization. “Oh. Oh. It’s okay.”

“Did you want it back?” Zuko asked quietly.

“Please?” Aang asked.

“Sure,” Zuko shrugged, stepping forward toward the safe beneath the map table he had installed. With a turns turns of the dial, it was open, and the large, ornate scroll with jade handles was lifted out. “It helped me out. A lot. So...thank you, Avatar. For hiding it away for me.”

“You’re welcome,” Aang said, gingerly taking the scroll and beholding it with reverence. Sokka and Katara looked at it with great interest. “But are you sure you don’t want to come?”

“Why would you even want me along?” Zuko asked with a frown.

“Well,” Aang started, tucking the scroll. “I need someone to teach me firebending and you’re the first person in the Fire Nation I’ve met that actively doesn’t want them to win the war.”

“After what Sozin did to the Nomads?” Zuko asked. “Yeah, I didn’t want anything to do with that.”

“And the rest of the Fire Nation does?” Katara asked with a disapproving frown.

“I didn’t figure out that the Nomad’s didn’t have an army until I reread that scroll a couple of times,” Zuko explained. “The only thing I had ever been taught was that they had the most powerful army in the entire world.”

“Yeah, no.” Aang shook his head. “Nope, no army. We love and respect life too much.”

“I know that,” Zuko said, folding his arms.

“So will you come with us?” Aang asked.

“Don’t your friends get a say in this?” Zuko rejoined with a glare.

“Oh, uh...” Aang stopped, having almost forgotten that he was traveling with two others. “Come on, back me up. I really feel like he needs to come with us. I need someone to teach me firebending and he seems perfect for the job!”

“I don’t know Aang,” Katara started, looking at the Avatar with concern and at Zuko with suspicion. “He really seems like he doesn’t want to go.”

“Listen to her,” Zuko encouraged. “She’s smart.”

“Can you stop agreeing with me?” Katara asked, looking a little perturbed. “It’s freaking me out!”

Zuko just shrugged and said nothing else.

“Besides, it’s not like he’d be welcome at the North Pole,” Sokka replied. “They might listen to you because you’re the Avatar, but I think they’ll draw the line at letting a Firebender walk free.”

“But he’d be my Firebending Instructor,” Aang pointed out. “They’d have to make an exception for that.”

“No,” Zuko shook his head. “Anyway, this conversation is done, you’ve got your scrolls, so I’m going to bed. Good night.”

Zuko found himself frozen, however, when the Office filled with a white light.

“Now hold on for one moment, young man.”

Zuko slowly turned around and found himself face to face with Avatar Roku. Sokka and Katara both had retreated back a couple steps, their hands raised in a defensive position.

“It is the destiny of the Avatar to master each of the four elements in turn,” Roku intoned, leaning forward. “And that includes Fire.”

“I’m sure he can find someone else to teach him,” Zuko replied, folding his arms. “I’m not the only Fire National whose decided the war can burn. Jeong Jeong comes to mind.”

“But it is your destiny to be the Avatar’s instructor,” Roku stated with every ounce of authority being the Avatar brought him. “And as such, you must teach him Fire Bending, so that he can bring balance back to the World.”

“Can’t you do it?” Zuko asked with ancient avatar with a bored expression.

“It is not my place to do so,” Roku replied.

“But you can do it.”

“I cannot.”

“Why not?”

“It is difficult for me to contact Aang.”

“But you’re doing it now.”

“This is perhaps one of the most important moments in his journey,” Roku explained testily. “And you are defying destiny and the spirits that have watched over you from your birth.”

“Well, him learning Fire Bending is really important and you can show up whenever you like,” Zuko replied. “So saying ‘it’s hard’ isn’t going to excuse you from doing your duty and teaching your current life firebending.”

“I will not always be here for Avatar Aang to call upon,” Roku replied. “To have him rely on me would be to confine the Avatar to places of spiritual energy and in so doing, would prevent him performing his duties throughout the world.”

“I wasn’t aware my base was a place of spiritual energy,” Zuko said with a bored expression on his face.

“This is a special occasion.” Roku was getting visibly angry. “Again, you are defying destiny. You are required to teach the Avatar the element of Fire so that he can restore the world to balance.”

“No.”

But through his petulance, Zuko had to admit he had a point.

Roku blinked. “Prince Zuko, was it not the massacre of the Air Nomad’s that opened your eyes to what our beloved nation has become?”

“Yeah, that doesn’t mean I want anything to do with it,” Zuko replied with a shrug. “If I join forces with the Avatar, I lose my ship, my crew and my Father’s coin.”

“And you will gain the chance to help make things right,” Roku replied.

Zuko tossed that thought around in his head, frowning but unable to say anything. It was at that moment he became very uncomfortably aware of the feeling that Avatar Aang and Avatar Roku were right and he didn’t like it one bit.

“I will leave you to make your decision, Prince Zuko,” Roku said. “The consequences of which, good or bad, will rest on your head.”

He was gone, leaving in his place a dazed Aang.

Zuko glared at them. “Okay, is he done?”

Katara moved to steady hand, her hands on his arms. “I think Roku is gone.”

“Good,” Zuko nodded then he frowned.

There was a knock at the door.

Zuko frowned. “Hide. Now.”

The three scrambled as Zuko moved to open the door.

“Prince Zuko,” it was Lieutenant Jee. “Is everything alright? We heard some strange noises coming from your office.”

“Yes, Lieutenant,” Prince Zuko replied. “Everything is fine. Now. We just got a visit from a hostile spirit, but I handled it. Tell the Men I want extra stock on salt in the morning. I don’t expect another visit but we need to be careful.”

“Yes, your highness,” Lieutenant Jee bowed.

“Dismissed,” Zuko said.

The Lieutenant bowed and left, leaving Zuko to close the door.

The trio emerged from their hiding places.

“Why do you want salt?” Sokka asked.

“Makes barriers against hostile spirits,” Zuko replied with a shrug. “Makes it easier to deal with them.”

“Really?” Sokka blinked. “Good to know.”

“So are you coming with us?” Aang asked, leaning on his staff a little bit too much.

Zuko groaned. “Just tell me one thing.”

“Sure,” Aang said.

Zuko pointed to a map pinned up on the wall with a line going from the south pole and stretching up in a zing-zagging pattern. “How, exactly, are do you decide where to stop or not?”

Aang blinked owlishly at the map, then got a wide smile. “Well, that is where we like to ride the giant hog monkeys. On Kyoshi Island, that’s where we’d have ridden the giant elephant koi and-”

“Wait, wait, wait,” Zuko stopped him. “You mean to tell me you’ve been taking all those detours for fun?”

“Yeah.” Aang nodded. “Why else would we?”

Zuko blinked. “To throw off pursuit?”

“Oh,” Aang got a thoughtful look on his face. “I guess it does that too, huh?”

That settled it.

Zuko didn’t breathe for a second, then he threw his hands up in the air. “Alright, fine. I guess I’m in. If you’ll have me.”

Aang looked at Katara with the best puppy-dog eyes he could muster.

“Well,” Katara started to buckle. “He did get an endorsement from Roku. So...sure. I guess.”

“Sure. Fine,” Sokka leaned forward, pointing at him with his boomerang. “But I’ve got my eye on you.”

“Well, I guess I should pack my bags,” Zuko took a breath, stretching. “And grab some blasting jelly.”

“Why do you need blasting jelly?” Aang asked.

“Because if I’m going with you,” Zuko started, making for the door. “The rest of the Fire Nation is going to think I’m dead.”

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Uncle Iroh,

This letter is going to come as a shock.

But I did what you suggested.

I joined the Avatar.

They snuck into the base through my secret entrance, looking for the Waterbending Scroll. We talked for a while. A long while. Aang felt like I was supposed to be his Fire Bending instructor and Avatar Roku, who felt the exact same way.

You probably found this letter after the explosion. While it looks like I’m dead, I’m not. This is a golden opportunity for me, just like you said. To see the world without the crew holding me down and more importantly, to make things right. So I rigged a few capsules of blasting jelly and timed our departure so it looked like we got attacked by the Avatar.

The Avatar is responsible for me leaving, so it’s not entirely a lie.

I only ask that you let everyone think I’m dead. Don’t tell anyone that I turned traitor. Don’t let anyone know. Because, as much as I don’t want anything to do with them, I do care about them. Most of them. Everyone except Father.

You could probably tell Mother, though.

I found a purpose, even if I’ve got doubts about the whole thing. If this is the right thing to do, I’m sure it’ll work out. If not, I can find something else.

Lastly, I wanted to say thank you. Thank you for always believing in me. For teaching me and striving to help me become better. For the games of Pai Sho and teaching how to prepare tea. Thank you for being the Father that Ozai never was.

~Prince Zuko

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Author’s Notes: I hate this chapter. I hate everything about it. Do you guys have any idea how many of my plans this sets on fire? This chapter is dancing on the funeral pyre of my plans and it’s ticking me off!

Well, okay, all isn’t technically lost. To be honest, I had planned on Zuko being presumed dead anyway but I didn’t plan on him joining the Avatar until
The Crossroads of Destiny. Why did I have to listen to the characters? They just disobey me! Curse you, characters! Curse you!

Shout out goes out too Melden V, Anders Kronquist, Ray Tony Song, Volkogluk, Aaron Bjornson, iolande, Martin Auguado, Julio, Hackerham, Tim Collins-Squire, Maben00, Ventari, PbookR, Seij, ChristobalAlvarez, Apperatus, EPiCJB19, Seeking Raven, Handwran
and Russel Beatrous! Your continued support makes all of this possible!

Until the next time!

~Fulcon
 
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Let them go.
Founder
The Avatar and his traveling companions.
Dread it, run from it, Destiny still arrives. Won't stop Zuko from refusing anyway.

“Because,” Aang began. “I have airbending. You have your weapons. Katara has nothing and that puts her at risk.”

“Well, Katara’s not supposed to be fighting anyway,” Sokka argued with a glare. “She’s a girl.”

“Oh, so that means that I can’t-” Katara began.

“Katara, please,” Aang cut in sharply with a pleading expression. “Let me finish.”

Katara just folded her arms and glared at her brother.

Aang took another meditative breath. “Sokka, it doesn’t matter if she’s a girl. She’s out here. With us. And because she’s out here with us, she is going to be fighting and if she doesn’t know enough to defend herself, she’s a target. I know you don’t want that.”

Sokka fell quiet for a moment. “Can’t we just, I don’t know, leave her back at camp?”

“They can just attack the camp,” Aang replied with a decidedly unimpressed frown. “Then they’ve got Katara as a hostage.”

Sokka let out a loud, irritated groan. “Fine. We’ll get you both the scroll.”
Ah, Sokka is starting to grow.

“Sorry Katara,” Aang replied sheepishly, rubbing the back of his head. “But look! The scar guy disappeared over here somehow.”

“He disappeared, huh?” Sokka asked, stroking his chin. He walked forward, examining the back of the warehouse they had found, carefully looking over every inch of the back. “Huh. I think there’s a secret entrance here.”

“A secret entrance?” Aang asked, raising his eyebrow.

“How do you know?” Katara asked.

“Look,” Sokka said, pointing to the wall. “The boards are mismatched here; they cut a hole in the wall.”

Aang and Katara leaned in and got a closer look.

“Hey, I see it!” Katara said in surprise.

“Oh, really?” Aang asked with a frown. “I mean, yup! I see it too!”

“Now we just need to figure out how to open it,” Sokka said. He looked up and around and saw a nail sticking up out of the board. He reached up and gave it a light tap, feeling it wiggle. “Aha! They disguised the switch as this nail sticking out.”
I like this part. Can't quite articulate why, but I think it really shows Sokka's intellect and observation skills.

But he watched them. The water tribe boy was immediately taken in by the map in the center. Given it had fort locations, the layout of the blockade, the location of the Gates of Azulon and a ton of other markings for the Fire Nation’s internal defenses, it only made sense. Zuko stifled a chuckle as the boy’s eyes widened and he started sputtering as he realized what he had and immediately started making a copy with charcoal and a piece of parchment.
Sokka would be better off just taking the map, seeing as they already intend to steal something. I guess they grabbed the plans when they left the place with Zuko.

“Aang have you lost your mind?” Sokka hollered in alarm.

Everyone, including Zuko, shushed him. Sure, the office was supposedly soundproof, but it was the dead of night and there were quite a few sailors sleeping here.
Heh, yeah, I can see that scene animated in the actual series.

Zuko found himself frozen, however, when the Office filled with a white light.

“Now hold on for one moment, young man.”

Zuko slowly turned around and found himself face to face with Avatar Roku. Sokka and Katara both had retreated back a couple steps, their hands raised in a defensive position.

“It is the destiny of the Avatar to master each of the four elements in turn,” Roku intoned, leaning forward. “And that includes Fire.”

“I’m sure he can find someone else to teach him,” Zuko replied, folding his arms. “I’m not the only Fire National whose decided the war can burn. Jeong Jeong comes to mind.”

“But it is your destiny to be the Avatar’s instructor,” Roku stated with every ounce of authority being the Avatar brought him. “And as such, you must teach him Fire Bending, so that he can bring balance back to the World.”

“Can’t you do it?” Zuko asked with ancient avatar with a bored expression.

“It is not my place to do so,” Roku replied.

“But you can do it.”

“I cannot.”

“Why not?”

“It is difficult for me to contact Aang.”

“But you’re doing it now.”

“This is perhaps one of the most important moments in his journey,” Roku explained testily. “And you are defying destiny and the spirits that have watched over you from your birth.”

“Well, him learning Fire Bending is really important and you can show up whenever you like,” Zuko replied. “So saying ‘it’s hard’ isn’t going to excuse you from doing your duty and teaching your current life firebending.”

“I will not always be here for Avatar Aang to call upon,” Roku replied. “To have him rely on me would be to confine the Avatar to places of spiritual energy and in so doing, would prevent him performing his duties throughout the world.”

“I wasn’t aware my base was a place of spiritual energy,” Zuko said with a bored expression on his face.

“This is a special occasion.” Roku was getting visibly angry. “Again, you are defying destiny. You are required to teach the Avatar the element of Fire so that he can restore the world to balance.”

“No.”

But through his petulance, Zuko had to admit he had a point.

Roku blinked. “Prince Zuko, was it not the massacre of the Air Nomad’s that opened your eyes to what our beloved nation has become?”

“Yeah, that doesn’t mean I want anything to do with it,” Zuko replied with a shrug. “If I join forces with the Avatar, I lose my ship, my crew and my Father’s coin.”

“And you will gain the chance to help make things right,” Roku replied.

Zuko tossed that thought around in his head, frowning but unable to say anything. It was at that moment he became very uncomfortably aware of the feeling that Avatar Aang and Avatar Roku were right and he didn’t like it one bit.

“I will leave you to make your decision, Prince Zuko,” Roku said. “The consequences of which, good or bad, will rest on your head.”

He was gone, leaving in his place a dazed Aang.
Honestly, I'm not too sure about the disrespectful tone of Zuko to Ruko, but then again, he did express his distaste for the Fire Nation over and over again. At some point anyone would get sick of repeating their reasons.

“Why do you want salt?” Sokka asked.

“Makes barriers against hostile spirits,” Zuko replied with a shrug. “Makes it easier to deal with them.”

“Really?” Sokka blinked. “Good to know.”
Somehow I just know this is going to be important down the line.

Zuko groaned. “Just tell me one thing.”

“Sure,” Aang said.

Zuko pointed to a map pinned up on the wall with a line going from the south pole and stretching up in a zing-zagging pattern. “How, exactly, are do you decide where to stop or not?”

Aang blinked owlishly at the map, then got a wide smile. “Well, that is where we like to ride the giant hog monkeys. On Kyoshi Island, that’s where we’d have ridden the giant elephant koi and-”

“Wait, wait, wait,” Zuko stopped him. “You mean to tell me you’ve been taking all those detours for fun?”

“Yeah.” Aang nodded. “Why else would we?”

Zuko blinked. “To throw off pursuit?”

“Oh,” Aang got a thoughtful look on his face. “I guess it does that too, huh?”

That settled it.
"Vacation time!"
t. Zuko, former Prince of the Fire Nation

Zuko's Letter to Iroh
"Come as a shock", indeed. Earlier that day it was "I will never join the Avatar! NEVER!", then the hideout explodes, and then Iroh gets the letter which can be summarized as "So yeah, I changed my mind, I'm going with the Avatar, and I faked my death to cover our traces."

I can only wonder what Azula would think and feel about this. First Zuko makes overtures of reconciliation between them, then the Avatar seemingly kills him before they could be truly silbings again. I wouldn't be too surprised if she came down on Aang with the fury of Sozin's Comet the moment she can leave the Fire nation. If Ozai even lets her in the first place.

What about Zuko's crew tho? Iroh can blunt the worst of the Firelord's wrath, but they are still dishonored by the apparent death of their liege and letting his "killer" get away.

Hoo boy, imagine if Iroh suddenly had to mentor Azula in Zuko's place.

Come to think of it, the moment Zhao realizes that Zuko has joined the Avatar, the whole thing is in the open. That would put Iroh in a much more dangerous place, and probably put Azula's loyality to the Fire Nation into question. If one of the royal children has betrayed them, what's stopping the other?

Author’s Notes: I hate this chapter. I hate everything about it. Do you guys have any idea how many of my plans this sets on fire? This chapter is dancing on the funeral pyre of my plans and it’s ticking me off!

Well, okay, all isn’t technically lost. To be honest, I had planned on Zuko being presumed dead anyway but I didn’t plan on him joining the Avatar until
The Crossroads of Destiny. Why did I have to listen to the characters? They just disobey me! Curse you, characters! Curse you!
Well, look at it from the bright side, a good writer can write characters that act in opposition to what the author wants them to do, yes?


When Roku insists, who can argue?
Zuko certainly can.
 
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Fulcon

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I like this part. Can't quite articulate why, but I think it really shows Sokka's intellect and observation skills.

I like highlighting Sokka's intellect - it's how he keeps up with the Gaang.

Sokka would be better off just taking the map, seeing as they already intend to steal something. I guess they grabbed the plans when they left the place with Zuko.

This is true. But the fewer things they take, the more likely it seems like the scroll got misplaced or something. Buys them time, however little it is.

Honestly, I'm not too sure about the disrespectful tone of Zuko to Ruko, but then again, he did express his distaste for the Fire Nation over and over again. At some point anyone would get sick of repeating their reasons.

Exactly, thank you. Have a cookie.

I can only wonder what Azula would think and feel about this.

:)

Well, look at it from the bright side, a good writer can write characters that act in opposition to what the author wants them to do, yes?

Yeah, but it feels pretty rushed.

...then again, a lot of people have also voiced that exact argument, so I know it's not just me.

I mean, I've thought it over since I posted it and realized that, yes, it does wind up fitting into my plans at large but I'll need to avoid pulling more rushed stuff like this in the future.
 

prinCZess

Warrior, Writer, Performer, Perv
“Zuko, you need a purpose in life,” Iroh rebutted. “As much as you might think differently, looking for a purpose is not a purpose! A firebender needs a strong root, in bending and in life and you’re floating on your back in the middle of the ocean.”
Just gotta mention how much I like this bit between Iroh and Zuko. It manages to hit on a straightforward discussion of 'purpose' and bits of this personal philosophy without getting bogged down with all kinds of extra narration and internal-monologuing or reading like a drop into corn and cliche as a lot of scenes like it where two characters more bluntly talk things through. Ignoring all that and Zuko, it's also fun to (again) see Iroh taking up the role of a more pushy, straightforward figure trying to directly steer his nephew to things he knows are right as opposed to being the subtle, sage figure. It's a fun change of pace throughout.

“Then what are you planning?” Iroh asked, stroking his beard.

“Just something to get the Avatar out of my hair.”
Zuke: "I have a genius plan to rid myself of the Avatar and clear my way to continuing to be a layabout do-nothing enjoying life!"
*Plan immediately fails due to Zuko being followed by the Avatar and Co.*
Zuko: "Crap."
Author’s Notes: I hate this chapter. I hate everything about it. Do you guys have any idea how many of my plans this sets on fire? This chapter is dancing on the funeral pyre of my plans and it’s ticking me off!
I forget where I heard it, but in any story there's two people with control over where the story goes. The writer and the characters--and in any disagreement the characters win because there's more of them and they can team up on the writer. :p

In general, the back-and-forth between Zuko and the others at the end felt like it went on a bit too long for me...But at the same time, it did get me to share Zuko's sense of "C'mon! Go on! Git already!" towards them, so perhaps that was well-served after all. Roku intervening to lay the spirit-y smackdown on Zuko's reluctance feels a bit heavy-handed, but...*shrug*

D'awww at Zuko thanking the old man for being...his old man.
But also curious he signs as 'Prince Zuko'--unless I'm reading too much into that. A hint he's not quite as committed to removing himself from that whole identity as he claims...Or just a habit?
 
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Zhao was furious at his poor timing.

Looking up in the sky, the commander saw the avatar’s bison flying off into the night sky, passing into the clouds and out of sight. Before him was a warehouse that, until about ten minutes ago, looked completely abandoned. But a section of it had been completely blown out, the room inside having been reduced to dust.

Fire nation soldiers rushed into the office from inside the warehouse, shocked by the destruction.

“Commander Zhao, sir!” Lieutenant Jee gave a sharp salute upon seeing the new arrival. “What happened?”

“It appears you were attacked by the Avatar,” Zhao replied, giving the floor a thorough examination, looking for clues. “Where’s Prince Zuko?”

“He was in this room,” The Lieutenant ordered, going pale and immediately looking around.

“A precision strike, then,” Commander Zhao replied, scanning the floor for clues. A hint of red beneath the rubble caught his eye, and he knelt down to carefully pick it up.

It was a fire nation breastplate. Or rather, the back of one was the front had been blasted to pieces. Inside was a crimson substance that looked suspiciously like blood.

“The Prince,” Jee said, staring at the plate.

Zhao put a finger on the liquid and brought it to eye-level. No, it was not blood. It was juice from Dragonlily Berries, an Earth Kingdom fruit that grew in this part of the world. It looked very close to blood, but it was stickier than it should’ve been.

He sniffed the juice and caught a whiff of the berry’s strong odor that was otherwise completely covered by the smoke and dust of the explosion.

“What happened here?” Zhao looked up to see Iroh staring at the wreckage.

“You were attacked by the Avatar,” Zhao responded.

“They killed the Prince,” Jee said, his face slowly changing from shock to rage.

“Lieutenant, that’s patently false,” Zhao cut in with a harsh frown. “This may be the Prince’s armor, but he wasn’t wearing it at the time of the blast.”

“How do you figure, Commander?” Iroh asked sharply, his eyes narrowing.

“This isn’t blood,” Zhao replied turning his fingers over to show the juice that had stained his finger pads. “This is Dragonlily Juice.”

“Then the Avatar faked the Prince’s death,” Lieutenant Jee started to blink.

“That’s correct,” Zhao replied. “We can only assume that the Avatar and his companions kidnapped the Prince.”

“Why would they do that?” Jee asked. “Why wouldn’t they just kill him?”

“The Avatar’s an Air Nomad,” Zhao responded flatly. “Their respect for life defied good sense. I imagine that the Prince’s abduction was a compromise to ensure his removal while not going against the Avatar’s own moral code.”

General Iroh looked surprised. Then masked it behind an expression of indifference. As was expected of a master of Iroh’s caliber. “We must save Prince Zuko at all costs.”

“I agree.” Zhao gave a slow nod. “If the Avatar has the Prince, then the Avatar has nearly all military information for troop and ship movements in the entire eastern hemisphere. He could cripple all operations in the Earth Kingdom in as little as a week.”

“Do you think the Avatar would torture the Prince, sir?” Jee asked.

“No,” Zhao shook his head. “But the tribals traveling with him are a different story.”

Iroh’s thoughtful frown was well hidden, but Zhao saw it all the same. “Lieutenant, prepare the ship. We must pull out of port immediately. Commander, I must apologize for cutting your visit short.”

“No, no. I understand,” Zhao replied. “If it means anything, I would like to volunteer my ships to assist in the hunt for the Avatar.”

“That will be unnecessary,” Iroh pointed out. “We have the fastest ship in the fleet and an entire detachment of ships would only slow us down. Besides, we both know that you are planning an expansive military operation in the North Pole that is only awaiting approval from the Fire Lord. We cannot afford to have you distracted. Return to your duties and leave Prince Zuko’s rescue to us.”

Zhao didn’t like it. Yes, the ship Iroh possessed was faster than anything else in the Navy. But that didn’t mean that other ships couldn’t be used to block off the Avatar’s route.

Something was off.

“You have your orders, Commander,” Iroh spoke. “Carry them out.”

“Yes, General.”

---

Iroh let out a deep breath as he returned to his room to pack.

The blast had woken him up from his deep slumber and interrupted his pleasant dream of Pai Sho, Tea and a peaceful afternoon in the gardens.

He had to assess the situation and figure out where the blast came from in the dark halls of the base as the crew were scrambling to light lanterns. Of course he arrived and saw Zhao inspecting the wreckage.

The general had known he was coming, he received the messenger hawk that morning. But then questions piled up, which could all be summarized as ‘what happened’?

Still, the General had a duty to perform which meant that those questions would be answered in their own due time.

In his haste to pack, however, the General had seen something that was not there before; a letter, written in crimson-backed paper and tied in fine twine. He unwrapped the letter and read it.

It was then, even as the smile opened on his face, Iroh slapped his forehead in a groan.

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“So,” Katara started, not entirely sure where to start.

The group had landed in a clearing in the forest just beside a small river. Appa was resting in the sand on the shore while Sokka was setting up the Fire Pit. Aang was meditating on a rock which left Katara and Zuko to set up the tents.

For his part, Zuko was silent.

“Have you,” Katara continued, looking for something to say. “Slept in a tent before?”

“A couple times.”

“Oh. Like when?” Katara asked.

“When we were looking through the Air Temples,” Zuko responded as he finished putting his tent up. “Especially the Western one. That one took days.”

“Why did it take days?” Aang asked curiously.

“We were cremating the Fire Nation soldiers that died there,” Zuko replied.

“Oh,” Aang said with an uncomfortable expression. “What about the monks?”

“You wrap the deceased in silk and send them on in a specially prepared glider, right?” Zuko asked with a frown, handing Katara a rolled up tarp.

“That’s right,” Aang nodded. “Did you do that?”

“The gliders we found were rotten through,” Zuko replied. “We didn’t have the materials or knowledge to build new ones, so we left the monks in silk until someone could come back to finish the job.”

“Well,” Aang slowly shrugged. “It’s better than nothing.”

“You didn’t just pile them up, did you?” Sokka asked with a frown.

“No. They were evenly and respectfully spaced out on the cliff-side,” Zuko answered. “That’s the truth.”

“Thank you,” Aang said. “So how did you get sent out to capture me, anyway?”

Zuko turned to the last tent that needed to be set up; his own. “I don’t want to talk about it.”

“Okay,” Aang replied.

“Does it have anything to do with your scar?” Sokka asked.

“Sokka!” Katara snapped angrily.

“What? I’m just asking,” Sokka defended with a sharp glare.

“Yes, but as I said, I don’t want to talk about it,” Zuko answered, biting back the far harsher reply he almost belted out with. “Besides, it’s just a scar.”

Sokka shrugged. “Fair enough.”

“So, can we start Firebending training tomorrow?” Aang asked excitedly, a big grin growing on his face. “I want to learn how to throw fireballs out of my hands!”

“Sure, we can start tomorrow,” Zuko got a small smirk on his face. “But your firebending training is going to be entirely breathing exercises. You aren’t bending fire until I feel like you won’t accidentally burn a forest down or something.”

“Hey, don’t worry, I’ll be careful!” Aang nodded eagerly. “Airbender’s honor!”

Zuko blinked, then turned to Sokka. “Be honest with me. Will he be careful?”

“No.”

“I didn’t think so,” Zuko replied with a nod.

“But Avatar Roku said it was your destiny to teach me Firebending,” Aang pointed out.

“Well, I’m sure that Roku understands why it’s important that you learn them in the right order,” Zuko replied without so much as a glance at his pupil as he put his tent up. “Don’t want the Avatar to burn the world down because he got power mad without Water to cool him off, do we?”

Aang groaned in irritation. “But if I don’t learn all the elements before the comet comes, the Fire Nation will win the war!”

“Wait...huh. I guess that’s coming up, isn’t it?” Zuko asked with a shrug. “You know, I forgot about that. But I wouldn’t worry about it. If you master the basics, the more advanced stuff kind of learns itself.”

“Which is what the breathing exercises are?” Katara asked curiously.

“Exactly,” Zuko nodded.

“But the basics have to have some Firebending forms,” Aang said desperately, trying to cling to the hope of throwing fire even as it was evaporating out of his hands. “Right?”

“Right, but those basics are designed to teach how to breathe properly,” Zuko replied with a nod. “You don’t need to actually bend fire to learn that. Besides, I can’t exactly show you how it’s done properly right now, anyway.”

“What do you mean?” Aang immediately said.

Zuko took a breath and ran through a quick series of movements. Each time it looked like Fire should have come out, only the barest of sparks emerged instead. After he finished, he centered his chi. “My bending's out of juice.”

“Why is it out of juice?” Katara yelped in clear concern.

“Well,” Zuko started, taking a seat. “One of the key components of Firebending is drive. Strong emotion, passion, things that are all necessary to light your inner fire and I’m out.”

“So you’re saying you don’t feel emotion?” Sokka asked with a frown.

“It’s kind of hard to do,” Zuko replied with a nod.

“That isn’t right,” Aang said with a frown. “Firebender’s are some of the most passionate people I know. For you to not have that, something had to have happened. Like...like...”

The Avatar’s eyes went wide. “One of the keys of Airbending is detachment.”

“Yup,” Zuko replied with a pointed finger.

“Oh,” Katara’s eyes also went wide. “Zuko, you said that scroll helped you out. But I think all that airbending knowledge...messed you up.”

“My uncle certainly seemed to think so,” Zuko said softly, taking a seat in front of his tent. “But personally I think it was a good trade. I mean, I could still be angry, mad at the world and chasing after you with an endless zeal, hounding you from the north pole to the south pole...but I also wouldn’t be as good at Firebending so I think it would’ve evened out.”

“You call that good at Firebending,” Sokka replied with a lot of doubt.

“No, that’s the most pathetic firebending I’ve ever seen,” Zuko contradicted. “But before I lost my drive, I was pretty good.”

“So, we need to find a way to restore your drive,” Aang said. “Do you know how to do that?”

“Well, personally, I was kind of hoping to learn a bit more about water bending,” Zuko answered.

“I don’t know, maybe you should stay away from other bending styles until we’ve got this figured out,” Katara said with a frown. Noting Zuko’s unimpressed expression, she quickly continued, “But I would be happy to learn with you once we’ve got this figured out. Promise!”

“Actually, Katara, I think he’s got a point,” Sokka said. “He’s mastered Fire and integrated Air pretty heavily. What if by learning the other styles, he rounds himself out? You know?”

“He’d be following the Avatar cycle to bring balance to himself,” Aang replied with wide eyes. “That’s what you’re hoping will happen, isn’t it?”

“Honestly, I just want to learn everything the world has to show me,” Zuko replied with a small smile. “Given how the four nations are built on their bending styles, that seemed like the obvious place to start.”

“Well, we have the Waterbending scroll,” Katara said, holding the scroll aloft. “Aang and I were going to start practicing what’s on it later, maybe you could join us? You know, get a head start before we get to the North Pole?”

“I don’t think it’ll do me a lot of good,” Zuko replied. “Since I can’t bend Water, the only thing practicing the forms would do for me is help me understand the philosophy of Waterbending, but I don’t think either of you really know what that is, do you?”

“...not exactly,” Aang admitted. “But the scroll is better than nothing.”

“Well, I did learn a little bit from Gran-gran,” Katara interjected. “Water is the element of change. We bend by joining with the current and redirecting it.”

Zuko blinked and gave her a confused stare. “I’m sure you put your own power in their somewhere, otherwise the water would just ignore you.”

“I mean, yeah,” Katara said with a nod. “You can’t change a current without building a dam, can you?”

“Wouldn’t make any sense otherwise,” Zuko replied.

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“Okay, so this one looks easy,” Katara said, looking over the scroll. “The Water Whip.”

“This’ll be fun,” Aang said with a smile. He looked over to where Zuko was practicing with a pair of Dao swords. “Zuko, are you going to join us?”

“I’ll wait until you’re done,” Zuko replied, going through a form with his swords.

In truth, he wanted to get started right away, but that didn’t seem like it’d be worth the trouble of dealing with the pair of excited water-benders. Besides, since they could feel the element, they’d probably have a clearer picture of how Waterbending works and could help him better understand and apply it to his own bending.

Zuko was content to simply practice with his broadswords. With his bending out of commission, he needed a way to contribute to the group’s defense if it came to that. So while the swords didn’t need much dusting off, given how much havoc they had raised in the hands of the Blue Spirit, Zuko still felt the need to practice.

The Prince was keenly aware that Sokka was watching him practice with barely concealed envy. Eventually, the tribal spoke. “So, you seem pretty good with those. Where did you learn?”

“I studied under Master Piandao in my childhood,” Zuko replied, still going through his forms. “The finest sword master in the Fire Nation. Maybe you’ll meet him someday.”

“Yeah, maybe after the war is over we can touch base and compare notes,” Sokka said with a cheeky, perhaps too-wide grin. “I could probably show him a couple water tribe moves.”

“Maybe,” Zuko replied idly. The Prince immediately recognized Sokka as someone who hadn’t been knocked on his butt in a while; the signs were all there. He was favorably comparing himself to a master in spite of his relative inexperience and he did not carry himself as someone who knew how to fight. Perhaps a quick lesson would save his life later. “Want to spar?”

“Huh? Oh, sure!” Sokka said, standing up as Zuko placed his blades on the ground. “But I warn you, I won’t go easy on you!”

“I hope not.”

After a moment of standing in horse stances, Sokka leaped forward and started the bout, which was over in another two seconds, with Zuko having pinned him to the ground in an armlock.

“Ow! Ow! Okay, okay!” Sokka reached up with his other arm and patted Zuko’s leg. “I give!”

Zuko let him go and gave Sokka space to stand back up. He looked up as Katara and Aang rushed over.

“What’s going on?” Katara asked.

“We’re just sparring,” Zuko replied idly.

“You weren’t sparring for very long,” Katara pointed out with a frown.

“Sokka hasn’t been trained all that well,” Zuko pointed.

“Hey!” Sokka snapped in annoyance. “So what if I haven’t been trained by the best sword guy in the Fire Nation, I still pull my weight!”

Zuko gave a so-so gesture with his hand. “Eh?”

Sokka growled and turned around to go sit on the stump and sharpen his boomerang.

“So, how’s the scroll coming?” Zuko asked.

“We’re taking a break,” Katara replied flatly with a too-wide smile on her face.

“Y-yeah,” Aang nodded quickly. “Taking a break. Yup.”

“You just started with it,” Zuko pointed out, raising his single eyebrow. “Having trouble?”

“Not really,” Aang said truthfully. “Just, you know. It’s a bit different.”

“Uh-huh,” Zuko replied. “Well, if you’re done with it, I’m going to go have a look.”

“Go ahead,” Katara replied, still sounding overly cheerful.

Actually, Zuko had a pretty good idea of what the forms looked like without the scroll. But the reminders would help as he actually tried to make sense of them. Sure, the Airbending forms were different from Firebending, but they were different in that they had a clear purpose that Zuko could understand. But the Waterbending forms weren’t like that. They were different. Alien.

Zuko had a strange feeling in the pit of his stomach that if there was a black abyss for a Firebender to descend into, it would be the Waterbending forms. But it wasn’t like he had anything better to do so he looked at the scroll.

What was the one they said looked easy? Zuko asked, looking all all four impossible moves in detail. The Water Whip, that’s right.

He looked at it, examined it and then tried to follow it and right away, he felt completely wrong. So he tried it again and frowned, rubbing his chin.

“You’re not doing it right.”

Zuko took a breath and looked at Aang. “Alright, what am I doing wrong?”

“You look like you’re trying to force the water,” Aang replied with a shrug. “You just got to shift your weight through the stances and flow through the form.”

“Teach me,” Zuko said, sitting on his knees.

“Well, I mean, I’m not a master,” Aang hurriedly pointed out.

“But you know more than me at this point,” Zuko pointed out.

“I guess,” Aang replied. “Here, this is how I think it’s supposed to go.”

Zuko had never actually seen Waterbending before now, when Aang had taken a small stream of water out of the river into a perfect water whip, which he then allowed to flow right back into the river. The Prince had been hoping that, with a proper demonstration in front of him, he’d be able to make better sense of water-bending.

The exact opposite happened. Now he was even more confused. Why did the whip stay in the Avatar’s hand even though he wasn’t forcing it? Why did the river change the way it flowed just because the Avatar was flowing with it?

From Airbending, Zuko had learned to take the path of least resistance. But there was still resistance. Either you blew through it, per firebending or you went around it, per airbending. But with Waterbending? There was no resistance and that made no sense.

“So you flow from stance to stance, shifting your weight into each one,” Aang continued, centering his chi. “If you were a waterbender, the water would start to match flow with you and you’d be able to bend it.”

Zuko blinked. “I don’t get it.”

“What don’t you get?” Katara asked. “It seemed kind of clear to me.”

“But see, Katara, you were doing the same thing he was doing,” Aang replied with a frown.

“I was?” Katara asked with a frown. “How so?”

“Both of you were moving like you were trying to force the water,” Aang answered. “You can’t do that. Either you flow with the water and change how it goes, or you don’t bend.”

Katara growled in irritation.

“I-I’m just saying,” Aang replied. “I’m not a master, that’s just what I think is happening.”

“I think this would be a lot easier if there was something I could bend,” Zuko said. “But that’s hard to do if I can’t bend.”

“Maybe you can’t make your own fire,” Aang said with an inquisitive expression. “But maybe you won’t have too!”

“How so?” Zuko asked.

“Well, the thing with water is that it’s already around,” Aang said. “So if you had fire already going...”

“I might be able to bend that instead,” Zuko said, nodding and clearly impressed. “I brought some candles to help with meditation, let me go get them...”

The candles were small, arranged in a line in front of the prince. With a pair of spark rocks, Zuko lit the candles and stood up.

“Alright, moment of truth,” Sokka said idly, still polishing the azure stone in his club well past the point he could see his face in it.

Zuko brought his hands up to perform the ‘Fire Whip’, mirroring the Avatar’s motions earlier. The flames from the candles sprung up, higher and higher as they started circling the princes hand.

“He’s doing it,” Katara breathed with wide eyes.

“Yes he is,” Aang replied, his own expression growing more and more excited.

Then the long and wispy candle flames extinguished with barely the smallest amount of smoke.

Zuko hummed. “Well, it was worth a shot.”

“What happened?” Katara asked.

“Firebending needs three things to work,” Zuko began. “Drive, Chi and Breath. As soon as the flames got too long for the candles to maintain, it needed more of all those things to stay alive. But, since my drive is gone...”

“But I don’t get it,” Katara shook her head. “You weren’t firebending, you were waterbending.”

“Yeah, with fire,” Zuko admonished. “And fire isn’t water.”

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Author’s Note: I meant to have this chapter out last week, but things came up. Still, I’m glad I was able to get this chapter out today and I hope you all enjoy it! Not much to say other than I’m glad I can have Zhao be more than the Stupid Evil Fire Nation guy we usually see him as. It kind of bugged me because, even though the Fire Nation isn’t particularly bright, you can’t plan a nearly successful invasion of a foreign nation and also be, well, stupid.

Shortsighted and impatient, certainly, but not stupid.

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Melden V, Anders Kronquist, Ray Tony Song, Volkogluk, Aaron Bjornson, iolande, Martin Auguado, Julio, Hackerham, Tim Collins-Squire, Maben00, Ventari, PbookR, Seij, ChristobalAlvarez, Apperatus, EPiCJB19, Seeking Raven, Handwran and Russel Beatrous. Thank you for your continued support!

Until the next time!

~Fulcon
 
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I love how the philosophies clash. Or at least appear so at first glance. Zuko and the gang are truly attempting something never before seen. I can't wait to see the results.
 

Fulcon

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I love how the philosophies clash. Or at least appear so at first glance. Zuko and the gang are truly attempting something never before seen. I can't wait to see the results.

Going into how the various philosophies are interacting, I forsee Zuko's lightning bending getting really, really scary once he's finished figuring out waterbending just because with waterbending, you become part of the current and redirect it and in respect to lightning bending 'you do not control it, you are simply it's humble guide' per Iroh.

I think it's going to be cool.
 

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Going into how the various philosophies are interacting, I forsee Zuko's lightning bending getting really, really scary once he's finished figuring out waterbending just because with waterbending, you become part of the current and redirect it and in respect to lightning bending 'you do not control it, you are simply it's humble guide' per Iroh.

I think it's going to be cool.

Indeed. I now also want to see a Fire Whip. If only for reasons.
 

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Been reading this on and off for the past week while I lurked. This is a very good story. Glad to see it here. And by all means, we need more Azula. She'd be my waifu if she were of age.
 
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Author’s Notes: I hate this chapter. I hate everything about it. Do you guys have any idea how many of my plans this sets on fire? This chapter is dancing on the funeral pyre of my plans and it’s ticking me off!

Well, okay, all isn’t technically lost. To be honest, I had planned on Zuko being presumed dead anyway but I didn’t plan on him joining the Avatar until
The Crossroads of Destiny. Why did I have to listen to the characters? They just disobey me! Curse you, characters! Curse you!

Shout out goes out too Melden V, Anders Kronquist, Ray Tony Song, Volkogluk, Aaron Bjornson, iolande, Martin Auguado, Julio, Hackerham, Tim Collins-Squire, Maben00, Ventari, PbookR, Seij, ChristobalAlvarez, Apperatus, EPiCJB19, Seeking Raven, Handwran
and Russel Beatrous! Your continued support makes all of this possible!

Until the next time!

~Fulcon

You may not like the chapter, but I think it flowed very naturally, and the only thing I question is if perhaps it could have been made to work without Avatar Roku being involved. But I am a minimalist like that.
 

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Status update:

I've written a whole sentence for the next chapter. Sadly, I wound up burning myself out and I found myself burdened by another project that needs to be finished before New Years. However!

This fic isn't dead. Just to reassure you all; this fic is not dead. I have been thinking of where to take the story out from here and I think I've got it figured out up to the Siege of the North. From there, I intend to take another, much longer break from Giving Up and return to SHINOBI: The RPG's second act, if only because I promised everyone that I'd finish it. That's looking more like a long term project, I just needed to take a break from it because the way the plot is going is making me personally uncomfortable but I think I've had enough time to swallow that.

As for Giving Up itself, I'll continue on SHINOBI until I get sick of it, again, and return to this fic. I didn't plan out much for the events of Book 1 but Book 2 has much more in the way of plans, at least for Zuko's journey. Being a part of the Gaang has been factored into the story and I think we'll be good to continue writing and entertaining you. One Shinobi's second act is completely finish, I'll alternate between Pyroclasm and Giving Up, with only the occassional break to work on this project that keeps coming up.

Thanks all for your patience and I hope you have a great Holiday Season, whichever holiday you happen to be celebrating this December.

~Fulcon
 
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General Fong could not have been a happier man.


Sitting on the table in front of him was a letter, bearing the seal of the Fire Nation’s Royal Family. The hawk that had been carrying this letter was trapped in a cage behind the general, having given him a very surly look as he had walked in the door.


Very intelligent animals, hawks. Fire Nation hawks, especially.


The General sat at the table, and rubbed his hands together. “This has been verified?”


The sergeant on duty nodded. “Yes, sir. That letter bears the royal seal and was on it’s way to Prince Zuko.”


“He was the one sent on the hunt for the Avatar,” General Fong reminded the sergeant. “So whatever is on this letter has to be really, really good.”


“As you say, sir,” The sergeant replied.


General Fong gestured and a pair of serviceman came forward, carefully undoing the seal for the letter in case they needed to send the letter ahead for whatever reason. With the letter open, the General giddily started reading.


It was not often a hawk bearing communications of this magnitude was captured. In fact, General Fong could say that this was the first time he had ever seen it done. He could not wait to send out messages to the other generals.


What could the letter contain? Was the Prince being recalled to partake in some other military operation? Was he being given directives on where to carry out his search? Perhaps his sister was being sent out to assist in the hunt?


But General Fong found nothing of the sort on this letter. He read it again, and his giddy expression was swiftly changed to pensive reflection. He stroked his beard as he contemplated his next move.


“Sir?” The sergeant asked.


“Close the letter and send it on it’s way,” General Fong ordered. “There is nothing of military significance on it.”


“Yes sir,” The Sergeant responded with a bow.


“I want that hawk to be well fed and rested before it continues on it’s mission in the morning,” General Fong continued.


“Yes sir.”


General Fong took a piece of paper out from under the table, grabbing the brush and ink pot and begun composing a letter to the other Earth Kingdom generals.


Fire Nation Royal Communication intercepted, The General wrote. Simply the Prince’s sister asking him to complete his mission and return home. Only thing of interest is that Queen Ursa has been located, but we have found nothing to ascertain her location. Message has been sent forward. General Fong.


---


“We need to stop by Gaipan to get some more supplies,” Sokka said, pointing at the town on the map.


“Sokka, we just restocked on everything in the Pier,” Katara protested with a frown.


“Yeah, but then we picked up a new mouth to feed,” Sokka replied, pointing his thumb at Zuko. “So we’ll need a few extra packs.”


“I appreciate that,” Zuko replied idly. “But that town is under Fire Nation occupation. So if you want to go in, that’s fine, but wear disguises. And I’m not going with you.”


“You’re not?” Katara asked.


“We do not want him to be recognized,” Sokka deadpanned.


“Oh, well, then I guess I shouldn’t go either,” Aang replied, pointing to the blue arrow on his head. “Zuko could’ve gotten that scar anywhere, but there’s only one person with these kind of tattoos.”


“Sounds like a great excuse for more breathing exercises,” Zuko said with a small smirk.


“Aw, come on, Sifu Zuko!” Aang whined. “We’ve been doing breathing exercises for days! Can’t I bend fire? Just a little bit? Please?”


“Have you mastered Water and Earth?”


Aang folded his arms with an annoyed and surly expression. “No.”


“There’s your answer.”


---


The bison flew relatively quickly when it wanted too. Zuko noted that Aang’s irritation was causing him to push Appa harder than normal and it seemed too get worse with every single day.


It seemed that the perpetually free nomad did not like being told he couldn’t do something.


But as they got closer to Gaipan’s location on the map, Zuko immediately felt like something was wrong. Down below on the ground was a river, and a pretty large one at that, but it was only sliding along at an easy pace.


“Wait, did we miss the village?” Sokka asked with a frown, looking at the map. “It says that it’s just outside of a lake, so maybe it’s down stream.”


Zuko looked down at the map. “Yeah, but the lakes on a cliff, so we just need to look for a dam and we’ll find it.”


Katara made a shocked sound, pointing. “You mean a cliff like that?”


Sokka looked at where she was pointing. “Yeah, just like that, except...there’d be...a dam...”


Slowly, all of Appa’s passengers caught sight of the burnt wooden debris along both shores of the river, violently strewn about as if they had been caught in an explosion. They followed the water a little ways down and saw yet another place where wooden debris was strewn about. It looked similar, except all the wood looked like it had been blasted downstream.


“Aang, I think that was Gaipan,” Sokka said.


“What?” Katara cried.


“I’ll take us down,” Aang said. “Maybe we can find survivors.”


Zuko thought that was optimistically naive.


On the ground, their look of the situation only got worse. Instead of it just being wooden debris, there were bodies. Two, in particular, and only torsos clad in scarlet armor, as they had been stuck on the rocks that stuck up out of the water.


“The dam broke,” Sokka said hollowly.


Katara gasped, her hands on her mouth.


“No!” Aang shouted, falling to his knees.


Zuko frowned and started examining his surroundings. Off in the distance, he saw a figure. “I see someone, over there.”


“Maybe he knows what happened,” Katara said.


“Maybe he’s a survivor!” Aang said, getting on his glider and flying off toward him.


Sokka and Katara ran off after him, while Zuko walked, taking one more glance at the bodies stuck on the rocks, frowning deeply as he made his way there.


---


Aang brought himself in for a landing to look at the survivor. The survivor’s eyes matched his and Aang felt a shiver run up and down his spine like a chill-wind.


He was obviously around Sokka’s age, maybe a little older, but it was hard to tell. His right eye was swollen and black, as was his jaw, which was surrounded by dried blood that had leaked out of the sides. One of his arm, which was clearly broken given how red it was, was wrapped around his stomach with a hastily improvised sling. The other arm held a shovel, which he was using to pat down the dirt on a freshly filled grave. His voice was rough and quiet as he forced words through a mouth that would barely open. “Who are you?”


“I’m Aang,” Aang replied, pointing to himself. “I’m the Avatar. How can I help?”


The survivor let out a low, guttural growl and went back to his work. “You can’t.”


“Wow, you are really banged up,” Sokka said as he finally caught up. “You should take a rest and tell us what happened here.”


“It’d give us a chance to help with those injuries,” Katara pointed out.


The survivor groaned. “Alright, fine. I guess I could take a break.”


“Great!” Aang said.


“I’m Katara, by the way,” Katara introduced herself with a hand on her chest. “This is my brother Sokka and this is...”


“Lee,” Zuko said quickly, interrupting her. “And you are?”


“Jet,” He finally said, hefting his shovel beneath his shoulder as an improvised crutch as he started limping toward the tree-line on his good leg. “Come on.”


---


“You know, I heard from my Uncle that Waterbender’s can all heal with their bending,” Zuko said conversationally.


The five of them, including Jet, were all now sitting around a fire. Jet’s camp was, well, quite sparse, with only a bedroll on the ground to sleep on.


“Wait, really?” Katara asked with interest. “I’ve never heard that.”


“It’s part of why the Fire Nation hasn’t been able to take the North Pole,” Zuko confirmed with a nod. “If you can’t take the entire squad out, they’ll just heal up and then come at you fresh. The Water Tribe always wins attrition.”


“That, and all the ice and snow stops them in their tracks,” Sokka pointed out. “Firebender’s always lose a good snowball fight.”


In spite of Zuko’s best efforts, that got a chortle out of him. Katara and Aang also laughed, but Jet stayed silent, haunted eyes staring into the fire.


“So, you think I should try too...” Katara started, pointing at Jet.


“If you think you can do it,” Zuko said. “I mean, putting a little water on a wound never hurt, did it?”


“Alright, uh...” Katara started. “Jet, can I…?”


Jet was unresponsive.


After a moment of hesitation, Katara put her hands down near her water pouch and, gingerly withdrew a stream of water. With a smooth, even caress of her hands, the stream moved onto Jet’s leg, who started and almost fell over, only to be caught by Zuko.


“What are you doing?” Jet demanded.


“We’re checking to see if Katara can bend your injuries away,” Zuko replied.


Jet groaned. “Fine. Just ask first.”


“We did,” Sokka pointed out.


Jet growled but said nothing further.


Katara licked her lips and started again, pulling the water out of Jet’s pant-leg and applying it, trying to get something, anything to start working. But as she focused on the water, something came to her attention. Through the water, she could feel something like rivers flowing through his leg. It felt like water, but also, not. But the flow in his leg had nearly been stopped, like the channel had been bent. So it was almost instinctual when Katara pushed her own chi through the water to the channel and set it right.


Everyone’s eyes went wide as they watched the water glow blue and then...stop.


“How do you feel?” Katara asked.


Jet slowly extended the leg with wonderment. “It feels...better.”


“Did you just get that on the first try?” Sokka asked with a shocked expression.


“Yeah,” Katara replied with a shocked and almost giddy voice. “I did! I did it! First try!”


“How did you learn how to do that?” Sokka asked, completely nonplussed.


“I guess I,” Katara started, sounding a little embarrassed. “Always knew?”


“You always knew?” Sokka repeated. “Where were your magical healing powers when I fell into the greaseberry bramble! Or that time when I got two fishhooks in my thumb?”


“Can you two bicker later?” Zuko asked with a raised eyebrow. “Katara still has a patient.”


“Sorry,” Katara said, bringing her water back up.


After nearly an hour of work, going over Jet’s many injuries, gradually, the young man was restored to perfect health and in Katara’s opinion, he had a very handsome face. Did the fire somehow make his face more mysterious, or was that just her?


Jet stretched out his mouth after Katara was done. “Finally, I can talk!”


“So what happened?” Aang asked.


Jet let out a breath. “The dam broke. Washed away the town and took everyone with it, Fire Nation and Earth Kingdom.”


He started looking into the fire again. “...greatest tragedy I’ve ever seen.”


“But you still got caught in the river though, right?” Sokka asked with an analytical expression. “That’s why you got so banged up.”


“Yeah,” Jet nodded. “My friends all...left, after the dam broke so now it’s just me. Burying the bodies of the Earth Kingdom.”


“You lost your friends too?” Katara asked with wide eyes. “I’m so sorry.”


“No, they weren’t in the town when the dam broke,” Jet replied. “They just left.”


“Oh.”


“They left you like that?” Sokka asked. “Some friends.”


“Yeah, I sure know how to pick them,” Jet replied with a grumble. “Not that I blame them, in all honesty.”


“Why not?” Sokka asked.


“We weren’t just friends, we were freedom fighters,” Jet replied. “We’d been fighting to get this valley free from the fire nation for a while now. When the Dam broke, their reason to fight, well, died.”


“I can see that,” Zuko said. “Everything you were striving for goes up in smoke and suddenly you don’t want to do anything anymore.”


Jet was quiet for a moment. “Yeah. Exactly.”


---


“Do you need anything?” Katara asked.


“No,” Jet shook his head. “It’s been nice talking to you, but like your brother said, you got to go.”


“Alright, well, maybe we’ll see each other again,” Katara said. “You know, after-”


“Katara!” Sokka shouted from Appa’s back. “Come on!”


“I’ll be fine,” Jet said with a smile. “You guys get to the north pole, alright?”


“We will!” Katara said, jumping up Appa.


“See you, Jet!” Aang said with a wave. “Appa, yip yip!”


As the bison rose into the air, Jet let out a sigh of relief, allowing himself to fall into his thoughts.


It was fortunate that the Avatar was on such a tight schedule, or he might’ve started poking into what had happened. He didn’t need that headache right now.


Jet knelt down and picked up his shovel, moving to the shore. On the shore was a line of bodies, bodies that had to be dragged from the shore and partially reassembled, but bodies that Jet had wrapped in cloth and tarp from the towns wreckage.


The young man started to dig, the wet earth proving easy to move, cutting an already all day affair down to the entire morning and part of the afternoon.


He set his shovel down and picked up one of the bodies, the small wrap hiding the smashed body of a child that couldn’t be any more than seven.


Smellerbee was right; he was a monster.


And this body proved it.


As he held this tiny body in his arms, he knelt beside the grave he had dug with tears in his eyes.


“I’m sorry. I’m so, so sorry.”


---


Commander Zhao was starting to rage.


This river had not been here a week ago. It wasn’t on any maps and it certainly hadn’t connected to the ocean so his steam-powered dingy could swim up.


He had been sent by his Admiral, the man who Zhao would be replacing thanks to his well earned retirement, to check on the town. There was supposed to be a shipment of supplies arriving to Port Rozu to support the invasion. The port was a days travel, so a delay was looking more and more unlikely. What’s more, the Avatar’s bison had been spotted in this area which put the men in this region in a very precarious situation.


Zhao’s worst suspicions were confirmed when he came to a pair of fire nation suits of armor caught on the rocks.


“Move the ship ashore,” Zhao ordered. “And fish those armors out of the water.”


“Yes sir.”


The craft hit the beach and the small crew disembarked. The crimson suits of armor were just torsos, the soldiers having been dashed to pieces on the rocks. All around them were pieces of wood, thrown and embedded in the sand by some great impact. Zhao’s eyes followed the river up and saw a great chasm, two cliff-sides facing each other and on either side, was more wood.


Zhao’s frown devolved into a snarl. “Yeoman, come with me. The rest of you, start fishing Fire Nation bodies out of the river and construct a funeral pyre.”


“Yes, sir.”


Zhao and the Yeoman, a young man with a long, black mustache, walked up the river. As they grew closer, the Commander’s eyes scanned every piece of blackened wood that was sticking up out of the sand, every splinter he could see.


“There was a dam here,” Zhao pointed out as they came to cavern. He knelt down and picked up a splinter of wood, the front and sides charred from a blast of some kind.


“Do you think this was the Avatar, sir?” The Yeoman asked.


“No. The black, charred marks on the wood tell me that this dam was destroyed by blasting jelly,” Zhao responded. “There were civilians in that town and the Avatar is a pacifist.”


The Yeoman blinked in surprise, but didn’t question it. He had long since gotten used to Zhao saying things that defied what they had learned as children in school...only for the Commander to be correct and for his school teachers to have been ignorant fools.


“But the Water Tribals?” Zhao asked with a deep frown. “I could see them doing this. Setting up explosives on the dam while the Avatar was away and then rigging them to detonate after they left. They have no reason to care for the Earth Kingdom and the Fire Nation is the enemy. Destroy the outpost of an enemy with very minor collateral damage, it’s almost genius really.”


“But sir, you hate civilian casualties,” The Yeoman pointed out.


“In some situations, yes,” Zhao slowly nodded, still looking at the wreckage. “If civilians are dying, that’s a workforce going down the drain and makes holding onto the captured territory harder. But if you’re not trying to keep anything? Then a scorched earth strategy is perfectly acceptable.”


The commander looked down at the mud that stained his boots and stuck to his heel. “Or, in this case, drowned earth.”


“Of course, sir,” The Yeoman agreed.


“Wasn’t it a shipment of blasting jelly that was being routed through Gaipan?” Zhao asked with a frown.


“Yes sir,” The Yeoman nodded.


Zhao grunted. “Then we’ve found where it went.”


The Yeoman looked up at the tattered remains of the dam in silence.


“Those tribals are starting to vex me,” Zhao seethed, turning on his heel and moving back to the ship.


The Yeoman, naturally followed him. “Sir? How do you know that the Avatar is a pacifist?”


“Because all of the Air Nomad’s were pacifists,” Zhao replied without breaking stride or even looking at him. “They didn’t even have an army.”


“How do you know that?” The Yeoman asked before he could stop himself.


“I am a very well-read man, Yeoman.”


The Commander was always right.


The sailors had assembled a hasty funeral pyre and had begun fishing whatever shattered and broken bodies wearing red they could out of the water. After two hours of this, they could not wait any longer to return to their post, and Zhao hoped that the spirits of the dead soldiers would understand that they were only able to get half of the platoon.


The bodies were burnt, the smell raking Zhao’s nose and singing the hairs within. He found himself absentmindedly grinding his teeth and clenching his fists.


These men would have justice.


Once they were done, they climbed back onto the ship and sailed off. On the shore, Zhao saw a young man come out from the trees, shovel in hand. He was digging a series of graves along the shore, only for him to stop and meet the Commander’s eyes.


Even from here, he could see that the eyes staring back at him belonged to a dead man.


“Commander, do you have orders?” One of the men asked. “Do you want us to go ashore and apprehend him?”


No matter the nation, it was important to show the proper due to the dead. Made movements through captured territory easier. Still, he couldn’t fault his men’s zeal.


“Leave the boy to his work.”


---


“So, how did you do that?” Zuko asked with interest. “How do you heal?”


They were all sitting around a table in the upper common room of an inn that Zuko was able to simply pay for out of pocket.


“I kind of just did it,” Katara replied.


“But what’s the process?” Zuko pressed. “What does it feel like?”


The three of them noted that there seemed to be a fire in the Prince’s eyes that wasn’t normally present. A fire and intensity that had almost seemed dead when they had first met him back in the Pirate’s ship.


It was almost like this was the first time any of them had truly seen him alive.


“Well,” Katara started. “I put the water on someone and then I get...a connection. I can feel the way their chi is flowing, I think. Like, when I was setting Jet’s leg, the chi flow was all wrong, like it was completely dammed up. So I set the flow back to where it was supposed to go.”


“You pushed the bone back into place using his own chi?” Zuko asked with a blink.


“Yeah, actually!” Katara nodded with a huge smile. “I gave his chi a better way to flow and his body kind of just fixed itself.”


Zuko stopped. “So you forced his chi to flow properly for a second.”


“I wouldn’t say forced,” Katara argued. “More like I...guided it. Using water as the medium.”


Zuko fell quiet, cupping his mouth and lips with his fingers as the fire in his eyes disappeared as he retreated into his own mind. She guided it.


Katara made to reach across the table, but she was gently stopped by Sokka, who simply shook his head. “Let him think.”


“Yeah, he’s good at that,” Aang said with a frown.


“Aang, I know you’re frustrated that you haven’t really been firebending,” Katara began. “But it’s just until you’ve mastered Water and Earth. I really think Zuko has a point about wanting you to do them in order.”


“But all this time I could be learning Fire and I could be ready weeks or even months before the comet comes,” Aang said. “It takes years to master even one element, what if by the time I’ve mastered Water and Earth, it’s too late and the Comet’s already here?”


“It could be worse,” Sokka pointed out. “You could be at this point and not have a master at all.”


Guided it. Why does that sound familiar?


“I know,” Aang groaned in frustration. “But...still. I can’t save the world if I don’t master all the elements, so I feel like he’s just stalling.”


“It seems like a good idea to wait until you can be trusted to not burn a forest down,” Sokka replied.


“I’m not going to burn down a forest,” Aang protested with a pout.


Sokka hummed with doubt, folding his arms and leaning away with a small shake of his head.


“Sokka, enough,” Katara stated with finality. “Aang, Zuko said he doesn’t want to teach you real Fire Bending until you’ve mastered Water and Earth but I think he just wants to make sure you’re disciplined enough to not cause problems, so if you prove you’re really disciplined then...”


“Then he’ll teach me Firebending!” Aang said with a huge smile. “Thanks, Katara! You’re the best!”


Well, she’s right, but Aang’s got a long way to go, Zuko thought...anyway, guided. Guided. Guided...guided. Oh, that’s bugging me. Where have I heard that before?


It was then that lightning metaphorically struck.


When you bend the lighting, you do not control it. You are merely it’s humble guide.


Zuko’s hands fell to his lap.


Water and Lighting act similarly. That’s why Uncle was able to develop the technique to redirect lighting by watching Waterbenders. So when I’m firebending with Water forms, I need to treat that fire like it’s lightning. Only instead of killing myself if I make a mistake, the fire dies.


“I got it!” Zuko threw his hands into the air in celebration.


The three looked at each other, then at him.


“Got what?” Katara asked curiously.


“I’ll show you tomorrow,” Zuko said, standing up. “I’m going to bed. Also, Aang? Fastest way to prove you’ve got discipline is by mastering Water and Earth. Good night.”


---


Author’s Note: I apologize that this is so long in coming.


I am not back, but I had some chapters, as some of you already know, on the backlog. Sadly, I burnt out on writing. I haven’t been able to so much as write a word until about a week ago. I apologize for keeping you all in the dark regarding this, I just wanted to spend some time recovering the will to write. I could barely go on the websites themselves.


I do want to say that I appreciate everyone’s well wishes and concerned PM’s. Thank you all. I understand that given current events it was a really bad time for me to go dark but...that’s how the dice rolled.


Updates are going to be sparse once I’ve gone through the backlog. It will be a while before I can return to my weekly schedule, if that ever happens again. I just needed and still need a break. Thank you all for your patience and I hope you’re doing well in these troubled times.


Have a cookie.


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Melden V, Anders Kronquist, Ray Tony Song, Volkogluk, Aaron Bjornson, iolande, Martin Auguado, Julio, Hackerham, Tim Collins-Squire, Maben00, Ventari, PbookR, Seij, ChristobalAlvarez, Apperatus, EPiCJB19, Seeking Raven, Handwran and Russel Beatrous. Thank you all for your continued support!


Until the next time!


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Fantastic update. I am very pleased to see this again. Take the time you need man. We're just glad to have you back in the saddle.
 

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