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Its more like the way he worded his sentances is poorly done. I get what he is saying in the story but its rough to read. English not being his primary language makes a lot of sense here. English has weird sentence structure compaired to a large number of other languages.

Wow ok, you have already posted a bit. Maybe consider a beta reader or something? Your second sentence in the story has poor grammar and makes it hard to get through, but i will definately be coming back to this story to read it completely. I only got about half way through the first post...