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Chapter 15 “This fog will cover most of our movements,” Takeshi looked at the group of young scouts. “We should move while it remains.” “I’ll move ahead,” Sigrid dismounted and tied her mare to a tree. “With your permission, Captain?” “Aye,” Takashi nodded. “If they are a large enough group...

So, after getting some much needed advice from a good friend and much better author than I am, I'm going to be making some changes. 1. I'm going to be rewriting Blood on the Horizon. 2. I'm going to be slowly doing the same with my other works. 3. Updates to all of my stories and fanfics...

Chapter 14 “And now, it is my turn to accomplish a task,” Bjorn said as he stepped forward, the giant of a man towering over the sergeant and the corrupt guard. “I am Duke Bjorn, your liege, and having listened to both parties, I will now dispense justice.” “Gerard son of Oliver, I find you...

Chapter 13 “So you’ve got a duel in the morning,” Sigrid said to Graham as they relaxed in a corner of Analise’s Inn while Takeshi, Analise, and Bjorn discussed something that didn’t involve them. “Aye,” Graham said with a frown. “And I’ve no idea how skilled he is. So I’m concerned that I may...

Chapter 12 Graham whistled to himself as he began his walk back to the Inn, a pleasant joy filling him at the thought of having finished one of the last tasks that Master Charles had for him before his apprenticeship was finished. “Hey you there!” A slightly familiar voice called. “It was...

Chapter 11 “The city is a bit different, isn’t it?” Takeshi asked Sigrid as they made their way toward the open markets. “Aye,” Sigrid said as she looked cautiously at the crowds walking to and fro around her. “There are too many people here. I’d rather be out in the wilderness hunting.”...

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This is a story I’ve got an outline and timeline for. Most of my fan fictions I fly by the seat of my pants. But on this one I know what I’m trying to do. I do appreciate the comments. But they’re not really tied into what I’m writing about here.

Chapter 10 “Is it normal to feel this sore?” Graham asked as he groaned upon sitting down at the bar. “Aye,” Takeshi smiled. “If it’s the first great deal of riding you’ve done then you’ll be sore for a few days yet. It’ll pass given time though.” “Well, I’ll need some help getting...

Chapter 9 “They’re still there,” Sigrid said as the trio swung back up onto horses and wagon respectively. “They’ve been chasing us for days, shouldn’t we have lost them by now?” “Nay,” Takeshi shook his head as he ran a whetstone over his sword. “We’re going to be leaving tracks that are...

Chapter 8 “Why are we just stripping them of their gear and putting them all into one grave?” Sigrid asked as she dragged another of the half dozen bodies over to the hole that Graham and Takeshi were digging. “Because whoever did this to them saw no need to strip them of their weapons and...

Chapter 7 “Wagon looks to be in decent shape, and the barrels are sealed right and proper,” Charles said as we backed Rose up to the small wagon to be hitched up. “You’ll likely have to walk beside it instead of ride, given Rose’s age and all, but aside from that I expect you to make good...

Chapter 6 “Mother, Father, I’m home!” Sigrid said as she approached her house in the early morning. “I’ve had a successful hunt and need assistance in getting it prepared.” “That looks like a decent-sized buck,” Ødger stated as he moved to remove the deer from her shoulders. “I’ll take care...

Chapter 5 “I should have stopped earlier,” Sigurd sighed as she began to set up a small camp for the night, knowing that she wasn’t going to make it back to the village before it became too dark to continue. Gathering some kindling, she cleared the underbrush and began stacking her fuel on...

Chapter 4 “Come on lad,” Charles said. “Pump those bellows more, we’ve got to get these arrowheads poured into their molds and cooled before we can steel them.” “I’m working on it,” Graham replied as the flames rose in the forge, the heat feeling unbearable initially but eventually settling...

Chapter 3 “Get started on sorting the pile of feathers over on your workbench,” Charles told Graham as he stumbled into work for the day. “I hear you had a busy night. Care to tell me about it?” “If I remembered anything beyond negotiating for Sigurd’s hand I would tell you,” Graham said as...

Chapter 2 “Sigrid, up with you girl,” Ødger said as he splashed some water into his daughter’s face. “It’s time to train.” “Aye, father,” Sigrid said as she woke up and stumbled into her training gear, grabbing her small recurve bow and the sling and stones that she had been training with...

Chapter 1 “Come on Graham, we’ll be late to the Elder’s campfire stories!” Sigrid called out to her best friend. “I’ve got to finish these arrows up first,” The apprentice Fletcher replied. “You know that we have to finish our responsibilities first.” “Alright,” the girl sighed. “Is there...