Warhammer Chronicle of Isha, the Goddess of Life (Warhammer 40,000)

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The Eternal War between Chaos and Aeldari gods has ended. Gone is the mighty Aeldari Empire, and the Warp now belongs to the Ruinous Powers of madness, violence, decadence, and despair.

Isha, Goddess of Life, has managed to escape Nurgle's capture, but in a universe filled with unspeakable horrors, unknowable aliens, and uncaring followers the path ahead is overshadowed with grim darkness.
 
Prologue: The end of the Eternal War

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Victory or Death♪

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In the unreality of the realm called the Sea of Souls, an eternal war is drawing to a close.

A pantheon of gods, formed by the gestalt minds of the Aeldari, creators of the greatest empire to arise from the astral armageddon known as the "War in Heaven" do battle with the nightmares of deceit, war, and despair.

Morai Heg, also known as the Crone or Crow Goddess, manages the strands of fate for all mortal souls in her rune skinned pouch, while battling the Chaos god Tzeentch; the Raven lord and self-styled Master of Fate.

Asuryan, the Phoenix King and Lord of the Pantheon has his legions of silvery sentinels slay the barbarous bloodthirsty hordes of Khorne.

At his side his brother, Khaine the Lord of Murder, does battle directly with the Chaos god of skulls, blood, and brass called Khorne the Blood God who sits upon a Skull Throne.

Meanwhile, Isha the Goddess of Life and mother to the ancient Aeldari holds back the foul gardens of Nurgle the Plaguefather and Lord of Decay.

For eons, the Aeldari pantheon has won every battle against these ruinous powers with runes, blades, and divine knowledge. Yet, now the very Aeldari that brought them into being have begun to undo them.

A fourth Chaos god gestates in the heart of the Aeldari empire and shall take form using the flesh and blood of their gods.

It is a god of excess in all things, born from the uninhibited decadence of a people free from want, suffering, even death.

Slaanesh, who is neither male nor female, for Hir titles are both She who Thirsts and the Prince of Pleasure.

As the birth of a new Chaos god draws ever closer, the three older Chaos gods storm the borders of the Aeldari pantheon, eager to rob and ravish the doomed gods themselves before Hir birth.

Seas of greater daemons gather at the call of the Tzeentch, Khorne, and Nurgle.

Avian Lords of Change circle overhead, like vultures above dying carrion. Their azure feathers cover only their back and wings, with pale white scales of a snake's underbelly covering their stomachs and chest. Long goose-like necks hang crooked from their shoulders, supporting a beaked head that opens periodically to let out a hoarse screech or cry made by their twisted throat and the wriggling worm-like tongue in their mouths. Their taloned hands hold stolen scrolls and scepters of foul magics, while golden amulets adorn their breast.

Flame belching horned Bloodthirsters, crimson in color and covered in bulging muscles, spread their tattered bat-like wings to dive hooved feet first upon their enemies with flaming swords and rage filled roars.

Great Unclean Ones guffaw as foul flatulence is expelled from their gargantuan obese gangrenous bodies as they raise rusted cleavers covered in pox and plague above their heads while clouds of flies and maggots erupt from their ever rotting flesh.

Nameless daemons from the still gestating Slaanesh emerge from thin air within the pantheon. Ghostly mockeries of the graceful Aeldari, they flit in and out of the shadows, preying on anything they can sink their crab-like claws and sharp nails into.

Doomed by their own believers, surrounded on all sides, the entire pantheon except one holds its ground for the final battle.

The Mad Clown God, Cegorach, ever laughing jester of the divine has disappeared from the Sea of Souls with its mortal followers into the labyrinthian Webway; a space between space that hides the First Fool from the hungry eyes and thirsty jaws of Chaos.

The death of an age and empire draws close as fated doom comes.

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'I never wanted this.' Lilieath, Goddess of Dreams and Visions, thought to herself as she sat upon the right shoulder of her giant one handed grandmother, Morai Heg.

The Crone stood silently before the shapeless ever shifting azure horror that was Tzeentch. Both were locked in a battle of plan against plan before the other's even began. Neither could move, for to take a step forwards would mean a step not taken back. Thus, the fates available to the one who moved first would be lesser than the one who moved second. So, the two gods were locked in eternal combat of prediction and counter-prediction. An endless staring match between the blind eyes of the Crow Goddess, and the infinitely opening and closing sight-orbs of the Raven Lord.

Lilieath would usually assist her grandmother with whispers of visions and dreams of possible futures, helping to sway the battle in their favor. However, Tzeentch was uncharacteristically quiet this time, doing only the bare minimum to keep Morai Heg occupied. For although its daemons swarmed above them, the Chaos god itself merely bided its time, waiting for its inevitable victory that was to be brought by the hands of the Ruinous Powers' newest member.

The lull in the battle between them allowed Lilieath to cast her eyes away from it, and look back onto their pantheon and the Aeldari's empire; stepping back into her mind's eye to see all that was and would be, waking from reality as a dreamer does from a dream.

Upon the massive patrolling crows of Morai Heg her thought-sight rode, and everywhere she looked war raged.

Her mother sat at the center of her domain, bound to a living wooden throne with the silvery light of Asuryan's edict; the all-binding order preventing gods from communicating to mortals. Around her lay the landscapes of every environment imaginable, taken from several hundred planets reborn by her hand and the Aeldari. All of these lands were beset on all sides by the youngest and oldest Chaos gods within and without.

Nurgle's Heralds and Plague Bearers groaned and gargled at the borders, waving rusted bells; counting the souls owed and the moments left before entropy and disease claimed everything. Great Unclean Ones stomped over the trees deserts and tundras, waded through her lakes and rivers, or floated upon the deep blue oceans on the rotting carcasses of ancient ships carrying great rusting cleavers to hack their way to her.

Rot flies and Plague Toads flew and flopped ever forwards as the infantile Nurglings sang and rolled in balls and piles of pus and phlegm, scattering feces wherever they went so the slug like bodies of the Beasts of Nurgle had easy passing over the slop of mucus and filth.

Meanwhile, inside the woods and rivers of Isha's realm, mockeries of her mortal children cavorted through the trees. They strung up the wild animals that she gave life to; grasping at their feathers, fur, and fins, gutting them from tip to stern, and gouging out their still living eyes. Flowers and grasses were thrown into purple pink flames to make horrid musky incense, and the trees bringing nature's bounties fell as the daemons carved Hir blasphemous name into them again and again.

The forest.
The desert.
The arctic tundra and the humid swamp.
The pond, the lake, the deep blue of the ocean.

The daemons of two gods young and old, marched and swarmed, skipped and slogged.

Then there was a scream.

A mother's cry; the high pitched roar of a lioness finding an empty den, the howl of a she-wolf of stolen cubs.

And Isha's realm shook, as her voice ripped through it like the shockwave of an ancient nuclear bomb.

The forest grounds burst as ancient roots, newly grown, tore out the very ground beneath the daemons. Thousand year old trees emerged from thin air, swatting the fat and skinny alike with hardened branches that bent like young yews.

Peat bogs made of the non-existent matter of the immaterium swallowed agents of entropy and pleasure seeking pawns alike, filling every orifice with thick mud, robbing them of everything but the ability to live.

Striped of sanity, sentience, and even sense; those who came to feast on her misery became eternal food for her gardens of life.

In the desert, harsh winds raged, whipping up sand storms that ground chitinous claw and sticky fat to dust. All the while, arctic blizzards froze her foes in a shower of diamond dust.

Floods, big and small, drowned the enemy in her water ways. Smashing them against rock and pebble, shredding shell and meat, rendering their incorporeal forms into food for even the smallest shrimp to have a meal.

Upon the oceans, great sucker-covered arms surrounding beaked maws reached out and dragged both ship and daemon beneath the waves.

New blooms grew at the boundary between grandfather Nurgle's garden and hers. Pitcher plants with potent digestive juices sprang up as ferocious beasts with cruel claws and ferocious fangs descended upon the bell holders and tally makers of rot; grabbing them with teeth and claw, dragging them to the bubbling innards of hungry plants where their flesh burned and boiled with acids and enzymes to break down their cancers and cankers both.

Carrion birds came to snag the walking dead, for even in the real world they snacked on polluted flesh, turning it into natural fertilizer for future life.

Lo the Great Grandfather's servants died in droves, and the Prince's pawns perished in the rugged wild lands that would not tolerate their excess.

But Lilieath saw the whole of what was to come.
She felt Hir beneath her eyelids, inside her pores, under her nails, as Hir sharp tongue pressed up inside her ear.

Her mother was the antithesis to Hir. A goddess of life in balance opposed to that of excess. She could survive the coming of the Prince of Pleasure, even if it meant in a lesser state.

They, the other gods of the pantheon, would not be so fortunate.

Even now the Prince of Pleasure perverted their essence, stealing their myths, and polluted their legends.

In the far corner of their Pantheon, Khaine and Asuryan, brother gods, did battle with Khorne; God of War.

Silver shielded sentinels, mortal Aeldari heroes who had been elevated to god-hood before Asuryan's edict, slew wave after wave of Khorne's horde, with skill and silver blade.

But…

Lilieath saw Hir corruption there, for with every slash and slice, their moves became less precise.

What was a simple stab became a stab and twirl. Single steps became slight skips and hops. Meaningless flaunt entered their form. Although it did nothing to stop their slaying of the daemons, Lilieath could see the perversion of their purpose growing as the mortal Aeldari dived into further decadence and depravity.

Suddenly, there was a roar and the ground shook. Khorne stood from atop the bone white and blood red mountain of skulls that rose far in the distance. It was the place the Blood God had first arisen from; the fabled Skull Throne. Its literal seat of power was fed by the mortal mass-murderers in its service who screamed its name for every successful slaughter.

Armored in black smoking metal, and carrying a great sword as long as the Taker of Skulls was tall, it leapt onto the battlefield, crushing its minions underfoot.

Khaine, the Aeldari god of war, stepped forth with his ever burning blade. Orange armor engraved with runes of murder and death sheathed his burning body as blood flowed endlessly from the god's uninjured hands; the mark of unforgiven sin for his murder of the hero Eldanesh, first of all the Aeldari and friend to the gods.

The two Gods of War charged at each other. Khorne trampled and crushed Bloodletters and Bloodthirsters underfoot, as Khaine leapt over the lines of Asuryan's sentinels in a single bound.

Khaine's spear met Khorne's sword, and the shockwave shattered the earth upon which they stood, smashing Khorne's daemons into bloody chunks.

But, Khorne cares not from where the blood flows.

Gore and bone are sucked into the black smog coming off its blacker armor, and Khaine shifts backwards as Khorne's sword grows heavier.

With a single step back and well placed kick to the knee, Khaine forces Khorne to stumble forwards, and in that moment twirls to deal the death blow that tears off the black helm of Khorne.

As the black smoke that forms Khorne fades away, Khorne stares down from its Skull Throne, never having left it in the first place. Bitterness builds up in the red glowing lights it has instead of eyes.

NO!

Its wordless roar flattens its minions before him, crushing them to bloody pulp.

NO!

The great sword of Khorne stabs into the mountain of skulls, sending blood, bones, and flames in a gout of black smoke like the pyroclastic flow of a raging volcano.

NO!

The God of War does not speak, but its roars of anger leave little room to doubt its meaning.

Khaine grimaces up at the black god, before looking down at the faint motes of purple, sparking beneath his armor.

Just as Khaine could feel it, Khorne could see it too. The corruption of its eternal enemy, the perversion of a prize that belonged to Khorne.

In ages past when they fought, Khaine would not have twirled. He would have stabbed Khorne straight through the chest and pinned the Blood God to the ground.

Meaningless flaunt infected Khaine as well, for there was no point in trying to kill Khorne.

Eons ago, Khorne was nothing but a smokey sword wielding shadow that screamed and roared as Khaine stepped on its form. But, war and slaughter never ends, and as the primitive races of the galaxy wept and cried for all the death and destruction they wrought upon themselves they screamed, 'Why?'

The Aeldari gods heard those calls, even before Asuryan's edict when they could have answered it. But, being Aeldari gods, they gave no answers to the beings who didn't believe in them.

So, Khorne gave them meaning for their meaningless deeds.

Killing for the sake of killing.
Glory for the sake of glory.
Rage to rage further on.

And those cries of 'Why?' dimmed, only to be replaced by its clarion call.

"Blood for the Blood God!" Khorne's mortal champions cried as buildings burned around them.

"Skulls for the Skull Throne!" They yelled with grime covered sword, spear, or ax raised high.

Slaughter begat slaughter, and doubt and misery was replaced by simple rage.

So now Khorne sat, as tall as Khaine, armored in black steel and dark smoke on a Skull Throne.

Endless armies flowed at its feet, made from those freed of reason, guilt, and filled with the Truth of Khorne.

Khaine looks up at Khorne on its mountain once more; from the blood spattered burnt plains that they have fought upon countless times.

And Khorne roars again, as it charges down from the Skull Throne it eternally occupies. Rage and spite spur it on, for it knows it has been denied its rightful prize.

'I never wanted this.' Lilieath thinks to herself again, as the great black wings of the crow flap, carrying her back to the center of the Pantheon; to the white pillars of the parliament where she spoke the words that doomed them all.

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"Grandfather." Lilieath called out to Khaine, while standing midway up the white steps of parliament. He was slowly walking up the steps, far later in attendance than all the other gods.

"What is it?" The God of War replied irritably, orange armor glowing faintly with annoyance. He was bitter and bored from the long peace that came after the War in Heaven.

"I had a dream." Lilieath grasped her left arm, shivering at the memory of the nightmares she saw of what was to come. However, to stay silent was to see worse things come to pass.

"What dream?" Khaine said, stopping on the steps to look down at her. Orange eyes narrowed, yet burning with both curiosity and expectation. If the Goddess of Dreams and Visions had come to the God of War, surely it meant that a great enemy was to come, and battle was what he was made for.

"I saw your death, grandfather." Lilieath spoke, and Khaine's eyes widened a little before laughing at her.

"I am the God of War. granddaughter." Khaine finally spoke, wheezing a little from laughing so hard. "Death is a part of me. Tell me, what foe dares to strike me down, and will I take it down with me?"

"No grandfather." Lilieath shook her head. "You will not die a glorious death."

"What?" Khaine's voice was calm, but she could see the rage burning in his eyes as the shards of the Reaper, an ancient scar he received as his reward for slaying a Star God, rose to the surface blackening the orange and red of his armor.

"You will die by the hands of mortals." She said, and the blackness grew across Khaine. "Torn apart by the Aeldari, we will all die in depravity."

Then and there, with only words, she gave herself and her people to Slaanesh.

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'I never wanted this.' The thought echoed in her head as it had for the past several thousand years.

It had echoed when Khaine stormed from the Sea of Souls and became the Lord of Murder; slaughtering the very people he had spilt his divine blood, and spent thousands of years protecting.

It had echoed when her crying parents, Isha and Kurnous, begged the Phoenix King Asuryan to let them speak to their mortal children.

It had echoed when that same Phoenix King, furious at the betrayal of his order by her mother and father, gave them to Khaine to torture and blame for their future deaths.

Echoes and echoes of the same thought rang as civil war raged between gods.

When her grand-uncle, the Smith God Vaul, bargained for her parent's freedom.

When Khaine beat and broke Vaul for breaking his promise, before binding him to his own flaming anvil.

When fair Eldanesh took up Vauls's sword, only to be run through by Khaine's blade in cold blood.

Even now, the dark path she had started them on had not ended.

Visions of her mother forced themselves before her eyes. She would be one of the last remaining gods of the Aeldari, stripped bare and kept in a rusted cage. Her head, shoulders, knees, and toes were all curled in pain as blood spilt from her eyes, ears, mouth, and nose.

Nurgle's poisons ate away at her insides and clogged her lungs. Meanwhile, boils gathered together to form pustules on her pearly skin. Throughout all this, fevers fried thoughts and memories from her mind.

All of the blemishes and blood disappeared with time, cured by the divine essence of the Goddess of Life. But, all this was for nought, for once she was healed, the fleshy vines of rot and ruin would reach through the bar and seize her golden hair and arms, and force her mouth open for Nurgle's pox and plague filled ladle to pour another putrid concoction from his cracked and broken cauldron.

'I never wanted this.' She thought to herself as she looked down on their patheon; still a glorious beautiful city of bone white buildings and extravagant tapestries; organic lines and curves in every part of its architecture.

But, to stay silent was to endure far worse.

The Aeldari would whisper that it was her lust for her father's attention that drove her to speak to Khaine.

'Better a defamatory lie than the terrible truth.' Lilieath thought to herself, for it was not her father that forced her to speak, but her mother.

Isha was the Goddess of Life, and life was a constant state of balance and change.

The polar opposite of what the Aeldari had become.

In her dreams, Lilieath had watched her mother beg and plead with her mortal children; to turn them from their evil ways. Some would listen, but most would mock and spurn her warnings, instead demanding more of nature's bounty to feed their ever growing thirst.

Then, on one unknowable night, Isha would come with fatal song and silent voice to take back what she gave.

Daughter to Khaine and Morai Heg, Isha carried within her two different stories of death. When she could bear it no more, her cries would become a banshee howl.

Isha was the mother of the Aeldari, and the mother of all that they needed to be. She gave life not only to them but the plants that they grew and the beasts that they hunted. And in the wild the mother not only gives but takes.

No matter how hard an injured cub cries, the lioness sinks her teeth into its stomach to take back the flesh and blood she gave in order to feed the other starving cubs with warmer healthier milk.

Parent birds pluck the smallest squealing chick from the nest, and cast it down to the ground to find more food for their larger healthier children.

So, Isha would take back what she gave to her sons and daughters, so new life could live once more.

However, Isha was not a wild animal.

Every life she took, each child undone by her voice would bring misery and mourning to her eternal heart.

And after eons, a new Goddess would be born; more terrible than serendipitous Slaanesh, self-defeating Tzeentch, rage-filled Khorne, or despondent Nurgle.

A sane self-loathing goddess of merciless culling and terrible purpose; the Miserable Mother. A goddess that would take from the weak and the strong in equal measure, to balance out the mourning she would spread. A new reaper of souls that kept all things in balance while seeking to tip the scale to one side at the same time. An internal hypocrisy that would see her torn apart by her own two hands.

Lilieath's visions ended there, and she did not wish to see any further. The endless black tears streaming down her suffering mother's face was enough to choose Slaanesh over her.

It would be easy to blame the Aeldari. Many times she had cursed, writhed, even had tantrums at their folly. No matter how many visions of death and despair she sent their way, her dreams never changed. Some had listened, becoming outcasts and drifters. Some even reverted to the wild, letting nature curb their instincts.

But, the majority either ignored her warnings or took them as unavoidable prophecies, further descending into madness in order to shut her out; imbibing in psychedelics, stimulants, and blasphemous mental sensations so they no longer dreamed or even slept.

A stabbing sensation drove into her gut, and her mind returned from the back of the crow to the perch on her Grandmother's shoulder.

Morai Heg's already bent back collapsed even further, as if she too could feel some unescapable pain.

'It has begun.' Lilieath thought to herself, and although she had seen and felt this very moment for tens of thousands of years, dark terror froze her blood and crept around her shoulders like an icy blanket or a stranger's arm.

Before them, Tzeentch sprouted 9 crooked mouths, each containing only 9 teeth and 9 different tongues. It whispered 9 heretical hymns, with 9 nauseating noises, each containing 9 sinister secrets. 9 different glyphs from 9 dead races appeared, and 9 baleful glows filled the room.

Outside Isha's garden, three Heralds climbed atop a massive molting maggot and rang their bells 7 times.

Khorne roared at Khaine, and charged him with its great sword in hand.

8 different blows fell; the head, the eyes, the neck, the wrist, forearm, upper thigh, behind the knee, with a final slash between the ribs.

Every blow, bar the final one, was deflected or dodged. When the final strike dug into Khaine's armor, he answered in turn; stabbing Khorne through its chest and binding the two giants of fire and smoke in a bladed embrace.

Lilieath gasped as the pain stabbed through her again a second time, then a third, then a fourth. Each sensation of suffering grew, spreading across her skin like lascivious eyes ogling at her body; imagining the dark torments it could inflict upon her fair flesh.

Then, the fifth pain closed like a vice around her throat, as if some ghostly hand had dug itself underneath her skin; like the hand of a stingy shopper searching at a fruit seller stall, finally finding the most succulent one of them all.

Then the 6th pain came, and tore out her throat.

Beside her, Morai Heg buckled, and blood burst out of her back followed by her ancient spine.

Across the Pantheon, the invisible forming hands of Slaanesh stole from the gods one by one; tearing off beautiful Atharti's skin, ripping out watchful Hekarti's eyes, pulling out Asuryan's heart and as many other organs as she could from the Phoenix King's broken body.

Khaine buckled as Slaanesh tore at his muscles and sinews, thirsty for the physical perfection of power and violence they contained.

As his body began to tear, the Lord of Murder rose, lifting up his spear still buried in Khorne's body before throwing the God of War off of its tip back to his Skull Throne. Then, the ever bleeding hands of Khorne took his spear and stabbed it into his gut.

A fire pillar formed, incinerating Slaanesh's taint, but also burning out Khaine's own body.

Drawing deep from his legends of bitter training and endless effort, Khaine focussed on all his different aspects and legends; driving out the flair and flamboyance that had been growing inside him. However, it was not enough. She who Thirsts still snatched at the torn tendons her earlier ravagings had revealed, and tugged at them tearing muscle away from Khaine's bones.

With a hoarse cry, Khaine stabbed his spear deeper into his gut. As his cheeks sagged and eyes sunk into their sockets, he drew out the aspect of the Reaper; turning black and charred like the living-mental monstrosity he had slain so long ago.

But, before Khaine could finish his battle with Slaanesh, Khorne stood over him; giant sword by its side.

As its eyes glowed red, Khorne lifted its sword above its head, and struck Khaine with a titanic two-handed blow.

With the aspect of the Reaper so close to the fore, Khaine shattered into countless shards, just as the Star Gods had been in the ancient past.

And Slaanesh screamed with Lilieath's throat.

"MI~NE!" She sang, still wrapping stolen organs with stolen skin. "MI~~~NE!" Nailless fingers pointed at Khorne, accusing the thief that stole her prey.

Khorne merely stared at the remains of Khaine before raising its head to the blood and gore that twisted and twirled around Slaanesh; reforming into pink-purple flesh, claws, nails, and horns. The giant sword groaned as the black gauntleted fist of Khorne clenched around its handle, before being raised horizontally to point at Slaanesh.

The new god shriek-cackled, and leapt forward with its new elongated legs. Hundreds of hands grew and shrunk from its back and sides as the minds of mortals went mad with Hir birth; shifting and churning Hir nightmarish form into new horrors and terrors.

Then a bulbous putrid fist back-handed the new god, sending Hir crashing through decaying buildings and crumbling arches.

Nurgle, oldest of them all, stepped forward from within the Warp; carried by its own two legs as much as the sea of Nurglings that spilled from his fat folds, eager to bury themselves underneath the Plaguefather's sloppy green backside in order to lift his girth with the billions of others beneath him.

Nurgle laughed as Slaanesh writhed in pain and shame, before casting a backward glance to Isha's domain.

The once vibrant lands wilted and died, drained of life by Slaanesh's ever growing thirst; giving free passage for the forces of Nurgle to trample over them. The Grandfather's minions sloppily flowed forwards, guffawing and giggling as they stumbled and slogged forwards, only stopping periodically to grab the dying beasts and birds so they could cover them with vomit, phlegm, and flatulence.

Isha herself was unharmed, her nature protecting her from Slaanesh's thirst.

Freed from the silvery light of the now dead Phoenix King's edict, she sang Wraithbone into armor and spear as Nurgle's minions drew near.

Nurgle smiled as his minions surrounded the Goddess of Life on all sides. Then a crab-like claw cut into Nurgle's face, tearing into the soggy meat and already softened skull of the Plaguelord's head.

Nurgle giggled and reached out with meaty paws, only to have Slaanesh dance away from him as Khorne's blade slammed into the other side of the Grandfather's face.

Ruinous Powers they may be, but they were as alien to each other as to anyone else. With the mouth watering Aeldari gods gone, they now turned to the less tasty prey that was each other.

As the three fought in the open palace of the Aeldari Pantheon, before the broken bloody body of Asuryan barely held together by his silver armor, Lilieath crawled forwards toward Morai Heg's body as Tzeentch's spells undid the wards around them. Bleeding from the throat, and no longer able to sing the Wraithbone, she pulled herself up by her staff; made from the pitch black quill of one of her Grandmother's birds.

Cawing filled the room as the murder of crows returned to their master, squawking and swooping endlessly, eyes wild with anger.

Then the Raven Lord's spell struck Morai Heg's minions; who had all drawn near to protect their master one last time.

Evil intelligence grew in their eyes, and thirst for knowledge filled their hearts. Their body's grew as their high pitched caws turned to dull croaks.

Lilieath watched in horror as Morai Heg's crows became Tzeentch's ravens, and they descended upon their previous master's body, hungry for the knowledge contained in her divine blood.

Lifting her staff, Lilieath began a silent spell of sleep, hoping that she could undo Tzeentch's spell by putting their minds to rest.

But, Tzeentch saw her and with 9 different barks ordered the ravens to attack.

Black beaks descended upon her, and stabbed into the ground she had been standing upon.

Stumbling forward, unable to breathe properly with a torn throat, Lilieath swung her staff; shooing the ravens away from her Grandmother.

The giant ravens hopped backwards and forwards surrounding her, letting their siblings dart forwards while she was distracted. Slowly, the black forms drew closer and closer as Lilieath choked on her own blood; body sweat drenched from exertion.

Black feathered bodies darkened her surroundings, as cold unblinking avian looked down at her.

She swung at the head of a raven that had snapped dangerously close to her face, forcing it to flap backwards, but the swing was too much for her and she stumbled forwards.

Then a black beak closed around her left wrist and bit.

Whispery gasps escaped her throat as she tried to scream in pain, then there was shake and a pop, and she was flung away from the flock of birds surrounding her.

Lilieath lay there gagging as the croaks of ravens filled her ear.

Finally, as the exertion finally left her, she pushed herself up off the floor, only to stumble into a pool of blood.

Her blood, for as she looked down in shock at her left shoulder, she saw nothing there.

A raven croaked, and she looked upwards. There, above her head, her own arm was pinched in a black beak like the leg of a half-swallowed cricket.

The raven spat out the arm and returned to the flock; already sinking their beaks into their previous master's body, sucking out the blood like vampire finches.

Shame, rage, and hopelessness filled her eyes with tears as the ever mutating form of Tzeentch finally stepped into their broken domain.

An azure 9 fingered arm sprouted and reached for the rune skinned pouch of Morai Heg; the pouch that contained the fate of all mortals, only to be suddenly bitten by one of the ravens.

Tzeentch grew a face to face the flock and the angry birds croaked in unison, not having had their fill.

Frowns of different sizes formed, and furrowed brows with eyebrows but no eyes creased across the Raven lord's formless blue flesh.

Then Tzeentch shrugged, and floated upwards to join the battle of the other Ruinous Powers.

In the proverbial sky above the Pantheon, purple clouds gathered. The Sea of Souls roiled as carnage, hedonism, and complacency tore and bit at each other.

Tzeentch's true minions, the Lords of Change circled in these treacherous skies as clouds of Chaos let loose mad lightning upon them; frying some of their number leaving nothing but black ash and monstrous screams.

These blue and purple daemons had taloned hands and vulture-like necks which held up beaked heads with beady eyes. Great feathered wings carried their scaly frames, as they all carried stolen artifacts of other primitive gods around their necks.

Masters of magics all, they spread out to 9 different points, centered around the Chaos gods below. Flying in obscene patterns, trailing floating feathers behind them like disgusting ink; they drew black marks and curses for Tzeentch's great spell.

As Tzeentch took center stage, it lifted 9 arms and made 9 glyphs.

Chaos lightning gathered above the Chaos gods, and the three below shielded their eyes from the blazing light that haloed the horrid Tzeentch.

Then all 9 hands thrust downwards at the other Gods, followed by roaring thunder and flashing bolts.

Khorne shouldered its sword, and swung back at Tzeentch with all its might.

Nurgle belched, coughed, and then vomited green bile gas and stench.

Slaanesh opened its toothy mouth, and screamed with the twisted stolen voice of beings that sang matter into reality.

As the Four struck at each other, their individual Truths shifted the Warp; twisting, cutting, corroding, and corrupting the very fabric of reality.

Tzeentch's spells swayed the laws of the Warp and physical realm to his side.
Khorne's sword smashed the space between real and un-real.
Nurgle's rancid breath spread and stank; rusting and rotting the walls between thing and not-thing.
And Slaanesh's scream shattered the thin shell of sanity that held the now roiling madness of the Warp behind the veil of dreams and nightmare.

Where the Four's blows met, the Sea of Souls shook, and then space opened.
Like the eye of a mad-man awakened from a fever dream, empty space split open letting out the Chaos and cruelty of the deepest reaches of the mind into the world.
Fear and hopelessness. Terror. An eye filled with the Terror; of knowing the Primordial Truth of this new world.

Madness.
Violence.
Despair.
Selfishness.

The Four's Neverborn screamed and roared as the very Warp poured out into the materium, like air from a hull-breached void ship, dragging their non-existent being into reality.

Billions upon billions of unprepared daemons were dragged to their doom; to dissipate as their very essence spread out like steam from raindrops on red-hot steel; fogging the minds and sight of psykers in a thick cloud of panic and horror.
Bloodletters howled as Plaguewalkers groaned. Pink and blue horrors screamed and Daemonettes laughed as their bodies broke apart, burning and bubbling as their non-flesh fell away into the nothingness they truly were.

In that moment as laughing Nurglings rolled past Great Unclean Ones, who clung to their crusty cleavers with blades dug deep into the remains of Isha's domain, barely holding on as the Eye of Terror spilled daemons in never-ending tears, Lilieath saw her mother. Clothed in nothing but her broken armor and torn shift, the Goddess of Life took one last look at the remains of their Pantheon before cutting her rooted feet from the land that formed her body and home.

Weakened and silently weeping, Lilieath watched as all that made her mother launched herself into the howling winds and fled to the world of the living; towards a golden blood-stained path bordered on both sides with deep ditches, brimming with billions upon billions of dead and suffering mortals.

Nurgle roared, his prize denied. A horrid sound, like the concerted bubbling flatulence of corpse gasses passing from bloated cadavers in a mass grave. It was an alien sound for the God of Despair; for rage and anger were Khorne's domain. In-turn Tzeentch laughed as secret visions it had never seen came to pass as it knew they always would. Khorne brooded, feeling itself become more cunning; plans for future conquests forming in its skull. Slaanesh slumped, giggling softly to Hirself; the slow pleasures and gentle whispers of addiction and avarice filling Hir mind like fumes from an opium pipe.

As Chaos struck at itself, they had infected one another. Traits from their siblings polluted the purity of purpose they possessed when battling the Pantheon. Then, the moment passed and they were as they had always been. For in the Warp, what happened tomorrow would happen yesterday. Siblings of cause and causality chasing the other's tail only to find it was its own brother.

Even as the Four realized a change that had happened before they had been born, the broken form of the Crone goddess stirred. The ravens drinking her blood shimmered, shedding off illusions of madness and ditching the greedy look in their eyes for the cold intelligence of the avian companions of Morai Heg.

As one the murder of crows flew upwards, disappearing into the Webway before reappearing above the Lords of Change with small mortal forms on their backs, followed by the echoing ghosts of laughter.

Cegorach, the First Fool and Mad Clown, played his last joke for the Aeldari gods. Being of trickery and showmanship, Cegorach could not resist the irony of deceiving the Warp creature that called itself the Great Deceiver.

Black beaks and talons tore the wings off of the Lords of Change as Harlequin riders jumped from their backs, floating down with Flip-Belts onto Tzeentch's daemons to deliver painful death with the Harlequin's kiss.

"The Laughing God's Faithful have arrived, and Death and Fate have taken the stage!" Cried one of the masked crow riders, leaping from its mount towards one of Tzeentch's Greater Daemons.

Too close for magic, the daemon opens its mouth to bite the foolish mortal in two, but snaps short as the Aeldari performer backflips in midair, before falling past its shut beak, wrapping its legs in checkerbox tights around the daemons long neck.

"Feel my kiss, and despair!" the Harlequin cried, stabbing the sharpened tube attached to its wrist down into the daemon's breast. Coiled monofilament wires burst and danced within the chest cavity of the demon; liquifying its innards, forcing it to cough up blood and gore before falling from the sky.

Pulling back the monofilaments into her gauntlet with a click, the Fool's follower kicked off from the dissipating daemon, landing back onto her crow steed before firing into the eye of a different Lord of Change that had begun to flank them with thousands of monomolecular blades from her Shuriken pistol while simultaneously throwing a Star-Bola to wrap around the beak of another daemon looming behind them.

Below them, the Four turned to Morai Heg, for the Crone cackled as she lifted her spineless, blind, beak mark covered body with her right arm stump and left hand.

With a single motion of her stump, the shards of Khaine rose, then flew to the waiting hands of even more Harlequin, who tucked them under arm, before disappearing in flashes of blinding color as Mirage Launchers fired from positions hidden by Holo-Fields.

"MI~~~~NE!" Slaanesh screamed, more of its prey stolen by a lesser god, and raised its scythed hands to slash apart the Crone.

But, before it could take a single step, silver chains wrapped around its face; for the broken form of Asuryan was replaced by a being of silvery flame, donned with his shining armor. New edicts rang, binding Slaanesh; frying its disobedient skin and treacherous limbs.

Built from the Gods of the Aeldari Pantheon, Asuryan's orders held some sway over She who Thirsts; part of the reason the Chaos god stole so much from the Phoenix King in the first place.

The youngest Chaos god screamed, shattering the Wraithbone walls and ground around it.

Silvery flames spread across its form, as the Fire of Asuryan grabbed the ends of the chains that formed his edict, and yanked Hir to the ground.

Khorne and Nurgle looked on as their youngest member struggled; then they fell upon Hir with cunning and greed.

What morsel could this last ember of a dead god provide, when compared to the succulent full form of their youngest sibling?

However, the most horrified of them all was Tzeentch; for it watched with all its ever-forming eyes the loss of the greatest prize.

For before Morai Heg was a single Aeldari warrior, bowed before her bent bleeding form.

The Crone Goddess reached down with her wrinkled left hand, and picked up the Aeldari between thumb and forefinger.

Then, she raised up their armored form above her head, where the last shard of Khaine hung.

And with a cracked voice passing through cracked lips, the Goddess of Fate pronounced them, "Young King."

Fire and fury burst from the shard, swallowing the Aeldari's form; consuming all that they were, are, and would be in an inferno of hate.

As the ashes of the Young King fell from Morai Heg's grasp, the awful, giant, full form of Kaela Mensha Khaine rose once more for one final time.

Tzeentch screamed, for it knew all was too late, but in its maddening self-defeating schemes, it could not stop itself from casting a spell it could only ever cast once.

9 newly formed mouths cast 9 terrible spells in 9 damned dialects. Each spell more powerful than the one before formed a cyclical ring of ever growing mind manipulation and madness. However, each and every spell was just as impotent as the last.

With a banshee cry Khaine swung his burning blade onto the broken bones of the Crone's last outstretched hand. The hand that held the rune skinned pouch of Morai Heg; the pouch that contained the fate of all mortals.

Sword then spell hit Morai Heg, and the cackling goddess of crows vanished from sight under azure flames; burning her form and memory from both Warp and mind. Consuming all her myths and legends; leaving only the Black Library and faded runes in forgotten temples to remember her name.

Even in the Webway Tzeentch's spell was felt, for the Harlequin carrying the shards of Khaine stumbled, mission forgotten, purpose lost. Then, they began to dance. In practiced form, all in sync with a performance planned by the Laughing God, they moved forwards. For binding every hand and every limb was a strand of fate grasped by the Clown God's hand.

The floating god sniggered, puppeteering its troupe in both Webway and Warp with its last gift from Morai Heg. Although its fellow gods were dead and its followers damned; the last laugh would always be the Mad God Cegorach's.

As the ashes of Morai Heg drifted away with the last spent shard of Khaine,
her severed hand flew, straight and true, like a spear,
Through tainted air, beyond beak and claw, with not a single fear
For nothing could deny its destined course.
To spill the contents it carried, and let mortal backs bend under fate's cruel weight.

Tzeentch's minions rushed to block the hand's path and seize all mortal fate in order to deliver to their master's infinite hands. But, the crows of the Crow Goddess swooped down upon them, having thinned the herd of Tzeentch's Lords of Change.
Blessed with the blood of Morai Heg, willingly given, they saw all fate; avoiding daemonic blows and magic blasts, while casting counter-spells to all of their curses with cacophonous cawing cries.
"This dance is our last, so make it our finest!" Cried one of the Harlequin, for though she no longer knew why she was here or what she was fighting for, her God's script ran in her mind.

Throwing another Star-Bola at a Flamer of Tzeetch, she leapt from her mount without a second glance at the plasma charged conflagration that incinerated the triple mouthed daemon.

Landing on the head of a Pink horror, she pulled out her Fusion Pistol and blasted it through the head with superheated force.

Torn in two, the two pink halves turned blue and two new Blue horrors wrapped their many hands around her legs.

With a twirl, she slammed one horror against the other before smashing them both into the side of a manta ray shaped Tzeenchian screamer, squashing both stunned daemons underfoot.

"In war there is poetry. In death release!"

Pulling her power sword from its sheath, she buried it between the many eyes and fangs of the Screamer's head and twisted the blade, driving herself and the Screamer straight into the path of Tzeench's magic.

The Chaos god screamed as another one of its minions ran headlong into blue and purple flames; once again defeated as Harlequin and crow covered the hand's path. Slaying daemons and sacrificing themselves to shield Morai Heg's pouch from the self-styled Master of Fate.

Swarms of Horrors, Screamers, and Flamers hurtled after the hand.
Like clouds of locusts, they blackened the land.

Forsight can only cover so much, for although the crows saw all they were only one.
So one by one they fell.
Torn to shreds by seas of Horrors.
Shattered to pieces after being surrounded by Screamers.
Burned to cinders, steed and rider, as Flamers filled their path with purple conflagrations.

"Long ago, Lilieath foretold this day." The last Harlequin spoke as it rode upon the very hand it was to protect; firing Shuriken pistol and Neuro Disruptor at the two closest targets among the thousands that chased them.

Purple bolts fly towards them, and with one last look at the swiftly approaching portal between reality and nightmare, the last Harlequin summersaults from the hand directly into the path of the magic.

"Like Cegorach, I laugh at fear and pain."

And laugh she did, all the way; as she plunged feet first into the purple bolts of Warp energy.
Foul power shattered her feet and legs like sticks, cauterized her midriff until it was as brittle as dried plaster before it incinerated the rest of her body; leaving only a spinning mask that sunk silently into the Webway, just as daemonic claws swiped at the Warp where it was.

Then, with a silent rip the bag was gone and the deed was done. Infinite strands of fate flew out into the mortal space between the stars, forever out of Tzeentch's reach; who shrieked with 9 frustrated howls and beat the ground of 9 different realms with 9 balled fists.

Meanwhile, Slaanesh, who had been stabbed and stepped on by Khorne and Nurgle returned their blows in kind; stabbing them both with scissor-like claws before kicking them away with purple hooved feet.

Grabbing the chains that bound Hir with Hir multiple hands, the Chaos god wrenched them causing the flaming figure in silver armor to stumble forwards.

Smiling, the Prince of Pleasure wrapped the chains around Hir chitinous forelimbs; dragging the struggling remnants of the Phoenix King closer towards her.

With one final yank, Asuryan stumbled forward, right into the outstretched pincers and claws of She who Thirsts. Those limbs that attempted to grab the flaming body passed right through the fire, but the claws that grabbed the silver armor found purchase there, and they crushed and pried the metal like a lobster with a clam.

Bit by bit, the armor warped and the flames that formed Asuryan sputtered and shook like a campfire in strong winds. Finally, his knees buckled sending his armored helm into one of Slaanesh's hands.

For one moment, the metallic creaking and grinding of claws crushing metal stopped as Slaanesh tilted the helm upwards, stroking the flaming figure's ethereal chin with a soft finger even as Asuryan's flames burned the digits all the way to the bone.

Then a sadistic grin spread across Slaanesh's beautiful face, and she raised 6 scythed limbs before stabbing and slicing the silvery helm from 6 different sides.

The silvery flames of the Phoenix King sputtered once before being snuffed out, leaving only smoking silvery ruins behind as well as grinning Slaanesh. But, as the ruined helm of Asuryan fell from Hir grasp, a single spark flashed in the rubble, then detonated with apocalyptic force.

Slaanesh, Khorne, and Nurgle were consumed by flames that wiped Asuryan's palace from the face of the Warp, and those same flames burned through the very fabric of reality, falling down to real-space where mortal hands could find them someday.

As three of the Four shrieked, roared, and groaned while the fourth continued its terrible tantrum, the Eye of Terror twisted.

The echoes of Slaanesh's screams had tainted it.

What was a gaping wound became a hungry maw that swallowed entire worlds, licking them up like grains of rice with countless purple tongues. The Aeldari empire, filled with the sacrificed, died a second time as the remains of Hir voice fell upon them.

Daemons took form on their wicked worlds, descending upon the damned.

As the screams and cries of billions of voices left from torn throats on millions of worlds, the victorious yet defeated Chaos gods rose. Each of the Four glowered at the others, cursing and blaming them for their lost prizes and stolen prey.

With a shriek, a shout, a mocking laugh, and a cursed spell; the battle between them began anew. Keepers of Secrets formed from the thick musk of Slaanesh's pores, descending upon the winged Lords of Change flying upon winds of magic. Great Unclean Ones guffawed as their fat flabby fingers grappled with enraged Bloodthirsters spitting fire and fury with every breath. Seas of lesser demons charged forward, eager to draw the new borders of their god's domain.

It was a sick parody of the Eternal War fought moments before.

No, it was no longer a war. No side could win. Whether it be Khorne's rage, or Nurgle's despair; Tzeentch's madness, or Slaanesh's hunger.

They were Chaos. The Four; Evermore.

No One would best the other.

The Eternal War had ended… and The Great Game had begun.
Lilieath woke from her vision dream, similar yet different in detail.
Cautiously, she whispered into her Grandmother's ear with cupped hands to hide what she said from Tzeentch's ever present gaze.

A twinkle appeared in Morai Heg's eye, but she remained as still as she had always been, giving no reason for Tzeentch to suspect anything.

'So, Isha, you have another path ahead of you, daughter.' The Crone thought to herself. 'Whether it's for better or worse, my blind eyes can't see at this time, but let my blessings be upon you and all your children,'

A slightly strained crease crossed across her face as she gave a sideways glance at her little Lilieath on her shoulder.

'I'm sorry that I can't say the same for you, Granddaughter.'
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Lilieath woke in the dark palace of the Prince of Pleasure; to the sucking sound of meat off bone.

Her body remained as ruined as it was at Hir birth. Left arm missing. Throat still torn out.

In the darkness, the source of the sound was hunched over the remains of a different Aeldari god, mutilated beyond all recognition, greedily sucking off the remaining flesh; digesting marrow while it was still in its living victim's bones.

Then the sucking sound stopped, and Hir head rose and turned towards her; baleful eyes glowing like those of a great cat in the dark.

The many hands and claws of She who Thirsts waved like reeds in the wind, before reaching forwards to crawl sickly and sensuously; like a mix between a bug and predator of the night.

Finally, it reached her, and cupped her cheeks with hands softer than silks, as the nails from those same hands dug into her skull like the prongs of a fork does to a juicy steak.

The beautiful, yet disgusting face of the newest Chaos god cooed softly, a sweet dove sound. Then she smiled; so gently.

A smile so sweet that spread and spread, splitting cheek and ear, before going around the back of Hir head.

The corners slithered between the horns that were there instead of hair.

Crossing the brow, the bridge of the nose, before joining up again at the top lip.

Hir mouth opened like a burst vomit bag, turning the face inside out, revealing a maw filled with teeth, tongues, tongue covered teeth and teeth covered tongues.

Some were spikey and serrated to stab and slice.

Others were flat and hard to gnash and grind.

All covered in a thin layer of gristle; the grime of its first meal, the remains of her family.

It lunged forward, and darkness swallowed her.

The last thing she heard… was the crackle and pop of a thousand teeth piercing her skull.

But her silent suffering had just begun.
 
Writer notes: Prologue: The end of the Eternal War

Nidhog153

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A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of irony/references/foreshadowing I've made here.

TItle:
I just thought it would be great to have an ironic title for a section that's in the Sea of Souls where there is no forwards or backwards, yet a linear sense of progression from one state to the next. i.e. Aeldari Pantheons existed, then died. For a place that doesn't have a concept of time, the very fact that these things have an order of occurrence is insane. There's no way an 'eternal' war can end, but it did.

Main Part: No real references to other books or real world events. There is a some foreshadowing here for future events.

Specifically, the Chaos gods infecting each other when they hit each other with their full might.

Isha using a Wraithbone spear to fight against the creatures of Nurgle, using her minions (the plants and animals), or a medium (the wind and ice) is also foreshadowing for that same future chapter.

Also, although I left the scale of Isha's domain vague on purpose, it's the size of several planets in real-space.

I wrote about it somewhere else, but the events in the chapter are a very loose reference to the fate of the Aeldari.

The acts of the gods are more symbolisms of what the canon Eldar did to rebuild.

Khaine drawing out his aspects and focussing on brutal training etc. was a nod to how the Eldar rebuilt part of their society by using the Aspect shrines to focus their minds and block out Slaanesh.

Morai Heg's pouch symbolises the way the Eldar split apart to follow their own paths; Corsair, Craftworlder, Outcast, Exodite, Commoragh, etc.
They're no longer the one united Eldar empire, but all chasing their own destinies.

Cegorach holding the strings of fate for the Harlequins is a nod to the fact that becoming a Harlequin is one way to prevent being soul sucked by Slaanesh.

Asuryan was more of a, "That would be kinda cool to have him do, rather than just be the guy that screwed up everything." sort of moment. Anyways, Slaanesh broke Asuryan's edict when she killed him a second time. (Isha's being freed from the tree being a foreshadowing of that.) Plus, the flames of Asuryan are a thing, and I needed a reason for them to fall out of the Warp so Eldar could collect them.

If I had to add anything to the above...
it would be that Asuryan's role as the one who commands the mortals elevated to gods and the one who binds the gods and restrains them to certain functions is a reference to a future plot point
 
Chapter 1: Temporary Refuge

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Isha's armor fell apart as she fell from the Sea of Souls, upwards into the Great Rift in space-time.

Bitterness and anger raged in her breast as winds of warp energy propelled her into the materium.

She watched as the scar turned purple, and the smokey trails of loose Warp energy turned into massive hungry tendrils of the Warp consumed entire planets; smothering worlds in the thick smog of suffering and Chaos that it has become.

One of the tendrils took notice of her, and approached with the illusion of slowness created by its interstellar size.

Even now, she saw gas giants and their satellite rings of moons fall through the tendril, consumed in seconds; showing the sheer scale of the monstrosity and the speed at which it moved.

Twisting away from it in the semi-real space that now existed between the materim and immaterium on the border of the Eye of Terror, Isha thought furiously as to where she could go.

The Webway was one option, but in the dark space between the stars, no portals were available for her to enter its labyrinthian walls.

The Warp was no escape; the equivalent of running down dark alleys of sin infested cities while shadowy stalkers followed at every corner. At best, it would be a treacherous run through horror and nightmare. At worst, it would be a desperate last stand followed by eternal torment.

Isha grimaced as a third option passed through her mind.

It would be painful; and a great shame that admitted her powerlessness. However, at the very least it would throw off her pursuers, and buy time for her to consider her options.

With a twirl of her finger, the Goddess changed the direction of her fall; onto a familiar desert planet where ancient foes had sought to undo them all.

'The dark pylons of the Necron should hold back the Warp to some degree.' Isha thought to herself as she approached the dead desert planet, before laughing to herself. 'To think that the weapons that were made to kill all that lived provide me with the opportunity to survive.'

It was a cruel irony. Necron pylons were the blackstone weapons built with the intention of stripping her and her allies of their greatest advantage, the magics of the Sea of Souls. A bitter irony in itself, for it was Vaul who forged the first blackstone alloys in his mighty forge; providing the materials for the construction of his Six Talismans of Vaul that decimated Necron starships and Star Gods alike.

Having stolen many stores of her allies' treasures, the Necron in turn mixed the psycho-active blackstone with their own deadly technology; converting entire solar systems into mobile barriers to push back the interstellar armies of her psychic children, and their even more powerful Old One overlords.

Flashes of green lightning followed by torrents of emerald energy struck out from gauss lightning arrays and particle whips; all positioned behind the detestable resonance generated by these Dark Pylons that echoed with others of similar make on other dead planets orbiting dead stars. Unfearful of the psychic repercussions that would usually follow, they fired again and again; shredding void ships apart, spilling the bodies of her children and their allies into the cold dark space.

Now, unpowered and unmaintained, with many of the once desiccated worlds restored by Isha's own hands, and many more by the hands of her mortal children, this one planet's pylons should not bar her from entering.

It would however, serve as a temporary ward against the far more disorganized essence of the Warp and Chaos.

Isha gathered all the energies that remained inside her, and prepared to penetrate the Dark Pylon's field, purple tendril slowly swallowing planets behind her.

Pain hit her as she hit the anti-psychic field. Nerve endings fried, as what felt like baleful electricity criss crossed her skin. Through gritted teeth, Isha forced herself forwards, and began to reinforce her body to prepare for planetary impact.

Behind her the tendril swayed, suddenly having lost sight of its prey, the barrier hiding Isha's divine essence; like thick rain washing away scent. So it returned to the Aeldari coreworlds, to suffuse more souls in the Warp's sadistic suffering.

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Isha woke upon the planet's surface. Pain covered her; partially from the ever present pylon field, but also from the force of her landing. She looked back at the crumbling mountain top she had punched through, as well as the long trail of superheated sand she had left when she had skidded to a stop. Only her perfect skin and hair had protected her, remains of clothing and armor mostly gone.

With a sigh, she sang thin Wraithbone into a simple shift. Although a refugee, her race's pride prevented her from walking across even this supposedly dead planet with no one to see her in the nude.

Climbing out of the crater she had left, she shook her head. The pylons passive presence messed with her mind and Warp sight, randomly dimming and blurring as her essence pushed back against the field's suffocating presence.

She stumbled as her vision lost focus.

'My children…' she thought, suddenly understanding where the dizzy spell came from.

The Aeldari were dying across their Core worlds, and with every death her power waned. The consumption of their souls by She who Thirsts, drained her; like an open bleeding wound.

Clutching her stomach, she collapsed into the dry sand, and curled into a ball; weeping.

'Mother of the Aeldari' she thought bitterly. 'What mother runs from the monsters that consume their children.' But there was nothing she could do for them; only weep as she heard them suffer and cry, even though all of this was nothing but karmic retribution.

As the tears touched the surface of the sand, small brown plants began to grow; the precursor to desert weeds to provide shade and suck moisture trapped deep beneath the ground, the very beginnings of terraforming this dead planet.

Looking at the plant with blurry eyes, Isha sniffled, before climbing to her feet once more.

'I am sorry.' She thought, both to the plant and her children. They both had a harsh destiny ahead of them, but there was no choice for either of them. They would either overcome it or die. Whether it be from drying out in this desert, or extinction at daemonic hands.

'I must move on.' Turning away from the plant, Isha focussed on her Warp sight once more.

This planet hid her presence, but Chaos would eventually come. It would be easy for a mortal mind to calculate her vector and speed to determine the star-system she landed in. Even for the chronically insane minds of Chaos, Tzeentch at the very least would eventually determine where she was.

Searching for a Webway gate, Isha walked on through the sand flowing between her toes and over her bare feet. Harsh sun and heat, reflected off of her pearly skin; like natural sunscreen.

Day and night she walked, above the Dark Pylons buried beneath the sand, under the small moon and dual-sun of this harsh land; all throughout hearing the voices of the damned.

On the 10th day, Isha collapsed. Her Warpsight had cleared somewhat, thanks to the wards she remembered using during the War in Heaven, but the mental strain and fruitlessness of her search had drained her mind and soul of all their energies.

As she lay in the sand, barely breathing, a faint burst of binaric static sounded from beyond the dunes, followed by the sound of heavy boosts wading through shifting sands.
 
Writer notes: Chapter 1: Temporary Refuge

Nidhog153

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A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story. My story makes a lot of references to other real world events or mythology, so I've made these to elaborate since some of the symbolism and references are hard to get for some non-native speakers as well as younger native speakers.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of irony/references/foreshadowing I've made here.


Title: I had a hard time coming up with a title, because there was no rule or previous example I could fall back on. I almost gave up and just had chapter numbers.

Main Part: This is a really short chapter, but coming up with the next part's Tech Priest sass was taking longer than I'd liked, so I just made it its own seperate chapter. It also gave me a feeling of what length I wanted. I used to write until I had 10,000 word chapters before posting, but editing and reviewing such huge chunks of writing is soul sucking, so I'm not going back to that format without being paid for it. Although, I ended up going for +5000 word chapters recently, so I might end up with chapters that long someday.

The drafting process for long chapters is way worse. If you feel like 1 scene isn't going right, you can scrap that and recycle stuff pretty easily. If you have a chapter with multiple scenes that cross-reference each other, redrafting one scene can force you to change stuff that you actually liked or felt was good.

I've legitamately burst out laughing like the Joker because I realized re-writing one scene screwed up 3 weeks worth of work. (That's probably why I'm borderline insane at the moment.) So, yeah, future writers. Keep the chapters short and stylish.

It's insignificant for the reader, but making this first chapter so short allowed me to figure out a good pace and way to set-up chapters. 1 scene+optional flashback per chapter is my current rule. Anything more, and it just gets tiring. That might lead to slower plot progression, but I wanted the story to be as showy as possible, so what I want to say is often in the actions and descriptions of the characters as it is their words.

The only bit of foreshadowing is where Isha's body is strong enough to land on the planet without being hurt. It's not normal flesh and blood, but a symbolic construction of all the information that lies within her. However, like the Emperor's blazing figure on a golden path, Isha has her own 'true' form that does not look like her mortal body as well.
 
Chapter 2: Capture

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A/N: There are mentions of body horror and vivisectoin in the next part. Please read carefully.

It was the clinking of chains that woke Isha next, and for one panicked moment, she feared she had been captured by the mortal agents of Chaos.

However, the binaric static that came from around her quickly told her otherwise.

Keeping her eyes closed, she felt out from herself, grasping the dimensions of the room she was in.

It was made of metal, and very dark. Gears turned and thick pipes shook with the rushing sound of promethium flowing through them. Steam whished from unknown contraptions; covered in gears, levers, buttons, and the half-mechanical skull of the Mechanicus.

'Mon-keigh fanatics' She mentally huffed. A better captor than she had feared, but equally hostile.

Heavy chains bound her arms and upper torso to a cross shaped slab held up against the wall; hardly the welcoming preparations given to a guest. Heavy blast doors kept the room shut, and two white robed figures clinked and clacked across the floor, waving the mechanical tentacles they called mechadendrites around picking up various broken instruments such as circular saws, laser cutters, and plasma torches.

The blast doors clanked, and internal locking mechanisms unbound from each other, as the massive gears on the door spun; whether it was decorative or for practical purposes, Isha could not say.

As the doors opened, a third robed figure entered the room, and the blast doors slammed shut immediately behind her.

Binaric static filled the room once more, and Isha reached out to their minds to eavesdrop on their conversation.

Their method of communication was strange, always with an identifier, and very little respect for the common gothic grammar their species often shared. A strange mish-mash of mathematics, scientific jargon, and religious references; almost a reflection of what their culture was.

Quartermaster Xhal: Risk assessment result requested.

Magos Khmash: Risk assessment overturned. Unrecorded nature of subject = Potential for new information on Xeno species. Classified Eldari. All risks < Acquisition of new samples.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: Recovery possible by Class F servitors. Therefore, nascent risk of target deemed to be 0.0000000001%

Quartermaster Xhal: Addendum, recovery possible by only Class F servitors. All other partial or non-lobotomized servitors and Skitari report neotenic regression in mental state. 45 mind wipes were carried out, increasing task flow by 32% past daily median. Request reassessment of effect on servitor, Skitari maintenance efficiency and propose re-schedule of vivisection to post-mortem dissection.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: Request denied. Servitor, Skitari maintenance = class 10 process. Canticle 3.251 of Maintenance Hymn Version 45112. "Decrease importance of task = Decreased necessity to improve until loss of efficiency > Rate of acquisition of information from new Xeno sample."

Quartermaster Xhal: Parsing quote… String association within local cogitation network… [[[Error]]] File not Found. Inference: Quote has been truncated through intended or accidental omission. Suggestion: downgrade importance of all further suggestions from Xenobiologis Tirevola using multiplier of 0.05.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: Insult detected: 0.05 = communication priority of Class D servitor with only 25% of original brain matter and 0 cogitation augmetics.

Quartermaster Xhal: Warning: Statement does not generate sufficient task importance to cogitate response. Automated binary warning sent: Reformat cogitation banks and recalculate statement importance before decreasing unit efficiency through repeated binary communication requests. Failure to comply = Reprocessing of augmetics for decorative functions due to inferred inherent production fault. Therefore, probability for successful augmetic recycling = <0.0005

Magos Khmash: Enough. Reset all binary communication priorities to default values according to standard communication protocol. Psychic interference requiring all operating teams working on subject to have undergone either total lobotomization or compartmentalization of emotional sensors into cogitation vault is identified as subject risk for target. Counter point: The path laid by the Omnissiah is not an easy one. Risk has been noted, but potential information has been deemed to outweigh risk. All future binary discussions will now be prioritized towards cogitation of vivisection methodology for subject.

Quartermaster Xhal: Resetting cogitation priorities. By the will of the Omnissiah.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: May knowledge show the path forwards. Suggestion 1: assemble neuro-sympathetic link to trauma cogitation vault. Quote: "Know thy enemy as thy self." Greatest method of knowing the enemy = empathy. Therefore, empathetic attachment to subject nervous system during vivisection = highest efficiency method for data extraction from target.

Quartermaster Xhal: Usage of neuro-sympathetic link documented to decrease unit personal negative feedback response by [Data Redacted]. Additional documentation suggests 30% increase in unit wear and a 50% increase in time spent for maintenance leading to a net decrease in user optimization. Addendum: Quote not found.

Magos Khmash: Agreed, projected required increase in data quality exceeds statistically probable outcome. Previous records also provide data that, on average, decrease in subject survival times by 40±5% upon use of neuro-sympathetic link. Current subject importance dictates best course of action would be to increase survival time for longest period of data acquisition.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: Usage of data acquired from neuro-sympathetic increases personal unit serotonin levels by median of 250%. Increased motivation = increased efficiency in subject preparation and future data acquisition tasks.

Quartermaster Xhal: Inquiry: has usage of neuro-sympathetically acquired data been confirmed to be addictive.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: [[[Error]]] Inquiry has been deemed to infer on unit worth and faith in the Machine God. Response not generated.

Magos Khmash: Xenobiologis Tirevola, command priority 5-499. Submit to full functional reassessment once current subject vivisection schedule has been completed.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: Understood. All responses withheld until full functional reassessment has been completed. Switching mechadendrites to remote manipulation.

Quartermaster Xhal: Magos Khmash, primary reports indicate dermis of subject and cranial follicles were resistant to standard vivisection equipment. This behavior is not reported in previous subjects. Possible explanation?

Magos Khmash: Osseous samples of previous Eldar subjects reported to be several times stronger than plausible from material construction. Similar trait plausible to be extended to other tissues in some individuals.

Quartermaster Xhal: If dermal intrusion = impossible. Then alternative method of intrusion possible is through mucosal membranes. Key targets; oral cavity, nasal membrane, oculi, colon, and genitalia.

Magos Khmash: Latter two options are undesirable. Increase in necessary post operation cleansing rituals should be avoided.

Quartermaster Xhal: Expression of personal relief. Options provided in preferred order of attempts. Personal note: removal of colon and genitalia logged as greatest gift from the Machine God in personal maintenance logs.

Magos Khmash: Similar description found in personal logs. Conjecture: increase in comfort level of subject during procedure leads to minor increase in subject survival time. Therefore, removal of colon and genitalia first = increase survival time for subject?

Quartermaster Xhal: Negative. Log 311510 indicates removal of subject genitalia generated great distress and almost immediate expiry of subject due to shock.

Magos Khmash: Unfortunate. Then the procedure begins with the oral cavity. Prepare for cauterization of tongue and removal of dental protrusions.

Xenobiologis Tirevola: Breach of previous statement made due to change in subject eye movement. Vivisection target is awake.

Isha chuckled to herself, ruse found out as the three augmented Mon-keigh turned towards her.

"Identify yourself and purpose." Demanded the one labeled Magos Khmash as it barked at her in a synthetic voice.

"You demand to know what I am?" She spoke quietly as the rage built inside her from listening to how casually they spoke of brutalizing her children.

As her eyes began to emit a silvery glow, a long forgotten feeling of terror grew in the Tech Priests' mechanically enhanced minds, even with the emotional cogitators physically holding apart brain matter from synapse; preventing the electric signals that would have formed fear.

"Then know me you shall." Her head rose, and the chains binding her creaked and groaned as they snapped apart from a flex of her limbs.

"I am the mother of murdered children. Inheritor of a stolen birthright. The winds and waters of worlds birthed the beings which swam and strode across them at my command."

"I am witness to the War in Heaven. Victim of foolish laws and the Lord of Murder. Betrayer of my uncle and the King of Gods."

"I am the consort of the hunt. Mother to dreams. The daughter of two deities of death. Now, hear the cry that drove my father's blade into my mother's arm!"

Raw awful knowledge rushed into the mind, as the keening wail of the goddess washed over them.

Life, and the place of all creatures within its great cycle, was revealed.

They could see it now, the strands that tied their own mortal fire to the smallest embers in an ant, and where their ashes would go when the final flame died.

To hear her voice was to know one's place in the universe. To see the smallness of all that encompassed their being, and the beauty of belonging to the eternal taking and giving of that which animated them all.

When Isha's voice ended, all that stood before her collapsed; mind and mechanical substitutes, burned out by divine knowledge. Broken were their dreams of grandeur, their faith in the Omnissiah, as the bitter truth of life as they had always instinctually known it; the sheer meaninglessness of their struggle in the grand scheme of things, permeated their every thought.

For in their glazed, opened eyes; the smallest gnat was of equal importance to the very leaders' they had pledged allegiance to. And the damnation of the Goddess of Life robbed them of all their mortal pursuits, for to know the sufferings of the sickest slave, snuffed out all the taste and odors of the finest wines gifted by the greatest lords.

Isha slumped forward, torn chains rattling to the floor, panting with exertion and self-loathing. Cursing mortals was abhorrent to her; even those not under her protection. Furthermore, that cry did not end within this room. Across the planet, servitors, slaves, and Skitarii buckled to their knees while the Tech Priests' binary babbling fell silent in their noosphere as her voice wracked the local Warp.

The Four would surely take notice, no matter how strong the pylons of the Necrons were.

Though her curse had neutered the populace's Warp presence to the point where they could not provide sustenance to the Four, they would provide pitiful protection against the mortal agents of Chaos.

Shaking off the remaining shackles, Isha strode past her slumped captors. The sight of them sickened her, for though it was her curse that brought them low, she hated it. Life was not meant to be lived like this. For as much as what she had shown was the truth, true life was always oblivious to it. No predator would kill a prey if it felt its own teeth pierce its own skin. No tree would drink from the dirt with the knowledge that they were feeding on the fecal matter and corpses of other plants and animals. This was a truth she was supposed to shoulder, not them.

A frustrated sigh escaped her lips, as the thick blast doors bent beneath her fingers, before she wrenched them out of her way.

She had to hurry. Whether it was by Warp or Webway, she needed to leave. Although she may have damned this world to her pursuers, all would be lost if she were captured.

Then she felt a great golden heat open in the void. The blazing glow of a burning star, scouring the very Warp of all its denizens as it passed. Her wide eyes gazed up into the inky sky, just in time to see the faint flash of a closing warp portal; a brief purple glow among the far brighter stars.

A growing sense of dread approached. Visions of grim death and necessary suffering flashed across her mind, as the burning man-shaped thing came towards her in a massive gold and red Void Ship. A ship so far away that it could not be seen by the naked eye, yet fully in rage of the batteries of guns that lined either side; capable of penetrating the crust of planets.

The Anathema came, and she could not run. For in its awful glory, the very Warp receded at its touch. The faint feeling of the Webway was washed away, only to be replaced with golden walls and wards of righteous hate and conviction.

Isha's Warp sight crossed with the Emperor of Mankind's; both of their brow's furrowed. Then, with a great bitterness in her heart, she bit her lip and bowed her head and knee.

'To struggle free from one set of chains; only to dive into the bindings of another.' Isha thought to herself 'Surely, Cegorach would have found this most amusing.'
 
Writer notes: Chapter 2: Capture

Nidhog153

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A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story. My story makes a lot of references to other real world events or mythology, so I've made these to elaborate since some of the symbolism and references are hard to get for some non-native speakers as well as younger native speakers.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of irony/references/foreshadowing I've made here.


Title: I still had trouble writing chapter titles, but at this point I was thinking it would be best to just have them be as descriptive as possible. The one twist was that Isha frees herself at the end, only to be trapped on the planet by the Emperor, so it was a bait and switch that made the chapter title true. I think that was when I decided that the chapter titles should not only be descriptive, but have an element of irony or sarcasm to them.

Main Part: The Xenobiologis dialogue was really fun to write. I don't think we'll get a similarly comedic section any time soon because vivisection and mentions of genitalia are apparently borderline content for the Creative Writing rules. Gallows humor kind of needs that stuff to be sinisterly funny. More Tech Priests will appear... someday... probably... maybe!

I have an anime-ish comedy interaction planned between with the Emperor and Isha, but from what they're talking about, it'll have to be placed after they go to Terra. I have a bad feeling shippers will start flocking here after that section. (If it ever gets posted.)

The idea that one of Isha's weapons being her voice and her Truth really grew here during the drafting stages. This was the time when the prologue and Chapter 2 were being drafted at the same time, so ideas shown here flowed backwards into the prologue.

Well, to tell the truth, that entire part with Isha's Truth and the effect it had on everyone was the part that was written first (Not this Chapter, but the entire story). The idea about the target being the Tech Priests came much later. You can sort of tell, since the last part talks about wine, but the Tech Priests don't drink wine. That's because that section didn't have Tech Priests until much later.

I think I started writing the Prologue after I had the part of Isha's voice/Truth done, so I kind of wanted Isha and Slaanesh to be song/voice based after that. It felt right because the Aeldari are such graceful aliens, and they also do the bonesinging thing. There was also a not insignificant pleasure taken in the macabre irony that the two gods who are most opposed to each other share a core trait. That's sort of an underlying theme for the story.

As for foreshadowing, the only one I can remember putting here is that Isha is strong enough to tear blast doors apart. That's relevant later. Also, her song and voice will come up again.
 
Chapter 3: Avē Imperātor. Pax Hūmānus. (Hail Emperor. Human peace.)

Nidhog153

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Isha waited as the ship of the Emperor approached; head and knees bowed. Hours passed, but she could feel the ever present weight of his gaze on her.

Meanwhile, her ancient mind cast out to remember what she could of the so-called Master of Mankind.

There were whispers that the Three, now Four, had always spoken of an Anathema to their existence. A thing that rejected them entirely, but was at the same time not seen as important as the Aeldari Pantheon.

It was a topic of small conversation among the Aeldari gods. A minor curiosity, a new primitive god thing of another newborn primitive race.

The one oddity it had was that it was not ever-present in the warp. There was no fiefdom of mankind in the Sea of Souls, no minor settlement.

'Lucky for the both of us that was.' Isha thought to herself, for with the Aeldari Pantheon gone the Sea of Souls was now the paradoxical Warp; nature changed by the shift in rulers from Pantheon to Ruinous Powers. Any lesser gods were most likely consumed by the Four, if they hadn't been eaten already. The Pantheon had lost interest during the long time of peace; the endlessly appearing and disappearing deities of lesser races quickly becoming repetitive and droll. Some of those more primitive gods were almost certainly devoured before the Three brought themselves to the Pantheon's gates.

Perhaps it was this tendency, to remain in the materium, that gave it so much power here, Isha mused.

Being eons older than humanity itself, Isha found the overbearing power this Emperor had to be confusing. With more followers, and greater age, her strength should have been above his. However, although far less terrifying than the aura Khaine gave off, she didn't dare to fight with the creature approaching her lightly.

Was it because of some sort of specialty? Some inherent nature to purge un-real from real? Did it find some artifact from the War in Heaven to empower itself?

'Does it even really belong to humanity?' She wondered, as there were many deceivers and usurpers who would take the myths and legends of others, eternally switching from one minor race to another, sucking them dry before moving to more numerous stocks.

'No.' She shook her head, thousands of years of memory playing through all at once. The Master of Mankind was a fickle being; appearing and disappearing at seemingly random moments in time, but usually appeared when mankind needed it most. Therefore, its nature was one of protection, or at least it should be. Its strange disappearance, during the Sundering of humanity and the loss of their artificial intelligence during the period they called the Old Night, did not fully fit its description. However, the Ruinous Powers and their minions had mysteriously reduced the number of attacks on the Pantheon during that time. Perhaps it was preoccupied preventing even greater threats?

The ship entered into geosynchronous orbit above her, and a lump built up in her throat as she remembered the infamous planet-killing weapons humanity has seemed to almost enjoy unleashing on one another.

'At the very least, this time it would be justified.' Isha thought to herself sardonically. What better place to kill an alien god? A dead world, with living dead citizens; victims of the psychic attack of that very god.

Then she felt the Emperor's presence shift to a much smaller transport vessel; still capable of carrying legions of soldiers, but magnitudes smaller than the orbiting dreadnought.

'At the very least, he seeks to meet me, face to face.' Isha allowed herself a small breath of relief, but she could still feel the oppressive walls and wards of psychic energy closing down around her. If anything, they were getting smaller, like a net being pulled in around her.

The way his power dodged the Necron pylons' effects concerned her. Surrounding the planet with wards was something she was able to do, before the Fall. But, to pull it in so tightly with no flutter or failing through the pylons' disruptive field was something she had never seen before. At the very least, it showed a much higher understanding of this ancient technology than her. Perhaps, it was that knowledge that granted him so much power outside the Warp.

A vestige of memory tugged at her mind; some rumor or tale that she's heard Khaine or Kurnous talk of somthing that happened near humanity's home. However, her attempts to remember were cut short as the Emperor's transport flew into view, a golden vessel with barely aerodynamic wings, held aloft by clunky grav-generators, jet engines, and noisy turbines.

Isha felt the proverbial hairs rise on the back of her neck. The hostile intent radiating from the Emperor had continued the entire way down. Was this some way to cow or threaten her?

Well, she snorted, the Master of Mankind had its specialities, and she had hers. If this was the only way it could think to bargain, then there ways to survive under it; undesirable as they were.

Dust and sand flew up as the vessel landed in front of her, and the side of the ship opened to reveal the golden forms of the Emperor's own soldiers in suits of bulky armor. A red tassel decorated their helm and the Imperium's mark, the aquila, was gilded onto their massive pauldrons.

Bolter-spears held in both hands, the Emperor's Custodes marched around her, surrounding her on all sides, before banging the butt of their spear into the ground in a united salute.

CLOMP CLOMP CLOMP

The footsteps of the Emperor echoed from the ship, before appearing from the top of the hatch. Only the bottom of his armored greaves were visible to Isha's lowered head.

But, all Isha could feel was her dilating pupils, and the small muscles under her skin tense; pulling up skin in goosebumps, as her heart began to race.

THUD THUD THUD

Metallic clanging turned into dull footsteps as the Emperor's feet stomped across the sand towards her.

As the Emperor approached, Isha's instincts screamed. Even as she bowed the knee and hung her head, she could sense no ceasing of his hostile intent.

'What would conflict between us serve?' She thought wildly to herself. Surely, it was better to parlay with her than slay her.

She lifted her head to lock eyes with him once more, and in that grim visage, she knew what he intended to do; and remembered the mocking voice of Khaine telling a story on some backwater planet.

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In the ancient past, before mankind had even reached the stars, an ancient enemy of all who lived awoke on the only planet man had. A single shard of the Void Dragon, Mag'ladroth, ancient Star God of the Necron; most powerful among their number and creator of the cursed green lightning that stripped matter apart. Its very presence was an existential threat to man, and so its protector rose to destroy it.

However, being of man itself, the protector was as cunning and crafty as any of its number.

Bringing the beast low with warp blast and flaming blows, he shackled it in great chains and then cast its mind into a deathly dream of empty victories and eternal battles. Forced to forever ponder methods of destroying potential enemies.

Then, the protector took the Dragon to the darkest depths of Mars, to the place they would name the Noctis Labrynthus. There the half-dead god would eternally dream, so men and women of similar mind could steal ideas and inspiration from its perpetual nightmare.

"Craftiness is but a sign of weakness!" Khaine snorted, finishing his tale. "Nothing can be learned from the mad-mind of those star-sucking parasites."

Beating his chest, Khaine rose, drawing the eyes of many gods. "We defeated them with our own power; our own skills, and Vaul's crafts. Let them learn of the weapons of our defeated enemies, and weep when our blades sing down upon them when they use them against us in their arrogance!"

Raucous laughter followed in her memoreies of the Pantheon, only to be reflected now in Isha's terror.

No wonder the Master of Mankind could use its powers within the dark pylons' field.

It had broken into the mind of the Star Gods greatest inventor; and taken the secrets it felt it needed.

The Master of Mankind did not intend to barter with her, but rip the very secrets out of her mind over the course of an endless sleep.

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As great chains of golden metal and red blood appeared around her, Isha lept back and sang the Wraithbone to form around her as her own mortal form shifted and cracked into a more war-like silhouette. Claws, fangs, and feline fur replaced the gentle willowy features that formed her; with legs and arms lengthening for greater reach and leverage.

The Custodes around her raised their spears, but lowered them again as the Emperor raised his taloned left hand. Then he leapt forward, with his flaming sword held in both hands raised high.

Isha sang a bone white spear, and swung with all her might only to have it shatter against the golden steel. But, the blow was deflected, and with the sword out of the way, Isha dove at the Emperor's throat with her mouth open wide; only to have a backhanded blow from a talonned fist strike her across the cheek, sending her sprawling to the ground.

Stunned, she barely had time to feel the chains bind her hands and feet, only waking as they dragged her battered form into the air.

As the sleeping spell that subdued the Dragon took form upon his blade, Isha let go of the flames of fury that changed her form, and cried out with one meaning from the depth of her heart.

Mercy.

Her voice sang of mothers covering their children as dark reavers raised their spears.

Mercy.

Fathers holding back shadowy forms, screaming to their spouse and children to run.

Mercy.

The cry of the poor, the sick, and the broken as the rich, proud, and powerful trod upon their backs.

Then the Emperor stabbed his blade under her ribs; tearing open the diaphragm, ending her song in a final pained gasp.

Isha gagged, as her lungs could no longer take in air, and then saw the blade inside her no longer glowed with the power of forced slumber and thought-stealing.

"It would do well…" The Emperor spoke calmly. "to silence yourself, Eldar."

Gasping for breath, she could not help but feel both an immense sense of relief and bitterness build up in her throat.

"Is the Master of Mankind, the Anathema that even the Four fear, so lacking in mercy to a desperate Mother's cry?" She whispered.

"Mercy is a tool to bind the fearful and desperate." He stated bluntly, and she felt the blade dig into her body a bit more

"Then…" she smiled bitterly. "it is fortuitous for us that I am both."

The Emperor tilted his head slightly before reaching down with his taloned hand, to grab the golden locks of hair upon Isha's head, dragging her up to his eye-level.

"Tools are only useful so long as they serve; and I doubt your species' pride will keep your head cowed for long."

A pained chuckle exited her mouth. Humans, so base, primitive, yet at the same time so painfully pragmatic and utilitarian.

"I will be fearful and desperate so long as the Four exist." She said with closed eyes, then looked at him. "What need of anyone will you have once they are gone?"

The Emperor's brow furrowed as he caught the double meaning of her words. He was the Protector of Humanity, only present for as long as he was needed, and later forgotten to the annals of history and legend. That was how he had always acted. Once mankind was safe from Chaos, and the echoes of its own Sundering; he would have no need for Isha as well as no need for himself either. That was, unless Isha gave him a reason to remain.

"Mark my words; Prideful Xeno." The first ghost of emotion colored his words.

"The time for man has come." Contempt, whispered in the tone of his voice. Angry that this alien anima made flesh had pointed out his purpose.

"Forever forget your dreams of grandeur and progress; and your people may live in my domain."

Isha winced as the Emperor's blade twisted slightly on the second to last word in his sentence.

"What choice do we have? It is the fate of empires to both rise and fall."

The Emperor snorted, once again understanding the double meaning of grudging acceptance and bitter warning in her words. His taloned hand let go of her golden hair, and she grimaced as she sagged back into his chains; causing the sword to move in the wound once again.

Suddenly, searing heat erupted from the blade, and she had one shock filled moment to gasp at him before golden flames seared her insides.

Then, the moment was gone and she was unceremoniously dropped to the ground with a thud as the chains fell apart; and the blade was pulled out of her body, leaving a golden scar.

"Then come." The Emperor spoke, as he turned back to his ship. "Your fate, and that of your people's will be decided in the morrow."

Isha glowered at him as she inspected the damage. This was no binding spell or curse; merely a tracking mark, a wisp of his power that would show where she was to him at all times.

'Of course.' She snorted to herself. 'Bested and broken, with nothing but enemies on all sides. Why waste the power on someone with no-where to go.'

Even if she went to the last ever-laughing Clown God, she was just as likely to be shunned, if not find only ghostly guffaws and empty stands. For the Emperor could track her through even the labyrinth of the Webway; and Cegorach was always the surprise and not the surprised.

Slowly, she picked herself up off the ground, and limped after him. The Emperor only paused once to give her a sideways look before striding forwards again. No doubt, bemused and annoyed by the obvious appearance of weakness she was portraying.

'Arrogant pup.' Isha thought, but swiftly silenced the growing growl in her throat. The Emperor was the Protector of Man. He could show no weakness. She was the Goddess of Life, and the gentle carer of the unfortunate. Weakness was a part of her, as much as strength was his. Not to mention the battle moments before had sapped most of her strength. Better to store what she had left, and let the non-lethal wounds heal naturally.

Cold metal sapped the warmth from her bare, dusty feet as she finally entered the ship of the Emperor; the golden retinue of Custodes marching past her on either side as the hatch closed shut behind them.

For now, she would be the obedient tree in the orchard, delivering harvest at season's end. But, even the most docile flower only needed a few generations in the wild to develop the spiniest thorns.

The biting cold of the wretched Warp that had been her home, had forced the fate of her people beneath the ground. But, this was merely the beginning of a long winter. Many seeds would die, but when spring comes those that remain would regain some shadow of their previous growth and grandeur.

At least, that was what she hoped.

If time was cyclical in nature, then the least it could do was repeat the good and bad in equal measure.
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In the depths of the Webway, Cegorach was laughing as Isha had imagined.
Cruelty and suffering were but two parts of comedy. Deadpan and slapstick; and reality TV if a more modern media was required.

As the Clown God laughed, a single Harlequin twirled and rhymed before it.

'Immortal man and mortal god,
striving to break Chaos's great rot,

But bitter foe and bitter slave
What precarious friends they make

Care not does he whether she lives or dies,
but to give Chaos such a prize would be most unwise.

So, tally ho my performers so,
Let mother Isha's blessings flow!'

And the empty audience murmured with whispers of various scripts and shenanigans.

Farcical, satirical, and restorative comedy were all brought up, with the last one being treated with equal measures of mockery and muffled laughter.
One actor was both while the other was neither.

Theaters of Cruelty, and the Absurd came second, but the leering crescent mask of the Mad God sent those suggesters scurrying.

In the end, the muses were muted and only the disappointed snigger of the First Fool echoed across the stage, as the sole Harlequin stamped its feet in mock frustration.

'Let the 12th live.' A revolting scratching voice, like nails on rotten floorboards, echoed in the theater leaving a moment of silence before more hurried whispers filled the stands. 'Give him the Sword of War, and let different slaughter fill his blood.'

A series of act-like gasps erupted across the room, and the Great Clown fell backwards off its feet in raucous laughter; the Harlequin bowing in thanks in its master's stead.

A great gamble had been made, threatening the separate tortures of two different gods. But, what does a damned race have to lose?
 
Writer notes: Chapter 3: Avē Imperātor. Pax Hūmānus. (Hail Emperor. Human peace.)

Nidhog153

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A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story. My story makes a lot of references to other real world events or mythology, so I've made these to elaborate since some of the symbolism and references are hard to get for some non-native speakers as well as younger native speakers.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of irony/references/foreshadowing I've made here.
Title:
This chapter title had some people confused to what it was referencing. The explanation is below.

"Avē Imperātor." and "Pax Hūmānus." are references to imperialistic conquest and cruelty.

"Avē Imperātor." comes from Ave Imperator, morituri te salutant which is the (supposed) greeting criminals and captives (prisoners of war/kidnapped peasants) were forced to give to the Emperor Claudius before they were ordered to die in a mock naval battle for his amusement.7

"Pax Hūmānus." is a reference to "Pax Germanica" which is a from WW I propaganda when Germany invaded Belgium and France.

In short, it was to stress the Isha is not a refugee or beggar coming to the Emperor. She is an unwilling captive of the Emperor and is only following him because she has no choice.

Main Part: In the original Space Battle Forum post, my Skaven Under Writer wrote this Writer's Note. I have added it here, but the reason this WN was written by the Skaven-Underwriter was because there were actually a lot of foreshadowing in this section. The fact that Isha turned into a furry for a moment was foreshadowing that she was undecided regarding whether it would be better to let the Emperor imprison her in a dream sleep, or whether she should fight. It was only after she was wrapped in chains that she came to a conclusion that being sent into a dream sleep would not be optimal for her or her children.

The other spoiler related content is when the Skaven-Underwriter wrote that Isha took everything from "Dead-thing-slaves". This is specifically referring to the Necron, and not the Necrontyr. This is actually in reference to someone who asked what would happen if Trazyn or one of the other Necron ever found Isha as she is.

My answer was that they would either run away, or nuke the planet from orbit and then run away. Isha has destroyed entire Tomb Worlds during her service to the Old Ones. There is a reason she knew how to penetrate their pylon fields in the first place.
A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of... Hey! What are you doing! HELP! THE SKA-
NOW I TALK TALK HERE HERE YES-YES! MAN-THING ALREDY SPEAK-SPOKE ABOUT THIS-THIS IN DIF-DIFFERENT POST-POST! NOW UNDER-WRITER POST-POST HERE!

Title:
I steal-steal man-thing formatthing-thing! Good Skaven under-writer always steal-take! Yes-Yes! First-first Must Co-Copy-Paste-Paste Man-Thing Post! For GREAT HORNED RAT!
"Avē Imperātor." and "Pax Hūmānus." are references to imperialistic conquest and cruelty.

"Avē Imperātor." comes from Ave Imperator, morituri te salutant which is the (supposed) greeting criminals and captives (prisoners of war/kidnapped peasants) were forced to give to the Emperor Claudius before they were ordered to die in a mock naval battle for his amusement.7

"Pax Hūmānus." is a reference to "Pax Germanica" which is a from WW I propaganda when Germany invaded Belgium and France.
Main Part: NRrrGH! MANPEROR Golden thing make Skaven under-writer eyes hurt-hurt! Thing is thing! Not man! Not MAN! Thing-thing oozes wrong-truth! Talk-talk in circles Man-thing does! Yes-yes!

Not like GREAT HORNED RAT! Truth of horned rat simple-simple! Take-take all-all! For GREAT HORNED RAT!

Manperor think-thought false-mother danger! Danger-Danger false-mother is-is! Yes YES! Big War had many god-things!
Not like GREAT HORNED RAT! But, strong-stonger than Skaven under-writer... yes. yes.

False-mother Take-took all from Dead-thing-slaves. Dead-thing-slaves plagarize work of Great Skaven-Under Imperium!
Skaven shoot green zap-zap! Not Dead-thing-slave! Skaven under-writer will send-send Cease-stop order to Dead-thing-slave!

Skaven Under-Imperium live-long-last forev-
Edit: Forgot that this was also mentioned in a post.

[Magos Khmash]: Enlarged rodent specimin contained. Glory to the omnissiah. Accessing archeotech communication device... processing... [[ERROR TECH HERESY DETECTED]] TERMINATING
Cegorach's section references some theatrical terms. The most obtuse is probably the one below. I was quite frustrated nobody got the joke at the time.
Restorative comedy is a comedy style that was used to portray men and women getting together, fighting, and having shennanigans.
Ignoring the part that it's the Eldar talking about it, the point was that everyone in the audience thought that was a stupid idea.
The Emperor is neither male nor female. Isha is gendered femininely, but she isn't a woman.
That's the joke.
*sigh I feel like an Eldar having to explain my language to a Mon-keigh.
 
Chapter 4: Dealing with a diaspora

Nidhog153

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The ship's corridors, contrary to the warm colors of gold and red that decorated the walls and floor, were quite cold; with only the occasional decorative plant to break up the repetitive colors. But, without any other quarter presented to her, Isha could do little but sit there; back against the wall, arms wrapped around her knees.

Although the actual temperature of the floor and wall did not truly discomfort her, the sheer incredulity of dumping her there was as biting as any frigid storm.

After being taken back to the Emperor's dreadnought, she'd effectively been ignored; by the Emperor, by the Custodes, and although some of the much smaller human crew cast the curious eye towards her they took their lead from their liege and ignored her as well.

'Well, almost all of them.' Isha thought sadly. There were many that narrowed their eyes, and clenched their fists when their eyes noticed the pointy ears peeking out from under her hair. Those dock hands or engineers were swiftly escorted away from the premises by normal human guards.

At the very least, the Master of Mankind was avoiding an incident aboard his vessel.

She could guess the cause of their anger.

This ship was far away from human space, near the border worlds of the Aeldari Empire; where hunting had been a pastime of the so-called nobility and common folk alike. A shudder crossed her spine as she remembered the memories she gleaned from her children's minds, and the rage that forced the usually invisible edict of Asuryan to appear, binding her to her arboreal throne.

It had been a long time after her freedom from Khaine's tortures; after the civil war of the gods had burned out.

The Aeldari had finally created a post-scarcity society; and she watched them as they rebuilt worlds, created wonders, and began to pursue various arts to perfection.

Then the perversion of all that they were began.

Even when she went to Vaul with Kuronous to create the Spirit Stones to circumvent the edict, Asuryan's chains didn't bind her; which told of the force of the feeling she had been consumed by when she saw what the Aeldari had begun to do.

If these men and women aboard the ship were from this sector of space, it was little surprise that some of them had been the victims of her people's cruelty.

Though it did nothing to explain why the Emperor was here; especially with such a large fleet. Diminished though she was, and partially blinded by the Emperor's wards, she could see the vague silhouettes of other human starships traveling along the path burnt by the Emperor's presence in the Warp.

Isha stretched out her being, carefully avoiding the Emperor's psychic wards within the ship, and felt the degree that space had stretched; the one truly universal way of telling time in the constantly expanding universe. Back calculating from the time she had last measured time this way, she was surprised to realize that several decades had already passed since the Fall.

'Cursed Warp.' She thought, shaking her head. Time was even more tumultuous than it had been in the Sea of Souls. What had felt like mere moments, falling from the Pantheon, had actually been far longer in the real world than she'd realized.

'Could the Imperium really have expanded so quickly?' she wondered.

Decades were a long time for humans, and her people in this time of need, but empires did not appear overnight; and in the lifetime of an empire, a decade was less than a blink of an eye.

Her mind wandered, going over the various worlds she had watched over from upon her throne.

The last time she had cast her eyes on humanity, they were still fractured into multiple factions across the stars; and even on their own homeworld, Chaos cultists and madmen killed each other with gleeful abandon, endlessly repeating history. At least, it would have seemed that way to an Aeldari; Isha mused. Reviewing the events on a human timescale, their greatest wars might have looked glorious, only happening once or twice every generation.

She sighed, already bored despite the fact, she had spent far longer bound to her throne by the edict. At the very least, she had her plants and animals to distract her then.

Looking at one of the plants, she reached out with her mind; entering its essence, listening to the water being drawn up by capillary action along vascular xylem, as the outer phloem pumped sugars and enzymes down into its roots to break down nitrates and minerals; simultaneously feeding the numerous bacteria in the dirt with fresh carbon.

"Do not test me." The Emperor spoke.

Isha cast a sideways glance upwards at him, nose wrinkling at the smell of scorched Warp stuff from the Emperor's silent teleportation.

"Should I feel honored or insulted that you yourself act as my guard?" She remarked darkly, unmoving from her position on the floor.

The Emperor snorted. "I would not risk anyone else, and anyone else would be found wanting."

A dry chuckle came from Isha's mouth. "Do you think so little of me to truly believe that I would make an enemy of you when I am the enemy of the Four?"

"Your kind is as mercurial as they are merciless."

There was a moment of silence as the two looked at eachother; the other humans, quickly removing themselves from the premises, unconsciously feeling the psychic pressure radiating between the two of them.

"What are you doing here?" Isha finally broke the silence, equal parts curious and wary. "This is not your home."

"We." The Emperor spat out angrily. "are needed here to deal with the remains of the misery your kind wrought."

"The Eye of Terror is far from here, and I can sense the other ships you have coming. It is a far cry from what you will need."

Although vague, Isha could see the shadows of guns and other weapons of war on the ships that followed. Too many for a simple patrol or guard, yet not enough to weather an assault in the Warp.

"The Warp is not my current concern, for now. My people are."

Isha raised an eyebrow. "Have you come to save your people from Chaos, so far from the seat of man?" A surprising sentiment, much softer than she had originally expected from the Master of Mankind, and bizarre as Chaos was only slightly more prevalent here than anywhere else.

He returned her inquisitive stare with an unmoving look.

"Why save a few thousand when I can prevent the death of billions."

"You…" Shock robbed her of her voice for one moment, before she rose from the ground. "You dare!" The air around her began to twist, miniature tornadoes forming at her fingertips as she rose. "Those are my children!"

The Emperor was not here for the Warp, or his people. He was here to cull the overflow of Aeldari running from the remains of their homes. To stem the flood of refugees, spreading out towards the scattered ruined colonies and worlds of sundered humanity.

These refugees were from the Core worlds of the Aeldari empire. Proto-Pleasure Cultists and initiates, not steeped deep enough in Slaanesh's taint to be consumed instantaneously, yet not entirely blameless of the corruption that had killed so many.

An infinitely small fraction of a percentage point of the populations those planets had, but that still meant thousands upon thousands of Aeldari were heading to the various worlds around their empire. Living beings who would need planets and resources to survive.

Of course, the planets most suited for life outside the Aeldari empire were usually the habitats of other alien species; humans included.

"Then it would have been better for the both of us if you had taught them restraint." The Emperor replied bluntly; unmoved by the new turbulent psychic energies radiating from Isha's form.

"They are broken, and pose no united threat to man." Isha almost growled. "This place is far away from your core worlds. Why murder them in a place where only the faintest traces of mankind have reached?"

"Mankind's empire will spread across the stars." He retorted, quietly. "I would rather have the process be a reconquest than a rebuilding."

The winds around Isha stopped for a moment, a silence before a quickly growing storm.

"For the scattered colonized and abandoned worlds, unaware of you or your armies…"

The plants beside her trembled and grew with her anger, affected by the psychic energies overflowing from her essence.

"Worlds you in turn plan to conquer and subjugate with force when they've ripened far in the future…"

Thorny vines and fanged leaves stretched out from the plants as thick roots spilled out from the dirt; crossing the floor and walls, searching for a gap to bury into.

"To leave empty worlds uninhabited by your kind free of competition…"

Her eyes blazed with psychic energy as she stared back at him.

"You commit genocide on my children in their time of greatest need?"

"Your people have sacrificed thousands of others to save one of your race." The Emperor replied calmly, strangling the plants with his own psychic power; withering them all in an instant. "Do not lecture me on the weight of alien life compared to your own."

Isha clenched her teeth with all her might as her rage rippled across her; sharpening nails into claws, elongating canines into fangs.

"At least..." She spat, wrestling with the wildness within her. "Let me speak to them." Her form returned to that of the fair Goddess of Fertility. "If all you need is for them to be gone from your domain, then use me. Let me send them back; convince them to join the other ones in self-imposed exile." Bitterly, she looked into the brown eyes of the emperor with her own silvery ones. "You made a tool out of me, so then use me."

The two of them stared at each other, neither backing down. After a long moment, the Emperor opened his mouth.

"... We are chasing an Eldar raiding party. A rag-tag assortment of pirate vessels and repurposed pleasure cruisers that now serve as slave carriers. Their ships will burn, whether you convince them or not. The wounds they have left on my crew are too great."

Isha breathed out, letting the remaining rage out of her body.

"If you must slake your people's bloodlust, so be it." Better the Wraithbone constructs than the living occupants. "But, where shall my children go?"

He shrugged. "I did not care before, so I had not thought of it."

Isha's mind dug deep into her memories of the borders of the Aeldari domain; ancient holdouts from the War in Heaven, forgotten battlefields, and buried bunkers. After a few seconds, she found what she was looking for.

"There is an Aeldari world that used to hold a colony. Its environment is harsh, too harsh for humans, but survivable by the Aeldari."

The Emperor tilted his head at this. "You would not make it a better place for them?"

"And make it another mouthwatering target for your empire?" This time it was her turn to snort. "I think not."

"Mother to the Aeldari indeed." Chuckled the Master of Mankind. "If only they had inherited your foresight."

"If they had, you may have never reached the stars."

"Perhaps…" And a great weariness radiated from him for a brief instant. "But they didn't and we did."
 
Writer notes: Chapter 4: Dealing with a diaspora

Nidhog153

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A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story. My story makes a lot of references to other real world events or mythology, so I've made these to elaborate since some of the symbolism and references are hard to get for some non-native speakers as well as younger native speakers.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of irony/references/foreshadowing I've made here.

Title:
Diaspora = the dispersion or spread of a people from their original homeland. So, it's pretty on the nose.

Main Part: I wanted to show the cold calculating portions of the Emperor here. He also had no orginal intent of letting Isha speak to her children. He was just going to kill them and be done with it while still deciding what to do with her. It was only after she offered to parlay with her children that he allows her to do that.

That of course shows that the Emperor has other plans for Isha, besides using her to talk her children out of a fight. They were mentioned much later when he thinks about all the gene-tech and him hoping to use Isha as a source of information alluding to the fact that he was hoping to use her to better the Primarchs and Space Marines.

Additionally, there was a lot of foreshadowing in this section. Isha was leading the Emperor to an old battlefield where there were weapons she could offer the Emperor to see how receptive he was to her.
Isha's mind dug deep into her memories of the borders of the Aeldari domain; ancient holdouts from the War in Heaven, forgotten battlefields, and buried bunkers. After a few seconds, she found what she was looking for.
"There is an Aeldari world that used to hold a colony. Its environment is harsh, too harsh for humans, but survivable by the Aeldari."
Some people on other sites were saying that Isha doesn't seem to be cunning enough. I think she's pretty cunning, and the fact that all those people didn't see that through foreshadowing like this probably proves my point even more.
 
Chapter 5: Life and Death

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Isha sang to herself, alone in the darkest corner of the Emperor's ship, preferring solitude in her pain over the company of curious and vengeful mortals; and their cruel and calculating protector.

She did not know what this place was, but since the Custodes stationed around the ship gave her free passage, she let herself in, shutting the door behind her.

The truth of life warbled around her, telling tales of the simplest forms it had taken; the names of single and multicellular life forming from carbon containing solutions of acid and rock. Life that lasted mere milliseconds, but reflected the nature of all other life that came after it.

'Single celled yeast, provided with an excess of sugar, switches to anaerobic metabolism.' Isha reminded herself as her song's verses carried over the creature and all the other alien organisms like it that sprang up across the universe, convergently evolving to fit a similar niche.

'Thus, they produce toxic alcohol, unpleasant even to themselves, and something that they avoid when given only a little sugar.' Images of the small spherical creatures, floating in small bundles squirting out the substance flit in her mind, while the excess resources were symbolized as green lights that floated everywhere around them.

'All to kill all others unlike themselves; leaving nature's harvest to them and their kin.'

Life, even at its most basic level, was brutal and cruel. Creatures with no brain cells, no nerve cells secreted self-scarring toxins and wastes; all to kill everything else unrelated to them at a quicker rate than they killed themselves.

'And sentient creatures use that cruelty to make beer, bread, and all the other foods and drinks to feed themselves.' Her mind pulled back from the micro-scale to the macro. The eternal cycle of birth, survival, reproduction, and finally death; repeated endlessly at all levels.

'Humanity acts as all life does, and so does its protector.'

It was all she could do to stop her song from becoming a banshee shriek. Only the bare fact that this cruelty shown by the Emperor was nothing unique, allowed her to slowly cope with her anger; to begin to put out the flames of her burning rage.

"Would it be too much to ask for you to show some degree of decorum while you occupy my vessel?" The Emperor spoke as he stepped out of the shadows.

"Leave me be." Isha said wearily. "We have not reached the place to call my children, and I do no harm here."

"Your voice echoes through the immaterium. I hear it as clearly here as I do anywhere."

"So what? My song is inaudible to mortals at the moment. Only creatures like us can hear it." Isha replied irritably. "Is life's song so vexing to you that you must silence me in my moment of grief?" She snorted, anger building up again at the sight of the murderer of her children.

"I am considering it." The Emperor said slowly, and she could feel faint but very real emotions of irritation and anger radiate from him; an unusual moment of vulnerability. Familiar feelings she had felt before.

"I see…" A slow smile crossed Isha's lips. "So you are not just the mortal Protector of Mankind."

A dangerous look entered the Emperor's eye; a different tightness to his grim jaw, harsher features than the ones that usually formed the cold calculating visage that she was used to."I do not like what you suggest."

"Khaine found my voice displeasing as well." Isha's smile grew wider, her hurt numbing her senses; bitter vengeance spurring her on to have her own petty revenge against the creature who hurt her first. "How did he put it?" She said, putting a finger to her chin in a look of feigned thought. "It was like 'being told, time and time again, that the flames that form the funerary pyres are but a single pop of an undried branch upon which the bonfire of life burns.'"

"Careful…" The Emperor took a heavy step forwards.

"You aren't just a protector." Isha cooed back at him, minor victory in sight. "You are a god of de-"

An armored hand closed around her throat, cutting off her voice before slamming her into the floor with a loud bang.

"I am not a god." The Emperor growled, teeth bared in her face. "Do not test my patience. I have struck bargains with Chaos for the future of mankind, and I may do so again."

"How brave of the hero of humanity to threaten and strangle a mourning mother." Isha hissed back at him, worn patience already thin, barely hanging by a thread. "Do you treat all your women as you do me?"

The Emperor remained silent for a moment, before his silhouette shifted, becoming softer and slightly smaller in stature.

"Does my grip become any softer, now that I am of fairer flesh?" The Emperor spoke with a higher pitched voice, and squeezed even harder, preventing Isha from replying. "If anything, I am more merciful than your Pantheon ever was."

Isha glowered up at the Emperor, refusing to choke, but also unable to speak. Golden sparks flashed from the usually brown eyes as white sparks lept from from hers; neither one backing down from the other's insults.

Slowly, both their eyes gradually dimmed as the immeasurably long silence allowed their anger to bleed away. Finally, the Emperor's grip relaxed slightly, as a tired look crossed the feminine features that were its current form.

"I came to your Pantheon in ages past. Before I took this form. Before I became like this." The Emperor let go of her throat, and stepped back, turning away from her. "I still remember the greeting of fire and silver at the gates as I cried out for but a moment of your attention."

There had been many immaterial beings who saw the gleaming city of the Aeldari Pantheon in the Sea of Souls, and prostrated themselves before it. Isha's mind briefly recollected the faint cries and shouts of beings infinitely smaller than them from beyond the borders of their domain. None were allowed entry, for the disguised followers of the Ruinous Powers and Tzeentchian daemons were always scattered among the ranks of these desperate god-creatures. Eventually they were all driven back by Asuryan's flames and sentinels when the forces of Chaos came in earnest; to clear the battlefield of any unexpected interference.

"Is that why you share so many similarities with Asuryan; taking form with fire and chain?" Isha answered, looking up at him angrily but no longer vengeful.

The feminine Emperor snorted. "And you think of me as arrogant." Chuckling as it shook its head, the Emperor turned to look back down at her. "Flames are but a step in the path of progress all sentient beings make. For with the invention of fire, sharpened sticks can be hardened into spears, and flesh and marrow can be cooked for greater sustenance."

The two continued to stare at each other, like a tiger and lion who had just wrestled with the other, only finally managing to break apart after nipping the other's shoulder; circling, daring the other to challenge them again.

"The planet you wanted for your people approaches." The Emperor finally said, returning to his masculine form. "Come with me to the command deck. We have much to discuss."

Isha watched the Emperor walk towards the door, opening it with a wave of his hand. Custodes already lined the walls of the corridor, back to the center of the ship, spines stiff in regal salutes.

Slowly, she picked herself off the floor, and followed him.

'Calm yourself Isha.' She thought. 'If your song is as painful to him as it was to Khaine, then forgive him his tresspasses against you.'

During the War in Heaven, Morai Heg; her mother and Goddess of Fate, asked her consort Khaine to cut off her arm so she could drink her own divine blood. An insane selfish gamble for very little gain; for Morai Heg already saw the multiple fates of others, even though she could not see the fate of herself.

At first Khaine refused, simply because maiming one of their own for their own curiosity when a much larger enemy existed was the height of folly.

So Morai Heg sent Isha and her other daughters to Khaine; promising them a strand of fate for their preferred mortal champion in return.

They came to their father, first asking, then begging, then with song and dance; for endlessly nagging him was as boring as it was for them as it was annoying to him.

'If we were to battle the iron will of Khaine…' Isha recollected. 'The least we could do to alleviate our boredom in our endless task was to do it in a way that we could enjoy.'

So Isha and her sisters sung and danced their individual truths around Khaine, expecting their father to remain as stoic and immovable as before.

Instead, Khaine raged. He roared and swiped with his armored hands, disrupting their song and dance, sending them stumbling back; unhurt but surprised.

But, finding a chink in their parent's armor, like all cheeky children, they decided to poke and pry.

They would take turns singing, sending Khaine charging at one of them, dancing away until the very last moment before his hands could grab them. Then they would stop, and their sister would sing, and Khaine would hold his head, cover his ears, scream and then turn to chase the next performer. An innocent, cruel game of tag, played at the behest of their mother and expense of their father.

Finally, Khaine agreed to cut off Morai Heg's hand, and for his service, received the aspect of the Banshee; a mirror to the soul shaking cries he suffered at the hands of his daughters.

The thought of pestering the Emperor into doing her bidding, like she and her sisters did to Khaine, crossed her mind; but she shook off the trickster thought.

'That was in the Sea of Souls. Movement is very different there than it is here.' With only 6 directions of space, and one of time, it would be a very short game of tag if she tried that; not to mention it was not her voice alone that caused Khaine to rage. Her song was annoying, not unbearable.

Isha allowed a part of herself to wax nostalgic, sending pieces of unneeded consciousness into memory.

Memories of singing and dancing while falling through multiple rainbow colored portals, dimensions, and dreams of mortal kind as the flaming giant form of Khaine followed; like an orange meteor chasing a tiny silvery comet.

Pink, blue, and green clouds rushed by as she brushed against the psyche of billions of past and future souls while falling and flying further away from Khaine.

The rush of watching his gauntleted hands open in preparation to close around her entire body in a binding fist; a game of chicken between parent and child. Then, she would do one final twirl and close her mouth, while in a time of yesteryear, her sisters' voices would call to the present Khaine.

Then the opened hands reaching towards her would instead recoil to Khaine's ears, covering them in a vain effort to stop a sound that he could do nothing but hear.

Then the game would start all over again, while she quietly slipped to the side of another time and place, readying for her turn to pull their father's attention from her sister at the very last moment.

'Folly of youth.' Isha smiled slightly, both at her own foolishness, and the memory of her ancient home; the freedom before Asuryan's edict and the growth of Chaos.

It was no surprise that the creatures of the universe often dreamed of trickster fairies, and cruel fey creatures that ran endlessly out of sight. Time ran neither forward nor backwards in the immaterium.

Isha stretched her essence outside of the confines of the body she had made for herself when entering the materium; drawing a sideways look from the Emperor.

"I do no harm." She said innocently, and she wasn't; the best mortal equivalent of what she was doing being a stretching of the neck or arm to relieve tension or stress. Although, she was fully aware that it was an unnatural movement for one with Warp sight; like watching a third arm or second head pop out.

"If you have the time to provoke me." The Emperor huffed. "It would serve you better to think of what to say to convince your children."

"What do you care…" She snorted. "You planned to butcher them all until I came."

"I've made my warnings." The Emperor said grimly. "I may not be a god, but I've seen enough to know where all their fates lie, and the toll their followers extract from them."
 
Writer notes: Chapter 5: Life and Death

Nidhog153

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A/N I'm not going to be putting as much effort in these sections, because I want to prioritise the main story. My story makes a lot of references to other real world events or mythology, so I've made these to elaborate since some of the symbolism and references are hard to get for some non-native speakers as well as younger native speakers.
The way I've organized it is by chapter. Some of these might be quite short. I'll just put any random bits of irony/references/foreshadowing I've made here.


Title: Yes, the connection to Everqueen is pretty obvious here, since the Emperor and Khaine are both described as Gods of Death. Of course, this was all a massive red-herring. However, this does also allude to the fact that Isha and the Emperor were borderline thinking of just killing each other in this chapter.

Main Part: I was worried I'd made the Emperor too big of a bad person here. Also, the conflict was meant to take place in the hallway with a Custodes, but I felt it better to have Isha all by herself and singing. In the original draft, she was meant to investigate a Custodes out of curiosity, and that attracted the Emperor's ire.

That cheeky nature of Isha in the drafts is still part of the character. She does the entire stretch thing to illustrate that fey personality without giving an obvious reason for the Emperor to be so mean to her.
 

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This is coming along quite nicely, and I like how you are characterizing the various 'players' here. Not flanderizing any of them. Looking forward to more!
 

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