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I laughed every time Rory and the marines were brought up. Someone needs to offer her some crayons and tell her it's part of their ritual of initiation, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter!

This has been a very fun story so far; I'm amazed at how few comments it's received. I like that it takes place somewhere outside of Kuoh and has avoided the stations of canon, and the OCs are also fun additions. Also, you have five or six places where you accidentally used "your" in place of...