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    Seems legit to me.Hidden aliens who once controlled USA must go to Earth colonies ! He is descendent of Bush/Clinton clan,right ? ;)
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    They could take one of enemies alive,and ask about suprise.Using kgb methods.
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    So,they still have good ruler.They had chance,but would have better,if: 1.Somebody made Molotov coctails for throwing on enemies 2.Mass produce plumbata 3.Made trebuchets 4.Mass produce crossbows - people could use it even low on food,not possible for archers.
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    Cliffhanger,i like it.It would be fun,if both die slipping on banana peels !
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    Yup.I would feel sorry for corrupted bastard,but he was begging for being killed.You could not behave like avarage russian guard in city which really could be besieged and deatroyed. Becouse either people would kill you,or invaders later. P.S Blacksmiths should made crossbows and bolts for...
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    Original Fiction Caustic

    Good.You are god in your story,you could do almost everything.But,i would still complain! :)
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    They should gather stones for catapults,too.And made crossbows - after few moths everybody could use them,where you need 5 years to train average archer. Not mention - starved people could not use bows,when they still could fire crossbows. P.S what about Mołotov coctails,or even napalm...
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    They still could send 4-5 on best horses.It should be enough. Another reason to kill all witness.But,it would kill story,so i undarstand why author let them live.
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    Why they do not found them? their pursuers do not have wagons,only horses.
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    Why killers do not take weapons? especially good ones? as far as i knew,after battle bodies almost ALWAYS were robbed. Only cases when it not happened - when victors offered their enemies to their gods.Sometimes happened among Vikings.
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    It seems like conan village before attack in "Conan the barbarian".I hope,that they would survive. P.S old man - is he ghost or AI?
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    Basic over fancy moves - true. When i cosplayed as english archers,one of friends to mock fancy moves invented "Viper of Monfort" - he keep sword behind his back and then attacked with it. About arrows - if they have obsidian,it would be as good as steel,and much cheaper.
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    They belong to people who lost almost all technology - but,making gunpowder is easier than making steel,or even bronze. As long as they remembered formula,they should be capable of making blackpowder.
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    Good story - but,i see few problems: 1.If it is our future,then current human belifs should still exists - like christianity,islam,buddhism,marxist,etc. 2.Technology should still works - unless it is some kind of machines which made it impossible 3.If they could made steel swords,they should...
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