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  1. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    Joanna won't be a bitter and broken warrior? What is going on here!?
  2. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    And Aidan puts Marthe back in her place.
  3. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    Take the time you need! If you can't keep motivated while you write, the writing suffers and just reinforces the burnout.
  4. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    Highlighted the reason I thought you were assigning Mark directly to Aidan.
  5. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    I think, for me, Aidan Pryde feels a little wooden. I'm not sure if you're intending for us NOT to have an 'inside' look at him yet which would justify it. Because moving Mark up to be his 2nd means that he'd have to have a good understanding of Mark in order to want to grant him that trust. We...
  6. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    The phrase that motivates Mechwarriors no matter if they're Inner Sphere or Clan!
  7. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    Aidan still present to temper Marthe. Add in a dash of crazy old guy to bring them around to true warfare expectations...gonna get crazy in here!
  8. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    Goody! We get to see him influence the Falcon Guards and Aidan Pride! Hmm...butterflies...helps keep Aidan alive so he can become Sa-Khan under Marthe?
  9. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    He's already off'd a Kell.
  10. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    Wonder if he'll somehow end up saving Aidan Pryde...
  11. The Whispering Monk

    Falcon's Rising

    But will Mark be able to kick enough sense into the Falcons to turn them into something interesting?
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