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  1. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    I may need to make it more clear that the fire from the turret isn't blasting apart the entire crowd. But I figured that Verlaine flying her fighter right into Theed Hanger and shooting the laser turret that close to civilians is still extremely reckless. In addition, one of the biggest issues...
  2. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Not quite, but she's involved too. I am giving Evaan Verlaine a reason for her actions... I mean, an actual reason. It's not a good reason, but it is a reason...
  3. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives
    Threadmarks: Alderaan Lives 13

    - - - Even from orbit, the planet was bite the back of your hand beautiful. Lush forests, wide open fields, rivers and oceans... Elana blinked back tears as she caught sight of snow on the mountains as they descended through the atmosphere. Don't remember that. Not now. It won't help... She...
  4. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives
    Threadmarks: Alderaan Lives 12

    - - - The hyperspace journey had left Elana with a lot of time to think. As entertaining as River sexually harassing Luke was, they did need to sort out a plan. Luckily, Artoo was apparently very familiar with Naboo, and provided all the information he had to her. Which was a lot. Elana looked...
  5. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives
    Threadmarks: Alderaan Lives 11

    Uvena Prime HAMS Ulgo - - - From a young age, Trask Ulgo had been fascinated by starfighters. Fast, lean interceptors, agile dogfighters, heavy assault ships, you name it. He had collected numerous toy and model ships growing up, everything from ancient Sith fighters to modern day ARC-170s...
  6. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Well, Lara Thul put a lot of thought into that. Upgrading all their ships, the War Frigates especially, to be able to launch volleys of Proton torpedoes, ion torpedoes, and other anti-ship weapons will make engagements with Imperial Forces more even. Their fighters were also requisitioned and...
  7. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    I'll give it a shot after work.
  8. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    I am going to explore Elana and Leia's different reactions to non violent efforts to fight the Empire. House Thul were banished for being war mongers over 3000 years ago, then returned to wage war during the Alderaanian Civil War, then joined with House Organa to form a peace that has lasted for...
  9. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Probably the soonest that the Rebel Alliance could reclaim the Alderaan system would be Post-Endor. Any time before that and they just wouldn't have the resources or numbers. That blockade fleet is only a short jump away from numerous Imperial naval yards and bases after all. Even if you take...
  10. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    The original raid on Cymoon-1 was focused mainly on causing destruction. They found the primary power control facility on the moon and set as many reactors on it to overload and meltdown or explode as they could. This caused massive damage to the moon, which was entirely focused on industry and...
  11. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Holding Cymoon-1 is not in the cards. It's in the Corellian Sector, in the Core Worlds area. Too hard. But yeah, raiding it for everything they can carry and then jumping out after wrecking the place? That will certainly send a message to the Empire. And unfortunately no, they don't have any...
  12. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Naturally, after rescuing Leia and Evaan, the Alderaan Civil Defense Fleet will have to protect Uvena Prime, and continue to make strikes on the Empire. Leia will be going with the main Alliance Fleet to act as their representative and continue to gather Alderaanians and others to their cause...
  13. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives
    Threadmarks: Alderaan Lives 10

    - - - The X-Wing ride was short, and thankfully, Elana being Viceroy meant she didn't get asked many questions. Marcus just wouldn't stop fidgeting! The situation was bad enough without a hot guy squirming underneath her! A hot guy she did care for and trust and- No. Stop that. Not the time...
  14. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Biggest issues for the Alliance Fleet are just in terms of logistics: Fuel, spare parts, and so on. They would have desperately needed mobile repair and fabrication facilities. The Alderaanian War Frigates having the tech to do that would make some sense, especially given the Another Chance, a...
  15. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    In the Disney canon (and credit where it's due, this was a good idea), the Alliance used a Lucrehulk as a mobile pilot training facility. It could easily be both a mobile flight school AND a fabrication facility for fighters. (Also Hera Syndulla was the head instructor and commander of the...
  16. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Elana was the wild one starting out, but she was trained to rein things in. Now? She has to do the same for Leia. Hoo boy...
  17. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    That too, so I'm sticking to their proper characters... Again, better than Disney Marvel. I hope so, anyway. But yeah. I am also setting up some potential future storylines here. Any thoughts on how I handled Quinn and Ackbar?
  18. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives

    Among others, yes. In the Disney Marvel Star Wars comics, there are a lot of instances of the "lone heroic woman" going off to "do what's right" regardless of any logic. I want to turn that on its head. Go back to the older Marvel Star Wars comics where such things could only be excused if...
  19. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives
    Threadmarks: Alderaan Lives 9

    - - - Another fifteen losses (and two wins) for Quinn against Skywalker, and Viper and Rogue Squadron's commanders decided to call it a day. It wasn't just due to nearing bingo fuel, though that was a part of it. General Dodonna had insisted that the squadrons form up. "May I ask why, sir?"...
  20. AndrewJTalon

    Star Wars Alderaan Lives
    Omakes: Quinn's Irritation

    I'm working on some other ideas for this next section. One I am enjoying writing is Marcus Quinn's reaction to the reveal of the Executor-class Super Star Destroyer... The intel had come through... And the holorecordings were projected overhead. Every one of the Rebels gaped in astonishment...
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