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    ASOIAF/GOT Barthogan the Great Wolf- Pre-Conquest SI

    Simple you need to know who your mc is and the characters around mc and if you know the characters well the story arcs will write itself ,but the minor details will be the problem ,but the other problem is you not stating when is this mc at,and wheather or not will you make your mc a Roland...
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    ASOIAF/GOT Barthogan the Great Wolf- Pre-Conquest SI

    Nice,story ,but you have a couple of problems 1 it's not threadmark 2 do you even have a compass or some way to tell which way you're going remember one the gold haired house lost their sword cause of that 3 how are you going fight back against dragons(if your in the time where Valyria is still...
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    ASOIAF/GOT Barthogan the Great Wolf- Pre-Conquest SI

    You need to build Indoor plumbing at least cause pooping on a toilet is always makes one feel like a king and also kill those andal scum and also how far away is this from the conquest
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    ASOIAF/GOT Barthogan the Great Wolf- Pre-Conquest SI

    I don't really care much about banners,but if you keep updating this will turn greta but how is he king without a queen unless I missed it
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