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  1. Ariel Schnee

    Two Worlds (Star Trek)

    “From what I understand, your Starfleet wasn’t all that different about a century either.” maybe “From what I understand, your Starfleet wasn’t all that different about a century earlier.”
  2. Ariel Schnee

    Two Worlds (Star Trek)

    Why assume the unknowns on the other side are an enemy?
  3. Ariel Schnee

    Two Worlds (Star Trek)

    Some errors I have spotted in here. “Yes…you are right.” Worf admitted with a nod. “There is no reason whatsoever to be anxious. Instead, we would all be better served by conducting myself with courage and fortitude.” shouldn't that be "by me conducting myself", or, "by conducting ourselves"...
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