Recent content by adam417

I found that last bit of this chapter confusing. Is there 2 thrones, one with a statue one with a person or is it some other variation.

Watchdog that coincidence is too strong, it's gonna make for some great fic arc though. Emancipation is the episode where Carter is abducted by Mongols while trying to help a couple who is in love but from different tribes. Classic Romeo and Juliet situation, with a dash of toxic masculinity...

I think Elis could do with more. But as we get closer to the end of the season cannoniclly it will happen naturally. Makepeace and Hammond are really good. I really enjoyed Makepeace's nuance, a pragmatic spec ops operator that has allegiances to other parties but ultimately to him self and his own

Is the human test tube super soldiers concept from some other sci fi? Quite like how you've changed the plot so far. I'm very curious to see how you weave it the episodes concept's as well.

I like your version of col. Kennedy. Never jived with me that a military person could be so monumentally stupid as he is. Obs I'm not in the military though so my thought version is idealised.

Something smells on the Tollan worlds and it's not the cow dung. Great chapter thanks

Would say it's a good thing, I've seen stargate and read a great deal of fanfiction, so used to alot of permutations. This mix of time jump, tech jump, major event changes and other characters has really added spice.

This is probably the first stargate fic I've read where I'm like what is happening I don't understand, this journey is crazy.

I think Earth is on an even worse basis per person than as countries or planet wise. Given what we have seen on the selective genetic engineering in this and the selective breeding just from base labour any of thier laburers would trounce any earthling (just on a manual labour planet) and it...

Umm why the author already hand waved compatibility issues by saying that there is established doctorine for gate travel and inbuilt safety measures I thought. Unless you designed a purpose built vehicle (which I'm sure the snakes already have a whole logistics system purpose built) your not...

Firstly loved the chapter, would you be able to threadmark them? I always figured it was because not all of them could heal like Jack did so they needed a device that could replicate the effect.

Really like how this one has started out and am eager to see its progress