Stargate And Then I Was A God (Stargate SI)

Knowledgeispower

Ah I love the smell of missile spam in the morning
I wonder if Iah can develop planetary(and their theater shield cousins) shields ala Star Wars. If you combine that with the orbital defense grid and their ground based counterparts, the defense fleet(and I imagine work is being done on expanding that force around the clock) and the fighter and Alkesh wings should do wonders. Also a good idea would be to develop Naquadah enchanted nukes to give the fighter wings the needed punch against capital ships, plus Iah could refit launch tubes to his capital ships to improve their firepower. Not to mention the ability to add launch sites on the ground and integrate them into various parts of the orbital defense grid
 
Bra'tac I

ThatTabiFromSB

Professional Jissou Abuser
“Hail Apophis. Your army is ready.” Bra’tac of Chulak, First Prime of Apophis, knelt in supplication. Behind him and down blow, sixteen thousand warriors slammed the butt of their staves on the ground in unison. The assembly area trembled with the force of so many throats and slams. It only ceased once their liege lord and god, Apophis, raised one golden scaled hand from his place in the balcony of the palace.


“Rise, my old friend.” Spoke Apophis, his voice warm and deep. ”I see you have prepared the vanguard admirably. This pleases your god.”


“You honor me.” The words came easily to the old Jaffa. Indeed, his time as this creature’s First Prime taught him much about how it’s little mind worked. And with time came experience and skill followed soon after. He lowered his eyes in deference, “The campaign is ready to begin whenever you wish it.”


“As it should. Come, walk with me Bra’tac.” Apophis gestured in what he assumed was a magnanimous gesture and the old Jaffa obliged, following half a step behind his liege. The hallway was lined with Jaffa Guards, their faces hidden by cobra helms, ruby crystals set into the eyes glowing menacingly.


As they walked, Apophis was silent. Bra’tac knew better than to ask. His liege lord had an obvious intent to take him elsewhere, perhaps to boast of a secret plan.


Indeed, when they arrived within the pel’tak of the palace, it was to be greeted by the sight of the dancing lights of an enormous map of the stars. Specifically, the border worlds of Ra’s empire.


And from what his aging eyes can tell, each is the site of an ongoing skirmish.


“Do you see, Bra’tac? A thousand battles, each insignificant on it’s own, so minor as to not even matter…” Apophis exhales with such intensity that he could feel the vibrations on his skin and goosebumps rise along his spine as he refrained from bristling. ”My brother’s forces respond easily and smash these pests down. But still, where is Ra? He does not appear. Only his son, Heru’ur, comes and it is supposedly in his father’s name. Hah!”


“Indeed, my lord.” Bra’tac agreed, pitching his voice such that it was as sycophantic as Apophis liked. “It is also an opportunity. Heru’ur uses ships Iah has crafted, showing his hand. In his attempt to quell rebellion, he has allowed us to observe and adapt to his weapons.”


The Goa’uld nodded approvingly, smiling wide. ”Quite so, Bra’tac. I have long since divined means to remove those advantages. But of the tasks I will set before you, this is the greatest.”


With a grand gesture, the entire hologram was replaced with one that he had become all too familiar with as of late.


Dashani. Somehow, Apophis had eyes (if not ears) upon that world. A grid of defensive platforms had appeared, each well armed and shielded. Even with a force ten times that which raided the world previously would be hardpressed to break through. But surely, this was not all? Indeed, Bra’tac could see a small fleet of smaller pyramids and many wings of Gliders.


He looked back towards his lord and master, only to suppress a flinch of instinctive fear.


Apophis’s smile had become predatory, filled with such malevolence that the old Jaffa felt his grip tighten instinctively around his staff weapon. Only with force of will and the knowledge that it would be futile prevented him from simply striking down his master right then and there.


“Dashani will be key to my ultimate victory. Or more specifically, Iah, my dear nephew. I must have him… alive, if not mostly intact as to be resurrectable. I do not care if you need to burn Dashani down to the core to do it.”


“It will be no easy task, my lord…” Bra’tac said carefully, ruminating on how to bend his master’s mind on this matter. That in of itself was no easy task, as Apophis’ hatred of Ra’s kin was legendary. He did not know if it was truth or merely another perceived slight… not that it mattered as far as the Goa’uld System Lord was concerned. “You will not be the only God with the intent to capture Iah to ensure their ascendancy. Judging by your divinations…”


Apophis allowed him access to the holoprojection table and he placed his hand upon the console, allowing his mind to access it’s pool of cold knowledge.


The hierarchy of Cronus, Yu, and Ba’al appeared. Of the System Lord, they vied for the position as the strongest of the System Lords apart from Apophis. The long standing treaties set by Ra limited the number of ships available, especially that of the fortress ships; the Ha’tak.


Ha’taks had once decided the course of battle. Whoever had the most, won. Very rarely did those with smaller less powerful ships ever win, save through careful planning or deceit. But Iah changed all that.


There were now fortresses that held the orbits, not just fleets. Heavily armed and heavily armored, they would resist many Ha’taks before ultimately falling.


And now Iah proved even these great citadels were but one layer of defense. His great cannons could reach up from the surface to break a Ha’tak.


If nothing else, he proved to be a worthy adversary for Apophis, who, for all his malevolence and greed, was an uncanny commander with a strategic mind. But Apophis both feared and coveted Iah, for he was the golden prim’ta full of succulent secrets.


“Yu will not be one to attack first. While his armies are great and his reach long, he is crafty and will bide his time as he always has. There is a reason Sun Tzu leads his armies…” Bra’tac turned his eyes to Cronus and Ba’al, contemplating his knowledge and how it’s application could be made here in this time and age. “Ba’al may not strike first, his domain is larger, but it is also more spread out. He will seek to maintain a strong alliance in order to secure his flanks. Cronus however… your scrying has shown he is already moving Ha’tak to his borders, in all likelihood, he will strike first. Following after him are his bannerlords with lesser ships, but of the Gods, he has the most Underlords. The less said about the quality of those lords, the better.”


“Hah!” Apophis chuckled at the expense of Cronus, as he often would. Insulting Cronus was oft one of the best way to bring his master into a good mood, Bra’tac had found.


“Breaking Dashani will be the most difficult siege. I surmise, however, we may not need to. Of the System Lords, Cronus and Ba’al will be the closest and will likely target Iah the soonest. Heru’ur will be busy attempting to quell rebellion on all sides; he will not be able to defend Iah in this time.” Bra’tac shifted his hand to show the galaxy in all its splendor, separated by the swaths of territory owned by various System Lords. A hundred and one colors and symbols glowed with tension. Near the very ‘southernmost’ tip of Ra’s domain was Iah’s domain; only several days travel from Apophis’ most distant borders.


“You speak good counsel, old friend. To let Cronus and Ba’al break themselves upon Iah’s defenses. Once sufficiently weakened, I can simply sweep them all aside and claim Iah for myself.” Apophis seemed pleased by the thread he had fed him.


“However, my lord, how will you make Iah to obey your will? He is beholden only to Ra, the God who created him.” Bra’tac asked, eyes lowered.


His master gestured grandly at Dashani, bringing up what appeared to be scenes of Iah among his subjects. Humans by the hundreds, well dressed, hale with hearty, cheering for their ‘god’ who in turn was heartened by their praise. Bra’ac felt pity for the young Goa’uld lord.


“He is weak.” Apophis said, smirking cruelly. ”Iah allows himself to be chained down by those that should be no more than chattel. Indeed, this is how Ra controls him. By allowing his subjects to proper under royal writ. I would guarantee the survival of his subjects… so long as he is loyal to me. His weakness is his human pets, I will take full advantage of that.”


Once again, Bra’tac bowed to give the impression of awe of his master’s cruelty. But inwardly, he felt simple hollow grief.


“As always, my lord.” He forced the words out for Apophis’ pleasure. “You are all powerful.”


Apophis looked upon him, seeing not his inner toil, but the supplication of a powerful slave. And as befitting a Goa’uld such as him, he saw it was good.
 

Jormungandr

The Midgard Wyrm
Founder
Oh yeah, this is going to end poorly for Apophis.

Iah not only has an asgard ship now, knowing who knows what he could gleam from just overlooking the systems, but he's also capable of creating truly dangerous weapons that'd make even bloody Sokar blanch, if pushed to it. And that's not thinking of the unconventional ones that even the goa'uld used in their dealings with Earth e.g. nanite bombs, viral warfare, asteroids.

And all that incredibly dangerous shit he took from Ra's stores? Yeah. 🤔

...You know, it'd be hilarious if it were Amaunet that basically asked Iah to stop wailing on her husband. :ROFLMAO:

Some thoughts:

Now that Iah has more room to breathe, given Ra's been given a nuclear sendoff, perhaps he could begin improving his jaffas' armour/equipment.

Such as the helmets: in the movie, Ra's Horus Guards and his Jackal Guard ('Anubis') had collapsible, cybernetic helmets, with animated parts that moved as though they were extensions of their own bodies (e.g. the 'beak' and head moved independently). In SG-1, mostly for budgetary restraints, they were literally just helmets -- even Heru'ur's Horus Guards had helmets.





Iah could begin upgrading from helmets to cybernetics, even less invasive ones/mark two variants.

Heck, perhaps even redesigning the eagle so that, while still recognizable as a Horus Guard, it'd have its own profile compared to Ra's and Herur'ur's Guards.

Plated in moonlight white, elite jaffa... hmm.. :)

...Huh, it also makes me wonder how the other jaffa helmets, especially the Serpent Guard's, would be like as a cybernetic than the helmet seen in SG-1.

It could be argued that Ra kept these advanced helmets for his own elite jaffa, meaning those encountered by Seshat while she legally looted Ra's shit could have had them, too. The other goa'uld probably didn't have them for their elites, since Bra'tac and Teal'c didn't have them -- only the 'helmets'. Heck, even Apophis had a helmet, albeit golden.

P.S. Seshat for queen.
 

david99t1

Active member
I guess we'll see how well prepared they are. I also wonder how Ra being gone will affect his mindset if any now that it has had time to settle down. I am looking forward to seeing what other improvements he has managed to make. I am confused about the kid though, we haven't seen much of him even though he was specifically chosen and seemed equally important as his other 'inner circle'.
 
Ba'al I

ThatTabiFromSB

Professional Jissou Abuser
The Goa’uld were thieves, scavengers of the worst kind. Amongst his own court, Ba’al freely admitted to this fact. His underlords were keenly aware of the balance of power, how a Goa’uld ought to maintain their fiefdom, to keep up appearances and the illusion of ultimate power.

Heresy existed in the past and it would not do to allow it to flourish out of laziness. Power was fickle and one had to keep their wits about them if they wanted to keep it.

Unlike the others, Ba’al didn’t care to revel in the worship overly much; indeed, it was a failing of many Goa’uld to fall into the crutch of believing their own lies.

Those Goa’uld usually died in short order, within a few decades or centuries, depending on how powerful they were.

Even Ra, strong as he was, succumbed to his maniac belief of godhood.

Or perhaps he did not. Perhaps he simply died.

It mattered little. What mattered now was how the disappearance of the strongest Goa’uld would affect the political landscape of the galaxy. Even now skirmishes and proxy wars raged across the stars, pawns and fools being sacrificed daily to ensure positions were taken, agreements forged, and the promises of expansion kept.

And of the Goa’uld, Ba’al was the one to keep a promise and his reputation reflected that.

His footsteps echoed across the empty halls under the ruins of this ancient tomb world, the site of many battles and wars under his purview.

This world was only one example of how far he was willing to go to maintain his grip on power. Once a thriving world of some hundred million, a burgeoning state that Ra sought to control. The Irrasians were leal subjects and while they were strong worshipers, the world was impossible to hold against Ra’s overwhelming forces on that particular front.

It just so happened that some two centuries ago, the remnants of their once great stellar empire were what he found, suffering from a plague that affected them and only them.

When he had cured them of the affliction, a sample of the disease was kept, should they ever rebel in the future.

So when Ra made to take the world, Ba’al let him have it and unleashed the Javorian Pox back upon the Issarians.

Ra was horrified, even leaving behind his invading Jaffa in his haste to prevent what he thought was an infectious plague. From all reports, the Issarians who had not yet succumbed hunted down every Jaffa they could, to tear out his symbiote so to cure themselves.

Needless to say, no one on the planet survived.

The System Lords assumed he unleashed a plague that would destroy his enemies, but also the world. Ba’al did not disabuse them of the notion. Though his domain was relatively small in comparison, it was also well developed across the realm, affording him nominally trained troops to garrison upon every world. Each world did not exclusively produce food and troops, but also warships and naquadah.

And he would destroy each of them in an instant if it served a purpose to gain more power.

This reputation of willingly sacrificing immense wealth to spite his enemies was what made him singularly fearful to be an enemy of.

This was why he felt comfortable to make this tombworld the hidden location of his athenaeum. Deep underground, beneath miles of crust, where the air was often a bit warmer than comfortable, lay a perfectly mundane secret.

Armies of Jaffa were the secret to holding worlds. And those who had the most Jaffa in battle often became the victor.

The thing about Jaffa was their relationship with their Lords and Masters, the Goa’uld. In truth, it was truly a tenuous thing. One that abided to the continued worship of the Goa’uld as gods was the indoctrination from birth to death, generation from generation.

And as it happened, Ba’al was very experienced with the matters of indoctrination. It was how he subverted Sokar’s Jaffa to his cause, after all.

From there, it was only a matter of subverting the tributes of flesh from other System Lords.

Until recently, he had built up quite the supply over the centuries. Hapi, the corpulent fool, sent him near millions of Jaffa tribute meant for Ra for the longest time, at least until a decade ago, when Ra’s spies discovered a discrepancy.

Since then, the tributes have long slowed to but a trickle.

Still, there was plenty of room here.

Ba’al let familiarity take over as his feet took from a single transport ring to the caverns deep under the surface of ruined towers.

As far as the eye could see were uninterrupted lines of sarcophagi. Each held what was once a Jaffa meant to join the ranks of the worshipful warrior elite of another Goa’uld. Ba’al had stolen the tributes of many Goa’uld indeed. A trickle, of course. But that trickle built upon itself over the centuries. Sarcophagi were not cheap, but modified and redesigned with another purpose in mind? As they were now, they were merely glorified stasis chambers that would allow the mind to dream slowly and occasionally become slightly lucid… all so whispers of his indoctrination technology to find purchase.

Indeed, few were capable of resisting such persuasiveness for long, let alone thousands of years.

Ba’al walked along the ranks of his hidden army of Jaffa, relishing the deafening silence that permeated across the cavernous halls that ran the length of the planet.

At last count, he had well over two hundred million Jaffa in stasis in this continent of the deathworld alone. By far the largest concentration, the work of literal centuries of poaching and indoctrination.

Securing agricultural worlds to feed such a massive army had been his primary ambition since the conclusion of his thievery, after Ra had him sacrifice his largest publicly known army… just as planned.

For of the Jaffa he poached, Ra's were ever the greatest, for nothing else would suffice for the Emperor. Chief among them, those personally selected to become First Prime to the Supreme System Lord.

As the Goa’uld approached a dais, the first of the stasis chambers that sat higher above the rest opened and a well built warrior stumbled out, naked as the day he was born. In many ways, he had been reborn, reshaped to serve Ba'al instead of Ra.

Tattoos of Goa’uld script snaked around the arms and legs of the warrior, a mimicry of a cruel Jackal’s beak impressed upon his face. Ba’al waited as the Jaffa’s mind quickly cleared as its brain and synapses came alive.

Then it noticed his presence and knelt in supplication. A quick examination showed that the Jaffa had expressed the proper deference he expected from the most heavily indoctrinated slave.

“Speak your name and of the God you serve.”

The Jaffa’s answer was swift and sure, his voice trembling with suppressed excitement. “I am Anubis. I serve Ba’al, greatest of the Goa’uld Pantheon.”

Ba’al let himself smirk, pleased with the answer.

“Then step forward and become my Warmaster, Anubis. First Prime of my legion.” The Jaffa once again knelt as priests in sepian robes emerged from the darkness, surrounding the warrior with knives and a glowing white hot molten brand.

To Anubis’ credit, he did not cry out in pain. When it was finished, Ba’al saw the golden double scimitars emblazoned upon his Jaffa’s forehead. Ba’al extended his palm, ribbon device glowing softly as he accelerated the healing upon the still painfully hot symbol. Within seconds, it had cooled and the skin was only pink rather than raw. The Jaffa gazed up at him with awe and gratitude as the Goa’uld favored him with a small smile.

It was, Ba’al had found, always better to give servants with small amounts of positive encouragement; to enforce loyalty with gratitude. It cost him nothing, after all.

Come, Warmaster.” Ba’al set off, heading to a set of rings with his new Prime in tow. “The time has come for my ultimate ascension… and you, Anubis, shall see to it that I rule the universe. I see it fit that you be given all the means to enact my will across the stars.”

The rings flash and the two of them are within another part of the continent, deep below the surface where naquadah melted and was smelted into armor and technology. Ba'al brought him to a gloomy room, where a cold metal altar lay. Torches flickered around them, carried by slaves, revealing a dozen priests with glowing eyes and cruel hands.

Anubis made a noise of confusion as Ba’al bade him to sit upon an altar. Priests wielding fresh knives and karakesh of their own surround the Jaffa once more.

This time, however, he screamed.

“Make no mistake… war is coming. With all its glories,” the System Lord intoned softly, as he watched Anubis begin his ascension. “And all its horrors.”

The Jaffa began to speak, screaming in Canaanite, praising his God for allowing him to become worthy, even as his bones were exposed and refined trinium weave glinted under the low lights of the torches.

“But in the end, there will only ever be one to rule them all.”

Ba'al made himself comfortable upon a throne, idly savoring the praise while he sipped wine and sampled Dashani cheese.

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Author's Note: Many thanks to @AndrewJTalon for beta'ing this scene. Also apologies, I honestly had forgotten to update it here.
 

david99t1

Active member
cool chapter, this is more like what I expect from such long lived 'tyrants'

also where else are you posting this?
 

Jormungandr

The Midgard Wyrm
Founder
Huh, didn't know that. Is it canon or did I miss it mentioned in this story somehow?
Originally, the humans taking the role of the Jaffa in the movie were meant to be the actual gods, with Ra as the only alien -- Anubis in that film was meant to be the 'god' Anubis, as Ra was Ra and Horus, Horus (in the movie continuity's comics, these elevated humans are referred to as 'Godlings' -- Hathor and the others are still putting about in the Kalium Galaxy).

However, with SG-1, these 'Godlings' were changed to the Jaffa we all know and love.

Anubis was reconned to being Ra's First Prime, and he wore the Jackal Guard armour/helmet the Goa'uld Anubis' (pre-ascension) Jaffa used, much like how Apophis' Serpent Guard used the serpent helmets and Ra's direct family (bar Sekhmet) used the Horus Guards' falcon helmets.

The masks used by the Godlings were cybernetic -- even Ra's was cybernetic. However, in the series? They were just helmets used by the Jaffa.

Obviously it was for budgetary constraints, but it made sense with helmets being used by their Jaffa soldier instead of complicated, expensive cybernetic masks used by the 'Godlings'.
 

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