Star Wars Storm of Silver [Star Wars/ Doctor Who]

Prologue

DarthOne

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Storm of Silver

Summary:
As the Clone Wars enters its third bloody year, the Republic and the Confederacy fight on with little clear end in sight. Meanwhile, on the fringe of space, a terrible silver legion from another time and place is at last ready to put it's plans into motion. Ones that will threaten the future of the galaxy itself.


Chapter 1: The Derelict

Bathed in the light of its yellow-green star, the planet Florrum was a sulfurous brown orb against the star-specked black vastness of outer space. Here and there, splashes of green could be seen upon its surface. Each forest stood out in stark contrast to the rocky deserts that covered most of the surface. While in many ways more forgiving than worlds such as Tattoine, Florrum was still a harsh and thoroughly unpleasant place to live. Only the tough, the desperate or the stubborn would come here. Not to mention the clever, or alternately, the stupid.

Unsurprisingly, the pirates that had made this world their home were a mix of all of these traits.

Had anyone been watching, and been in the possession of particularly good eyesight, they would have seen a lone spacecraft pulling away from the planet and heading out past Florrums' barren moon.

This ship, a Flarestar-class attack shuttle named Raptor 1, was roughly saucer-shaped. Its main hold, a boxy protrusion attached to the underside, had been specially modified to include a short tunnel, leading to a sealed boarding tunnel and docking collar on its main ramp, which was down. Its other notable feature was the pair of laser canons that jutted from the front of the hold like the antenna on a moth. A comparison that seemed all the more fitting given Raptor 1's color. Which was a faded white, as the ship's paintwork had seen better days. Both the top and bottom of the saucer were marked by a red symbol in the crude likeness of a scowling face; the sigil of the Ohnaka Pirate Gang.

The Flarestar's engines continued to burn a fierce yellow as it accelerated towards a shadowy bulk of a derelict starship drifting slowly inwards from the outer limits of the system's edge. With Florrum between it and the world's star, the derelict was almost invisible. Save for when it blocked out the tiny pinpricks of the many distant stars and by a faint metallic gleam of the light of those stars reflecting off its hull. However, despite this, even the most casual observer could tell that Raptor 1 was utterly dwarfed by this newcomer to the Florrum system.

As it drew closer to the derelict, the Flarestar slowed. Now resembling moth fluttering around a slumbering Alderannian bear, the tiny ship maneuvered around the abandoned vessel. It's floodlights pointing at sections of the huge hull as the pilots searched for some kind of access point.

When, eventually, an airlock was found, the assault shuttle stopped, slowly turned in place so that it's rear now faced the airlock. Then, the assault-shuttle began backing up. Its pilots taking care to line up the retrofitted docking collar on the rear ramp below slowly reversing. Until, with a loud clank, the collar magnetically sealed itself onto the hull of the derelict.

-SW-

From his spot in the middle of the gaggle of ten other pirates, Jiro of the Ohnaka Gang tried to peer over the heads of the people in front of him with growing annoyance. This wasn't helped by the feeling of his once carefully styled mohawk of black hair being flattened further against the top of his head as he did so by his spacesuit's helmet.

From where he was standing Jiro could see that the inner airlock door to the derelict was roughly in the shape of a triangle, but with the top point sliced off. Both door and hull were made out of a dulled silver metal. One that didn't look quite like anything Jiro could have sworn he'd ever seen before. So, in short it was identical to the outer airlock door.

Like with that door, a Nekto by the name of Caton Jasha had used a plasma cutter to slice metal panels off the wall and connect an access tuner to the various cables and whatever else that controlled the airlock door. The only difference that Jiro saw was that, unlike with the outer door, Caton had only needed to slice out one panel to find the right cabling, instead of two.

Any early hopes Jiro might have once had that this door would prove easier than the first had died what was probably only a minute ago, but in fact felt like an hour.

Jiro settled back on his heels and heard his boots, magnetized like the other pirate's, clank in his ears through the contained atmosphere of the suit. Like the other ten pirates who'd been sent out on this little trip by the leader and namesake of the Ohnaka Pirate Gang, Hondo Ohnaka, Jiro wore an industrial enviro-suit with a fishbowl helmet of glass and metal. And like the rest, his was grungy and faded. Its color once might have been deep green, but it now looked closer to the color of stagnant water. Which Jiro could have cared less about, as he would have the tightness under his arms.

No, what annoyed him the most was that the suit, for some inexplicable reason, smelled faintly of Dabohn beans. A food that, as a Weequay, Jiro found utterly disgusting.

Still, Jiro had to admit to himself that things could be worse. He could still be on the tunnel connecting Raptor 1's main hold to the docking clamp. He shuddered, remembering the ribbed material of the floor bouncing like a swinging bridge with each step.

But even that beat the other plan. The other option, which had been discussed when one of their patrols had first spotted and scanned the derelict two days ago, would have been to enter through some of the hull breaches that had been spotted towards the strange vessel's rear. Where they would have to undoubtedly get past wreckage and any blast doors that had been sealed when whatever had probably had caused the ship to be abandoned had happened.

Not for the first time, Jiro absently wondered what exactly had caused the ship to be abandoned. Could it's hyperdrive had failed so badly that it had exploded, forcing the ship to fall out of hyperspace in the void between stars?

Jiro's thoughts were interrupted as Gwarm, the Hondo's red and yellow-skinned Weequay second command, spoke up.

"Well? Can you get us in or are we going to have to blast our way inside?" he demanded, having evidently grown tired of waiting.

"Of course I can!" Was the immediate reply. Caton sounded almost insulted at the idea. "Good news is that there's still some power running, same as the outside door. With any luck, I can...Huh. That was easier than I expected."

Caton had not even finished speaking before the door slid upwards. Shoulder mounted flashlights from those in front of the group of pirates stabbed into the blackness beyond. Revealing a short metal corridor that led forward for a short direction, become splitting off into two directions on both sides.

With a grunt, Gwarm matched inside. "Pitt, Sabo, Caton you're with me. Everyone else, go with Jiro. Meet back up here in two hours." And with that Gwarm walked off, the four other pirates he'd named almost scrambling to catch up as they followed towards the right-hand corridor.

Jiro noticed the other Weequay had one hand on the butt of his holstered blaster pistol, before turning to the rest of the pirates.

"Well you heard the boss, let's go."

As he began to lead his group down the corridor and down the left-hand passage, Jiro decided that the inside of the ship looked unquestionably unimpressive. Save for a few dark squares on the roof- which he took to be light sources of some sort- the corridor was completely unadorned. Just panels of the same dull silver metal the airlock door and the hull had been made of.

He wondered if it was some sort of alien alloy, unknown to any but the race who built this ship. The thought brightened his mood considerably. If it was, they might be able to fetch an even bigger stack of credits or spice than they'd thought they would by selling samples to the Republic. Or Separatists.

"Got to say, I've never quite seen a ship like this before." Jiro heard Teemu Charr commented over local comms after some time had passed and their path had taken several twists and turns.

"Which is why Hondo wants us to check this thing out and see if there's anything valuable we can strip out before selling this thing for scrap metal." Jiro reminded her.

"Provided that he doesn't change his mind and decide to try and patch this ship up for our own use." Taz Crane said, the Nekto's dark red complexion looking almost brown in the dim lighting.

"I don't know about him doing that, but I'll tell you one thing." Shin-Wan Fel, a Weequay like Jiro, chimed in.

"What?"

"I'm starting to doubt that we'll find anything. I don't think I've seen a ship so bare-bones before."

"You think this thing was built by a race of monks or something?" Teemu asked Shin-Wan as the five pirates reached another sealed doorway. Pulling a plasma torch from her belt, she began slicing into a likely looking panel on the wall near the door.

Shin-Wan barked a laugh. "I doubt it. I've never met any monks who weren't wealthy and barely bothered to hide it. Take those Jedi-worshipers on Jedha. You think they got that temple and all those statues from thin air? I wouldn't be surprised if they were selling some of those 'magic rocks' of theirs under the counter as gems. No, I think if this ship was built by monks, you'd have plenty of decorations and such."

"Well, you're probably not wrong," Teemu said, prying the panel off the wall. She evidently found what she'd been looking for. While Jiro watched, Teemu replaced the plasma torch on her belt and swapped it for the access tuner.

For several long moments, silence reigned as Teemu worked. Jiro found himself looking back the way they'd come.

"I still don't understand why we haven't packed everything up and left Florrum already." Bren Ming muttered to himself.

Jiro bit back a curse. He had a pretty good idea of how this was about to go. Even if he hadn't heard Bren complain about this before, it would not be the first time he'd heard similar mutterings of concern.

"And why would we be doing that?" Jax Zem asked, the Bith's voice uncharacteristically deep for one of his species.

Bren shot Jax a look as if he'd lost his mind. "Because we kidnapped Count Dooku, one of the most powerful beings in the galaxy, less than two weeks ago for ransom. Not to mention that whole mess with those two Jedi, or has everyone else besides me forgotten about that?"

"Dooku and the Separatists got bigger problem than hunting us down right now. Same with the Jedi and the Republic. Now quit bellyaching," Jiro commanded confidently, unable to keep the irritation from his voice. Plus, despite his outward confidence and the words of Hondo, he didn't quite believe that the Separatists would not come after them for revenge.

As for the Republic, Jiro was less worried about them. If they actually cared or were capable of doing anything about the lawlessness in the Outer Rim, they would have done so long ago. Maybe if they had, the whole galaxy wouldn't be at war. Which would have been a shame for pirates like himself.

"I'm just sayin' that-" Bren started.

"Just stop saying." Teemu snapped from where she stood and beating Jiro to it. Having finished her work with the access tuner, Teemu was removing the connectors she'd attached to the wiring within the wall, "Now help me get this door open. That is if you can keep your mouth from running for less than five seconds."

Had anyone there bothered to look up right then, they would have seen several metallic silver grubs, all identical, all about the size of large rats, scuttle by behind them on the roof of the corridor. Each of these strange creatures were heading towards where the pirates had boarded the derelict.

Of course, if anyone had seen this unusual sight, they would have been swiftly dealt with by the metallic creatures.

-SW-

CENTRAL COMPUTER CORE OF CYBERSHIP AH7-65-9G
ASSIGNED TO 145TH BATTLEPHALANX

˃ continuing to track unknown humanoids ˃ successfully allowed aboard ˃ access to vital areas successfully restricted

˃ unknown humanoids ˃ armament ˃ threat level minimum

˃ cybermatts ˃ confirmation ˃ pilots of docked shuttle neutralized

˃ chances of power increase being detected ˃ less than 5 percent

˃ priority imperative

˃ initiating stage one

˃ increasing output of reactor two to required levels

˃ reviving first task-force

-SW-

Several decks below where the pirates had entered the ship stood a vast dim room. Containing within it were rank upon rank and row upon row of metal sarcophagi with frosted armor-glass lids. It was but one of three similar rooms in the heavily armored hull of the ship.

The silence within the tomb-like space was broken. First by a low hum as the artificial gravity generators for that compartment switched on. Then the controls arranged alongside each high-tech coffin chittered and burbled electronically for a few moments. Lights on those flat surfaces winked in complicated sequences.

The sterile environment within each container was broken as, with a hiss of depressurized air, the lids slid back. Revealing tall plastic cocoons. Within each and beneath the layers of milky-transparent plastic wrappings could be glimpsed a silver form with a blank, inhuman face. Each figure was greater than the average human in stature, but not gigantic. All were remorseless soldiers, devoid of hope, devoid of fear, never surrendering.

Brains that were part organic and part computer stirred to life. As the sleepers awoke from their slumber, their bodies twitched and jerked. In the gloom, a pair of red eyes glowed dimly on each metal face.

A chorus of crackling sounds filled the room as the silver figures began tearing through their protective shrouds with a strength that was more than human. Until they freed themselves with ripping, shredding armored hands, and clambered out of their suspension capsules.

At last, sixteen or so figures stood upright, still as statues. But this was only a tiny fraction of those who were contained in this place and still slumbered on in hibernation.

For a moment, the silver men stood in silence. Performing automatic internal systems checks. Absorbing the information transmitted to them by the ship's central computer. But only for a moment, until one of the figures turned to face the rest.

"Set weaponry on stun. We will capture as many of the alien intruders alive as possible. They may have information that will be of value. And they must be assessed to discover if they are suitable for conversion. Our forces must grow if we are to survive and conquer." It ordered in a deep voice that only sometimes revealed that its owner was now more machine than organic.

Here the speaker turned to address another of its kind, which stood in the next row over and had turned to face it as well. "Lieutenant, take half of our forces to secure the alien's shuttle and cut off any potential lines of retreat. The rest will come with me."

"Yes, Leader." Replied the other in a similar half-mechanical voice, though it was not as deep.

Then, moving with unity and precision that would make parade-ground instructors the galaxy over green with envy, the tall silver figures turned as one and split off into two groups. The only noise they made was a quiet mechanical whirring sound and the almost equally subtle clank of footsteps as they marched from the cavernous room and into darkness.

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Author's notes:
Read! Enjoy! Review, whether to tell me what you liked or to scream at what you didn't! Also, this didn't have any sort of editor or beta reader, so if anyone's interested in helping me out in that area, feel free to speak up!

In case the mention of Jedha wasn't a clue, this is set in the Disney version of Star Wars. If only because the events and characterization of the CGI Clone Wars series do not fit with those in the 'classic' Star Wars Legends books, games and comics set during the Clone Wars very well. That said, I do genuinely like the CGI Clone Wars series.

Given that Doctor Who canon is a bit of a mess at the best of times, I'd like to mention that I'm using the book Cybermen by the incomparable David Banks as a major source for this story. As well as the Big Finish Audioplay Real Time and other classic Cyberman stories, such as Earthshock.

All that said, however, I will be doing my best as the story goes on to make it more accessible to people who aren't as familiar with Doctor Who.
 
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Chapter 1

DarthOne

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Chapter 1
Roughly Two Galactic Years Later


Dressed in black leather and gold, Darts D'Nar of Zygerria stared down at the colony from his position inside the topmost room of the now-former governor's graceful tower.

Once home to fifty thousand Togrutian artisans, the Kiros colony now stood empty of its people. Instead, it now housed the mechanical automatons and war machines of the Confederacy of Independent Systems.

DNar's lips twisted on his lightly furred and feline-like face. Ten local days had passed since this world's pitiful Togruta colonists has been claimed and shipped to Zygerria for the great auction. All the while, he'd waited here, ready to spring his trap on the Republic and their Jedi filth when they came to investigate.

Long ago, Zygerria been the beating heart of a massive Empire that had supplied slave labor to the galaxy. For thousands of years, his people had prospered, growing ever richer, ever stronger. As was their right.

Then the hated Jedi had come and ended it all.

If all went as he planned, this world would see the beginning of the long over-do payback for his people...when that time came. He was finding it ever harder to remain patient after so many days. And patience was a practice he'd never been all that good at.

But soon. Soon the waiting would be over.

Zygeria would become great again, reclaiming its rightful place in the galaxy as a slaving Empire, as of old. And soon he would be able to make the Jedi pay for their arrogance. He would enjoy breaking them and presenting them before his Queen in chains.

It was only right after all. The weak deserve nothing more than to kneel before the strong, bound in the service of Zygerria, her children, and their paying customers.

It was then that D'Nar's rather pleasant imaginings were brought to a sudden halt.

"Sir, I calculate we have a situation."

Whirling around, D'Nar's golden eyes came to rest on the boxy form of TX-1861, who'd accompanied himself and Count Dooku to this world all those days ago. The cream and black colored T-series tactical droid was seated at the governor's desk, it's red photoreceptors focused on the various sensor displays built into the piece of furniture.

"What is it?" D'Nar's voice was accented, as was typical of Zygerrians. He didn't bother to hide his irritation from the droid. It was an inferior being after all.

"The colony's sensors have detected two ships dropping out of hyperspace."

"The Jedi?" D'Nar asked, almost hurrying over towards the desk, his sour mood vanishing at the prospect.

"That is improbable. The ships do not match any configuration in my database. However, each is the size of Munificent-class star frigate." The droid glanced back down at the instruments, continued, "They nearly over the colony as we speak."

"You had better be right!"

"I am a droid. I am always right." TX-1861 stated to D'Nar's face with mechanical dispassion.

D'Nar swore viciously. The colony lacked any sort of defensive shielding, much less weaponry. He could only hope that these newcomers were going to land. "Alert our forces for battle and contact Count Dooku!"

"I cannot, all long-range communications have been jammed." Informed the Tactical Droid, somehow managing to inject a trace of worry its emotionless voice.

It was then that Darts D'Nar became aware of a strong tingling sensation across his body. The Zygerian commander just had time to look confused when he and TX-1861 teleported from the room in twin shimmers of blue light. Leaving only two objects to clatter to the floor.

The first was the bomb Darts D'Nar had discreetly planted on the TX-1861's back as a deadly surprise of last resort for the Jedi. The other was the Zygerian's energy whip, which had hung at his waist since he was an adolescent.

These had just hit the ground when a spear of sea-green energy stabbed down from the sky. Aimed by cold, dispassionate minds, this first shot destroyed the gold and cream-colored governor's tower. Vaporizing the central computer core of the colony, alongside the various caged creatures D'Nar had intended to bring back to Zygerria to sell as exotic pets.

Before the remains of the tower had hit the ground, however, the focus of the orbital bombardment had already shifted to the land surrounding the colony.

Now more lances of fire started to rain down. The bombardment had been carefully calculated to cut off any means of escape by forming a crescent of ruination that shrank inwards with each volley.

The moat of water around the colony hissed and boiled with steam. Each blast sent debris, soil, Separatist tanks, and shattered battledroids screaming skywards before crashing back to the ground. With the latter of which often being quite literal. Whole houses were annihilated in an instant, leaving behind only smoldering, glass-coated craters.

However, before more than three-quarters of the colony had been destroyed, the firing abruptly stopped.

The ship's masters had detected intruders were approaching.

-SW-

With a flicker of pseudo-motion the arrow-head shaped forms of the small Galactic Republic Navy task force emerged from hyperspace above the cloudy green orb of the planet Kiros.

Consisting of a single Venator-class Star Destroyer at it's core, along with an Acclimator-class assault ship and two Arquintins light cruisers in a protective forward screen, it was nothing to sneeze at. But it was also the most the Republic could scrape together and spare to on such short notice with their struggle to push back the droid forces of the Confederacy of Independent Systems.

Aboard the bridge of the Star Destroyer Negotiator, Jedi General Obi-Wan Kenobi glanced away from the Venator's large forward-facing viewports at the voice of one of his officers. Besides him, his former padawan, now Jedi Knight and General, Anakin Skywalker shifted uneasily on his feet. Both wore their customary Jedi robes; Obi-Wan in tan, Anakin in dark brown and black leather.

"All clear sir, no sign of any Separatist craft in the system. Picking up some sort of disturbance on sensors, trying to clear it up." Informed an officer from the crew pit. Like most of the Republic Army and Starfleet, he was a clone of the now-deceased Bounty Hunter Jango Fett.

Obi-Wan raised an eyebrow at the last piece of information, but merely said, "Thank you, Lieutenant Walker."

While the clones might have been physically identical, their personalities and how they felt in the Force were anything but.

"It's been ten rotations since Master Yoda's message. I just hope we're here in time." Anakin commented to Obi-Wan.

"So am I." He frowned, thoughtful. "Odd that the Separatists would not have started blocking that transmission when they arrived in-system."

Before Obi-Wan could pursue that line of thought further, or Anakin could reply, they were interrupted.

"Sir, I'm getting readings from the surface that the colony has been hit hard and- General! Tracking two ships over the planet, unknown type. They are leaving orbit in sector 6 by 26!"

Stepping closer to the window and peering in that direction, Obi-Wan felt a grave expression settle over his face.

A pair of ships were swinging out from Kiros and if the brightness of their drives were anything to go on, burning hard for space. Each was a hexagon-shaped saucers, their sides a dull metallic silver. Using the Force to enhance his vision for the vast distance between ships, he could see their surface was studded with weapon mounts and hatches for missile tubes.

"Raise shields, move us to intercept them, and broadcast a message asking them to identify themselves and what they were doing here." He commanded.

There was a chance that whoever was on those ships had just stumbled across the colony by accident and had nothing to do with the destruction. But there was no sense in not being prepared.

"And prep fighters for launch!" Anakin added, clearly on the same train of thought as Obi-Wan but quicker on the trigger.
Several 'yes sir!'s followed as the clone officers began relaying commands and carrying out orders.

The Jedi Master choose that moment to reach out with the Force towards the unknown ships, trying to sense their inhabitants and their nature. They were within what he could sense, in the dark and lifeless vacuum of space. And yet, he could barely sense anything in the Force.

What he could sense was...strange. There was no other word for it. They didn't feel like droids or any species he'd encountered before.

In the background, he could hear Anakin's apprentice, Ahsoka Tano, talking to him over a personal comlink, asking what was going on, being told 'trouble' and being instructed to take command of one of the Negotiator's fighter squadrons.

Pulling his focus back, Obi-Wan turned towards the Star Destroyer's communication officer in the crew-pit. "Any response?"

The officer shook his head. "Nothing sir. I've sent it twice and there's nothing but static."

Obi-Wan almost sighed. So much for that approach. And from the look of things, the two ships were almost out of the gravity well of Kiros and able to make the jump to lightspeed.

He turned to another officer. "Launch fighters and prepare to fire a shot across their bow."

"Aye, aye General. Launching fighters now."

Beneath Obi-Wan's feet, he could feel the faint rumbling of the Negotiator's massive dorsal hanger cranking open as the ship began its turn to port. From the bridge, he could see several of the new Z-95 Headhunters beginning to form up behind the shape of Ahsoka's dark red Jedi interceptor.

At that moment, Obi-Wan felt a whispered warning through the Force.

Outside, the guns of the unknown ships swiveled to face the oncoming Republic task force, spitting out bolts of blue-green energy. Launch tubes swung open to discharge missiles, which roared towards their targets.

"Full power to forward shields, return fire!" Obi-Wan ordered.

"Well, this just got interesting," Anakin commented with relish to no one in particular as the Venator began shuddering under the impacts of weapons fire.

-SW-

As the Headhunters and Ahsoka flew in interception formation around the Negotiator, the Republic ships opened up. Soon the darkness of space between the opposing forces was lit up by weapons fire, proton torpedoes and missiles in a dazzling display of firepower. With the fighter command of the Negotiator setting the Headhunter squadron to work alongside the ship's point defense turrets to take down closing missiles and keep them away from arcing down into the vulnerable dorsal hanger in particular while the Venator began launching more of its complement of fighters. The Acclamator and Arquintins by contrast were forced to rely more on their light laser cannons to fend off the missiles. It was a task that the Republic found more difficult then usual; their targets being quicker and more nimble than they were used to.

However, any plans to send out the massing fighter squadrons on attacks on the silver ships were quickly scuttled. As Republic commanders could only watch in shock at what happened to the concussion missiles and proton torpedoes racing towards the unknown vessels. Tricked by electronic warfare and decoys, many of the weapons veered off course. With the unaffected ones being shot down with almost contemptuous ease by their target's defense systems at a surprising distance in but moments.

Not one got though to hit the ship, and it was soon judged that any non-Force sensitive pilots would almost certainly find themselves facing only slightly better odds against the silver ships' defensive weapons. Therefore, those squadrons already launched spread out to help fend off incoming missiles among the rest of the fleet. The rest remained on board as the Venator's main hanger was shut.

However, that didn't stop the unknown ships' other weapons in the slightest. Here too, the Republic fleet was finding itself on the end of an unpleasant surprise. The reason, still as of yet unknown to the Republic forces, was a simple one. While their weapons might have been aided by computerized magnification devices and fire control systems, they were still directed by flesh and blood reflexes. Their adversaries, however, were much more augmented thanks to cybernetics and computer processing algorithms. Machinery that was, in many ways, above what either the Republic or the Confederacy could create.

The upshot of which was that nearly every shot fired went exactly where it was supposed to. Likewise, almost every move made by Republic ships, projectiles, and weaponry were noticed, calculated, and reacted to with the kind of speed that computers were capable of.

On one of the Arquintins, the incoming fire was too much. Its shields failed, which was soon followed by parts of its hull as blue-green energy ate and boiled through metal. Incoming missiles, their onboard sensors noting the lack of shields, switched from proximity to direct flights. Micro-seconds later, they slammed into the hull, the explosions shredding armored hull plates.

Blast doors slammed shut, even as clone crew-members were plucked off their feet and hurled into the void by howling wind as it vented into space. While others, further away from the immediate breaches but still trapped, beat weakening hands against sealed doors while their skin turned blue from lack of air and cold in their dying moments.

Even as the Arquintins in question broke formation to escape bombardment, the two silver ships shifted the majority of their firepower to batter the Acclimator-class, which had already suffered damage.

Still, unknown vessels were not having the fight all in their favor. As the superior numbers of the Republic task force were not without consequence or effect. Despite their maneuvers and excellent point defense systems, the silver ships were taking damage. Their once pristine silver hulls, made of alloys tougher than durasteel, were becoming pockmarked with black carbon scoring and fiery rents as their shield withered. Guns were silenced, taken out by direct hits. After all, for all their toughness, these ships had been designed more as vessels to support the larger warships in battle.

Perhaps with a little more time, the Republic vessels would have disabled or destroyed the other vessels. But it was not to be. With a flicker of pseudo-motion, the pair of strange saucer-shaped craft leaped into hyperspace.

The whole battle had only lasted minutes.
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Author's Note:
Well, that took far, far longer than I wanted it to. Part of that being Disney's fault. Still, you all have my deepest apologies for the delay and I hope you can forgive me. To everyone who left a comment, I thank you for your patience.

Also, I hope that I got Obi-Wan and Anakin's personalities down right and I didn't make the bridge scene Star Trek-like by accident. Likewise, this was my first real attempt at a space battle, so I hope the fight came out well. I did consider doing it from Ahsoka's point of view, but I couldn't get it to really work.

As a last, but certainly not least, a final note. While this is still set in the Disney continuity, I've decided to write this with some inspiration from works of the original Clone Wars multimedia project. Basically, I'm sort of going for the idea that the show we saw wasn't entirely historically accurate when it came to certain points. Also because when it comes to the likes of Grievous and Dooku, I prefer their more complex and capable characterizations from pre-TCW works.

Comments, questions, and remarks are welcomed and motivate me to write more!
 
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Bacle

When the effort is no longer profitable...
Founder
Interesting fic, though I know very little about Dr Who.

I like the feel and pacing so far.
 

DarthOne

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Interesting fic, though I know very little about Dr Who.

I like the feel and pacing so far.
Thanks! And that's okay, as I'm planning on having the readers like yourself learn about the Cybermen through the SW characters.

Speaking of characters, am I doing a good job with them?
 

Bacle

When the effort is no longer profitable...
Founder
Thanks! And that's okay, as I'm planning on having the readers like yourself learn about the Cybermen through the SW characters.

Speaking of characters, am I doing a good job with them?
Yeah, they seem good so far; I think the voices fit the characters in you scenes.
 

Bassoe

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But only for a moment, until one of the figures turned to face the rest.

"Set weaponry on stun. We will capture as many of the alien intruders alive as possible. They may have information that will be of value. And they must be assessed to discover if they are suitable for conversion. Our forces must grow if we are to survive and conquer." It ordered in a deep voice that only sometimes revealed that its owner was now more machine than organic.

Here the speaker turned to address another of its kind, which stood in the next row over and had turned to face it as well. "Lieutenant, take half of our forces to secure the alien's shuttle and cut off any potential lines of retreat. The rest will come with me."

"Yes, Leader." Replied the other in a similar half-mechanical voice, though it was not as deep.
They talk rather than having a groupmind? Mondasian-style cyberman rather than nuWho versions? The galaxy is fucked, those guys are smart. They'll be hiring themselves out to everyone as mercenaries paid in slaves for Conversion, distributing their technologies to everyone who wants mindlessly loyal cyborg servants since that path will inevitably lead to them and requesting protection from the powers of the galaxy which care about that sort of thing.
 
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DarthOne

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They talk rather than having a groupmind? Mondasian-style cyberman rather than nuWho versions? The galaxy is fucked, those guys are smart. They'll be hiring themselves out to everyone as mercenaries paid in slaves for Conversion, distributing their technologies to everyone who wants mindlessly loyal cyborg servants since that path will inevitably lead to them and requesting protection from the powers of the galaxy which care about that sort of thing.
Yep, I prefer the classic-era cybermen over the new ones for precisely this reason. However, I'm sorry to say this story is on indefinite hiatus and is probably for the time being due to just how little enthusiasm I can drum up after Disney's fuck ups. Still, I can say I have a different idea in the works for a Cyberman story...

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Oh yes, he does. But as I said, this fic is on indefinite hiatus and is probably dead. You can thank Disney for that one I'm sorry to say.
Compared to other Disney crimes,one fiction,even as good as yours,is nothing.And poor Palpy made so many backstabing and would not get his crown here...poor baby.
 

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Compared to other Disney crimes,one fiction,even as good as yours,is nothing.And poor Palpy made so many backstabing and would not get his crown here...poor baby.
fair point, though I imagine it's quite disappointing to those who have found/will find this story and would like to see it continued.
 
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