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Shadow Over the Clone Wars: Assault on Ashada (Jedi POV)
Year: 19 BBY
Planet:
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Commanders:
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Synopsis: On the Planet of Ashada Jedi Master Jecenia Dereth and her former Padawan Chee Mandril lead an assault against a separatist droid factory located deep within the Red Forrest of the planet, but as the shadow of war overcast the galaxy the two find themselves in a fight for their lives.

Jecenia and Chee walked slowly through the red forest, guard up and lightsaber in hand. the 259th Battalion had surrounded the factory located within the center of the surface of the planet, mainly in an effort to give suppression fire and/or brute force their way through the shield if possible. Meanwhile it was the job of The Jedi Generals and Their Squad of Shadow Troopers to look for the shield generator and destroy it so that the Battalion could overwhelm the factory itself.

It didn't take long for the Jedi to find said generator but something about this whole thing felt off. it was right there. Yet something was missing that should have obviously been there. Where were the droids?

"Wait, I have a bad feeling about this. Things are quiet, too quiet." Jecenia whispered.

Chee couldn't help but smile. "50 Peggats says that we take another step towards the generator and it activates an army of droids buried under the ground.

Now it was Jecenia's turn to smile. "sucker's bet."

Chee took a deep breath, activated his lightsaber, and took a step forward. His yellow blade glowed against the red scenery almost giving the appearance of a forest on fire. Despite taking a step forward, however, there seemed to be no reaction from the environment at large. Chee then took another step forward and then another and then another. Chee turned around and deactivated his lightsaber.

"Huh I guess the shield generator wasn't so well guarded aftera..."

Chee reactivated his lightsaber when he heard the sound of whirling gears. Jecenia activated her blade as well, her blue blade reflecting against her eyes.

"You were saying?" She asked in a singsong voice while holding back a grin.

"Oh, bite me."

Dozens if not hundreds of droids erupted from the earth like giant moles Their blasters were aimed at point-blank range. If Jacenia and Chee were normal people, they'd practically be dead ducks...but Jedi were not normal people. "surrender Jedi!" one of the droid commanders called out. "We have you outnumbered and outgunned!"

"Outnumbered yes." Chee admitted. "Outgunned, however, I beg to differ."

"Blast them!"

The Jedi Duo wasted no time in cutting through most of the forces like butter. Chee struck with such speed that most would only see him by the golden blur of his lightsaber. Meanwhile, Jacenia looked and fought like a physically imposing powerhouse The problem however was the sheer number of droids that were there. For every one they seemed to cut down, two more droids seemed to take their place.

"Blast it they just keep coming!" Chee cursed.

"Stay with me." Jecenia called out. "While we're both still breathing, and we still have each other we still have a chance."

Second, by second, the droids seemed to close in, that was until an Ion grenade dropped in the middle of the field, frying the droids. suddenly a squad of Republic Commando's decloaked and wiped out the stragglers.

Chee deactivated his lightsaber, chuckled, and shook his head. "Bout time you guys showed up."

"Sorry, General." May the squad leader called out. "The Ion grenades keep malfunctioning."

Seventy-Six gazed up and down at the shield generator. So this is the thing keeping the clankers afloat?"

"Yep," Chee said. "Question is now how are we going to disable it."

Seventy-Six gave a shrug. "Normally I'd say we short-circuit it, but the ion grenades we have on hand are faulty.

"Well you can thank Demo for that one," Hotshot said his voice sounding like smoke, he got us a defective crate."

"My fault I'll admit it. Last time I trust a droid with loading military supplies.

"There is no need to beat yourself up Sigma Squad," Jecenia said with a warm comforting smile. The Force is on our side,

"Are you going to "Use the force" General?" Seventy-Six asked Chee.

Jecenia chuckled. Not that sort of force Watch and learn.

Jecenia walked up to the generator grabbed it by both sides and gave it a heft push, The generator moaned and groaned till it toppled like a cut-down tree smashing into several pieces. the clones began murmuring in amazement.

"Holy Sith!" Demo buttered out. None of the clones beside him would say that phrase out loud but they were thinking it inside thier heads.

"Heh, I can't help but think in another life you would have made a good nightclub bouncer or a gladiator," Seventy-Six said.

Jecenia smiled and picked up her communicator. "Commander Star what's your status?"

Star's blue translucent image crackled and spat. His spoke almost came out like a garbled mess, but both Jenioca and Chee got used to the white noise enough that they were able to hear around them and respond properly.

"I don't know what you did General, but the primary shield appears to be down, looks like they're on secondary power, but we'll have their base rubble by nightfall. I'd say you and Sigma Squad deserve a break."

"Are you sure you don't need us?"

"No need, we'll be able to meet with you at the rendezvous point before daybreak."

"Understood, we'll meet you at the rendezvous point Delta."

"Understood General, We'll meet you at Point Delta. Commander Star over and out."

Jecenia deactivated her comlink and turned to her men. "Well boys, it looks like our job is done. We return back to Point Delta and make camp."

Sigma squad let out a hardy cheer another mission was accomplished and hopefully one more step in ending the war.

The commandos wasted no time in setting up camp while the Jedi gathered firewood. By the time night came around everyone started to relax. Jecenia took some field rations out of her backpack and passed them among the troops and her Jedi partner.

(WIP)
 
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Seras

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Why and how is Jecenia so fat? A human who lived through Jedi asceticism and physical exercise? No way she would get that fat. Especially not a Master. And it looks like she is an OC, so I'm kinda even more confused?
 
Why and how is Jecenia so fat? A human who lived through Jedi asceticism and physical exercise? No way she would get that fat. Especially not a Master. And it looks like she is an OC, so I'm kinda even more confused?
This is one of the stories I had in my mind. she was originally based on one of my star wars RP characters from a long time ago before the dark times of Spacebattles named Kimiko Ryuichi.

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Probably should just stuck with this character as I honestly like her design a whole lot better, But anyway she's based on the concept of the Japanese Sumo Wrestler mixed with a bit of Amazon Warrior, Oni and Samurai. She's not so much fat so much as she has a lot of muscle hidden under a layer of subcutaneous tissue (Like a linman on a football team) she's also really tall too (I think I had her around 6,8). Essentially, she's a living Warhammer.

I started out wanting to make a Jedi answer to Darth Vader, ended up combining that with my inner weeb and love for the "Big Guy" trope and came up with this.

and yes both these characters are OC as this is a story dealing with a couple of Order 66 survivors outside of the ones from the movies. I probably should have explained that part better in the description. Sorry for the confusion.

Edit: Yeah I'm changing it to this one. I like the name But I like this design way better.
 

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