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Marvel When Spider's Break Bad (A Spider-Man Fanfic)

Character intro
Name: Peter Williams Parker
Allias(es): The Black Recluse, Spider-Man (formally) Mr Webb, Slade Williams.
Sex: Male
Age: 35
Height: 6'1
Weight: 187 lbs

Appearance:
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Occupation: CEO, Crime Boss, Cage Fighter
Known Kills: Green Goblin (Norman and Harry Osborn) Wilson Fisk, Venom, Carnage, Electro, Kraven the Hunter, The Vulture, Mysterio, Rhino, Sandman, Hydro man, Magneto, Charles Xavior, Most of the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants.

Living associates: Holly "The Princess" Fisk Parker (Wife) Matt Murdoc (lawyer) Avengers (frenemies) X-Men (Frenemies)

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Big Accomplishments (As the Black Recluse): Wiped out nearly his entire rouges gallery, wiped out the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants and forced the X-men to disband. Bought Oscorp and Stark Industries and merged them into Pariah INC. Bought the Daily Bugle and fired JJ. United the gangs of Hell's Kitchen under his banner and bought the area turning it into Little Vegas.

Summary:

Peter Parker was once a normal kid until one day at the age of 15 he was bitten by a radioactive spider and given super powers. for 15 years he fought crime as Spider-Man but tragic personal event after tragic personal event eventually took it's toll until finally Parker did the one thing no one thought he would do. He broke. Turning his back on hero work Peter Parker Now dawning the mantle of "The Black Recluse" and trading his Red and Blue for Black and Red, worked as an enforcer for Wilson Fisk. He soon caught the eye of Wilson's Daughter Holly. AKA "The Princess" At first Peter took no interest in her due to having a very similar and equally imposing physique as her father, but that changed when he realized that she was just as strong and as sturdy as her old man, which meant she was less likely to die.

In the span of less than a year, The Black Recluse quickly worked his way up Kingpin's ranks becoming his right-hand man. However, the two came to blows when one of Kingpin's scenes threatened to wipe out a whole community of innocence including children. It was Then Peter decided to do what he thought he should have long ago. "The Princess" would not mourn the Kingpin's death and in fact She and Peter married shortly after, allowing The Black Recluse to take over the Kingpin's Criminal Empire while Peter Parker took over Wilson Fisk's more legitimate businesses. Matt Murdoc in the meantime felt indebted to Peter for killing the man who had haunted him all his life and agreed to be his personal lawyer should Peter Parker or The Black Recluse fall into any legal trouble. The Black Recluse wasted no time in using his newfound influence. He united the Gangs of Hell's Kitchen under his banner while personally taking down nearly all of Spider-Man's Rouges gallery save Doc Ock & the Shocker. He would also Destroy nearly all of the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants including it's leader Magneto Peter Parker meanwhile bought both Oscorp and Stark Industries in a hostile takeover merging them under the banner of an international shipping company he christened Pariah INC. His Favorite victory however would be buying the Daily Bugle and personally firing J Jonah Jameson.

Still this newfound power has come at a cost. Peter now finds himself at odds with the heroes he once called friends and though neither side will kill the other for old time sake, many still remember the former Spider-Man and are saddened to see his fall from grace.
 
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Simonbob

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I don't mind the idea, it could be interesting.

But, this isn't, yet, an actual story.


I look forward to the fanfic itself.






Edit: The Black Recluse is fine, as a bad guy name.
 
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I don't mind the idea, it could be interesting.

But, this isn't, yet, an actual story.


I look forward to the fanfic itself.






Edit: The Black Recluse is fine, as a bad guy name.

Note: I'll move this here.

thanks for reacting. I did the character introduction so that people wouldn't be confused outright.
 

Simonbob

Well-known member
Note: I'll move this here.

thanks for reacting. I did the character introduction so that people wouldn't be confused outright.

I'd suggest doing a prologue. Some scenes of Peter suffering, and his changes as a result.

Peter becoming the Recluse is the story, isn't it? As such, where are you starting?
 
I'd suggest doing a prologue. Some scenes of Peter suffering, and his changes as a result.

Peter becoming the Recluse is the story, isn't it? As such, where are you starting?


honestly, I was going to have him fighting another version of himself and The Black Recluse kind of go into more detail about his backstory. Then shenanigans ensue.
 
Chapter 1: The Brawl
Peter wiped the blood from his face as he gazed at his opponent. He had to give him credit this was the first time in a while that Peter had tasted his own blood. Still, he wasn't going to stop him. The man was big, but Peter had delt with bigger men on a daily basis. running practically on muscle memory, the web slinger stole his opponent's palace from under him by tying his legs together. He then proceeded to leap on top of him and wail on him. blood poured from the opponent's nose as it twisted and broke, but peter didn't stop. He only finally yielded when his opponent gave the signal to tap out.

"Ladies and gentlemen!" An announcer shouted over the crowd. "We have a winner. The Black Recluse!"

The crowd proceeded to cheer. In fairness they probably would have cheered regardless of who won. So long as they got to have the thrill of watching a man bleed. It was a good thing Peter was good at that. He brought his opponent onto his feet and shook his hand.

"Good match." Peter whispered quietly. "It's been a while since anyone has made me bleed like that."

"Thank you, Mr. Webb it was an absolute honor, to face you in the ring."

"Likewise. Talk to Lacy at the front desk, she'll give your cut of the spoils. You earned it."

Peter quickly went to the bathroom to clean his cut. It was a decent gash but nothing a makeshift bandage couldn't help patch. Looking at himself in the mirror, he couldn't help but shake his head. It had only been fire years since the man dropped his friendly neighborhood Spider-man mantle and yet it seemed like that made all the difference.

Gone was the baby face and shaggy hair. It had been replaced with a full goatee and a clean-cut hairstyle. Gone was the useful innocence in his eyes, it had been replaced by battle hardened wisdom Peter couldn't help but chuckle. If Aunt May were here, she probably wouldn't recognize him.

"Changing mantels has really done a number on you hasn't it parker?"

Peter however snapped back into focus once his wristwatch started to beep.

"Webb here." Peter said. The alternate name was starting to become second nature to him.

"Hey boss. the Doc has got something you might want to look at."

"I'll be right there." He turned off the wall and headed out the door. "...and it better be good this time."
 
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