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  1. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    It's nice, hearing from, and about, minor powers. After all, the big powers are such a bunch of loonies in canon.
  2. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    Thanks for the Christmas gift! And, a merry Christmas to you, too!
  3. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    Ah, profit. Gotta take advantage of those rich kids. You might not get another chance!
  4. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    Now I have this image of some supernatural group pulling out a attack designed to wipe out all humanity, and Cain just turning up, flicking at it, and it vanishing off to smack into Jupiter.
  5. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    I think it could use a little more details, some more emotion, from time to time. It doesn't feel like a proper back-and-forth. But, if you're intending it to be not as hard a fight as it might be? Then, it's not too bad. Still might use a few more details, a little more about what they're...
  6. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    The way Raynare acted in canon, yeah, this fits. Why do a fake date, if you're just to murder the guy? Yep, a monster that others hate, I can see that.
  7. Simonbob

    Humanity's Illusion (Highschool DxD)

    Ok, caught up. Nice story. It feels so much more reasonable than DXD itself. Although, I am waiting for Phillip to have a emotional moment, get all the checking, and for it to be down to him being a teen.
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