Urban Fantasy The Butcher of Baltimore (Finished)

The Original Sixth

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Chapter One

The report made for gruesome reading. Captain Oscar Ramino took a large sip of his bourbon before he was able to continue. The victim had been brutally attacked; her bones had been broken in various places by an old bat, had pieces of her cut out by a kitchen knife, and to the horror of the city, had been partially devoured.

Captain Ramino took another sip of bourbon. “Damn it all. Why does this shit always happen to me?”

The killer had been at large for four years. The killer had always been a low priority, because the killer had always gone after Hispanic women in the ghettos almost without exception, though Ramino suspected that the murderer had also killed several young men in hysterical stabbings. That changed, though, when the daughter of a prominent family in the city had taken a liking to one of the cartel thugs that lived there.

The memory of the case, almost a month back, brought a shudder to Romino. He went for a cigarette. The girl, according to his people, had been walking home. The killer had caught her at some point; taken a bat to her skull. It had viciously stabbed the woman. Had cut her stomach open and devoured…

Ramino banished the memory. He lit his cigarette and took a long drag. Ever since then, the media had been zeroed in on the ghetto. Worse, the place was a hotspot between gangs. Shootings were daily. In order to appear as if he had a handle on the situation, Ramino had put men on the ground there. He’d already lost three to shootings and five to transfers. And when Ramino had begun to reject transfer requests, two of them simply quit the force.

Ramino was halfway through is cigarette. Just past ten pace eight in the morning. The private detective--or whatever he was, Masters had not been too specific on that, would be there that evening. The damn media had found the seven dead girls almost as fast as his own police force. Worse, they had begun to dig through official records, despite Ramino’s orders to keep them sealed--and found a dozen more.

Ramino finished his cigarette. He put out the end in his ashtray. He was in the hot seat for sure. The top brass were furious that he had ignored the killer for four years. Ramino could put off at least two of those years on his predecessor and he could escape with the other two by blaming internal bureaucracy and political stonewalling for illegals.

Ramino swigged down the rest of his bourbon. He could avoid it with his position intact, he reckoned. Ramino had a good reputation with the local press. He had slipped them some good scoops over the years. Mostly to undermine his rivals within the department, but the boys at the papers still owed him. They were playing nice with him, but it would not hold out for long. Ramino intended to give them the story they wanted--so long as it was slanted in his favor.

Ramino opened the bottom drawer in his desk and pulled out the full bottle. He opened it and began to refill the glass with more bourbon. He wasn’t in the clear though. Far from it. He knew the boy that was behind it all...God did he know him. Ramino cursed loudly and drained the glass. He had hoped that it had not been him, but the bat--the bat that he had used to murder his victims had broken. Ramino alone had recognized it. It would be a scandal. He would lose his job...probably his wife too.

Ramino filled up his glass again. “Damn spoiled bitch.” he snarled.

The captain had been about to empty his glass when the phone on his desk beeped. A page. From his secretary, he supposed. He scowled, but put it on speaker. “What is it Alexis?” he demanded.

“Sir, there is a Mister Samuel Brand here to see you sir.” Alexis said.

Ramino straightened. “Mister Brand? Here? Already?”

“So you know him? I don’t see him in your schedule.” Alexis said.

Ramino quickly overcame his surprise. Why had the detective come so early? “It’s alright Alexis. He’s a private detective. I reached out to him for the Butcher case. Send him in please.”

“Why didn’t you tell me?” Alexis demanded.

“His bus had arrived just last night, our meeting was for late this evening.” Ramino said, with only a brief pause. “I was going to stay to meet him after the day shift.”

“Well, why didn’t he call to let us know?” Alexis demanded.

“I don’t know,” Ramino said, his patience had begun to erode. “Just send him in.”

“Alright, alright. No need to get angry. He’ll be up in a moment.” Alexis said. She hung up.

Ramino cursed. He poured as much of his bourbon back into the bottle as he could manage, stuffed both the empty glass and the bottle into his desk. He opened all the windows to let in as much cool air as could be allowed and then set about ordering the papers from the Butcher case back into its manilla folder. He had almost finished when Alexis let Brand in.

Captain Ramino had not known what to expect. He had guessed that the man was some sort of weird, nerdy eccentric. Masters had told him that he did not own a car nor did he carry a phone or computer. Instead, the man who strolled into Ramino’s office was tall with dark blond haired, bright blue eyes. He had tan skin, similar to the skin of a man who worked in the field or on the road. He was dressed in a dark brown slacks and wore a white shirt, over which he wore a brown vest. Over this he wore a large brown tench coat and atop his head he wore a brown brimmed hat.

“You must be Mister Brand,” Ramino said. He gestured for the man to come in. “Have a seat, we’ll…”

“Captain!” It was the lieutenant. A man ten years Ramino’s junior and eager to please. Ramino knew that the lieutenant was looking at his spot, but even of Ramino were thrown out on his ears the next day, the brass would never promote him. Too eager and too green. He’d never hold in his job.

“What is it Dean?” Ramino growled.

Dean strolled into the room. He shot the newcomer a suspicious glare, then looked at Ramino. “Captain, I know this Butcher case has got us in a bad spot, but we don’t need outside help! Especially not from him. I’ve seen his type before boss, he’s trouble. He’ll…”

“Do you have the Butcher in custody?” Ramino snapped.

“No...no sir.”

“Then get the fuck out of my office!” Ramino roared. “I ain’t going to get my ass chewed out by the brass because you’re too damn arrogant to accept help when we need it!”

The lieutenant practically ran out of the office. Ramino cursed and sat himself down. “Sorry about that Mister Brand,” he said.

“Impudent as he was,” the newcomer spoke. His voice was low and hard. For the first time, Ramino noticed the strange bright light in his eyes. “You shouldn’t have spoken to him like that.”

Ramino stared at the detective, almost aghast. What kind of idiot lectured his boss? Ramino had half a mind to call Dean back in and have Brand thrown out of the station, but his sense prevailed. He needed Brand. He needed the private detective to put an end to the killings. He couldn’t trust any detective with brains on the force; they were all gunning for his job.

“Apologies Mister Brand,” Ramino said with a forced smile. “It’s the stress, you understand.”

The detective took a seat. “I understand. You said you had a case for me?”

“Er, yes.” Ramino fumbled with the mess on his desk. “I thought Masters said that you wouldn’t be arriving until this evening?”

“That was the plan, yes.” the detective said, “But the Lord spoke to me in a dream. I was to take the earliest bus I could manage upon waking and so I did.”

A dark shadow fell over Ramino’s heart. “You’re one of those mediums, I take it? Speak to the spirits of the dead?”

Brand’s eyes widened. He stood up, outraged. “I am no heretic, sir.”

Ramino let out a nervous laugh, surprising himself. “Please, Mister Brand. I was joking. Masters spoke very highly of you on the phone.”

Brand sat, but his eyes remained hard. “Masters is a good friend of mine. He said that a killer is on the loose in your streets. He said that you needed him brought to justice, by any means.”

Ramino eased. The man was a lunatic, he could tell, but he was aggressive. Ramino liked that. With luck, he’d put down the Butcher without a second thought. Ramino gave him a knowing smile “Well of course, I would like you to take the suspect in alive...but he is armed and extremely dangerous Mister Brand. I authorize you to use whatever force you feel is necessary in capturing him or in the defense of yourself or another. Whatever it takes, you understand me?”

Brand’s eyes penetrated him like cold iron. “Yes, I believe I do. Let me be clear Mister Ramino; I am here to bring those who have rejected God back into his light. By judgement or redemption. I am not here to sweep your mistakes under the rug.”

Ramino scowled at Brand’s tone, but kept his temper. “Understood Mister Brand, but also understand that I pay you based on results. Bring him in, dead or alive. I don’t care. Just take care of it, understand?”

The private detective eyed him still. He stood. “I do. Masters mentioned you had the file on this sinner?”

Ramino handed over the poorly organized file. “Here. Take it.”

Brand seemed not to mind the folder’s state. He opened it and skimmed through. Ramino took a bit of enjoyment when he saw the man’s eyes widen. He had made it to the pictures. His enjoyment evaporated though, when he saw the burning rage in the man’s eyes. He could almost swear that the man was angry enough to pull the trigger on any man responsible for such crimes. Ramino hid a smile; good, that was what he needed.

“He’s a sick man, Mister Brand.” Ramino told him.

Brand blinked. The anger in his eyes had vanished. He looked down at Ramino, as if he had forgotten that he were there. The detective face was empty of all expressions, but his voice was hard with anger. “You did well to contact me, Mister Ramino. You have my word, this man will not escape judgement.”

Ramino smiled. It seemed they understood each other. He stood and held out his hand, but he instead knocked over a picture of himself with his family; his blond haired wife and their two children. “Oh, damn! It cracked.”

“You have a lovely family,” Brand said.

“Thank you,” Ramino said. “And good luck, I’ll offer a prayer to the big guy upstairs for you.”

Brand nodded and his eyes fell to Ramino’s desk. Ramino followed his gaze to an ironwood rosemary on the desk. Brand’s eyes shot back up, sharp as knives. “You’re Catholic?” he asked.

Ramino flushed. “Uh, no actually. It was a gift from a friend. That’s all.”

Brand nodded and took Ramino’s hand. “Then treasure it well. Good day to you, Mister Ramino.”

The door closed and Ramino fell back in his seat. He immediately opened the bottom drawer of his desk and pulled out his bottle and glass. He filled it, swallowed nearly half the glass in one gulp and sat back. He eyed the rosemary.

Ramino snatched the rosemary and tossed it into the open drawer, where he had found it buried earlier that morning.
 
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Erwin_Pommel

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The report made for gruesome reading. captain Oscar Ramino took a large sip of his bourbon before he was able to continue. The victim had been brutally attacked; her bones had been broken in various places by an old bat, had pieces of her cut out by a kitchen knife, and to the horror of the city, had been partially devoured.

captain Ramino took another sip of bourbon. “Damn it all. Why does this shit always happen to me?”
How come you ain't capitalizing "captain?" Seems like a weird word to not capitalize at the beginning of yer story :V

Good luck on your story though, looks like it might catch my interest depending on how it goes.
 

The Original Sixth

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Chapter Two

Samuel Brand left the police station and went immediately to the nearest bust stop. He sat down and waited for the bus to come. While he waited, he inspected the folder’s information more carefully. The killer had stoked his righteous anger. The moment he had seen the pictures, Brand knew that he could not allow the man to live. The killer had strayed too far from God’s light.

When the bus came, Brand got on the bus and took it to an old, low-priced brick hotel that the traveler guessed to have once been an apartment building. It was not the nicest accommodation that he’d been afforded by a local police station, but Brand did not mind it so much. The Lord’s work often took him to dens of sin. Still, he could not keep the look of disgust off his face, so much so that the working girls and drug dealers were quick to leave at his approach.

The young, shriveled white woman at the desk recognized him upon his approach. “Oh...are you back sir?” she asked.
“I am.” he told her. “Did any letters arrive for me?”

The girl gave him a tooth-hidden smile and with a shaking hand, went to look through the incoming mail. She must have once been beautiful, Brand realized, before the drugs had taken hold of her. Now barely into her thirties, she had lost most of her teeth, her muscles had withered away, and most of her arteries had been ruined by repeated injections. A stiff breeze would knock her over. She returned with one letter.

“That’s all?” Brand said, his brow furrowing.

The woman shrank under him. “Uh...no. Just this. Sorry.”

Brand pierced her eyes with his, believing that she was lying, but he found no lie there. He took it with a stiff thanks and left for his room on the fourth floor. The elevator was in order, but after one ride in the damned thing, Brand expected it was on its last legs. Instead, he took the stairwell, which though dirty and stank, seemed safer in his mind. Brand shook his head at the various bags of rotten food and trash, but did not slow.

The traveler did not take an immediate route to his room. Instead, he moved through the three floors below him at a brisk pace. Though he did not expect trouble, the traveler did not feel entirely comfortable without knowing something of his surroundings. The night before he had walked his floor and that morning he had explored the top two levels and the roof.

When Brand had reached his room and locked the door behind him, he opened the letter. The letter eased his worry, but left him frustrated. It had been from Masters, as Brand had expected, but the magus had bad news for him; he had been unable to procure more shotgun shells, clips of 5.7x28mm, or grenades. It seemed that the organization that Masters represented had trouble moving any sort of weapons into, through, or even around Maryland.

Brand closed his eyes and found the silver cross beneath his sweater. The anger passed, replaced with resolution. Shells or no, he would bring the Lord’s justice to the murderer. Brand opened his eyes and found a plastic bag full of food that he had purchased from a corner store the night before, after he had gotten off his bus. He spoke a brief prayer before eating.

Brand spent most of the day napping, stretching, and various exercises designed to put himself at his peak for the night’s hunt. The mere mechanical act of preparation was unto itself, a sort of meditation for the traveler. It calmed any doubts and sharpened his mind for the tasks ahead. When sunset finally approached, Brand was ready.

Brand changed out of his clothes. Beneath he had worn Level II-A body armor. Relatively comfortable compared to his other two, it was what Brand wore on the daily. He set it aside and looked at his other two options. The Level IV, made with pouches for insertable ceramic plates was the toughest armor he owned, but it would slow him down and be uncomfortable. Instead Brand went for his Level III. It had thicker, more layered ballistic fibers than the II-A, but it was not as heavy as the IV.

Brand looked over his small armory. Of the various grenades that he favored, he only had a single smoke grenade. His P90 was down to one clip, and of the remaining shotgun shells he had for both his Mossberg 500 pistol-grip and sawed-off shotgun, he had only nineteen of his usual thirty-seven shells. Ten of those were standard plated buckshot, with the other nine being of various special shell types, from the favored dragon’s breath to shell or liquid tear gas.

Brand decided to go light. He equipped himself with his sawed-off shotgun and saber, in addition to the M29 revolver and silver-plated dirk he carried with him at all times. He eschewed the smoke grenade and packed away the rest of his gear, then hid it beneath his bed. Brand would not hunt during the day; he suspected that the killer waited until the sun had set before carrying out his gruesome activities.

Brand arrived in the ghetto some time before the sun would slip below the rim. The sky had turned crimson and golden. Brand had memorized a rough layout of the killer’s most favored spots and set to examine them first. Each of the attacks had been brutal and seemingly been without thought, because the killer had left the body to be found with no attempts at concealing the deed, but as Brand examined the sites he came to a very different conclusion.

First, Brand realized that the bodies had not been simply left; they had been left to be displayed. Of the many men who Brand had put down, all of them had sought to conceal their sin beneath a veil of upright moral character. The rot had surfaced all the same, but in this case, Brand discovered that the killer wanted--no, needed to be acknowledged.

Second came from his exploration of the areas around the attacks. From what the witnesses had reported to the police, the attacks always began in one part of the neighborhood and ended somewhere else. These were often in locations that secluded or otherwise difficult to reach. The killer too, seemed to target those who were not familiar with the neighborhood. The killer was in fact, intentionally chasing down his victims. He enjoyed the hunt.

The idea struck too close a cord with Brand, but he was finally able to determine that the attacker was a stalker and from the rumors and loose reports, determined that the killer was quick on foot and was perhaps a very skillful climber. Some rumors the police had sifted through indicated that the killer was skilled in parkour.

The killer was perhaps one of the most skilled that Brand had ever come across. Not to mention the most ghastly. Brand was even more determined to bring the killer down, enticed by the danger and thrill of the hunt. The late evening quickly faded to night. As the night grew long, Brand worked his way through the more remote locations. An invisible pressure seemed to build upon him as midnight approached; as if he had missed the appointed time where he might meet the killer.

The blackness of the sky was soon to give to the deep blue of early morning when Brand caught the high pitch scream. The traveler spun and sprinted as fast as his legs would carry him towards the sound. Keeping to the profile that Brand had developed though, the location of the screams changed quickly as the victim--a woman by the sound of her voice, ran for her life.

Brand swore. He drew his pistol ran after the screams and frantically tried to place the route that the woman was no doubt taking. Twice the screams grew more frantic and shrill, but duller, as if the woman was being muffled, before finally at a third time, the screams ended suddenly.

Brand stopped dead. A lump had formed in his throat. The burning urge to save the imperiled woman had been put out suddenly by what Brand knew to be her brutal death. It was replaced with the cold craving for vengeance. Brand started again; a slow, deliberate walk. He had drawn his revolver. The police captain would get his corpse.

He found the killer stooped over his kill. The woman was, mercifully, dead. She had been a middle-aged woman, by the looks of her arms and bloodied face. The horrible creature had split her torso open under the light of a back alley lamp and had been feasting upon her insides when Brand had come upon them. The ugliness of the man, almost stripped the thing of the term ‘man’ to begin with. Brand could not imagine the Lord had any hand in the creation of what he saw.

The man was short; no more than four feet in height. Made to appear shorter by his hunched appearance. His skin had a slimy sheen to it, with pale yellow skin that changed over to green in some areas, as if they were bruises. His hair was long and brown, but white in places. The head must have once sported a full head of thick, curly locks, but much of it had fallen out and despite the length, the hair was obviously thinning. It wore the tattered rags of what must have once been clothes, but were little more identifiable as having perhaps once been a brown shirt and shorts. Its limbs were long and bony, lacking almost any fat and sporting small, thin muscles.

The killer sensed Brand’s arrival. Brand was struck that despite the inhumane build it had, that it’s face had a remarkable in human resemblance. It had a round face and instantly he was reminded of a child’s face. Brand placed it as Hispanic, but the bright blue eyes contradicted him and struck him as shockingly familiar. It had no facial hair and its skin was as dirty and slimy as the rest of it. Its teeth, either by foul habit or intention, had been narrowed down to needle-points in its mouth, leaving great spaces of diseased gums.

The man let out a furious hiss. Brand realized, with revulsion; that it had felt violated at being interrupted. He had no time to think of what to do with such a creature. The man leapt off his victim and made a mad dash at Brand on all fours. Surprised, Brand fired three shots at the man in quick succession. He had thought he hit, but if he had, the creature had not seemed to be affected.

The creature tackled Brand with surprising strength. The pistol flew from Brand’s grip and he and the creature fell into a tangle of limbs. The killer had furnished a serrated kitchen knife. He stabbed at Brand’s stomach, but the knife was turned by the ceramic plating on the first try, bent on the second, and snapped off on the third. Brand had not noticed any of that; he had responded with punches and kicks.

The killer untangled himself, bloodied and bruised. It looked around and spotted something behind Brand. It rushed for it. Brand did not go after it, but instead reached for the sheath at his waist that held his sawed off shotgun. Using his left hand to steady it, he fired a shell of buckshot square into the killer’s back.

The killer screamed and tripped over the very pistol it had attempted to grab. It struggled to get up, but Brand put another shell of buckshot into its back. Brand popped the shotgun open and removed the spent shells and pulled two more shells from his belt and loaded them. He began to recite a prayer, one that he always gave to the sinners he sent to be judged.

Amazingly, the man did not stay down. With a snarl, the man leapt to all fours as Brand loaded the second shell. It raced for the nearest building. Surprised, Brand was not able to close and take aim before the man had scrambled up the side of a brick building, finding holds that Brand never could. Brand cursed and fired off two shots, but the creature moved with manic energy and Brand was unable to score a hit.

Brand could not hope to climb after it. Instead Brand followed from the street level. As a man would hunt a beast, Brand intended to let the blood loss bring down his quarry. Indeed, the chase did not last as long as he might have thought; ten minutes later the killed had led him to one of the more abandoned neighborhoods, where rows of townhouses dominated the landscape.

Brand caught only a glimpse of the killer climbing through an apparent hole in one of the townhouses. Brand did not hesitate. He ran to the door. The lock was thick. Brand chose to reload his shotgun with a slug and a dragon’s breath. With one shot, Brand blasted off the heavy city lock on the door, along with half the handle.

Brand shouldered the door open. He was in the landing of the abandoned townhouse. The landing opened up into a wide living room, to a wall and a doorway to what Brand guessed to be the kitchen. The furniture was old and appeared to be in disuse, but his sharp eyes noticed that the furniture had been damaged by the work of a knife. The whole town house held a faint stench of death, one that Brand could not place.

Brand looked up the stairs in front of him and on his left-side. It, he knew, led upwards. Brand stalked up the stairs. Brand knew that the wretched killer had suffered heavily from blood loss. There would be no struggle. Brand hardened his heart. He knew what he must do. As Brand expected, he found the killer with little difficulty.

He had picked up the trail on the second floor; blood had been left clear on the stained walls and warped wooden floors. Quietly Brand approached a half-shut door. Faint light from the moon shone in the early hours of morning. Brand could see that by decoration, it had once belonged to a woman. Within he could hear the labored breathing of the mass murderer.

Brand sheathed his pistol. He would kill the miscreant with the dragon’s breath and feel the vengeful fire of men before the righteous fire of God. Brand shoved open the door. He had prepared for a sudden attack or an attempt to flee. Instead, Brand saw that the creature lay upon the old, moth chewed bed comforter had once indeed belonged to a woman. The canopy had been cut across its belly and barely hung.

The comforter was dark and heavy with the miscreant’s blood. The killer’s head turned. Its eyes looked toward him, but seemed instead to stare far off, at some distant past. His brow furrowed, as if he were confused.

“Dad…?” the killer said weakly. Before Brand could correct him, the killer continued, “I’m sorry daddy...I didn’t want to...but I had to...mommy told me...she told me about the evil...women...who took...who took you away…”

Brand stopped cold in his tracks. What sort of delusion had afflicted the wretch in his final moments of life? Brand sighted along his shotgun to delivery righteous vengeance, but something held back his trigger. “Not like this. The Lord demands it, but Christ pleads for mercy.”

The killer seemed to hear him. He began to weep. “Why dad? Why did you leave? The bad man came. He had a mask. He forced me and mom into the cellar. He shot us. You should have been there!”

Brand lowered the shotgun. Realization had dawned. “Your mother? Your mother was shot? Here?”

The killer cried and at once, seemed both monster and child. “I didn’t mean to...I didn’t mean to...I was so hungry...I was so lonely...I had to eat...I had to eat…”

A terrible repulsion came over Brand, but he had to know. “What did you do?”

The killer cried. “I ate her! I ate mom! I was alone! And hungry! She was dead! I had to!”

“Bastard!” Brand snarled. He raised the shotgun to shoot. “You should have left! Eating your own mother! I will send you to hell in flames!”

The killer snarled and his face twisted in fury. He held something out in his hand, but it was not a knife, but a rosary. “I waited for you! But the other women took you away! I waited! They took you and I waited! So I killed them! I killed them! And the bad man shot me! He found me again! The bad man…”

The killer hacked up blood, then began to shake uncontrollably. Brand stood transfixed by the sight of the dying wretch. Blood had begun to pour from the nose, ears, and the eyes. Finally, it lay still. It said something in a hoarse voice. Brand leaned closer, but only managed to hear the last of the killer’s words.

“...don’t let him get me dad...don’t...go…”

Brand cursed and sheathed his shotgun. He wrapped the dying man in his mother’s comforter. Gently he closed the wide, staring eyes. “I am here and I will stay to the end.” he said. “You deserve no salvation for your crimes, but I will pray for you nevertheless.”

The killer muttered something incoherently. Brand, true to his word, drew out his cross and held it in his right hand, while he put a hand upon the killer’s brown and prayed. The killer’s shaking eased and his muttering stopped. Some time after, he had passed away entirely.

Brand moved to cover the dead man, but stopped. The rosary captivated him. The killer had kept it clutched in his hand. Though he would not take anything from a dead man, Brand tilted it so he might get a better look in the moonlight. To his surprise, the rosary came away easily. Brand wondered at how relaxed the hands were, but took it as a sign of the Lord’s intent. He raised it to the light and any doubts he had vanished. He swore a long oath of vengeance.
 

The Original Sixth

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Chapter Three

Captain Oscar Ramino awoke to the jingle of his phone. The captain cursed and rose to answer it. Next to him, his beautiful blond wife stirred. He did not check the ID, instead knowing that it was the station. Half-addled by sleep, he expected that it was another dead girl. Or maybe the private detective had bought the farm. The sound of Brand’s voice shocked him awake like ice water to the face.

“I hope I am not waking you.” the voice said remorselessly.

“Damn it man!” Ramino snarled, “Why are you calling me this late?”

“I have found your killer.” Brand told him.

Ramino felt his heart pound. “And? Did you kill--uh, did you arrest him?”

“He has passed onto the Lord.” Brand said.

A weight seemed to have lifted itself from Ramino’s shoulders. He smiled. “Very good Mister Brand, I will see to it that you are well compensated. Call the station and they’ll handle the details. I will see you first thing in the…”

“You will see me now.”

Ramino scowled. “Excuse me?”

Brand gave him an address and hung up. Ramino stared at the phone, stunned and angered by the detective’s gull. He had opened his contacts for the station, intent on having the fucker detained until he could be dealt with. A police cruiser could pick him up at...Ramino froze. The address had seemed familiar when he had heard it, but he had not understood then. Immediately Ramino got up and went to get dressed.

An hour later, as the black sky had changed to a midnight blue, Ramino had pulled up alongside the old townhouse. Ramino got out of his family van, dark thoughts in his mind. He had constructed a crude plan in his rush to the site of the crime. He pulled up his civilian leather coat and hurried up the steps of the townhouse.

“Brand! Brand I am here!” Ramino called out. He pulled out his pistol. His Beretta M39 was a beautiful pistol; capable of automatic fire, he could empty the twenty clip round as quick as a man could blink.

No sound. Brand was not there. Ramino cursed, but then immediately thought it to his advantage. He drew out his phone and switched on its light. A quick examination showed the old town house had deteriorated in his absence. Some animal had gotten in and torn up the couches. Brand immediately went to the kitchen and found the door to the cellar.

Ramino wiped his forehead from the sweat and pulled open the door. A horrible, ungodly stench drafted upwards. The police captain swallowed and forced himself down the old wooden stairs. With each step, Ramino felt his gut churn. Deep in his chest, his heart hammered. Even years after, the pain of what had happened had not left him. Only whisky and rum could ease the memory.

They would be there, Ramino knew. Involuntarily, he took a deep breath of the dead, stale air. Then he flicked the light on the floor. There lay the ruined skeletal form of the woman he had once loved. Ramino was repulsed; an animal--a cat or dog perhaps, had torn into the dead woman and devoured her. The rest had been chewed upon by rats. Of the boy he had left behind, Ramino could find no sign. Not even the bones.

“God damn.” Ramino swore.

“I could not agree more.”

Ramino helped. He turned and saw the detective at the top of the stairs. He stood tall and imposing, like a judge that looked down upon a criminal. Ramino swallowed and tried to keep the guilt from his face. “Mister Brand,” he said, his voice shaken. “There you are. Where were you?

“Waiting with your son.” Brand said.

Ramino felt his heart contract. “My son? What are you talking about? He’s in New York, studying at the university there.”

A sneer passed across the typically unreadable face of the stranger. “Your son, Franklin. The boy whose mother you murdered and who you tried to murder.”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Ramino snarled.

A fury entered Brand’s eyes. Ramino recoiled. The stranger spoke in a hard, hot voice. “Her name was Emma. She and her mother had illegally crossed into America by coyotes. Her mother had sought employment with you. She worked for you for six years. Shortly after Emma came to work for you, her mother was found shot dead in the harbor.”

Brand produced a familiar ironwood rosary, “You took a liking to that poor girl Emma. In violation of your wedding vows, you stole her future. She had your bastard child. For years she had insisted that you leave your wife and take care of her. Or at least provide for your son. You would do neither. She threatened to expose you and take you to court. And so one morning, you lured her and your child here and murdered them.”

“That’s a lie!” Ramino roared.

Brand was unmoved. His eyes bore into him with a terrifying rage. “Your son survived. By some disguise of yours or trauma, he had not realized that you had tried to kill him. Locked in here with your dead mistress, he survived on her flesh and became a twisted beast. For years he sought to find the woman who had taken you from his mother. Poor wretch did not understand the depth of his own sinful birth.”

Ramino couldn’t keep a wild smile off his face. “You’re mad! You can’t prove a damn thing! Go ahead! Call the station! You think you can have me convicted on your little theory? People die everyday in this shithole!”

Brand raised a double-barreled sawed-off shotgun in one hand. His words chilled the police captain. “This is the bullet I had named for your wretched son. I saved it for you instead.”

Ramino stared wildly into the twin bores of the shotgun. “Y-you can’t! I-I have a family!”

There was no pity in Brand’s eyes. “Then accept your fate and let them live on in ignorance of your terrible crimes.”

Ramino drew up his pistol and screamed. He pulled the trigger. An explosion of fire rippled down the stairway. Something like the hammer struck the police captain in the chest. Fire burned his arms and chest. He fell upon the remains of the dead Emma. He screamed and rolled to put out the flames. He threw off his jacket and tore off his shirt. Beneath, his kevlar body armor had shielded him from the worst of the dragon’s breath round.

Above him, at the top of the stairs, Brand had slumped against the side of the wall. Ramino guessed that one of his blind shots had struck. He switched his pistol to full auto and pointed it at the private detective. “You stupid son of a bitch, you and that little fucker can both rot…”

Fast as lightning, Brand had drawn a revolver and fired. Brand staggered backwards. Though he was certain that the round had broken a rib, he had somehow managed to keep his balance. He pointed his pistol up at Brand and pulled back the trigger. His pistol flashed repeatedly as it fired a shower of bullets up at the stranger.

Brand was fast though. No sooner had Ramino aimed his pistol than Brand had leapt back into the kitchen. Bullets sprayed up after him, but none seemed to hit him--or at least, finish the job. The sound of heavy feet confirmed the stranger had lived and was running. Ramino cursed and raced up after, but there was a horrible pain in his chest where the pistol had hit.

By the time Ramino had reached the top of the stairs, Brand had already fled out the door of the townhouse. Ramino cursed, wondering how he could hide the murder or somehow spin it. There was helping it though; he ran after the man. He reached the door and saw that Brand had broken in the window of his car and had gotten in. He was fumbling with the wheel and pedals.

Ramino snorted and leveled his pistol. “Dumbass.”

He pulled the trigger, but not before the car roared to life and suddenly jerked forward. His bullets blew out the back windows. Ramino cursed and tried to adjust his aim, but the car was moving away too quickly. Ramino switched his pistol back to semi, but the car was already around the corner.

Ramino gave a long curse. He looked around, wild and crazy. He was done. Brand would go to the DA. Ramino would be arrested. He could see the headlines; prominenant police captain arrested for the murder of his former maid and their bastard son. His life would be over. He’d go from one of the most powerful men in Baltimore to the bitch of some gang banger.

For several minutes, Ramino was wracked with panic. His first instinct was to get out of town. He could use his card to get some cash, buy an old car--one without the modern chips, and head to Kentucky or Tennessee. One of the backwater towns that hadn’t fully integrated with the national database. Create a new identity. Start over.

Star over? Ramino shook his head and reigned in his terror. No, no he could do this. He had the tools, he just had to think. The fog of panic parted and Ramino brought to mind the White Squad. The White Squad were an elite SWAT team in Baltimore that was made up of the sons of several influential family members of the state. They had been formed back in the early 1900s as part of a way to keep the uppity blacks down, but evolved into an elite force that got the toughest jobs--and were expected to perform dirty jobs for the power brokers of the city and the state.

Ramino would get the third degree for hijacking the squad for his own use, but he could justify it. And his superiors would each take a hit if his crimes were revealed to the public. Ramin had also gone to the trouble to get to know the leader of the squad and shower them with special favors--not to mention cover up the occasional indisgression. In that light, Ramino thought, he was just cashing in a few of his favors. He could spin it later. Evidence would go missing. He had his perp. And he could spin Brand’s death.

Ramino licked his lips. He pulled out his phone and began to make calls. He would need to move fast. An hour later, a police cruiser pulled up along the road. The window rolled down and a SWAT officer in his early thirties poked his head out the window. It was Daniel Hall, the leader of White Squad.

“Hey captain!” he called. “Need a ride?”

Ramino smiled, relieved and nervous all at once. He got in the passenger’s side and Officer Hall sped off. Ramino explained the situation on the way. “I got a man who dug something up on me,” he said.

“And he’s at the Pine Tree?” Hall asked.

“Yeah,” Ramino said. He rubbed his hands. “He...he can’t be...taken alive.”

Hall frowned, but nodded. He seemed to have expected that. “No problem captain.”

Ramino breathed easier. “Thank you Hall, I appreciate this.”

Hall smiled, “No problem captain. You’ve always treated us well. We’re just returning the favor.”

Ramino wanted to believe that, but he had an uneasy churn in his gut. He looked over at the sergeant. Hall had not asked about the details. He had expected that he would. He’d woken him and his entire team before it was even light out to kill a man. God, he thought, how often has he done this?
Hall noticed his discomfort. “Something up captain?”

Ramino hesitated, then answered. “You...you haven’t asked why.”

Hall gave a chuckle. “I don’t need to. This ain’t my first rodeo.”

Ramino could not keep the tightness out of his voice.”I will...need you to help me with the...evidence.”

“Consider it done.” Ramino said. “I know some people in the DA’s office too. We’ll handle all that for you.”

“Thank you, Hall.”

“Don’t mention it.”

Ramino and Hall arrived at the Pine Tree almost an hour later. The far red and golden light of dawn had begun, but the dark blue sky still held across much of the sky. Two other police cars were already there. Three white men and a black man in SWAT gear waited for them. Hall got out of the car and signaled them over. He led Ramino to his trunk and opened it; two sets of riot gear awaited them.

Hall began to gear up. Ramino took a vest and helmet, but eschewed the other gear, save for the weapons. He took a belt with pepper spray, smoke bombs, flash bangs, extra ammo for his pistol, and then took a shotgun. A classic mossberg with a pistol handle. He loaded it with buck shells. While they geared up, Hall brought the rest of the team up on what was happening.

“We go up, he goes down, we go home.” Hall finished. He nodded to Ramino. “The captain wants in on the action. You take orders from both of us.”
“I’ll rely on your expertise sergeant,” Ramino said. It was both true and something he hoped the sergeant would appreciate.

Hall gave him a nod, “I appreciate that captain.” he turned back to his men. “We keep this tight. No collateral boys. Jones, I want you and Brown to clear out any witnesses. Davis, you got your special body cam?”

“Yes sir.”

Hall grinned. “Okay. Let’s go.”

The six men entered the lobby of the hotel. A sleepy, strung out woman manned the desk. Ramino knew her from his time on the street; a former crack addict. He had, for a few favors, gotten her the job at the Pine Tree. Her name was Rachel. Rachel was busy speaking to a guest, who had finished speaking to her and left as they’d entered. Rachel looked exasperated, then saw the SWAT team and turned a shade paller.

“Wh-what?” she asked stupidly.

Ramino took the lead. “Rachel, I’m here for Samuel Brand.”

The woman stared at him. “Uh...why?”

“Just tell us where the fuck he is.” Jones snapped.

“Button it Jones.” Hall said shortly. He pointed to Rachel. “Please miss, this man is extremely dangerous. Floor and room. Please.”

Rachel told them, “Fourth Floor, Four-Thirteen. I wondered what was going on. Five people around his room just checked out. Must be causing some sort of ruckus.”

Ramino saw his opportunity. “He’s incredibly dangerous,” he told her. “Stay here. Don’t let anyone up. Understood?”

“Yes sir.”

Ramino nodded to Hall, who signaled to the other men and they all went for the elevator. The damn thing shuddered and slowly rose upwards. It was a slow rise. They came out on the fourth floor and immediately started for Brand’s room. As they went, Hall spoke the plan into his mic, “Alright, change of plan. Davis, you and Taylor breach the door. Take him out if you see him. Jones, you and Jones head to the roof. The captain said this fucker is quick. He might try and go up the fire escape. The captain and I will back up Davis and Taylor. Go!”

Davis and Taylor broke off. The rest of the team continued to Brand’s room, where they stacked up on the door and waited for the signal. Taylor used a fiber optics wand to look under the door. He whispered into his mic, “Can’t see anything. It’s dark. He might not be there. Or he might have gone to bed.”

Hall scowled. “Bed? The fucker just stole a captain’s car!”

“Maybe he isn’t too bright?” Davis offered.

“He might have bled out a bit,” Ramino offered. “I’m sure I hit him, but he had body armor on.”

“Wait!” Taylor said. “That’s what’s on the floor on the right! Looks like some kevlar. Took a hell of a beating.”

Hall grinned. “Looks like we got lucky.”

“Jones here sir,” they heard in their headsets. “Brown and I are waiting upstairs.”

“Good job.” he signaled the other two officers, who adjusted their position for the breach. Taylor furnished a master key card that they had obtained from Rachel. “We’re breaching on...one...two...THREE!”

The two SWAT officers rushed in. There was a shout and the two men began to fire. Ramino and Hall stood outside the door and peered in. There was a lumpy, bullet-ridden form under the bed. The bed was soaked with blood. Runed mangled clothes poked out from beneath the comforter.

“Wait, what’s that smell?” Hall wondered.

Hall frowned. He smelled it to. It reminded him of a gas station. He stared at the bloodied comforter and realized it wasn’t blood...

“Shit!” he screamed. “Get out! Get out!”

He was too late. From out of a hole in the wall, a jet of flame erupted. The flames caught the two officers, but more importantly the gas-soaked bed and floor. Flame and smoke engulfed the room, followed by a boom that threw Ramino and Hall against the wall behind them. From within the room, screams and cracking wood came.

Ramino leapt to his feet. The room was gone; the entire floor had collapsed. Davis and Taylor were nowhere to be seen. Ramino looked to the wall on his right; he saw a barrel pull itself back through a hole in the wall.

“He’s in the other room!” Ramino yelled. “C’mon!”

Hall was quick to the second door. Hall didn’t bother with trying to open it. He shouldered his way into it, cracking the door on two slams, and breaking it in three. The two rushed in. In the right wall was a large hole; someone had taken a maul to the wall that separated 414 and 415. Hall roared and pointed his shotgun, but white-grey smoke filled the room. Hall fired off a few rounds, but scored no hits.

“This way!” Ramino yelled. He lead the way to 415. He slammed it with his shoulder, but it was sturdier than the captain had expected. He slammed hard. He turned to see if Hall had followed him, but he had not.

“Hall!” he cried and slammed his shoulder into the door. He felt the door give way and the wood crack, but not enough to allow him entry. “Hall, this way!”

Suddenly, the high-pitched squeal of an automatic weapon echoed from within the room. Ramino heard a scream. The captain cursed and shouldered the door as hard as he could. The door broke open. He caught a glimpse of Brand fleeing out the window and up the fire escape. Ramino took a shot, but caught nothing but glass.

Ramino looked and found Hall on the floor. He had been peppered by dozens of bullets. His body armor had protected him, but his visor was cracked and looked as though a paintball had exploded inside his helmet. Ramino had to choke back bile.

“Sarg! Sarge!”

Ramino looked around, confused. He suddenly remembered Jones and Brown on the roof. He started to warn them about Brand, but then realized that they were behind him! Ramino swore. “He’s on the fire escape!” he screamed. “Get back upstairs!”

Brown looked at the dead Hall, “But what about…”

Ramino silenced him with a racial epithet. “Get up there! Now! Stop him!” He pointed to Jones, “You’re with me! Let’s go!”

Ramino led the way for Jones. Brown ran for the stairwell. Ramino was no sooner out of the window when a shot rang out. The captain stumbled and looked upwards. Brand had reached the sixth floor and had waited to ambush them. Ramino pointed his shotgun upwards and took a shot. Sparks leaped across the metal grating, but didn’t seem to hit the traveler. Jones favored a pistol, but was met with similar luck.

“Damn! We can’t hit him!” Jones said.

“Don’t have to!” Ramino said in a low snarl. “Just keep him pinned! Brown will get the fucker!”

The two officers kept firing, in hopes of keeping Brand pinned, but the man raced upwards and climbed the last stairs. Ramino cursed, “After him!”

Jones raced ahead. Ramino was a few steps behind. They reached the fifth and had begun to climb the sixth when suddenly a step broke. Jones went almost straight down and slammed his head on the railing. His gun flew over the railing and fell to the alley below. Ramino stopped and tried to pull the man up, but he was well and jammed.

“Go! Go!” Jones protested. “I’ll catch up!”

Ramino ignored him. He did not want to leave Jones there to die and he sure as hell didn’t want to go up against Brand alone. He let the shotgun hang off his shoulder by the strap and tried to help him up, but the sound of gunfire came from the roof.

“Shit!” Ramino looked up, then down at Jones.

“Go! Go!” Jones insisted.

Ramino listened. He hopped over Jones and took the steps three at a time. He arrived on the roof in time to see Brown die.
 

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Chapter Four

Samuel Brand had hoped to finish off the police captain and his cronies on the fire escape, but the stairwell had provided a degree of protection. Two to one, he knew that he was likely to get unlucky first. Brand abandoned his position and took the last of the fire escape in long strides. He had already picked out where he would ambush his pursuers; from behind one of the many AC units that had been installed upon the roof. God willing, he would kill both before they could get a beat on him.

At that very moment however, another SWAT officer came up from a nearby stairwell. Brand stopped, surprised. The officer too, was surprised. He stopped and fired several blind shots with his shotgun. Brand ran for cover and returned fire, in hopes of scoring a hit with his own shotgun, but had no luck. He ducked behind a generator. Bullets rang off the sheet metal and inner parts. Brand prayed that it would hold. Brand looked to the other fire escape across the roof. If he could move across the AC units, he might reach the fire escape and get to the floor below.

The plan died there, as another shot rang from the right side of the fan; the SWAT officer had moved to put himself between Brand and the other fire escape. If Brand went for the fire escape, he’d get shot. If he ran for the stairwell, he’d get shot. If Brand went for the first fire escape, Ramino and his buddies would be there waiting for him. Brand cursed. Trapped.

“Come on out!” the officer called. “Come out or I’ll put a bullet in your fucking head!”

Brand doubted the officer would let him live regardless. He looked around for inspiration--and found it. Next to him lay a few empty brown bottles. Brand snatched one and tossed it up and over, much like a grenade. He heard a curse. Brand leapt out, tracked Brown as he moved and pulled the trigger on his shotgun. The black officer’s face exploded in a shower of gore. At the same time, something hard caught Brand in his right side.

Brand hit the cement hard on his back. Spots covered his vision and for a moment, he was on the edge of unconsciousness. Only by luck--or miracle, was Brand able to draw himself back from that edge. He forced himself to get off his back. He struggled for his feet, but the pain left it a slow process. He was certain that the shotgun shell the officer had used had broken one of the ribs, possibly two, on his right side. He could feel the ceramic plate had shattered.

Brand fought through the pain. He had to reach the other fire escape and find cover. AT least long enough to get his bearings. As much as it infuriated him, he would have to flee and bring his fight to the captain another day. He took a small amount of comfort in knowing he had killed at least five sinners that day.

“Don’t move you son of a bitch!”

Brand stopped, surprised. He felt a simmer of fear in his stomach, but it was quenched by the coolness of his duty and faith.

“Turn around. Slowly.”

Brand slowly turned to see that Ramino had taken to the top of the fire escape and had a shotgun trained on him. The captain’s face was red with fear and fury. Brand met his dark, mad eyes with his own calm, bright eyes.

“Captain Ramino.” he said.

A mad grin slid across Ramino’s face. “I’ve got you now fucker. God, I’m going to enjoy killing you. You stupid fucker. You stupid, nosey, self-righteous asshole. You think you can just play God?”

“I do not play God, just the part he has for me.” Brand said cooly.

“You’re a fucking nut.” Ramino spat. He leveled the shotgun at Brand.

“Surrender yourself Ramino,” Brand told the captain. “You deserve no such thing, but the Lord may forgive you.”

Ramino laughed wildly. “And what? Lose my job? Spend my life in prison?”

Brand had lost his shotgun after having taken the last shot. Instead, his hand slid towards his revolver. “You must atone for your sins, or suffer his wrath.”

Ramino wasn’t so easy though. “I see you! Put those hands up! Up! Now!”

Brand did as he was told. “You won’t get away with this captain,” he continued. “A gun fight in a hotel? Five bodies? I don’t think the media can resist that. And when they find your son…”

“Shut up!” Ramino snarled. “The papers will write whatever I tell them to damn write! All they care about is their scoop and their liberal bullshit! I’ll blow your fucking brains out and tell them you killed those women! We got enough evidence to plant on your corpse.”

“You can’t hide this shootout captain.” Brand said.

“I don’t need to!” Ramino laughed. “All I have to tell them is some crazy, traveling…”

Brand made a mad dash for the nearest generator. Ramino cursed and fired, but he was too slow and too inaccurate. He missed twice before Brand secured himself behind cover. Brand did not have time to guess how soon Ramino’s reinforcements would arrive. His gut told him that it would not be long. Brand peaked out and with his revolver, took potshots, but Ramino had already made a dash for his own generator to hide behind. His breath was labored; he indeed believed that one of his ribs had broken. The two exchanged shots at each other from behind cover.

Brand was soon forced to reload. Bad news; he was on the last six rounds of his revolver and his shotgun had been lost. Brand tried to look for it, but could not guess where it must have gone. He had been so disoriented from the shotgun to the side, he had lost all track of what had happened. He had turned his mind toward making a run for the fire escape when another SWAT officer came up and over the fire escape.

Brand was immediately alarmed. In his condition, he could not hope to beat two men. He tried to shoot the SWAT officer and managed to score a hit, but was on the man’s vest and before Brand could adjust his aim, the second officer was in cover. Band looked for an avenue of escape, but the two SWAT officers were quick to cut off any quick escape; they two covered each other as they took flanking positions. If Brand attempted to make a run for it, one or both would gun him down in short order. Worse, they moved inward to tighten the noose.

Brand checked his revolver; two shots left. He guessed that Lord willing, he might take one of them with him. Brand decided it would have to be Ramino. He drew his sword. With his pistol, he might catch the man, but he would need to rely upon his sword and speed to finish the job. Too late did he think of this. The other officer had doubled back and had moved along the safety wall to get to a better shooting position.

Brand cursed and twisted to take his shot; both missed. The officer drew his shotgun and fired, but missed. Knowing himself dead either way, Brand leapt out, switched the saber as if it were a clumsy spear and let it fly into the air. The saber caught the SWAT officer in the chest. The ceramic plates caught the blade, but the momentum sent the officer stumbling back. The officer let out a loud scream as he hit the waist-high safety wall--too hard and too fast. He went over, his screams ended suddenly with a loud splat.

The throw had been like a spear point shoved through his side. Brand had not even seen the officer flip over the edge. He staggered and fought to stay on his feet. For a moment his mind wandered and his vision blurred. He fell to one knee and tried to get his bearings when a hammer-blow struck him square in the back. Brand went down hard and for several long moments, Brand’s consciousness nearly plunged into darkness.

The next thing Brand knew, Captain Ramino stood over him, his automatic pistol in hand. He smiled down coldly at Brand. An inhumane, but familiar gleam had come into the captain’s eyes. Brand tried to move, but the captain gave him a hard kick in the side. Hot pain lanced through Brand. He coughed painfully.

“Sorry, did that hurt?” Ramino sneered. He gave Brand another kick and more searing agony shot through Brand.

Brand forced himself to speak. He spat blood. “Kill me. It won’t matter. The Lord will see to your reward.”

Ramino laughed. He pointed the pistol directly at Brand’s face. “Where’s your God now, asshole?”

“He is here, with me.”

“Then you better hope he can catch a bullet.” Ramino said and pulled the trigger.

Brand did not blink. There was a click, but nothing came. The captain frowned and looked at the gun. It had jammed. Before the captain could try to clear the chamber, the full length of a dirk was plunged into his shin. The captain screamed and staggered backward, his pistol lost. He reached for the only weapon that remained to him; a folding metal baton.

Brand came up to a low crouch. The ribs in his right side made each and every movement a measure of stabbing pain. He held the dirk in his hand, outstretched. He stared over at his opponent; the police officer favored his left leg and glared pure hate at Brand.

“I’m going to beat your fucking skull in!” the captain screamed and rushed Brand.

The charge staggered almost immediately. The captain had thought to push through the pain, but found that his right leg had grown weaker and more unsteady. His charged ended with a clumsy swing toward Brand. Brand narrowly ducked the blow, but at great cost to himself as the rib sent a terrible stab into him. The traveller could barely keep his feet.

“Don’t look so good.” the captain sneered. He swung again, a miss, but one that nearly cost Brand his balance.

It went on like that. The police captain was clumsy and slow, but Brand was almost as slow and every move pained him. Spots covered his eyesight and he was only able to avoid the oncoming blows by the obvious tells the captain made in his own wounded state. Brand knew that he would soon not be able to stand at all, let alone fight. He made a risky move; instead of waiting for Ramino to make another attack, Brand launched himself at the captain and tackled him.

The pain was agonizing, but granted Brand a moment of clear awareness. In that moment, he drove his dirk into Ramino’s torso, but kevlar and ceramic plate caught or deflected his blade within the few seconds that Brand had to shank him. Then the captain overpowered Brand. He slammed at his arms, back, and head with the baton. Only clumsy, awkward blows kept Brand alive.

Ramino worked to get Brand in a lock with one arm. It was one that, at any other time, Brand could have broken without effort, but the pain and weakness had begun to overcome him and he struggled to try and break free. Even as he tried, the captain harried him with blows of his baton, in hopes of landing a lucky finish. Brand felt defeat was near. A small, cowardly part of him in the deep recesses of his heart begged for him to surrender. Brand shuddered, but he did not give into the voice. He would die first. That thought appealed to his weakening body and cloudy mind; to lay down and let the final blow be struck.

The appeal Brand felt appalled him. With a snarl, he gave one shout of defiance and stabbed blindly at Ramino. He felt the blade sink into a thin layer of kevlar, then heard the captain’s scream of pain. Brand gritted his teeth, drew the dirk out and drove it in again, about an inch further up. The dirk sank in again. The baton beatings stopped.

Brand forced his mind to clear. He slashed at the weakened arm and sliced open Ramin’s wrist. The hand came away. The captain clutched it, bleeding and screaming. Brand fell loose from Ramino. The captain, thinking perhaps that he should escape, got up to flee. More on instinct than intent, Brand slashed at the fleeing officer and his dirk slashed through sock and hamstrung the man.

Ramino went down hard. Brand staggered after him. He yanked the captain’s head back by the hair and prepared for the final blow. The captain floundered, but even with Brand’s wounds, he could not escape. In one stab and stroke, the deed was done. Brand released the dead captain. He got to his feet. Slowly. Painfully. He looked down at the dead captain and saw something.

Around the captain’s neck was the rosary he had seen in his office. Brand reached into a pocket and withdrew an identical rosary. He spoke a prayer to the Lord and dropped the cross into the pooling blood besides the captain.


End.
 
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Well. You write combat extremely well, and the plot was well-thought out. It wasn't obvious it was Ramino until the chapter it was revealed in.
 

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