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Ok. I've now slept on it, I think I can be a little more detailed. First, I quite like it, over all. I'm a bit of a sucker for interesting comic fics. Second, I read the whole thing in one go, and I'm not sure I could have kept it all straight in my head if I hadn't. Multiple POV, offscreen...

"Were you always a pretentious asshole, or did you train hard to get here?" :p I think you doubled two chapters, 4 and 5. This is a little over the top. Although, I did like the concept of young Tony Stark getting stuck in weird stuff, and having to deal with it. I think the power levels...