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    Hunting Freedom

    Then take your time,i could wait for good story.And RL is always more important.
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    Hunting Freedom

    Good.If you do not want write it,made short epilogue.Maybe from perspective of Tara and Richard daughters?
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    Hunting Freedom

    Why attack? they do not need his help.Better hide and wait. Count Arruns and Centurion Amulius - smart people,i hope smart enough to survive.
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    Hunting Freedom

    Good.In book Itami must almost fought womans who was after him.As if he was real hero,billionaire,or important politician. I hope that all surviving girls would get solid,american/canadian husband. Preferable from military. Last chapter - it seems,that USA get its wywern.
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    Hunting Freedom

    Count Arruns look like both competent and decent foe.Good for story,fighting people like Zorzal is....boring. But,entire Gate is about Itami harem and trashing japaneese politicians,so fighting was not important. P.S who would get Itami harem here? And,more important,they would certainly finish...
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    Hunting Freedom

    If not,made Epilogue few months after Saderan defeat - on some nice island where Richard is spending his well-deserved vacations with few rabbits.And maybe elves,too?
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    Hunting Freedom

    Enough to say USA commanders that there is rabbit army waiting for them as fifth column,if they act smart.
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    Hunting Freedom

    They have good plan and are competent.Maybe they even manage to catch Richard?
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    Hunting Freedom

    Americans 20 years ago or so made unmanned version of Bradley.Or ,to be precise,just normal Bradley with better computer and reloading gun and HMG. If they still have them,they should be send first. And 2 elves,2 bunnies against 30 pseudo-romans? they should win even without black knight.
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    Hunting Freedom

    Indeed,and i made one mistake - psychos are very intelligient,and Zorzal is not smart.Just average sadist.So - author have place for one smart psycho in his story,becouse,according to what i read,psychos and sociopaths are less then 1% of population. And they never do cruel things just for fun -...
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    Hunting Freedom

    Good.one or two psychopats would happen in RL,but most are normal people who want to do what is good /in their opinion/ Besides,we arleady have Zorzal.With him,story do not need more psychos.
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    Hunting Freedom

    Count Arruns seems as decent person.If he is also smart,he would surrender quickly when he undarstandt what Saderans are facing.
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    Hunting Freedom

    Good story,please continue.But - Canada had weak military,right? they could not take over Sadera. Which mean,that USA would do so. P.S according to what i read,Zawisza Czarny had black hairs,not armours,and was injured ,taken alive,and killed by turcs who fight over who would get ransom.
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