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I've dropped at least a dozen different fics within the first few pages for having extended SI Baby sections. A majority, now that I think about it, were Naruto SIs. I blame Dreaming of Sunshine which popularized Naruto SIs as being good, and also had the entire (mercifully short) first...

Honestly generally I ditch any story that spends time on the baby section of such a reincarnation. If there's anywhere, ever, that's worthy of a timeskip it's when the MC is incapable of anything except eating, sleeping, and pooping. Spend a paragraph on "And I grew up and learned to walk" and...

Self discipline, a rarity in many writers made worse in fanfic due to lack of editors and serious constructive feedback. Notice that fanfics with an active beta tend to be vastly superior to those without. I myself enjoy writing but wind up deleting about 90% of what I make because I feel it's...

Pacing in general tends to be an issue in fanfic. Writers of real books are generally constrained by page count and have to develop a certain level of discipline in order to fit the available space. This is part (only a small part) of why, as Steven King put it, "You must murder all your...

This is a pretty petty one but: Jump Chains. The same dang thing happens every time. It's a cool story, I'm enjoying the writing and characterization, and then bam! It jumps into some universe I've never heard of/at least never read and I'm lost trying to figure out what's going on and drop...